Kush Rang Bahara – Shivika ff (Part 4)

So here its Maria again with the 4th update….I think I’ll only be able to post the next one..next week…due my exams. So IB is going good…yesterday Anika looked so gorgeous.

Reading my ff you guys would have caught a glimpse of my obsession towards Mr. Sso…how I try hard to decipher his thought process…and why he behaves the way he does. This ff will be mainly from his point of view.

“Bahar se ek achi business man aur andar se ek masoom ishqbaaz”-Dadi

So let’s carry on..

Shivaay finds Anika’s bracelet..he holds it tight and keeps it safe in his locker. He remembers their pool sequence…he twisting her hand behind and the impressions of her ‘chaand’ on his wrist..he sighs…if I could live this love story….

Shivaay’s thoughts were interrupted by Sahil’s entry…
Sahil : billuji…
S:  You can call my bhaiya…

Sahil : Oh why…only Anika di can call you billuji…

S: hah…

Sahil: Ooooo

S: You are too small na, so…

Sahil : Bhaiya…Anika di loves you…but why is she marrying Om bhaiya?

S: That…… you have to ask to her….

(Feeling sad..)

Sahil: Ok..but..billuji loves Anika di…why is he marrying tia?

Sahil’s question made Shivaay’s heart sink…

S: You won’t understand..I.

Sahil: Something is happening??

(Kuch kuch hota hai..tum nahi samajonge….)

Shivaay struggled for an answer…he didn’t find one, so as usual, he came up with an excuse.

S: Sahil…I’m getting late for the office…can we talk in the evening??

Sahil: Ok..I have to go to school too…

As Sahil walked out…Shivaay sighed..

S: This is just the beginning…I’ll have to face a lot..and I can’t lose this battle…..

(The battle between his brain and heart…..)

Pinky stopped Shivaay as he was about to leave the house.

P: Shivaay…where are you going this early??

S: Mom..office

P: This is tia’s first karwachauth you have to be here….what will she think??

S: But Mom..its really important for me to go…I’ll come early…

P: Ok…otherwise also you won’t listen to me….just come early ok?

S: Ya..Mom

Shivaay stepped into the lawn…Anika was doing some arrangements for the evening..

Oh jaana plays…

Shivaay gets lost looking at her…he thinks..

S: Why are you doing this to me Anika…?

Anika sees Shivaay  staring at her….she reads his mind.

A: I’m not doing anything billuji..its not in my hands….you can change this all…..if you leave your ego…but you won’t, and I know that.

Evening scene at the Oberoi’s

Anika comes dressed in a red floor length Anarkali suit…with golden jhumkas…her hair left loose in soft curls.

Shivaay wore a deep blue kurta pyjamas. He gets mesmerised seeing her.

Oh jaana plays…

Tia feels jealous seeing this, she takes the henna dish and proceeds towards Shivaay. She collides with Anika and the henna spills on tia’s clothes.

Tia: What did you do…Anika??

Tia screamed….

Poor Anika was caught again…for no fault of hers..Shivaay couldn’t stand her being insulted by someone else, and that too certainly not his fiance!…so he took up the responsibility.

Shivaay held Anika’s hand and squeezed it…

Anika glanced at Om who was looking at her.

S: Anika…can’t you be a little more careful…This is not the way to behave in a party…

Shivaay couldn’t say anything more. Anika’s eyes had already brimmed over…and Shivaay’s green eyes…reflected them.

He left her hand and turned towards Tia who was terribly trying to reset her clothes…

S : Just go change..tell Mom.

As Tia left…Shivaay turned towards Anika…he couldn’t meet her eyes…he looked down.

Anika ran in. Shivaay thought about their past. He wondered whether he was the one who erased her smile. The thought hurt him. 

Anika sat on the floor and cried….

A: Why am I crying for this man…who has no value for me and my feelings.

S: Anika…

A: I don’t have anything to talk to you…nor do I want to hear your lame excuses.

She broke into tears. Shivaay held her tight..

S: Anika please don’t cry…I can’t…

A: So you have a problem with that too….stay away Mr.Oberoi

Shivaay had become so accustomed to Anika’s billuji, although he used to get irritated by it earlier…now she addressing him as Mr.Oberoi really hurt.

Anika moved forward a couple of steps…she felt dizzy and was about to fall. Shivaay rushed to her and she fainted in his arms. He carried her and placed her on a chair.

Different emotions ran through him…he was guilty, angry, sad and worried. Shivaay sprinkled some water on Anika’s face…she revived.

The Moon appeared in the clear sky and as the oberoi women broke their fast Shivaay made Anika drink water thereby breaking her fast. She was staring at him through her tired eyes.

Shivaay carried her to her bed…he made her have food..

S: So you had kept the fast??

A: hah…Om

Shivaay’s face lost the momentary charm. He left the room closing the door behind him. Anika stared at the closed door…

Shivaay’s room 

Dadi: billo…tomorrow let Om & Anika do the puja..

Shivaay felt that he will not make it through the night. Every moment sharp arrows were piercing his heart. The same wound got scratched again every time.

D:billo…

S: huh dadi….I think it’s better to all this after marriage. Or else it may call in unwanted media attraction.

D: You are right Shivaay…..Where is Anika.

S:  huh…that…she actually fainted….she is in her room.

D: What….

S: She was starving and all this work….

D: And your scolding….now on don’t interfere in her matters ok??

Shivaay’s face showed off his despair…

Tia enters…

D: Tia…Anika is no more just an employee…she is family …you should give her some more respect.

T: Dadi….I’m sorry my dress got spoiled…so I got angry….It wasn’t Anika’s fault…sorry..Dadi

D: Ya..fine….you tell her..ok

The Anikara shaadi thing was only known by the Oberois, Anika & Somu…not even Tia had any clue about it.

Next morning…

Shivaay was looking at the mirror…

A: Billuji….why is your face having a power cut….did someone remove your fuse??

She proceeded towards him…and pulled his cheeks.

A: You need to smile… atleast occasionally…billuji

Shivaay’s face lighted up..

Rudra enters…He wondered why Shivaay was grinning at the mirror.

R: Bhaiya…Are you planning to endorse some toothpaste brand??

Rudy’s question brought Shivaay back into reality…..and he was alone again….his heart ached…and he felt so empty inside..

R: Bhaiya…

S: Huh…nothing..I was thinking about something..

R: Or about someone??

S: Who…What…No

R: Anika di…bhaiya but its now too late….do something bhaiya..or else its gonna pain a lot more…Anika di is very strong  but you are not bhaiya…although you don’t show it..

Rudra walked out. He was right, beneath the great wall of Shivaay…stood a rich man with a weak heart. Who had all the pleasures of the world…but was not even King of his own emotions…

In the Kitchen..

Anika was cutting some veggies…and Om was making rotis…

Shivaay enters…They both find it difficult to meet each others eyes..

O: Just taste this one…its your recipe Shivaay!!

S: Yeah…the flavour has come out nicely…good.

Anika staring at Shivaay cut her finger…and it started to bleed..before Shivaay could do anything…Om held her hand…

A:Ouch…

O: Hold it under the tap Anika…I’ll fetch the first aid kit and come…

He rushed out…Shivaay took his kerchief and tied on her finger…she jerked back…

S: Its bleeding Anika!! (he shouted)

A: So what…I’m fine…Om will come now..

She left with Om…

Shivaay banged his fist hard on the table…

The hall..

The pooja had started…Anika looked stunning in a peach colour lehenga…she stood next to Om..who wore a chocolate brown kurta pyjamas..Shivaay couldn’t take his eyes off her…..Anika was smiling at Om. Shivaay left the scene angrily…

The corridor…

Shivaay pulled Anika close to him…

S: What do you want Anika…you can’t come between me & my brother..

Knowing his twisty talks…Anika retorted…

A: I didn’t come between you and your brother….he has come between you and me…Now you have to choose wisely…If you choose your brother…then you’ll have to forget me….you won’t be able to behave like this to me anymore….

Your marriage has been finalised with Tia….and I’m not Swetlana…I’m not the poor girl who satisfies the rich man’s needs…

Shivaay held Anika’s elbow and pulled her closer to him…they could feel the warmness of each other’s breaths…..he hissed in her ears..

S: Is this what you think of me…Is this what I mean to you??

A: You don’t mean anything to me Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi..just stay away from me…I hate you..(She screamed jerking his hand away)

Shivaay eyes filled up…

S: So you think that I’m only interested in your….body..(he choked up)

Anika looked at him…was he crying…she was shocked…she never thought that the great Sso would cry..and that too for her..?

Shivaay’s room..

Shivaay walked to his room…..Anika didn’t know what to do…she didn’t know how to comfort him….neither could she leave  him like that…..She followed him….he was sitting on the bed….his eyes were red…..and his face showed anger and pain…..she sat near him…on the  ground….and held his hands…

S: No one will understand me…not even you

A: Billuji..I’m sorry Anika…I didn’t mean that

S: Maybe I’m very bad..And I don’t deserve anyone’s love….

Shivaay behaved like a 5 year old…who was just scolded by his mother…he was holding his head.

A: Are you having a headache??….Did you have food?

Shivaay’s silence was his rebellion….

A: Don’t act like a kid Mr.Oberoi…I’ll get your food.

S: Don’t call me like that…. (he retorted)

A: Oh now you are having problem with that too…

Before he had problem with billu…now with this…this man is getting on my nerves…huh (Anika mumbled)

Anika brought food for Shivaay

S: I’m not going to eat…

A: Did someone just request you..If you don’t have food then how will you do your tadibaazi……

Anika pinched Shivaay’s nose and as he opened his mouth she stuffed in the rice…..he coughed..

S: What the wuck…are you mad…oh..

A: You can’t be handled in a decent manner…..unless you eat all of this…I’m not gonna leave you alone…

S: Then I can starve for years…(he thought)

After making him have his dinner she applied balm on Shivaay’s forehead…he dozed off…she looked at him as he slept..

A: How innocent he looks…no one knows about the baggad billa..behind this sweet face..

Precap: Shivaay held Anika’s  her dupatta..He pulled her and she fell over him.

Guys do comment on this track..Your love and valuable suggestions help me a lot…As some of guys had requested…I have started writing the dialogues too in English….I had written this episode some time back…but the karwachauth sequence is actually coming up and will be a treat to the Shivika fans…

22 comments

  1. Renimarenju

    |Registered Member

    Maria…this is so lovely, cute, romantic and simply superb yaar…..I felt this one as the best part of your ffs….and the way you conveyed emotions like love, jealousy and concern are just fabulous…..ishqie….{i call ishqie because in ib tu commenting page i use to call every one as ishqie….}….just loved it dear….and i have ended my ff….hope you’ve read it…..if not then here is the link for the last part…..http://www.tellyupdates.com/tejvi-ishkara-journey-lives-part-16-last-part/….read and comment when you get time and dear all the best for your exams ….even am not getting time to watch ishqbaaz and comment on tu as i have lot of work…..but your ff…i felt as very special and though am in office some how i will try to read some ffs of ib which are very special and now this one is also special to me…..Good Job…..

  2. Diya

    I read spellbound. The Shivika scenes were so gripping. Thanks!! Thus episode was a treat. Awesome dialogues. The swetlaana dialogue by Anika was killer 👍

  3. anu16

    Too cute…this one was undoubtedly the best part of Ur ff… Nice precap… All the best for Ur exams do well n post soon…

  4. MariaRebecca

    |Author

    Thank you guys..you made my day…I was said that the I couldn’t final copy…this is the just previous one and there are some mistakes 🙁 🙁
    But I’m very happy that you guys liked it…

  5. MariaRebecca

    |Author

    Thank you guys..you made my day…I was sad that the I couldn’t post the final copy…this is the just previous one and there are some mistakes 🙁 🙁
    But I’m very happy that you guys liked it…

  6. Aarya

    |Registered Member

    Fantastic….. Marvelous…. Superb…nice….touching part😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍…..loved this

  7. MariaRebecca

    |Author

    All of you guys here…eventhough I didn’t reply to every single comment ( I didn’t know that I could  )
    I value them very much…and have always tried to incorporate your suggestions in my successive updates…tysm guys
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/kush-rang-bahara-shivika-ff-part-1/
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/kush-rang-bahara-shivika-ff-part-2/
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/kush-rang-bahara-shivika-ff-part-3/
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/kush-rang-bahara-shivika-ff-part-4/
    Please read, like and comment when free..

  8. Tany

    |Registered Member

    waiing for the next one pls update fast and es i want something of this sort i mean i know it may not be a great idea ut i have something of this sort in mind try beautifying this version of mine in ur ff if u find it valuable ike om and rudre see whatever is happening between anika and shivaay and give hifi as there plan is working and shivaay and anika literaly have all the lose moments without accepting the love for each other and shivaay eventually says not tia and anika and om is still not over and still shivaay and anika share that illegal or so called whatever bond and finally somehow accept there lovve to eachother and then u continue i noe his is like dumshit but it is something no one tries the closeness without realising many a times happens in real life so if u add even a bit of it it may be a new twist

  9. Hanna Sara

    Its very good maria…keep it up.. i like to see more…but i have doubt ..sahil’s leg is broken then how can he go to school

  10. Sat

    |Registered Member

    Maria you are really awesome dear, it is very heart touching and emotional story, just loved it to the core.
    I loved the way you choreographed it
    It was lovely
    Shivika moment was at its best.
    Please update your next episode ASAP

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