Krpkab (i’ll love u forever) Episode 1

Hi guys, I’m Rithika here,

and since I got time I’m continuing the FF. And the charecter I wrote about Ishwari cz she’s not possesive she loves her child more

Let’s start
Dev a 28 year old man who’s dream of giving his mother luxury has come true and today he’s gifting her a house.
Ishwari : Dev, why have u tied a cloth on my eyes.
Dev : ma, It’s a surprise. Wait just a little longer.
They finally reach a beautiful mansion bought by Dev. It was also near a temple that’s why Dev bought that house.
Ishwari : Where r we?
Dev : this is our new home. And also speacially for you so come inside.
Ishwari : thank u beta i loved it.
Suddenly Ishwari faints

Dev : ma kya hua, Neha, Kichu somebody call the ambulance..
Neha : what happend brother, omg what happend to ma
Dev : I dont know she suddenly fainted..
Neha : wail I’ll call the ambulance
~In the hospital~
Doctor : Dev, your mother’s health is down she needs a proper diet.. And she needs a nutritionist.
Dev : But where do I find a good nutritionist cz I like everything best for my mom.
Doctor : We have a delhi’s number 1 nutritionist. Her name is Doctor Sonakshi Bose

Precap :: Sonakshi’s entry

So this was the first ff. Hope u all like it. Now I’ll post the next episod will be posted maybe next week or on 1st october
so thanks for reading. And sorry for the delay
And post the comments please…..?

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  1. Manya

    Good one Rithika ?Waiting for sona’s entry ?

  2. Sakthi

    Nice start rithika..and excepting next episode long..i also like your title..

  3. Interesting post soon exiciteddddddddd

  4. Dhira

    Nice episode waiting for next one

  5. Rj12

    its not long cz of my exams and the fact i only get 30 min for writing but from 28th sept it will be long

  6. Aaru

    Awesome episode.. waiting for Sona’s entry..

  7. Rhitika…….it’s an awesome start ?❤️??. Short update but update long next time and waiting for sona entry ??

  8. nice episode but it is very short..wating for sona’s entry

  9. Nice

  10. nce start:) exited to the nxtepi:)

  11. RANdomfANCreationz

    Nice start 🙂

  12. Rj12

    thanks guys for all ur beautiful comments:):)

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