Kuch na kaha (Manan) part 4

Manik went out with them. He had an issue to solve. Two sides people are arrguing very badly, Manik is hearing only one voice”in your list what’s my number?” He felt deeply, no very deeply hurt.
“What the hell she thinks about herself? How dare to ask me like that? Iam I a womanizer? How reticulous is she?” Manik’s pain is dominating his thoughts, still he is happy. The closed bit of nandini to him made him feel best. “After a long long time I feel her, I touched her.”Manik completed his work with those people and returned back.

Nandini went for rounds. She checked dadi, her body is normal, but she is not taking injections, she has phobia for injections. Nandini took medicine and went to her
“Dadi! Do you remember me?”
“Your operation is success, now you are fine, you can walk and do your works with right hand”
“Really?”she asked happily
Yes, if you take this injection you will be soon fast”
“No injection”
“I will give injection like Manik, very slowly”
“Manik will give me”
“I will give you slowly”
“No no” she became more stubborn
Nandini called nurse ” go out call him”
“Whom mam?”
Nandini got frustated “she said na call him”
“Ok Mp Saab”
Manik came in
“Dadi! Look at me why are you tensed?” Manik signaled Nandini do injection she did it, Manik is going on talking to her, she didnot noticed about injection.
All the nurses are shocked, the news spread like virus that “Dr. Had injected a patient”
They all new her very well since two years, she never treats any one specially.

At lunch sri came to hospital. He is playing with nandini’s PA lalitha. When he heard his moms voice came running to her and hugged her legs tight nandini smiled and took him in arms and kissed him on cheek.
“Mom today I won, sir gave me chacolate” sri showed her chacolate
“Wo ho! My sri is great, today nite we will have two matches.”
Sri’s face glowed like a star with happiness.
“Sri mamma has work she has to check patients so you go and play with lalitha di please”
“Ok! You know sri loves Pihu more than Pihu loves sri. See you are again going leaving me”
“Aaa! Sri is good boy you know Pihu is bad lady”
“No Pihu sweat” sri kissed her
Sri went to play with lalitha, nandini turned back and saw Manik and sadana. She shivered like a calf seeing a tiger. She is freezed with horror. Then she walked away.

“Manik who is that boy? Why is he calling nandu mom? Did she married?”sadana asked her son
“No sadana it doesn’t happen in my worst dream too”replied Manik
“Wait here I will just come” Manik thoughts are totally in different way, he is happy and even angry.

Nandini is in ward checking patient Manik came to her, “come I need to talk”
“Iam busy”
“Just come” Manik in anger
“May be you are minister, it’s my hospitaaaaa…. Manik took her hand and dragged her out before everyone. Nandini got anger, with all her strength got rid of Manik and tried to slap her for which Manik held her hand tight and took her to store room which is adjuscent to them
“Are you mad? You already ruined my life once now you want spoil my reputation?”
“Shhhhhhhhhhh! Who is that boy?”
Nandini freezed but came out in sec and asked in return” who the hell are you to ask?”
Manik pinned her to wall kept his both hands on her and pinned them too to wall seeing sharp into her eyes.
“Who is that boy?” He don’t want to waste a single min to listen the answer
“My son” Nandini replied with closed eyes
“Our son?” Manik face glowed with a beautiful smiled and happiness
“No! My son, iam married”
“Shut up!”Manik shouted with anger
“Don’t dare to spoil my happiness”
“Your wish to accept or not but truth is truth”
Manik hit the wall so strong that his hand got hurt and it’s bleeding.
Nandini tears came in her eyes
Manik looked at her and went more close to her kept his face at her neck and kissed her slowly, more slowly again Nandini shivered with jerks of tension.
“Who is your timid husband? Does he know who iam to you? Show me, call him now”
Nandini took a gulp and made herself strong and said “he went to Singapore”
Manik kissed her other side of her neck which is making her to loose control on herself
“Really! Ok call him I will talk”
This time Nandini is out of control enjoying his moves on her body
Manik took her lip in with his teeth and chews. Which is making her to more crazy
“Now say the truth” Manik left her and stood away from her.
Nandini felt ashamed and so lost that she sat on her knees and started to cry.
Manik took her arms made her to stand and said in slow voice “Pihu! Stop it, I can’t see you crying. Come here sit, now say he is our son, yes” made her sit on a chiar
“Why do you want to know now after five years? Does anything really matters to you? In these 5yrs you didn’t even turned back once so you don’t have right to question me”
“So he is our son”
“No only my son” Nandini said harshly
“Reality is our son. So we had a son, and and….. I got it. It’s Manan and sri is his nickname. I remember still on that day I said it, you laughed at me but I was true.”
“No he is my son only my son”Nandini tears flowing on her cheeks
“Yes! Your son, my son, our son”
“No Manik it’s only my son did you hear it”Nandini said it strongly
Manik looked at her and said “i will not take away sri from you. Never I promise” Manik said with pain
Nandini started to cry Manik hugged her tight

Credit to: Sunitha.k


  1. Vrutika

    I skipped to breath while reading this Sunitha.. Thinking what must have seperated manan…..
    Loved it
    U r too good..
    Keep smiling

    • Tanushree

      this is my 10th time trying to comment. why my comments r not uploaded i dnt knw. suni u r amazing. this was fantastic.

  2. Jasi

    Wow superb episode but what is this the problem between manan y they got separated but anyway i just love the episode

  3. Tanushree

    dear sunu hw do u manage to amaze us every time. my heart skipped a beat while reading. u r amazing….

  4. bindu

    waiting for the past that wht made them separate. Thank u for updating and please update it regularly. waiting for ur next update.

  5. Sathya

    I was little bit confused but now I’m clear
    Thank u Suni? For clearing the track

  6. Tanushree

    dear suni, its amazing how u amaze us always. u r fantastic. my heart skipped a beat reading.

  7. Tanushree

    it was fantastic and again amazing. u always amaze us with ur writing suni. kip it up

  8. Sindhu

    Awesome one yaar
    Nd guys I am unable to my ff due to some problems sry for that I can’t help it

  9. Kyy

    Awesome yar……..I am eagerly waiting to know what was the reason of manan separation……
    Please update soon yar..

  10. vaishali

    It’s super cool
    Hav read ur update probably 7 tyms n wonder wat tmrw is my xam
    Jus cant prevent myself frm reading ur ffs
    U r fab
    Eagerly waiting

  11. Priya

    sorry suni………I haven’t read ur new ff till now………… I am busy with my new project work……… so sri is manna’s son…………story is amazing……. how will u get these many ideas and stories………..u never leave me without amazement…….

  12. Roma

    Ahhhh sunitha it’s so beautiful n heart touching episode. . I loved it very very muchhhh. …manan convo n Sri identity revealed…wowwww so lovelyyyyyy narration. ..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads.

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