Kavita’s POV

I was 3 when mom died. Dad married another woman. I tried my best to love her, even I loved her as my mom but she never showed out that love to me!!.. I had two brothers but my bad luck! They never loved me. In short, no one loved me!!.. I was 10 when I was sent to boarding for further studies as mom had refused to let me stay at home. Only I know how much I had cried but no one ever cared!!..I least bothered about mom and bhai but at least dad??.. But no… I was finally send. After studies got completed I got a job in a reputed MNC, where I met Rohan.

Rohan is a smart, handsome and a good friend of mine. I used to share each and everything with him!!.. In short, I got a brother figure. I shared everything with him and he used to support me. One fine day he asked me to accompany him to some club. I agreed as now I had no tension what dad, mom or anyone would say. I was a free bird now!!..

I was talking with my colleagues when I saw ‘HIM’. I kept chatting with my friends with some amount of alcohol and suddenly I felt some gaze!!.. I turned only to find ‘HIM’ again. We started to flirt and we became close. I had seen him once or twice as he used to attend some business parties with my boss. Yeah! He was the owner of Maheshwari MNC!!.. Huff!!..and most properly Rohan’s best friend.

It was lovely time chatting with him. He was quite open not the rough & tough ones. We spent some quality time drinking and he finally offered me a lift! ?

I am glad? At least there was someone who cared for me!!.. We started our journey & in the mid way I kissed his cheeks. I don’t know why I did so.. but I guess I felt like!!.. Not caring about the further consequences, I started giving feathery kisses on his neck. I didn’t know anything about him neither did I bother, I felt like believing him, loving him and I did!!..

Moreover, in a drunken state no one can expect more than that from me. The next moment I realized I was on his lap and he put his lips on mine!!.. It felt divine!!.. His touch made my stomach tight. I loved his touch!!.. I responded to the kiss as well and then we made love!!..

The morning came up, when I opened my eyes I was in some room, at first I panicked. I saw a lavishly but well maintained magnificent room. I saw myself I was dressed..huff!!.. But the memories of yesterday night flashed in my mind. I gazed around the room and that was when I saw a pic. Anyone can make out it was Sanskar’s marriage photo with his ‘WIFE’

My heart sank into pit realizing that!!.. then what was that yesterday night??.. was it just lust??.. Tears rolled down and till then he came out from the washroom with his as usual his ‘KILLER SMILE’. I guessed he panicked seeing my tears. I just aked him about his marriage and he nodded. I asked whom will he choose.

“You” he whispered and kissed me again. He promised me he’ll be by my side always. Don’t know why I wanted to trust him. I know I am wrong because in a way someone would call me a home wrecker. But what to do ‘DIL HAI KI MANTA NAHI’ lol.. cheesy lines!!..

But he gave me the love no one ever gave me!!.. I loved his attention, his care that none gave me ever!!.. I felt blessed!!.. I don’t know how the 2 months passed by in a flow. I left office for him, he didn’t want me doing work, he wanted me to stay home always!!.. the holidays were more memorable!!.. We used to spend the morning in each others arms, loving each other; then the whole day shopping and some time at theatres; then dates and finally in each others arms. Those two months were blissful, I loved the way he loved me in fact, the way he loved me I forgot all my sorrows. It was like all my wounds were healed!!..

I was lost until Swara came back that was one of the worst days. She came and just slapped him. I agree she was correct in her deeds as well!!.. Even I would do the same if ever I was in her place. When you see your husband making out with another women in your bedroom, in your absence. I felt bad as well but I loved him what to do. She abused me as well but I guess I deserved it!!.. Sanskar was numb but still supported me. He slapped her!!.. I felt the most lucky women in the entire world, he supported me, he choose me!!.. he kept his promise. I could sense his guilt, for hurting her but I was happy somewhere. The entire night he didn’t sleep!!.. I tried my best but I failed miserably.

The next morning, I got up only to hear their heated argument. I was so happy after knowing that they are going to divorce soon. I was highly delighted but Sanskar he was lost!!.. But his usual nature came back as usual that evening itself. The next day we went for shopping. It was a treat to myself as I was happy!!.. I asked Sanskar as well but he denied. I didn’t force him as I was in no mood and left alone. It was when I met Rohan, after 2 months. He was shocked after watching me there.

“Kavi! Where were you these long months? I was searching for you. I learned from boss that you even left the job” he really looked worried.

“Arey! Arey! Stop mumbling let me explain!”

After that we went for lunch in a near by restraunt and I explained him.

“That was why I never saw you after that and you are the reason for Sanky being busy? Wow!!.. I mean you changed him dear. But wait what about Swara?” this was what I feared for.

I explained everything about that night as well as how Sanskar supported me.

“But love is different and this is different Kavi! You don’t know how much these two love each other!!..”

“Correction!! Rohan they loved each other and no more! I know how much he loves me”


“Aren’t you happy? You know Sanky loves me so much. None had loved me as such!” and I sobbed.

“Kavi!!.. I know after all I now your past. I’m happy you are happy with him. I can see love in your eyes for him. I hope he loves you too! But as your brother it’s my duty to… ” he said caressing my face.

“But I said na we are happy? Aren’t you happy for me?”

“I am very happy!!” I was relieved.

After that we had our lunch and I left for my house. It has been six months and our love hadn’t decreased. Today Sanskar was behaving weirdly!!.. without having breakfast even he headed for office. Rohan came for some office work and we met. He supposed to be surprised I guess.

“You here?” he enquired.

“Yeah! Why? Where would I have been?” I asked.

“Nah! Nothing well where’s Sanskar?”

“He went for office”

“office? Today? But he never goes office today!” he said astonished.

“Why? Anything special?” I enquired.

“Ha… Wo… It’s his birthday today!!.. But he never goes out today! It’s strange… Ah! Well! People also have changed!!… It was Swara then who used to convince him but now…. ”

“Rohan!!… Do you mean to say he isn’t happy with me?” anger rouse upon me.

“Kavi!! Try and understand. This isn’t love! He doesn’t..” he tried to soothe me.

“Ro…. Leave.. I said leave!!.” and he left.

I had to plan something now. Holy shit!!… Nothing’s ready!!… And it’s already 11 am what should I do??… An idea flashed and I started my work. But Sanskar God knows what’s his problem? He came early today… What shall I do know??… I made myself presentable in that fussy Saree and messy bun. I looked into those eyes they had worry!!.. What was he worrying about??…

We had our dinner at the terrace and then a romantic dance. We were hugging each other while dancing. I saw him hesitating but ignored!!… He’s always confused!!..

“Sanskar, shall I ask you something??” I whispered.

“Hmm.. Baby did I ever say no?” I smiled at his soothing words.

“Tomorrow will you spent the day with me??..” I spoke playing with his shirt buttons.

“No actually I am busy tomorrow!!… Have some important work, I hope you understand!!.. Will go some other day” with that he moved back and broke the hug.

“Baby!!.. But why not tomorrow??.. I know you can take this holiday! Please na! I want to be with you on your birthday!!… Please please!!” I pleaded.

“I said no na? Please Kavita don’t force me!!.. I wont do anything as such, I’m very busy please!!..” this was hurting.

“But Sanskar, hmm… Ok!! I understand after all I’m nothing to you!” and I moved my face aside.
“Kavita!!.. Understand na!!” he turned me so that I could face him. I kept mum and ignored him.

“Baby!! Please! Ok! We will go!!…” I hugged him in happiness. Finally, after so many days we’re going to spent time together.

“Ah! Now sleep. Will have to get ready early tomorrow na? And I have some work let me complete!!..” but I was stubborn as well.

“No…. You aren’t doing anything!!.. We are going to spent sometime together come!!.. Love me!!…” I pulled him onto me but he refrained.

“Kavita!!..please…. I’m really very busy…”

“But baby!!.. I want to love you today, with all my heart and soul… Let’s do it!!..” I requested.

“Baby!! Please not today! I’m busy as well as tired. I just want to sleep but I can’t leave my work also so have to manage!!.. You sleep I’ll join you later” he said tucking the strands of my hair behind my ear.

“Busy or should I say busy with your new girlfriend?? After all this had to happen, a man who has left his wife for me can even leave me for someone else!!” I don’t know why did those words came out of my mouth but I couldn’t control more!!… We have been getting together after such a long time and now he’s refusing!!…

The next moment, I got red marks on my cheeks and it was him!!.. How could he??.. The one for whom you have sacrificed your everything, from your future to everything that person was doing something like this…. It was really heart wrenching but what I did wasn’t less yet!!..

“How could you say that? How could you mistrust me? For you I have left everything, my life, my breath, my soul, my most dearest wife!!.. How could you speak such bullshit??” his anger ragged.

“Whattttt…???… What did you say??… Your life, your wife???… You mean I’m nothing to you??.. Ha??.. I have devoted my entire life to you, then.. then what’s all this?? ….what am I to you??.. Speak up? Who am I to you??..” I shouted holding his collar.

“You are my mistress!!.. Got it??… You are my mistress… Keep that in your stupid brain and don’t you dare shout at me” he spat back clutching my hairs tight!!.. He threw me onto a corner of the terrace and locked me up!!..

Why do I feel, I have done a big mistake??.. But my heart??.. What about that???..how could you do this Sanskar??.. How could you? A relationship of 8 months and you have broken it within seconds??… Was it that easy for you??.. The rain started showering as if crying along with my miseries. I was left alone in that terrace. No one by my side!!!…

Guilt occupied my heart for what I have done with Swara…. This had to happen!!.. I don’t know when I slept off on that wet floor leaning against the wall….


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  1. G.Chandu

    amazing yaar…!! loved it…!! I have no words to say…!! You portrayed her feelings sooo well…!!

    1. Anisha

      Thank You
      Chandu!! ??

  2. Tasneem

    Anisha ur ff is my favorite!!!! U r really creative….. But please update fast…. Don’t make us wait that much!!!!…. luv u and ur ff ♥♡

    1. Anisha

      Thank You so much ??
      Ya!!.. Actually managing studies as well as writing is really difficult but still I will try my best to entertain you ??

  3. Episode 6 I guess and today u r rocking , specially kavitha dialogue the person can cheat his wife for her he can cheat her for some other girl , insecurity and looks like realistic and same goes with swara if she forgive sanskar even she can’t trust sanskar and finally u r writing skills are improved a lot compared to old mpm this is too gud looking like realistic take criticism as positive it will help to improve .

    1. Give fast updates yar

      1. Anisha

        Shilpa!!… Studies are important as well no?
        So sorry but you won’t get regular updates…..

    2. Anisha

      Thank You so much!!!… ??
      I hope I can keep entertaining my readers like this till the end…
      Keep reading!!!…

  4. awesome.. update soon…. please dont be late update soon

    1. Anisha

      Thank You
      Will try Anu!!..
      But what about my studies….
      As well as I don’t want to mix up everything and make it a mess!!!…
      So keep waiting!!!….

  5. Mica

    karma is a b*tch dear kavita!..hahaha*evil laugh
    Sanskar doesn’t deserve any woman in this world.
    i know, in 1 point, kavita was rite, she is in love
    but don’t be a homewrecker for other woman, if sanskar and kavita fallin in love trully,
    kavita should ask sanskar ended his marriage before doing extra marital affair.

    1. I agree with u if they really love each other they have to wait to end the relation of sanskar and swara,borh are wrong and more over kavitha why don’t she think about sanskar at first that he can Cheat her when he can cheat his wife swara is right sanskar type of man’s are like first swara now kavitha and next other one he wants only Mistress

      1. Anisha

        But Love Is Blind!! ??

      2. Mica

        bullshit sanskar ! let we chop him into pieces ! hahah

      3. Anisha

        Comm’n Mica!!
        Get set Go!! ??

    2. Anisha

      But still Kavita!! Was devoid of love!! So she was blind in love!
      I hope you understand….

      1. Mica

        yups..that why i said that she was rite in 1 point..
        no one should judge or questioning someone’s love feeling,
        simply said: love feeling can’t be wrong but the action…
        what wrong happened to your prev episode Anisha ?

      2. Anisha

        Huh? Swasan Romance problem!!
        U know TU no??…

      3. Mica

        weeww,,, i forgot, i skipped that part, i mean the romance, too vulgar for me :3
        i’m innocent girl u know :3 :3

      4. Anisha

        Lol!!!… ???
        Innocent and you???…. ????

  6. Mica

    ohh.. luv it so much Anisha…xoxo

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??

  7. Awesome i think she ll turn positive after reading this hope so

    1. Anisha

      I too hope so??

  8. Now the story is coming to d track.. it’s awesome.. next part soon..?

    1. Anisha

      Thank You!!…
      Will try to post asap… ??

  9. Maha6

    Well it’s awesome. Whatever kavitha did with swara was wrong but I don’t say that she don’t have a heart. She has that’s why she is thinking abt swara

    1. Anisha

      So do you agree you like Kavita???…

      1. Maha6

        I’m not saying that I like kavitha just I was saying she also has heart.

      2. Anisha

        Hmm… ? OK… ??

  10. superb.Aab sanky aur swara ko mila do

    1. Anisha

      It will take time dear!!!…
      Keep reading ??

  11. Rekha

    it was just phenomenal..

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??

  12. Deeksha gupta

    Awesome yr ….pls update nxt part soon …

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??
      Will Try to post asap

  13. nice..continue soon..

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ?

  14. Anisha


    Guys I always write this part before hand because I feel you all don’t read the part when we write at the end. Guys this ff is again gonna turn into Anisha’s because Riddhima is going to Chandigarh for her medical coaching and won’t be able to keep in touch! ? ?
    Ok OK… Nothing Senti….
    So from now on you all have to bear me again! Do tell me
    Wish her luck for her brighter future & this is her last chapter!
    Credits to : Riddhima
    Thank You Riduli for being there always with me as a friend!! These 2 weeks with you were really wonderful!!
    Thank You So much ? ? ?
    I hope I can post MPM soon…
    But my problem is I’m lazy as well as busy…
    So keep reading friends
    Thank You!!
    SERENA reply to my message!! Pls….
    Sanskar’s pov
    I was lying on the bed and was trying to recollect what happened in my life. It has been 6 months of mine and Swara’s divorce and 8 months of mine and Kavita’s relation. Things have changed a lot. I tried my best to keep her happy and she also keeps me happy.But dont know always I felt myself empty. I always try to understand its reason but I m unable as always.
    I sighed and closed my eyes….. Then I felt an arm wrapping around my waist I know its of KAVITA…..
    “What are you thinking Sanskar??” She asked me…
    “Nothing darling…just about some office work” I lied because I myself was confused what to answer her.
    Then clock struck 12:00…..Happy birthday Sanskar I wished myself and was expecting Kavita to wish me but no how can she when she dont know about it and I dozed off. Then early in the morning I went to office for an urgent meeting without waking her up. After the meeting got over, I went inside my cabin and asked everyone not to disturb me. I was sitting inside my cabin and was lost. Then suddenly I felt Swara was sitting on the couch in front of me and smiling at me. This made me smile…
    But suddenly I came out of my thoughts when Kavita’s face in front of me. I mentally slapped myself and cursed myself for thinking about Swara. I thought to leave all this and go to home to celebrate my rest of the day with Kavita only Kavita without any thoughts and all.
    Swara’s pov
    “Happy birthday Ansh”….i wished Ansh as clock strike 12:00….
    I carried him into my arms and kissed his forehead. He smiled at me and kissed my cheek. I gave him a teddy, on getting it he started playing with it and kept laughing. I was just staring him and just wanted to see him like this forever, my baby. But next second I found my eyes wet and I turned towards the window of my room.
    I stood there looking outside.
    “Happy birthday Sanskar” I wishedd him even after knowing my wishes will not affect him but I cant help it. I love him more than anything. How much I try I cant hate him…. ? ? ….
    **Flashback starts**
    Third person’s pov
    Swara was madly in love with Sanskar. It was his 1st birthday with hers, after their marraige and she was so excited and happy that she started preparing hot chocolate cup cakes because it was his favorite. Swara had asked the recipe from Ragini and started preparing them. Though Ragini was angry on her but she was after all a sister, that too the sweetest one. She can of course do that much for her little sister isn’t it?? She preferred to let her ‘love’ sleep and started preparing all his favorite dishes.
    After awhile when Sanskar woke up, Swara decided to avoid him. She took a shower and finally presented him the breakfast. He was shocked! Dumbfounded! Flabbergasted!
    What was happening? But she didn’t give any hint! Neither did she wished him.
    He gently placed her on his lap and asked huskily, “So you remember today… ”
    But she was too clever. She interrupted,
    “Sanky! Seriously? Here we are getting late for office? And you are thinking of romance?? Eat fast did you forget today’s an important presentation to be hold? I am really very nervous!” getting up from his lap.
    “Then why did you make these?? That too my favorite? Wait! Wait! When did you learn cooking?” he asked rasing his eye brows to and fro.
    “Ah!.. I just learnt it during my spare time…. You know Sanjeev Kapoor?? Wow! He makes amazing dishes. You know? I learnt it from him”
    “Looks like my wife started lying?”
    “and love tell why would I??” she asked shaking her hands around his neck.
    “Well I don’t want to argue. Hands up! You win, I lose. OK? Now serve me Pls! I am hungry…” he squealed like a baby who had just come home winning a race.
    Swara sighed and served him the breakfast, all along eating together and smiling. After awhile both left for their destinations. Swara had morning shift and Sanskar’s was evening. They had managed a way so that they can cope up with both their work and studies. Even if Sanskar wanted to quit his studies because of work pressure, Swara was adamant. She would never let him do that! So she too joined the company.
    When at 8, Sanskar reached home, he was welcomed with a lot of applauses and warm smiling faces of their clients, employees and some good going friends. He smiled at them and mumbled a ‘Thank You’…..
    He moved further and hugged his wife and kissed her cheeks.
    “Thank you love”
    “Not needed! It’s for me! This birthday makes you older and makes me happy because tomorrow you will spend the entire day with me”
    “Really?? But who told you so?? Did you ask me?”
    “Do I need to? From when did you ask from me to take permission??” tears rolled down her eyes.
    “Swara! This whole world would change but you will never….. Dramebaaz!”
    “Never ever” and she wiped out her crocodile tears. Those worked on everyone except her mom and Sanskar.
    These too knew her so well!
    “Guys if you are done with your romance then birthday boy Pls cut the cake” Rahul, one of their friends said teasing them.
    “Bhukadd!!..” Swara and Sanskar spoke at the same time.
    Sanskar cut the cake and made her eat. After her so called non-alcohol party, that was what she named it, she organized some games.
    ‘Truth or Dare’, one of her favorites along with ‘balloon blowing competition’. That was fun but everyone laughed at her stupid, childish plans. But one person used to adore it and that was Sanskar. He loved it only because she loves that!

    After waving a bye to their friends and guests, she took him to their room. This was what he least expected. Swara and Sanskar never had any physical relationship except for some kisses. He saw the room fully decorated as if it was their first night together. The room was filled with candles and a vanilla fragrance spread over as he flung open the curtains.
    He looked for Swara, and there she was in a beautiful red Saree. This was again least expected. He had never seen her wearing a Saree. Not even during their marriage. She didn’t even know how to wear that!
    She came over to him and kissed him lightly.

    “Madame! Are you thinking of giving an attack to your hubby on his 19th birthday? Please spare me if you are trying to because I haven’t still enjoyed my life” Swara laughed at his antics and he smiled at her. (Just think about that killer smile ? ? )
    “From where did you learn?”
    “What do I need to learn? Love?”
    “Don’t joke me! You know that well…”
    “Hmm…. Technology you know? But I guess my husband’s getting old! Nothing’s going up into his head” she locked her head with his, fingers entangled.
    “Sanskar I can’t wait! Mark me yours! I love you” she quivered as she uttered those last sentences.
    “Are you sure? I mean you never wanted until we get our graduation right?”
    “Hmm.. But I want now.. Please… I want to make you mine. Wait…. Hmm… Catch this!”
    He looked up-to what she offered and he looked at her in utter disbelief.
    “con**ms?? Are you crazy? I mean you bought these? Seriously?”
    “Love! If you want proceed fast or you will miss the chance” he sighed and moved towards her.
    He removed her Saree that covered her chest and started giving feathery kisses. He smelled her fragrance and removed the further part of the dress while caressing every part of her body. He made her lay down on the bed and traced down every inch of her body. She moaned his name with so much love that he couldn’t effort to stop.

    She too involved in the process and opened the shirt buttons and trailed wet kisses over his warm muscular chest. He smiled at her as he knew she was new to this. Sanskar put his mouth on hers and they started exploring each other.

    He dugged his face into her fleshy chest and kissed her boss*ms. Her breathing laboured. But she didn’t give up! She was going to please him today and she was adamant! She pressed him more on herself and enjoyed his teasing.

    “Shall we??” she asked as Sanskar lifted up his face from her chest.
    “Are you sure love? It will pain!”

    “Not sure….. Damn sure!” he smiled.
    She turned to the other side to avoid his gaze but provoked him.

    “Get ready!” he said as he kissed every inch of her back and back hugged her tight. He placed his one hand on her waist and other on her boss*ms. He pressed those fleshy moulds and his face on her silky smooth hairs.

    The hand caressing her waist reached up-to her thighs, lifting them gently and placed his thigh between hers. He entered into her the next moment and she moaned, a loud one. It was common as it was her first time and she could declare she was a virgin no more!!…

    He slowly pushed him inside her so that she could pace up with him. After an hour of painful moan, she experienced pleasure.

    “I never knew my husband is such a wonderful lover??” she said in a feeble voice.


    “Love, stop now. I don’t have any more con**ms” Swara said in a breathless voice.

    But he kept grinding and she followed.

    “Are you trying to come?” he asked her in a gentle havoc tone.

    He applied more pressure to her sensitive core now. The pleasure unbearable for her.

    “How is it feeling love??”

    “Oh! Yes.. Sanskar right there… Yes right there” she shouted in throes of passion.

    Her juices started flowing over and coated his legs. He pressed deeper into her soft bottom and fondling her br*ast more and more. She screamed out in pleasure but he kept on doing his work. Her screams and moans made his hormones rise to pitch level and within seconds her hardened. Landing up-to her a good shot of love.
    “Sanskar, you messed up” she said after a while cleaning herself.
    “sorry! Love… I couldn’t control” his breathing laboured.
    Both hugged each other tight at giggled at the union.

    **Flashback ends**

    Swara’s pov
    How happy were we!!.. But now everything is changed. My whole world turned upside down. No one is beside me.
    “Mu..m” a sweet voice called me from behind I know its of my Ansh. I wiped my tears and went towards him and played for some time. Then slept beside him.
    Sanskar’s pov……
    I reached my home and found it dark. I thought Kavita must have gone for some party… so I have to spend my rest of the day in loneliness. I was about to enter in my room but I heard some noises from terrace. I moved towards the stairs thinking whose voice it must be??.. I reached the terrace and was shocked to see it decorated with candles, flowers all over. I was surprised to see it….
    “Kavita” I called her when I saw her standing in the mid of terrace in black sari with a messy bun, holding a stick of orchid flowers. She turned towards me and was shocked to see me, I guess her expressions told me.
    “What are you doing here?” She asked me astonished, most probably, seeing me before time.
    “I guess I m at my home and I have the rights to come here…” I said raising one eyebrow.
    “Yes of course” she said leaving the flowers and making herself presentable….
    I slowly moved towards her and then pulled her towards myself holding her from waist.
    “What is all this for..???” I asked her removing rose petals from her hairs with my one hand….
    ” Happy birthday love” she wished me. O god!!.. she knew about this.
    “How u know about it..??” I asked out of curiosity.
    “I love you and can do anything for you..” she answered looking direct in my eyes.
    “But you spoiled my surprise coming early..” she said and turned away….
    I hug her from behind and put my mouth on hers.
    “But still I loved your surprise and thank you for such a wonderful gift…” saying this I kissed her earlobe…
    Then i cut out a small cake made by her. She loves me so much. I felt guilty for thinking about Swara but I left out these thoughts and spent my time with Kavita….
    ** I hope I can give you the next part tomorrow morning**

    Request to TU:
    Tellyupdates it’s a kind request not to post the episode if you have any kind of problem! It’s better to inform 1stly rather than…. Deleting the comments coming up in the story… You deleted the chapter that morning… Itself… Tell me if you don’t want to post the story here… There are a lots of websites out here….

  15. sorry to say kavita guilty is 5th episode or 6th one.. and this part which you posted in comments is also poted earlier na i studied this chapter previously.. please reply me..

    1. Anisha

      Actually, this is the 6th part but TU had deleted the previous parts so….
      For those who didn’t read I’m posting in the comments section itself!!
      Kavita is guilty in the 6th part

      1. oh okay.. i already read this part thats why got doubt why ur posting it again… thank try to update next part soon..

  16. inayat jagirdar

    very nice

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ?

  17. Superb if u have study u fix some day and update ur ff bcuz I love this ff superb episode

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??
      Will surely fix someday…

  18. Tamanna

    Awesome…. The way You portrayed everything is just amazing….waiting for next one

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??
      I have not start with the next part!! Let’s see when I get free…..

  19. RUPA

    Anisha !!

    Finally cavity is guilty of her deeds !!

    I loved it when sanky spoke swara is his life and kavi is nothing to him.

    But swara shouldn’t forgive him so easily, make him suffer and repent.

    Try to post next part soon..!! wanna read sanky’s POV !!

    Love you ??

    1. Anisha

      Kavita’s typo error is Cavity??
      Swara won’t forgive him that easy….!!… He’ll suffer as well as repent!!…
      Will try but can’t promise to post it tomorrow itself!!..
      Love you too ?????

  20. MOU

    awesome….u perfectly described their felling..

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ?

  21. Hemalattha


    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??

  22. Kavs pov was awesome
    Don’t unite swasan
    Sanskar don’t deserve swara

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??

  23. Arshaanya

    Karma! Bt i think kavita is not as much wrong as sanskar… hez d main culprit here coz hez jus using girls here… first his wife even slpd her n divorced… nw kavita used slpd.. dis type of men deserve such a big punishment.. dey shud get only pain bt dey r giving pain to others… swara shud not go bck to him… he shud suffer in hell…
    I loved ur way of writting.. its much better dan prvs one.. n u ve ptrd cavityzz felngs vry beautifully… loved it ?

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??
      Well Kavita deserves as well as doesn’t!!

      Her fault was she loved a wrong person!!..
      And realised later…..

      About Sanskar….. Well you are correct!!…

      Thank You once again for liking it!! Then the previous ones…..????

  24. Arunika

    I feel bad 4 Kavita bt at the same time think that she’s rightly served!!!!

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ?
      True!! She deserves as well!!

  25. Soujanya


    1. Anisha

      Thank You ?

  26. Nice one dear…. Loved it… ?????actually sanskar does not deserve any one…

    1. Anisha

      Thank You ??
      Well you’re correct!!!…

  27. kavity is really a bi**h..these type of girls are sheme to others..how can she break other women life..so its suitable punishment for her..atlast sanskar called her what she deservr..mistress..chiii..whatever she call it love or blah blah blah..but for mens like sanskar it is always lust..kavity u bi***h go to hell with ir mistrss identity..chiii..how can u make a relation with a maried person and u call is love..no u bi**ch its only lust…bldy sl*t bi**ch mistrss girl..u have u suffer kavity chipku

    1. Anisha

      Bas kar!!….
      Bacchi samajh ke maaf karde!! ???

  28. Yipppppppeeeee…..!!!!!
    Kav….san jhagda ho gya……
    thanks anisha….
    i love u for todays epi….

    1. Anisha

      Kamini….. Kaha Mar gyi??? Aaj?? ???
      Thank you infinity much!!…

      1. Kamini zinda hoon….tera nhi pta tu kahan hai…???????…..

        Saare paap mujhse hi karvane the kya…????
        chl koi nhiiii….
        ur welcome….?????????

      2. Anisha

        Me jinda hu but tu kab jinda hoti hai? Time bata dio……. ???

        Ha tu kar pap kamini!!!
        Teri hi behn hu jyada appreciate nA kar???

        Chal mujhe reply kar….. ????

      3. Main raat ko online hoti hoon after 12….??…
        haan haan paap krvaye mujhse bhagwan mera badla lega…??….

        Main aur tjhe appreciate krongiiii……itne bure din nhi aye mere …..???

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