Kuch Khatti Kuch Meethi: RiVanya RaIna SS Part 10

Kuch Khatti Kuch Meethi: A Little Sour, A Little Sweet Part 10
Dedicated to Ajay who gave another jodi name to Rehaan Ahana-VihAna
Shivanya folded her hair to go to office.
Ritik:Why did you fold your hair?
SHIVANYA:Simply.I just tried a new hairstyle.
He went closer to her.She became nervous.

O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

He loosened her hair with his hand.

Udne laga kyon man baawla re
Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re

SHIVANYA:Why did you do this Ritik?
Ritik:To keep your hair lose.You look prettier with open hair.
She blushed.

O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

She thought:Why I feel happy to look pretty in front of Ritik?

Night…

Naina was happy when Raghav called her.

NAINA:Raghav!

RAGHAV:Naina,I know that my phone call disturbed you.But since Dadi went to Haridwar I called you to inform you that I am going to Bangalore for 2 days for a meeting.
Naina became upset and her eyes git filled up with tears.

He cut the call.

She wept:He wants to be away from me.It’s my fault.

Tum ho gham ko chupaye, mai hu sar ko jhukaye
Tum bhee chup ho, mai bho chup hu, kaun kise samjhaye
Abb duriya itanee hain toh, milna yaha kal ho naa ho – (2)
(Kal ho na ho)

Hearing some foot steps she wiped her tears.
Shivanya entered Naina’s room.
NAINA:Naina,how are things between you and Raghav?
Naina lied painfully:Everything is fine.He just called me now.
SHIVANYA:I am so happy Naina.
Suddenly she saw a simple blue saree in Naina’s cupboard.
SHIVANYA:Naina,can I borrow your black frock?
NAINA:Ok…take it.We have always shared our clothes.
Shivanya smiled:Thank you Naina.
Naina:But why frock?You never wear frock.
SHIVANYA:But now I feel like wearing frocks.
NAINA:You were not bothered about your looks before.When did you feel like becoming stylish?
Shivanya blushed.
Naina:Are you trying to impress Ritik?
Shivanya was embarrassed:Nothing like that Naina.I just…
Naina:Shivanya…tell me the truth… do you feel like turning your namesake marriage into a real marriage?
Naina blushed.
Naina:I am happy about it.But Ritik….Does he also think the same way you think about him?
Shivanya was silent for a moment,but she was smiling.
Shivanya:Ritik has’nt told me anything about it openly.But he cares for me.My heart is telling me that he loves me.
Naina smiled.
Shivanya picked up the black frock from Naina’s cuboard and went out.

Shivanya wore the black frock and waited for Ritik.
SHIVANYA:What will be Ritik’s reaction seeing me in this saree?
Suddenly it started raining.With a smile she went out in rain.
Ritik who reached there saw Shivanya in the frock.He was lost in her.He couldn’t take his eyes off her.Understanding that Shivanya blushed.

He forgot himself and walked to her.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Chehre mein tere
Khud ko main dhoondhun
Aankhon ke darmiyaan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile

Slowly he leaned his face towards her passionately.

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani

He rubbed his cheek with hers.She was shy.His fingers passed over her face softly with burning romance.

Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe

Shivanya couldn’t bear it anymore.She became weaker and weaker and fell on his chest.
He held her closer.They got lost in each other.

Yeh milne ki khwaahish
Yeh khwaahish purani
Ho puri tujhi se meri ye kahani

Naina who looked out through the window to see the rain saw Ritik-Shivanya’s embrace and became very happy.

Ritik-Shivanya came back into senses and moved away from each other.
They were silent.Shivanya tried to walk away.Suddenly Ritik held her hand.
Ritik:Shivanya….I don’t think what I did was a mistake.I touched my wife with love.How can it be a mistake?
SHIVANYA:Touched with love?

Kabhi tujhme uttru
Toh saanson se guzrun

Ritik:Yes.Recently I felt that I have started liking you.But now I realized that I really love you.
Shivanya was happy beyond everything

Toh aaye dil ko raahat
Main hoon bethikana

Ritik:I am sorry if I hurt you.Because I had promised you that I will never cross my limit.But now….If you want we can get divorced.Because after falling in love with you I can’t stay in a room with you like a friend.

Shivanya’s eyes got filled up with tears.

SHIVANYA:What did you say?Divorce?You want to divorce me?You fool…you proved that dim students are foolish.You did’nt understand me yet duffer?

She pulled his collar:I love you.Did you hear it?

Panaah mujhko paana
Hai tujhme de ijazat

He was surprised:Shivanya…
He embraced her.They both were lost in each other.
Na koi darmiyaan
Hum dono hai yahaan
Phir kyun hai tu bata faasle
It was raining.
They danced passionately in rain.

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhundein

He carried her in his arms and walked to their room.

Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish purani

He took the rose flowers from the flower vase and took petals from them and threw on the bed.She blushed.

Ho puri tujhi se meri ye kahani
(Na na na.. la la la..)
Shivanya sat on the dressing table.Ritik held her hand and pecked it.She closed her eyes blushing feeling his first kiss

Then pecked her cheek sensually..

Hawaon se tera pata puchta hoon
Ab toh aaja tu kahi se
Parindon ki tarah

He held her hand and led her to the bed.They sat on the bed together.They came closer to feel each other’s attractive lips.

Yeh dil hai safar mein
Tu mila de zindagi se

Shivanya leaned on his back giving him a romantic feel of massage.

Bas itni iltja
Tu aake ik dafa

Slowly Shivanya lay over the flower petals.Ritik came on top of her romantically.

Jo dil ne na kaha
Jaan le..

They shared a passionate eye lock.

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani

He rubbed his nose with hers.

Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhundein

He pulled her more closer to him.

They filled their room with passionate love surrendering to each other.

Yeh milne ki khwaahish
Yeh khwaahish purani
Ho puri tujhi se meri ye kahani

(Half-girlfriend)

After some time they slept lying close to each other.

Raghav thought while travelling to the airport.
RAGHAV:This Bangalore trip was not essential.I just planned this to be away from Naina as I can’t bear her hatred towards me.
Suddenly he thought:No…I need to go back.I can’t be away from Naina.

He rushed to his home.Finally he reached the place.
Naina could feel a cool breeze.
NAINA:Why do I feel that Raghav is here?
Raghav was on the compound.He got drenched in rain.Thinking of the fight with Naina he closed his eyes in pain.
Raghav:Naina may be hating me.But I can’t ignore her.I can’t stay without seeing her.This fight can’t be prolonged anymore.

The determined Raghav opened his eyes.
RAGHAV:Naina…..
He called her loudly.

Sach hai ke dil toh dukha hai, hamne magar socha hai
Dil ko hai gham kyon, aankh hai nam kyon
Hona hee tha jo huwa hai

Naina couldn’t believe her ears:Raghav!It must be my dream.Raghav can’t be here.

Uss bat ko jane bhee do, jiska nishan kal ho naa ho
Har pal yaha je bhar jiyo, jo hai sama kal ho naa ho……….

(Kal ho na ho).

13 comments

  1. Varshini

    Varshini

    |Registered Member

    what a fabulous episode , i was waiting for rivanya confession from long and it finally . naina is misunderstanding that raghav does not want to see her . shivanya who usually does not care about her looks getting dressed for ritik was nice .she saying to ritik , you proved that dim students are foolish.You did’nt understand me yet duffer? was so nice , i felt it was really cute , the next scenes with barish bg was damn romantic . last part wid kal ho na ho bg was beautiful

  2. Riana

    Riana

    |Registered Member

    Rivanya scenes were Romantic n Naughty…❤️❤️❤️💖❤️💖…Naina misunderstanding raghav was a bit sadestic…anywayzz expecting more romantic scenes for raina too…😙😙…Updt soon

  3. Shakaib

    Shakaib

    |Registered Member

    Thanks a lot for dedicating part 8 to me…Its matter of honor for me…O…Wow!!! RehAna are also here….. so glad….Raina-Rivanya-Vihana dance on do dil was very romantic….Rivanya commenting on RehAna When they were dancing was superb…1 month paseed on N Raina morning romance was sizzling Wow….Naina is pregnant…Which Naina could not be ever on show….so good….Everybody is happy…..Yamini jalebis scene was superb—-It shows perfect mother love…Oh..Naina got t know about Rivanya faking their marriage on friendship…..Was very sad…when She bashed out on Raghav for this…. Loved Raghav-Rithik Bromance…..Wow..Rithik started loving Shivanya but couldn’t reach at a decision…Rivanya room romance with o re piya …my goodness…I’m out of words—-…Raina…First lizard scene was fun romance filled.. nThen Naina getting angry was sad scene… Finally Naina also got to know the truth…Rivanya white dress image was so cute..-Naina was now Feeling pain for bashing on Raghav…So cute…. Which I loved the most in that part…. And finally……. Naina above pic was cool….Rithik folding and loosening her hairs was so romantic with that song….ore piya….Wow my cutie Shivanya wants to be looked Beautiful in front of Rithik….And finally they confess their love n…also conssumated….that I loved the most…..n first Raghav said that he’s going bangolore… but Then he didn’t go…and reached home……Which I love so much…..But shivanya’s this image was bit weird…
    http://i.imgur.com/ZZKQ2ca.jpg
    I think its expressionless… bcoz Shivanya was saying dialogue Hilariously….. So its my point I of view…..
    Don’t feel bad…it was must my opinion…overall…..you have done v. good…love every part…Its all parts are loveable…Waiting for next one…….!,,,,!!!!Lots of love…….

    • Jasminerahul

      Jasminerahul

      |Author

      thanks a lot.Did u c my Rehaan Ahana edited pic?how was it?Since there was no Rehaan Ahana scene on PMHMD I had to merge their pics to make their couple picture.
      Actually in that scene Shivanya was not saying that to Ritik in a hilarious manner.She was taunting him painfully,That’s why I put that picture.Did you like the rain edits of Rivanya which I made?

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