KRPKAB: I love u (intro)


Hi guys ayushi here?just thought to write a small Devakshi ff it will be few shots only so here goes the intro and storyline
Do read and comment ?
Dev Dixit:He is in 2nd year of college and is not an Obhodro in my ff?He is the best friend of Sona since childhood ?He is a fun loving boy and is unaware that he loves Sona ?

Sonakshi Bose:she is in the 2nd year of clg with Dev.She is her bff since childhood.She loves her parents a lot,she likes to play pranks especially on Dev ?and she is too unaware that she loves Dev ?

Friends of Dev and Sona

Rohan: he is the friend of devakshi but secretly loves Sona,Dev becomes jealous when he sees him with Sona so he always fights with him ?

Elena:Friend of devakshi and girlfriend of Vicky.In my ff she will help Dev and Sona to relaise their love for each other so u can call her a love hero

Vicky:friend of devakshi and boyfriend if elena,he will also help devakshi to realise their love for each other so he is also a love hero
There will be no role of parents as such?bcoz I hate Pisswari ?
The story will basically revolve around Devakshi who are friends since childhood but love each other and are unaware a lil bit of jealousy track will also come ??and yeah college life masti too

So guys did u like the intro and storyline ?actually I just thought ki agar devakshi college mein hote toh kitna fun hota Na??
So depending upon ur comments I will start it ?so do comment and plzzzz feel free to give any suggestion?
Positive and negative comments both are welcomed
Criticism is most welcomed
Guys do comment ?plzzzz

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Do comment guys plzzzzz bcoz according to that only I will start my ff ?
Bye guys ??

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  1. Nice intro plzz, start the story… ?

    1. Manya

      Thanks princess?

  2. Awesomeee
    Pls continue

  3. Sakthi

    Hai manya..loved to see devakshi in cute college love story..and i like the line ‘i hate piswari’…so excited to read it.

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot Sakthi?And that line is from the core of my ❤️?

  4. Plzzzz jaldi updates bhejo??????

    1. Manya

      Sure Himashi??

  5. Avni14

    Wow!!! I really like reading stories that take place in college, I guess that is why I write one like that too… Thank god someone thinks the same way I do!! But seriously awesome, looking forward to it!!!

    1. Manya

      Thanks Avni and I too like stories which take place in clg??

  6. Hii every1 I’m a silent reader of krpkab ff…!!?and ayushi di ur storyline seems really interesting ..!!
    Waiting forward fr it….
    And one request…..wil u give eng subtitles …if u write in Hindi..?!! Pls…??

    1. Manya

      Thanks for commenting?Ya I will surely give subtitles and plzzz I am just 14 so no dii ?

  7. Dhira

    Hi ayushi
    Wow intro seems quite interesting
    I didn’t like ur intro I loved ur into
    Vicky love hero (?)
    Waiting for your next part
    Waiting for clg masti

    1. Manya

      Thanks dhira??

  8. Aaru

    Nice idea..start it asap..

    1. Manya

      Thanks Aarti Di?

  9. Awesome…


    1. Manya


  10. Yashfeen

    Cul…clg lyf and devakshi together…it vl b damm interesting and even jealously whch is act. d best part…waiting fr frst episode…
    Post soon…

    1. Manya

      Thanks ??

  11. amazing ayushi ..start ASAP …
    luved it …post soon

    1. Manya

      Thankyou ?

  12. Ayushi…it’s nice to hear from u ????☺️☺️??????…….awesome storyline and intro and ??????☺️?????? Lou’s of love……

    1. Manya

      Thanks maleeha ?
      Lots of love to u too❤️???????❣

  13. nice continue

    1. Manya

      Thanks maha?

  14. Priya9876

    Go ahead…..
    Good luck…

    1. Priya9876

      I just wanting to know ki howz sona’s look in ur story,, i mean her dressing sense in all that….
      hope u will mention this in next promo or ur 1st episode…. 🙂

      1. Manya

        Of course Di?

    2. Manya

      Thanks Di?

  15. Erina

    Yeh swt heart (??♥♥♥) sorry for late rply (???) aur what a concept dear??????????? i love to c devakshi ki college so continue soon nd i loved that their is no ishwari at all. So post soon swt heart ???????????????????. I’m exiciteddddddddd nd equally eager to know…..
    With lots of love
    Urs Eri di ???????

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot eri di??❤️

  16. vimal sanjana

    Wow.. Story.. Diff from real one… Nice .. Start it.. But update a long epi .. All the best ayushi…

    1. Manya

      Thankyou ?

  17. Bhoomi

    Nice intro… Keep it up… waiting for 1st episode 🙂

    1. Manya

      Thanks bhoomi??

  18. NagaraniPandiyan

    Hi Manya, ur intro is super,i think it will be interesting and i love hear that there is no ishwari here …. thank you

    Please start ur writings and keep writing my frnd. All the best

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot ??

  19. Esme

    Gud job Ayushi…

  20. Nze intro ?.plz jaldi sa nxt epi Ko post karoo ??????

    1. Manya

      Thanks nikki epi 1is already posted dear?

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