KRPKAB: Bangles (OS)

A beautiful garden is seen where a girl is sitting quite upset lost in her thoughts. She was thinking why did mom and dad go? God you stole them from me! A flashback starts,
A happy family of Sona, her mom, dad and brother Saurav were travelling in a car going for a picnic. They were enjoying themselves, chit chatting having a merry time! But suddenly a truck came in front of the car! And bejoy realised that the breaks had failed! He tried to stop the car but couldn’t! Unfortunately they crashed! In a minute everything was destroyed! Their happy faces couldn’t stay for a long time!

Some time later Sona wakes up and finds herself on the road and her family all lying dead! She cried her heart out!
‘Mom please wake up, dad are you listening to me? Please wake up!! Bhaiyya you know na you cant fool me, wake up! Maa Baba… you will not listen to me? Your Sona.. dada wake up!’

All of them were drenched with blood! Few days later all the rituals had been done and she started living with her aunt! Who had made her life he… Hell!!

A voice comes from back ‘ Sonakshi where are you? Go and get me vegetables from the market!
Sona: but masi I’m not feeling well, my legs are paining!
Aunt: teri itni himmat ki tu mujhe mana kare! (You have so much guts that you are saying no to me!) Abhi dikhati hu! (Now I will show you!)

She takes the stick from the balcony and was about to hit her legs when…
Sona: No aunty please I’m sorry I will go!
But she was already irritated and beat her with the stick.
Sona: aahhh!! Masi I am sorry..
She runs away from there crying…
Sona in her mind: I hate her, she is a torturer I just hate her! Mom why did you leave me? And she cries continuously when she reaches the market and clashes with someone!

He holds her in his arms! And looks at her face and gets lost in her face, he tucks her strand of hair behind her ears so that he could see her perfectly! Her eyes closed because of fear, face wet with tears and rosy lips which were not allowed to be open except for eating the leftovers and talking to her aunt! The man gently wipes her tears and Sona opens her eyes and feels warm in his arms… She looks at the plastic bag containing bangles in his hands and remembers how Asha used to purchase bangles for her and she loved to wear it! But suddenly she realises that this was not good! She stands up and runs away from there!
The boy is none other than Dev
Dev(in his mind): Maa in chudiyo ko pehenne vali mil gayi! (Mom the girl to wear these bangles is found by me!)
He tries to follow her, he finds her buying vegetables, he goes behind her and taps her shoulder!
Sona turns back and is stunned to see him! She takes the vegetables and goes back! But he holds her hand and asks
‘Are you dumb?’
Sona nods in no and again runs back!
Dev thinks: what is it? Why did she run away?
He goes back to his house and greets his mom.
Ishwari: so did you bring the bangles?
Dev: yes mom! (thinks and the girl also)
Ishwari: these bangles will be perfect for my bahu! (daughter in law)
Dev goes to his room and freshens up! The whole while he thinks about her! He decides to go and meet her again!

Here Sona is also thinking about Dev! She goes to the kitchen and cooks food for her aunt and uncle. After some time the aunt comes again with the stick
Aunt: Who was that boy uh? Tera uske sath chakkar chal raha hai? (is there any relation between you two?)

Sona sobbingly says no!
Aunt: Dare you open your mouth in front of anyone and complain about us! The circumstances will not be good!
She runs away sobbingly on the road and unaware of her surroundings, one truck was about to hit her! When someone pulls her to himself! They both fall down and roll over each other! Dev on top of Sona! He again sees her with lots of love! Love at second sight indeed! Actually love at every sight!
Sona said get off me!
Dev: no I will never leave you!
Sona: what?? Are you mad!!!
Dev: yes I’m mad in your love!
Sona is stunned by her words…

Unchue the sapne mere
Tune chu liye
ChupKe chupke dil mainaya
Tu jaadu liye

Teri hogayi hu
Tujhko pata bhi to ho..
Mere pyaar me
Teri raza bhi to ho…

Pehli dafa hai
Ki mujhme tu chalka hai
Tere rango mai kuch dhang hai..
Mere jaise bhi
Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi (x2)

Dev makes her stand properly
Dev: I love you!
Sona: R u mad?
Dev: yes mad in ur love!
Sona: u don’t even know my name!
Dev: so what? One does not love after knowing the name!
Sona has tears in her eyes and she tries to run away! But a strong force pulls her back and her head lands on Dev’s chest! She feels as if it was heaven! And she did not want to separate from him! Now and for forever! But she is reminded of her aunt and she contains herself and again tries to run! When Dev notices bruises on her neck!

Dev: what are these marks, and he again holds her hand tightly not to leave them this time!
Sona: Nothing!
Dev: you cant hide anything from me!
Sona: you are no one to me!
Dev: I know you also love me!
Sona: No not at all!
Dev: then look into my eyes and say that!
Sona looks down!
Dev holds her shoulders
Dev: tell me! Don’t you love me?!
Sona: she nods saying yes!
Dev has a broad smile on his face!
He hugs her tightly! Sona hugs him back!

A voice is heard Sonakshi!!!!!!!! Her aunt was standing there red in anger!
Sona breaks the hug and is very tensed! The aunts pulls her and takes her towards her house!
Sona: please leave me! Please!!
She turns behind to see Dev painfully standing there! He goes behind her and takes her hand from her aunt!
Aunt: who are you? Get away!
Dev: I love her, she loves me and I am taking her with me!
Aunt: Shut up and get lost! She grabs her hand from him!
Sona: please leave me aunty!
Dev grabs sona’s hands tightly!
He understands everything, the bruises on Sona’s neck! He immediately calls the police!
Aunt: what r u doing? It will highly cost you!
Leaving Sona she runs away from there! Sona hugs dev tightly and says I love you… please don’t leave me like my parents and brother! This aunt has troubled me a lot!
But… she runs away to her house following her aunt!
Dev: Sona….
The police arrives, Dev takes them to Sona’s house following her! The police arrests Sona’s aunt and uncle.
Policeman: Mr.Dev you have to come with me for doing all the legal formalities.
Sona: No Dev! Please send the police back! Whatever they are, they are my aunt and uncle and have all rights on me! They have kept me with them all these years when my mom dad were not there! I don’t want to file any complain against them!
Dev: but Sona…

Hearing this the aunt has tears in her eyes. She realises her mistake and says I am sorry beta for hurting you all these years.. please forgive me!
Sona: its ok you have the rights, no need of sorry!
The aunts hugs Sona tightly. Her uncle also realises his mistake and asks forgiveness from her!
Sona sends back the police
‘Sorry for disturbing you!’
The aunt and uncle bless Sona and Dev!
Dev takes Sona to his house! He introduces her to Ishwari and the whole family. Sona takes her blessings and Ishwari hugs her! Neha, Nikki, Riya chit chat with her!
Later Dev brings Sona to his room! He shows her the bangles and says
‘remember these bangles? I had come to that market just to buy these bangles but there my life changed and I met you, love you! Maa had told that she wanted these bangles for her bahu and today I am making you wear these bangles’

He makes her wear the bangles! She hugs him tightly!
‘I love you a lot Dev! I thank these bangles very much for bringing you in my life!’

The story ends…

So guys this was the os! I hope you all liked it! I am sorry if I didn’t rise upto your expectations! Please forgive me! And thank you so much for reading! Do drop your comments if you all liked it! Criticisms also welcomed! 🙂

Maria

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A beautiful garden is seen where a girl is sitting quite upset lost in her thoughts. She was thinking why did mom and dad go? God you stole them from me! A flashback starts,
A happy family of Sona, her mom, dad and brother Saurav were travelling in a car going for a picnic. They were enjoying themselves, chit chatting having a merry time! But suddenly a truck came in front of the car! And bejoy realised that the breaks had failed! He tried to stop the car but couldn’t! Unfortunately they crashed! In a minute everything was destroyed! Their happy faces couldn’t stay for a long time!

Some time later Sona wakes up and finds herself on the road and her family all lying dead! She cried her heart out!
‘Mom please wake up, dad are you listening to me? Please wake up!! Bhaiyya you know na you cant fool me, wake up! Maa Baba… you will not listen to me? Your Sona.. dada wake up!’

All of them were drenched with blood! Few days later all the rituals had been done and she started living with her aunt! Who had made her life he… Hell!!

A voice comes from back ‘ Sonakshi where are you? Go and get me vegetables from the market!
Sona: but masi I’m not feeling well, my legs are paining!
Aunt: teri itni himmat ki tu mujhe mana kare! (You have so much guts that you are saying no to me!) Abhi dikhati hu! (Now I will show you!)

She takes the stick from the balcony and was about to hit her legs when…
Sona: No aunty please I’m sorry I will go!
But she was already irritated and beat her with the stick.
Sona: aahhh!! Masi I am sorry..
She runs away from there crying…
Sona in her mind: I hate her, she is a torturer I just hate her! Mom why did you leave me? And she cries continuously when she reaches the market and clashes with someone!

He holds her in his arms! And looks at her face and gets lost in her face, he tucks her strand of hair behind her ears so that he could see her perfectly! Her eyes closed because of fear, face wet with tears and rosy lips which were not allowed to be open except for eating the leftovers and talking to her aunt! The man gently wipes her tears and Sona opens her eyes and feels warm in his arms… She looks at the plastic bag containing bangles in his hands and remembers how Asha used to purchase bangles for her and she loved to wear it! But suddenly she realises that this was not good! She stands up and runs away from there!
The boy is none other than Dev
Dev(in his mind): Maa in chudiyo ko pehenne vali mil gayi! (Mom the girl to wear these bangles is found by me!)
He tries to follow her, he finds her buying vegetables, he goes behind her and taps her shoulder!
Sona turns back and is stunned to see him! She takes the vegetables and goes back! But he holds her hand and asks
‘Are you dumb?’
Sona nods in no and again runs back!
Dev thinks: what is it? Why did she run away?
He goes back to his house and greets his mom.
Ishwari: so did you bring the bangles?
Dev: yes mom! (thinks and the girl also)
Ishwari: these bangles will be perfect for my bahu! (daughter in law)
Dev goes to his room and freshens up! The whole while he thinks about her! He decides to go and meet her again!

Here Sona is also thinking about Dev! She goes to the kitchen and cooks food for her aunt and uncle. After some time the aunt comes again with the stick
Aunt: Who was that boy uh? Tera uske sath chakkar chal raha hai? (is there any relation between you two?)

Sona sobbingly says no!
Aunt: Dare you open your mouth in front of anyone and complain about us! The circumstances will not be good!
She runs away sobbingly on the road and unaware of her surroundings, one truck was about to hit her! When someone pulls her to himself! They both fall down and roll over each other! Dev on top of Sona! He again sees her with lots of love! Love at second sight indeed! Actually love at every sight!
Sona said get off me!
Dev: no I will never leave you!
Sona: what?? Are you mad!!!
Dev: yes I’m mad in your love!
Sona is stunned by her words…

Unchue the sapne mere
Tune chu liye
ChupKe chupke dil mainaya
Tu jaadu liye

Teri hogayi hu
Tujhko pata bhi to ho..
Mere pyaar me
Teri raza bhi to ho…

Pehli dafa hai
Ki mujhme tu chalka hai
Tere rango mai kuch dhang hai..
Mere jaise bhi
Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi (x2)

Dev makes her stand properly
Dev: I love you!
Sona: R u mad?
Dev: yes mad in ur love!
Sona: u don’t even know my name!
Dev: so what? One does not love after knowing the name!
Sona has tears in her eyes and she tries to run away! But a strong force pulls her back and her head lands on Dev’s chest! She feels as if it was heaven! And she did not want to separate from him! Now and for forever! But she is reminded of her aunt and she contains herself and again tries to run! When Dev notices bruises on her neck!

Dev: what are these marks, and he again holds her hand tightly not to leave them this time!
Sona: Nothing!
Dev: you cant hide anything from me!
Sona: you are no one to me!
Dev: I know you also love me!
Sona: No not at all!
Dev: then look into my eyes and say that!
Sona looks down!
Dev holds her shoulders
Dev: tell me! Don’t you love me?!
Sona: she nods saying yes!
Dev has a broad smile on his face!
He hugs her tightly! Sona hugs him back!

A voice is heard Sonakshi!!!!!!!! Her aunt was standing there red in anger!
Sona breaks the hug and is very tensed! The aunts pulls her and takes her towards her house!
Sona: please leave me! Please!!
She turns behind to see Dev painfully standing there! He goes behind her and takes her hand from her aunt!
Aunt: who are you? Get away!
Dev: I love her, she loves me and I am taking her with me!
Aunt: Shut up and get lost! She grabs her hand from him!
Sona: please leave me aunty!
Dev grabs sona’s hands tightly!
He understands everything, the bruises on Sona’s neck! He immediately calls the police!
Aunt: what r u doing? It will highly cost you!
Leaving Sona she runs away from there! Sona hugs dev tightly and says I love you… please don’t leave me like my parents and brother! This aunt has troubled me a lot!
But… she runs away to her house following her aunt!
Dev: Sona….
The police arrives, Dev takes them to Sona’s house following her! The police arrests Sona’s aunt and uncle.
Policeman: Mr.Dev you have to come with me for doing all the legal formalities.
Sona: No Dev! Please send the police back! Whatever they are, they are my aunt and uncle and have all rights on me! They have kept me with them all these years when my mom dad were not there! I don’t want to file any complain against them!
Dev: but Sona…

Hearing this the aunt has tears in her eyes. She realises her mistake and says I am sorry beta for hurting you all these years.. please forgive me!
Sona: its ok you have the rights, no need of sorry!
The aunts hugs Sona tightly. Her uncle also realises his mistake and asks forgiveness from her!
Sona sends back the police
‘Sorry for disturbing you!’
The aunt and uncle bless Sona and Dev!
Dev takes Sona to his house! He introduces her to Ishwari and the whole family. Sona takes her blessings and Ishwari hugs her! Neha, Nikki, Riya chit chat with her!
Later Dev brings Sona to his room! He shows her the bangles and says
‘remember these bangles? I had come to that market just to buy these bangles but there my life changed and I met you, love you! Maa had told that she wanted these bangles for her bahu and today I am making you wear these bangles’

He makes her wear the bangles! She hugs him tightly!
‘I love you a lot Dev! I thank these bangles very much for bringing you in my life!’

The story ends…

So guys this was the os! I hope you all liked it! I am sorry if I didn’t rise upto your expectations! Please forgive me! And thank you so much for reading! Do drop your comments if you all liked it! Criticisms also welcomed! 🙂

Maria

35 comments

  1. Sharica

    |Registered Member

    Beautiful. Just beautiful. Sooooooooooooo sweet. So cute. I whish could have made it more long. But any ways it is so much beautiful 😊😍😙😙😙😙😙😘😚😚😚😚😊

  2. Erina

    Bulk buster OS. I truely enjoyed and loved d way u Written the OS. I wish ki thora long hota but its amazing. I love d way dev care and realise his feeling toward sona nd also thank god ishwari +ve thi 😂😄

  3. Maria

    |Author

    I guess you all didn’t like the OS.. Because many had commented on the promo but very few now! I am sorry to all those whom I bored with this os🙏🙏

      • Maria

        |Author

        No sharica only 9 comments!😭😖 in the promo there were many more! And I’m really very upset! I was thinking to start ff on Devakshi but now I don’t think I will! I’m really very disappointed😥😥

      • Maria

        |Author

        And I was really very happy when promo got such good response! But now I’m really very disappointed! I will never write on Devakshi now! Coz no one supports here.. Sorry if u felt bad! But more than you I’m feeling bad!

      • Sharica

        |Registered Member

        Do u know what positivity attracts positivity. And don’t loose hope.
        And do u read ff’of Esme Luna Greenwood. If u haven’t do read it FROM THE FIRST and check out her comments now and then. And then think for one more time☺ waiting eagerly for the promo of ur ff for DEVAKSHI 😊

  4. Maria

    |Author

    I guess you all didn’t like the OS.. Because many had commented on the promo but very few now! I am sorry to all those whom I bored with this os🙏🙏🙏

  5. Varsha94

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria.. It was gr8… I had smiles on my faces whenever Dev thinks of her and shows his rights towards her.. Jus love it…❤ … It was a gr8 one shot…👍

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