KUCH TOH HAI TERE MERE DARMIYAN – Episode 7

~~πŸ’ŸSacrificesπŸ’Ÿ~~

Kavita’s POV

It’s been a week to that incident. I still remember that night!!.. The worst night of my life!!..

**Flashback starts**
Third person’s POV

The rain and storm blowed heavily. In a corner remained Kavita! Heart throbbing, tears flowing out…. She had realized a bitter truth!!.. The truth that she wasn’t loved whom she had loved!!.. She was left alone once again on those empty roads!!.. She was selfish! She agreed but she didn’t want to ruin anyone’s life! Was it her fault? Or was it destiny that was so cruel with her? She had cried that entire night and thought about her life. She had destroyed everything, every single thing!!..

She has pointed out such a person for her and she couldn’t blame anyone, neither did she want to!!… She just wanted his embrace till she’s alive and what was wrong with that??.. She had loved him selflessly and had expected nothing! Nothing in return!!.. Just a piece of his heart!!.. That’s it!

She kept crying the entire night thinking about her faults, if she has done anything, till everything went black.

The next time she awoke was in Hospital! She wondered who brought her here??.. She never thought that Sanskar would do something like this! That was unexpected! Obviously, after a fight who would ever expect him to come to her! She thought the same, he would never return, that wasn’t impossible but wasn’t expected!!…

With him stood Rohan too. Rohan was a good brother, he had never left her, a good example of ‘Blood Relations Don’t Matter’. Sanskar sat next to her and gave her a bear hug. That was what she was in need!!.. The warmth of his body made her stable! She had been hospitalized because of cold she caught sitting there on the terrace. Rohan feared seeing her at the terrace and brought her here. Doctors warned her of complete bed rest for a month. She had a hole in her heart and that made her health even worse.

Sanskar arrived the moment he got alerted. His anger grew!!.. Kavita was after all a human and a good friend!!.. When he was depressed she had given him support, pleasure and a friendly talk. Just like Swara!!.. She would do anything possible to make him calm! And now he had her responsibility as well!!.. To return that…. He didn’t like debts!

**Flashback ends**

Kavita’s POV

He knew what I wanted! Love and care but he wasn’t ready to make up his mind. I wanted to make him mine I want to I love him so much!!..

“Sanskar, I still love you” I kissed him.

Sanskar’s POV

“Sanskar, I still love you” and she kissed me.

I want to push her apart but I was worried as well!!… She wasn’t well enough! She withdrew when she found no response!!..

“You don’t love me anymore!” she said with a faint smile.

That wasn’t her. I hate that horrible smile. It just kept her thoughts aside and revealed a bold one. Which she wasn’t!!..

“Baby! You sleep please! You are still not okay!!…”

“I’m more than okay! You go” the tone to which she spoke was something which I knew!!.. I had got her hint!

“I am here. I don’t need to go. You stay calm and sleep!” I said as I made her lay down again.

“I asked you to go Sanskar!!.. It’s good for you. I love you and will keep loving you! But I don’t want you to loose someone whom you love! Go I said” she ordered.

“But you??.. I can’t leave you alone and..”

“And what?? Go I said and bring Swara with you! I’m here waiting for you to return. We won’t have the same relation although but does that mean we’ll no more be friends??..”

“No. Will be friends always!” I smiled.

“And I am fine what happened to me??.. Nothing! But I have a condition!” she spoke waking up from the bed and playing with my shirt buttons.

“What??..” I choked. I didn’t know what will she ask. I hope she doesn’t asks what I fear for.

“A kiss. Just one, a lovely one, a last one too” she said coming close to me.

I was shocked.

“Please! Only one…” she looked into my eyes and placed her mouth upon mine.

“I want you to join too” she whispered while kissing.

I participated. It was a last one and I didn’t bugged on. I didn’t want to!!.. She wasn’t well!!.. Arguing wouldn’t give profit.

“I love you” she said and slept hugging me. I made her lay on the bed and closed the door behind her.

Kavita’s POV

He shut the door and I got up crying. This wasn’t easy. Letting your love move out of your life isn’t easy! Especially, the person you love the most!!.. I lost him. My love, my life but I’m happy because he’ll be happy with not me but someone else!!.. I kept my hand on my belly, this was new!

I let him go off but I had him inside me now. He is inside me, his blood is inside me!!.. Our symbol of love or MY symbol!!… Whatever is it I don’t care. I’m a month pregnant!!..

Yes! Yes! Yes! I’m going to be a mother but for that I don’t have the support beside me! But I won’t force you Sanskar. I will never!!.. But will never stop loving you!!..

“I love you both” I kept my hands on my belly feeling blissful feeling that something is growing inside me!!.. But tears didn’t stop….

~~πŸ’Ÿ~~

How was the part?
I know its short and not up-to the mark…
But sorry…

130 comments

  1. Kakali

    Woooow anisha… thnx for chappy… m shocked n surprised to see Kativa like this.. its so new to me.. n i like this.. superb dr.. olz next paet soon.

  2. anu

    awesome.. hela kavita i spregnant now.. what will happen? is sanskar realised his love for swara or not..

  3. Angel-16

    hey anisha it was an awesome chappy….. hope everything will be fine soon…. n thanks for posting it so early….

  4. L

    Whaterver Kavitha Doing Now Isn’t Sacrifice. Its Her Punishment. All The Things Are Messed Up. Life Of Three Of Them Lost Its Charm. Kavita Is Feelng Hurt Bcz He Love Isn’t Her. Bt Wht Abt Swara’s Love? Where Did Her So Called Good Heart Go When She Was Betrayng Swara?? I Wish No One Shud Get A Life Like Both Swara And Kavitha. No One Shud Get A Husbend Like Sankar Who Is Behind Another Girl In The Absen Of Her Wife.

  5. Deeksha gupta

    Awesome but srsly pregnant … i waa shockes after reading it ….bt pls dont make dis kavita n her child trouvle in swasan’s life …

  6. Shagun

    After reading this chap
    Definitely I don’t want swasan
    Plz don’t do injustice to that unborn child

  7. Shilpa

    Anisha why are u giving heart attacks to us.first swara sacrifice and now kavitha , sanskar is that good to sacrifice everyone for his happiness and what this pregnancy at least he has a right to know about his child and is kavitha going to die swara takes the child as like mahan don’t show it pls and kavitha also needs love yar wat about her is she going to be single mother no pls

  8. Pia

    No I don’t want kavita to be nice yaar…. If she will sacrifice her love toh kabhi na kabhi sanskar will feel pity for her & she has his child toh vo vapas toh aayega hi iske pass….. Yaar bt nice update

  9. Shilpa

    Hey don’t get feel bad iam going to write long comment I don’t want swara to forgive sanskar as he is playing with two girls as he is thinking they are toys first get bored with swara he wants kavitha and he said clearly to kavitha he choose her instead of swara and said he loves her only and today after satisfaction of lust he again wants swara and now not bothered about kavitha how can any women trust him pls think out of characters I know it is swasan .but think out if it and frankly saying I don’t like pregnancy track yar sorry if I hurt u

    • Kaynatk01

      |Registered Member

      listen shilpa i understand your feelings but see sanky was and is in love with swara only yes he was only attracted with kavitas body sometimes it happens with boys i know sanky is at fault but now he is guilt he should suffer but he loves swara only we cant deny it

      • Shilpa

        I know this story is gud happens real life also that’s why iam saying not to think about characters think about reality no ex wife can forgive ex husband those who have extra marital affair and more wat about child why we always think about swasan, love is different but sanskar has responsibility to wards his child and if he again attracted to other women wat swara will do how can she trust him,this is just my comment story will be the choice of writer

  10. Ayonti

    I hate this fiction.I can’t understand it was swasan fiction ya kavsan.some episode mujhe laga ki yeh reality type fiction. nw this is too.pregnant this is too much.kavita mahan ban raha hai.I don’t think so.o mahan type uska character hai.jo ladki ek unknown insaan ke sath s*x.then same ladke se pyaar.99% percent man r dog.bt wife ke liye another place hota hai……….I don’t knw kiya bolo main nw I hate this story

    • Anisha

      |Author

      So please don’t read!!…
      I don’t need your comments please!!..
      When Swara is mahan you can accept that then why not Kavita??..
      Really!!.. Thank You so much for reading..
      I don’t want to speak or will sound rude!!..

    • Kaynatk01

      |Registered Member

      listen ayonti its not like that but sometimes we get attracted physicalkya nd we end up in love i dont think kavita is wrong in her place i really loved her character

    • Ridhima

      |Registered Member

      Thank u for the tym u read this fiction….
      Bt really sorry to hurt u she tried to write smething realsitic….every story is nt a fairy tale…..that has to be completed…. in todays world this is the story of evrry 3rd house…..
      i know we cant see swasan like this….nd every kavita is nt bad….she wass devoid of love from start….. she wass attracted nd becme selfish wen she get love…. i m sry if i hurt u… bt this fiction is reality of many woman in todays century…..
      ergggghhhhhh…..
      literally dont know wat to say….
      bt if u dont feel good then dont read…πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’

      • Anisha

        |Author

        Thank You
        Shruti!!. ❀❀❀
        I never knew you read my ff…
        It’s my pleasure!
        The one who writes my favorite ff Humsafar

  11. mou

    crap fiction. kavita pregnant. jo ladki kisi ki ghar ujar ta o kiya kisi ko pyaar karega.shagun apne comment kiya bola injustice with unborn child lyk seriously. 1st of all o sanky se pyaar nahe karta.then kaha se child aaya.clap clap clap what a fiction some people said that reality base fiction. lol lol lol.2min silent 4r those people. mera time khrp kardiye.mode off ho gaya yeh fiction par kar.

    • Anisha

      |Author

      Then please don’t waste your time mou!!…
      21st century me you have loads of work to do …
      No need to make your mood off

  12. swasan fan

    lol lol lol.kavita pregnant. lol.lol.jo ladki kisi ka ghar ujar ne main 2min nahe socha.nw mahan lol again lol.writer kiya prove karna chahata hai.are yaar yeh fiction swasan ka hai /na kavsan ka.some people said that feel bad 4r swara.lol lol lol

  13. Swasan

    I don’t think this type of concept is emerged now. A guy is already divorced his wife so there is no chance left that after doing all this wife will accept her husband. If let us assume in India if it happens then it only possible if he haven’t divorced his wife. And coming to Kavita good character let us assume that she had done a terrible mistake but the moment she came to know that sanskar is married mam then only that time she should left him. After that it was swasan decision whether they want this marriage or not.
    And now coming to pregnancy that is really baseless thing as u have already shown they were always under protection. So don’t find it u need to make major changes in your ff

    • Anisha

      |Author

      I never showed protection between KavSan.. It was between swasan..
      This is what makes the difference you don’t read the story properly and put the blame on others….

      I don’t need a law lecture PLs!!
      I said its a Swasan ff…
      Did I say Swara will accept him?

  14. Dhara

    |Registered Member

    Ha ha ha. Too good. You made it all complicated 😌😱😱😱 . I just want to know where you take this story. SwaSan KavSan chodo. This is reality. People don’t know the crime rate increasing in India due to the extra material affairs. I am so glad that you bought this story boldly. Don’t think about others. Let bashers bash. They can’t stop you from writing. If you have bashers that. You have supports also.

  15. Kaynatk01

    |Registered Member

    oh my god anisha dii its awesome yr and love to see kavitas this part i am really feeling bad for her hope she gets support from swara too and swasan gets united and swara understand kavita

  16. mou

    kavita mahan kaise ho sakta hai.aapne uski character aisa hai.jo ladki ka father uski maa ke sath yeh kiye.o kabhi dusre ke sath same thing nahe karsakta.Rohan character lol.o kavita liye sanskar ko question kar raha.jab sanky yeh sab kar raha.o tu janta tha sanky married hai.kisi bhi bhai apni behen ke sath aisa hote hoye nahe dhek sakta. when there r intimate it is only lust…….

    • Ridhima

      |Registered Member

      Thank u for the tym u read this fiction….
      Bt really sorry to hurt u she tried to write smething realsitic….every story is nt a fairy tale…..that has to be completed…. in todays world this is the story of evrry 3rd house…..
      i know we cant see swasan like this….nd every kavita is nt bad….she wass devoid of love from start….. she wass attracted nd becme selfish wen she get love…. i m sry if i hurt u… bt this fiction is reality of many woman in todays century…..
      ergggghhhhhh…..
      literally dont know wat to say….
      bt if u dont feel good then dont read…πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’

  17. niti

    I can’t describe what type fiction is that.kavita ne aab tak swara ke liye nahe socha.suddenly mahan I don’t knw wht to say.extra material affair tak thik tha…….nw baby

    • Anisha

      |Author

      Niti!!. Dear!! You won’t understand!!…
      You all are suitable for cartoons like Doraemon and all!!…
      If Swara becomes mahan you have no problem but Kavita can’t become mahan? Because she is a villain In the serial??
      Do hell with you πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

  18. niti

    I don’t like it.In above 95% has extra material affair hote.bt its true.wife ka place kisi ko nahe deta koi.kavita father ne uske maa ke sath same thing kiya jo usne swara ke sath.bt yr yeh baby kaha se aaya.I can’t understand what r trying to prove

    • Anisha

      |Author

      What? Kavita ke mom ne KYa kiya?
      She did nothing!!..
      Two different things merging up!!..
      Read the story properly then comment such things!!..
      Don’t give lame replies…

  19. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Dun knw wat shl i write… its more cmplctd nw by dis prgncy… sorry anisha if it hurts u bt not liking it yr.. leaving sanskar who dsrve d pnshmnt most evry1 else is suffering… its sensitive topic n its rlty bt plz dun unite swasan in d end… give gud msg n let him suffer…

    • Anisha

      |Author

      Sanskar ka time ane toh do!!..
      Why are you all so impatient??…
      He’ll bear a life time punishment!!..
      I hope you don’t pity him then…..

  20. Vidhi

    Nice one dear…. Plz don’t get affected by their words… U continue for us… Plz… N Ha update soon plz I read in one of ur comment that u r going to update after one month… Plz don’t do that I m attach to this… Plz.. 😘😍😘😘😍😘😍lots n lots of love from me….. πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

  21. Swapna

    Though your story may be the reflection of the harsh reality but as a Swasan fan Im disappointed as the character of Sanskaar & charm and essence of Swasan is completely lost….
    Anyways kudos to your work & do continue! !!

  22. yogita

    I’m one of silent reader of ur ff. Ur ff is nice. Now sanskar has too choose kavitha because of baby… N let him suffer for his deed bt plz unite swasan at end…

  23. Deeksha gupta

    Hey anisha pls dont get upset by such comments …. we really like ur ff n ur work alot ….so dont get affected by such comments …we love u dear ….😘😘😘😘😘

  24. lisa

    i hate that b***c kavity..why you shon her soo mahan..are u love that b***c more??????i dnt lyk this prgncy trck…u make it more complicated…pls yaar if u choose any other grl instd of that kavity..bcz i hate tht name..and dnt want to read her pov..just hate her also like that type of grls..pls misaing swara badly..plz show her life..

    srry to say..nw i dnt want swasan to reunite bcz itz really a bad msg.let sanky to suffet..and dnt make kavity mahan..she deserve this..she cant diffrentiate byw love and lust..she claimed sanskar lust is love..is she dumbo????pls wanna swasan meetng dnt want any kavity and sankyz scenes..want swasan face off….let that b***c kavity die..girls like kavity shoule die…where is mahatma goes when she betrayng swara..soo she deserve this..such a mistrss type grl..and sanky???i dnt want to tell anythng abt him…he is such a bastard…..and yaar dnt make that kavity prgnt with sankyz child..cant bear it..
    but ur writng style is good…u improved alot compared to 1st part..
    last time i wanna say let that mistrss sl*t bit*h kavity to die(hell frustuatd with her)

  25. Nusz

    is it swasan story or kavitysan story??? are you a kavsan admirer???please dont make things complicated.dont bring ptegnancy track.plz give some values to women self tespect.from now i dont like the concept of uniting swasan.but you r the writer.i just hope you give justice to girls self respect

  26. ria..!!

    it’s soooo..gud…wat I think z kavita nd swara both r good nd ryt at their places…nd stupid z sanskar…if kavita z getting punishment for breaking swara family then swara z also getting punishment for leaving her parents nd hurting them for her love…nd y v r blaming kavita for all d thing sanskar z also responsible for it…I think he z responsible for it more than kavita..as y a stranger vl think abt swara..if her husband her love would not care for her..but as all know swasan r lead so they vl end up in reunion… but kavita z also having equal ryt for her love nd now when she z pregnant she needs it more…nd think..if swara nd kavita we’re in opposite place…then v all we’re sympathetise wd swara nd her unborn child…then v also had to thought abt kavi..

    • Anisha

      |Author

      Correct!!
      I hope someone had understand this part….
      Thank You so much 😊😊😘😘
      These people won’t change!!..

      • ria..!!

        don’t worry dear…u just continue ur ff according to ur thinking…dmt think abt others…just see u get so large no of soo long comments..unlike any other ff here… if some supports u…bashers vl always b there…u r too good in dis ff…i just wanted to see wats z in box nw..waiting for next epi..
        even i also love swasan a lot..but dont want kavi to turn negative..

      • ria..!!

        n pllllzzzzz…don’t loose ur patience on bashers…don’t b upset…chill…it’s just swasan r leads dey just want them…it’s nothing else..

  27. harini

    enough of this kavity.want swasan face off.its the punishment of kavity to ruin swarz mqrried life.sorry to say but she is a bit**h..chiiii..hate girls like her

  28. sanky(swasan)

    lol.ria why u care 4r kavita. sanky ko suffer karna chahiyeh bt kavita ne tu jan buj iss ristey paa diya tha.kavita ne 2nd din jan gaya tha sanky married hai.jo pati apne wife sor sakta then usko bhi sor sakta.then kyun kavita ka bare soche.iss ka ans hai apke pass.apne iss fiction ka para hai yeh nahe I don’t knw.anisha apko yeh fiction kisi aur ke opur likhna chaiyeh tha.sanskar ka character apne khrp kar diye.why u write this fiction on swasan. apko other person choose karna chaiyeh. tha.plz don’t mind.I am die heart fan of sanky.main sanky ko iss character main nahe dhek sakti

    • Anisha

      |Author

      Writers pov……

      We know u must not like kav….san in the story….
      Truly speaking even i m nt a kav…san fan…i hate them as much as all doo…..
      Bt this story is nt only abt kav…san aur swasan… this story is the reality of nearly evey house in this century….. we jst potrayed in front of u….
      Extra marital affair….. this is a small word bt gives lots of pain to evryone… realisation takes a lot of tym…..

      I will nt take ur lots of tym….jst wanted to ask whom do u think is at fault….???

      Kavita sanskar aur swara…?????

      I think thrree of them……

      Sanskar- he betrayed his wife who left everything for him….. nd chose smeone over her…. this is mostly done by many man….i have myself seen around the world men likke him who are shame to society…. he chose lust over love to get satisfaction…..bt now this taughts are hauting him…. all peace from his life has been snatched….. he can never live a peaceful life after breking smeone heart…..

      Kavita- everyone is saying her home wrecker…. bt is she alone at fault…. why she did that no one thought oncee….. bt evryone taught she is kavita so she has to be bad…..as per serial…. even i hate kav….san…
      Nd i will nt say wat kavita did was right…..that was nt less then a sin….. bt a person devoid of love gets love suddenly….wat will be his reaction…??? He will loose abilty to think nd become selfish….
      For her it was always love….
      Wat she did wid swara…..cme back to her….
      She spoiled her life ….bt now kavita is facing the sme situation….
      Her mistake was to trust a wrong person….

      Swara….- u all must be feeling sad for herr…..
      Bt she is also at sme fault….. she got betrayal bcz she betryaed her family for smeone else….
      She eloped wid a person….leaving her family may be nt thinking of them once…..
      If she would have first thought abt her family nd told themmm…..may be she wud hve nt suffered this much…..

      *******************

      I jst wanted to say here a single person is nt at fault…..evryone has a fault or anothrr….

      • Shilpa

        Anisha just read your pov but for swara u r story and pov are different swara said to his father he loves sanskar but he didn’t listen and with ni option she eloped but kavitha and sanskar are different they know they are wrong and first sight kavitha loves sanskar and intimate with him there is no love in kavitha just attraction and same case sanskar not really loves swara if he really loves he can’t cheat her sorry If I hurt u I really likes u r story

    • ria..!!

      dear…m not caring for kavita..here everyone z blaming kavita so m jst saying…sanky z at fault in dis story.. kavita z also but not more than…even I also lyk swasan a lot..nd m also not lyking kav n San together..

  29. NUPUR

    may i ask u truly..are u really a swasan fan or is it tht u want kavsan bt people may nt lik it so u r writing abt swasan story..

    plzz don’t do ths..write abt whom u lik; othrs may lik may not lik bt u wil lik n b hppy..

    bt dnt write its swasan n giv kaviita puraan n sanskar story..

    really..

    truly..

    plzz dnt tk it in a wrng way;i m jst wht me or jst lik me..people feel n think lik ths..

  30. Aleena

    Ur a amazing writer love ur ff πŸ’œur pov is truly correct Kavita n swasan they all are at faultπŸ‘ don’t think about bashers yr u continue ur ff plZ n why you are not posting Meri pehli mohabbat ff??

  31. Mica

    |Registered Member

    i read you opinion as writer POV in comment..
    i disagree for some point..
    Kavita is homewrecker…. her true love for sanskar won’t covered the fact that SHE IS HOME WRECKER, we can hide behind LOVE for every a bad doing.
    She made love to sanskar in their first meet, and still continue it to next 2 month until swara back…. she is cheap dear ( i can forgive for their first ML, but for the next.. it’s biggest betrayal of marriage and she soo called true love)..
    for every extra marital affair, it’s woman decision, if Kavita didn’t say yes, Sanskar wouldn’t even try to rape her too, rite ?
    swara betrayal ? sanskar betrayal ?how could you comparing them both ? it’s different case
    Swara betrayed her family as her family betrayed her first…she forced to get married..
    swara betrayed her family because there wasn’t any option to do…
    Kav-San betrayal…..
    is there any circumstance to said that it was a forced betrayal ?
    there was VALUE MARRIAGE that should keep in their mind.. just if they have brain to digest that precious words
    your FF is awesome, whatever will be happen, it doesn’t matter to me..
    but your opinion, somehow made shock, you want give a reason for kavita’s bad deed, but it shown that you stand in kavita’s side…
    i’m not talking… i’m typing πŸ˜›

    • Anisha

      |Author

      Check out my comment once again ….
      And take it from a positive side!!..
      You’ll understand my POV better….
      I’m not taking Kavita’s side!!..
      Babe…!! …
      I’m not talking even😑😑
      πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        i know!!… but it’s shown as it was…
        don’t blame my swara for their bad deed… *covering my mouth
        see… i’m not talking ><

      • Anisha

        |Author

        I’ll 😑😑
        Erghhh…..
        She is my SwarA too….
        Mica!! 😑😑😑
        I’m not talking even… 😑😑

  32. J

    First of all your way of writing is good except the storyline. When you are uploading a ff in public platform, readers will read it. Some will appreciate and some will criticise. Dear! Healthy criticism is always appreciated to be a good writer. Whoever is bashing you, you must ignore them but when I read your replies to some real criticism, I felt like you are being way more rude. Sorry if it hurts you but you need to take critics on table when you are writing something. And coming to KavSan/Swasan, I don’t have issue in pairs but ya truly your justification for kavita is not acceptable.. As what Kavita did on first meeting itself is purely s*xual desire and that’s not love.. Craving for love and bodily needs are two different things. And ya coming to Sanskar’s only love is swara? Do u think so dear? In love, you can never cheat your partner. When you cheat, it shows that’s only attraction , not love… Sorry if it hurts you. But again I m repeating I m not against pair but ya against the way you try to be judgemental…

      • Anisha

        |Author

        Do read those comments!
        They are using slang words too…
        So I have to comment a way rude!
        I didn’t feel bad really!!…
        Because I have stopped feeling bad after I have come across such comments since I started the story…
        So it doesn’t Matter any more now!!…

  33. Rabail

    Nice part, waiting for mere pehli mohabbat eagerly please update that, that seems to be very interesting

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