Kush Rang Bahara – Shivika ff (Part 1)

I have been thinking of writing a fan fiction for a very long time…and kept on pushing it…..but shivika….their freaking chemistry and maestro performances by Nakul Mehta & Surbhi Chandana got me obsessed……so I’m taking the plunge….. Starting with my first ever ff……asking for your support, suggestions & criticisms.

I am starting with the episode of 17th October 2016. 
Shivaay tells omru that he can sense Anika and right now also he is feeling her presence. Rudra waves at Anika and says hai Anika di….Shivaay says hello…and he is surprised to find Anika there….he gets up…omru leave the room showing a thumbs up.
Shivaay stammers and tries to apologise….
Anika : apne to kal hi sorry bol diya na…woh hi tikke… koshish mat karna..aap se nahi hoga…mujhe kaam he me jaa ri hu….
Anika tries to leave….Shivaay holds her hand and brings her close to him…Anika is confused by his sudden change…he hugs her.
Dadi calls her..she runs away…Shivaay wonders what happened to him 

Dadi : Anika, hum ghar me ek puja rakenge..itna kuch hogaye na isliye…tum jaake ye Panditji ko dedo..aur list leke avo na…
Anika : Tikke dadi
Shivaay comes and both of them get tensed
Dadi : Billu..isko saath leke chaal
Shivika :Dadi…par…
Dadi: mujhe kuch nahi  sun na….saath chal dono
Shivika leaves….omru n dadi smile

At the temple…
Anika gets the list and comes downstairs …Shivaay waits near the car.
Some People: yeh toh wahi ladki he na….tv mein deka waali..kitne besharam…..yese ghumte kon…
Shivaay gets angry.
They get into the car…they reach home.

Shivaay tells about this to dadi and omru. Dadi calls everyone..
Dadi : hamari vajse…sab Anika par ungli uttare….jab tak lok ye sabh bul nahi jaungi…tab tak Anika yehan rahungi…
Omru, Prinku, Jhanvi, Pinky, Somu all support Dadi
Anika: Nahi dadi ye sahi nahi…he
Shivaay : Dadi kehre na…maan ja
Omru: Shivaay baby….(looks teasingly)
Anika : Par billuji…meri baat toh…
Dadi : koi behas nahi..faisla hogaya…sahil ko bhi le aana..
Anika : ha…tikke dadi…..

Shivaay’s room…
Om : Tum Anika ko support karne chayiye…woh bahut hurt ho..
Shivaay: hah..he..
Om: Shivaay tum ye baat samjna he…ki woh tumhari dil ko chooti he
Shivaay : aise kuch bhi nahi..bas meri vajse aab wo issi situation pe…nahi toh..hum equal nahi he…woh ek middle class ladki ho..
Anika stands at the door….she hears everything. She remembers Shivaay calling her road trash and  firing her…she also reminisces their nok jhoks n good times. .. Shivaay feels her presence and looks up. Anika cries and runs out. …Shivaay hesitates for a moment….then he rushes out behind her. 

Precap : Anika cries…covering her face…

Please let me know if you like this ff….I’ll post longer episodes

20 comments

  1. Shaza

    |Registered Member

    Hey ,it was awesome..wanna support ur ff on every ep ..but won’t be able to comment on all , sorry for that ,..but ur going on the right track 😄..post the next one ASAP…

  2. Renimarenju

    |Registered Member

    First of all i wish you big success dear….And your ff…..as am working in a company….really am getting very less time 2 comment on ffs….And this ff was really good And i liked it since i was able to read it fully as it was short……So dear don’t get tensed…..As you are really creative….and you should continue your work…….All the best…..

  3. MariaRebecca

    |Author

    All of you guys here…eventhough I didn’t reply to every single ( I didn’t know that I could 😛 )
    I value them very much…and have always tried to incorporate your suggestions in my successive updates…tysm guys

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