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KRPKAB Devakshi ff (episode 9)

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Hello evry1.. Guys, in d previous episode I said dat if I get more than 15 comments, I’ll post a super long episode b4 sunday. But o did not get 15 comments so..sorry.. N I cud not comment on your ffs so now I’ll do dat..
Kuch rang pyar ke aise bhi (ek aur rang) – Nishi dear, it was awesome n I’m curious 2 know wat will happen next. Congratulations 4 completing 50 episodes. Yay half century..
Kya maa manengi??- it was really nice. I’m kinda scared thinking wat will b Ishwari’s reaction if she gets 2 know abt Devakshi’s relationship.
My love- A fan fiction – Dev n sona’s fights r so cute..Dimple, u write really well.
My love story- Amazing episode.. I hope Maria, u end Rahul’s track soon..
Pyar ka rang aur naam- I read d episodes (9 & 10) n d promo as well. Waiting 4 d dhamaka of sona’s identity revelation. Superb SAAGA.
Rang pyaar ka (devna) again- it was really nice..I luv it. But sona’s memory loss..:(
KRPKAB A Step Ahead- u write really well..I read each n evry episode of it.
Pyaar ki kahaani- Phir se miscarriage.. plzz bring some joyful moments in Devakshi’s life.
N now, d newbie ff Dangerous love story by narendran. Narendran, I guess u were d writer of horror story ff too.. Btw your ff is different n nice.
So this is d end of MY comments section..hehe..n d beginning of d episode. But how can I forget..recap
RECAP: Neha, Nikki n Ria r now Dev n Bunty’s partners in crime..hehe..not really crime. Nikki’s plan to know Sona’s expectations from her life partner. Sona’s list of qualities..

Episode 9
Dev’s room
Nikki, Neha, Ria, Bunty n Dev r sitting. All r facing towards Dev wid their hands on their cheeks n a pouty face.
R: bhai, it’s all your fault.
D: wat my fault?? Wat did I do?
Ne: Ria is right bhai..it’s all your fault. Who told u 2 b sooo workaholic!!
Ni: ya. Now how will u impress bhabhi.
B: I always used to tell u dat spend some time wid your frnds n family. But no..work with n work, always..huh!!
D: so wat I shud not work!?
B:( kinda frustrated) no no. U only work.. actually only u work in dis world. V r all velle r8! Huh..
D: are yaar, y r u shouting at me? (he says like a small kid)
B: so shud I congratulate u!!(sarcastically)
Ne: stop it both if u.. bhai, one thing is clear dat u hv 2 change yourself a lot. For bhabhi..
D: but Neha, if some1 loves us, he loves us how v r. If not, then it’s not love.
Ni: bhaiya, all dis is good 4 films only. In real life, u hv 2 change yourself.
R: bhaiya, we’re not telling u 2 transform yourself into some1 you’re not. If some minor changes bring happiness in your life, then there’s nothing wrong in changing yourself.
B: ya, we’re not telling u 2 bcm Asur Dixit instead of Dev Dixit. We’re telling u 2 change from workaholic Dev Dixit to family man Dev Dixit.
Dev reluctantly agrees.
Evening
Sona was leaving 4 her house when Dev offers 2 drop her home. Sona agrees. Both sit in d car n go. On d way, Dev asks Sona
D: Miss Bose, if someone loves u but he wants u 2 change yourself 4 him, is it r8?
S: y r u asking dis Mr Dixit?
D: wo..umm..Bunty..ha Bunty’s girlfriend wants him to change himself 4 her. So Bunty was asking dis. Is changing yourself 4 d 1 who loves u, right??
S: no..if some1 loves u wid d condition dat u’ll change yourself according to his/her wish, then I’m sorry but he/she doesn’t love u. If some1 loves u , he’ll love u unconditionally 4 wat u r n not 4 wat he/she wants u 2 b.
D: I too think d same. If some1 wants u 2 change 4 him, then he’s not worth changing 4.
S: oh my house came..Ty Mr Dixit..bye n gn.
D: gn Miss Bose.
Dev reaches back Dixit house n heads towards his room. As soon as he enters his room evry1 asks him wid curiosity.
Ni: wat happened bhaiya??
Ne: did u talk to her??
Ri: wat did she say??
B: did u propose her??
All together: say something. Y r u quiet??
D: let me speak will u??(funny tune plays)
Ni: accha bhaiya tell me..(Dev gives her an angry glare n she zips her mouth)
D: even Miss Bose believes dat we shud not change ourselves 4 any1.
B: ok so plan ‘Dev ka transformation’ cancel..
D: but, I don’t hv d qualities she wants in her life partner. I can’t change myself 4 her. So wat 2 do??
R: PLAN-C.
All together: PLAN-C ??
R: yes..listen..(she tells them d plan, which is ofcourse muted. How can I reveal it now!! Suspense nhi to story nhi)
R: so ready??
All: READY!
Day 3
Ria’s room
R: so let’s start. This time it’s all up to u bhaiya.
D: but Ria, I really don’t think dat it will work. I mean how can we assume dat she loves me, jst if she turns to see me. N if she’s in a hurry n she does not turn then it means she does not love me!?
Ni: bhaiya plzz think positively. N Ria di, how come I did not get dis idea?!
B: ya how come dis Bollywood gossip queen did not get dis idea.
All giggle. Dev sees sonakshi entering d house n goes down n says dat he’s going 2 office n bids her goodbye. Sona too says goodbye. Sona heads towards kitchen n Dev stands at d door n waits 4 Sona 2 turn.
D: plzz miss Bose turn..plzz turn back.
Sona reaches neat dining table.
D: palat (turn)..palat (turn) (imagine Dev saying palat n full SRK style..how cute)
Sona reaches near kitchen.
D: palat (turn)..palat (turn)
Sona enters d kitchen.
D: (sad n disheartened) nhi palti..
He leaves 4 office wid a sad face. Neha, Ria, Nikki n Bunty were seeing all dis from Ria’s room (hiding behind d door). They too r sad dat Sona did not turn. Screen freezes on their sad faces.

PRECAP: New day new trick. Probably last one.

Guys plzz comment n hope u read d beginning section. I hv commented on your ffs in dat. Plzz read it if u hv not yet read.

Credit to: Aarti

15 Comments
  1. Simplesweety1

    Thank U … For The Review For Kya Ma Manengi …… A Devakshi FF 🙂 … If U Haven’t Read The 9th Ep Plz Do Read And This Epi Was Awesome 🙂

  2. The episode was just WOW and just WOW

  3. you are the best ?
    Plz post the next part soon…
    eagerly waiting…….

  4. Ohhhh poor dev ???
    But very well written

  5. Wow…nice one.waiting for next

  6. Oohhhhh so cute episode
    Poor dev ?
    Pls update next soon

  7. Hahaha…..funny epi

  8. can some one tell me whether Sonakashi is a Nutritionist doctor, or a full time servant or a cook

  9. Asmita...

    Full of fun…. i have a broad smile while reading & imagining it and surprisingly thinking how Dev is will look if he will do all this………i like that all were pulling Dev’s leg……… I must say awesome one……

  10. Shalini Naicker

    It was awesome loved it. Waiting for Plan D. Keep writing.

  11. Angel20

    Thanks Aarti,
    And this episode was superb actually funny??

  12. Too good episode… Loved dev’s palat palat trick 🙂 nice precap post soon

  13. Dimple

    Nice epi aarti…nd happy that u liked my story

  14. Sree_deeksha

    Awsome one Arthi

  15. Awwww the palat palat palat part was so adorbs!!!

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