Kriyyam SS- Ok Jaanu!! (Prologue)

Hey everyone!! I wanted to write something on Kriyyam since loooong..But couldn’t write due to my exams..But now, as I’m having a leisure time, I’m gonna type my ideas..Here I go wid my first SS on Kriyyam..Here’s d prologue….

Ok Jaanu!!

A boy n a gurl were sitting on a bench in a garden. The boy took d gurl’s hand in his. His fingers were caressing her knuckles. D gurl was looking at him wid her doe eyes.
Boy: I think it’s high time now.. Mujhe to yahi decision sahi lagta h..Main tumhara decision jaanna chahta hu..(I think dis decision is right..I want to know your decision..)
Gurl: r u sure?? I mean, agar hum ye sab handle nhi kr paye to..(I mean, wat if we couldn’t handle all dis..)
Boy: don’t worry..
Gurl: no..Sirf kehne see nhi hota..Apne careers bhi to handle krne honge..Decision lene se pehle humein do baar sochna chahiye..Ye bohot bad decision h..Isse hamari lives change ho sakti h..Be practical..( we shud think twice before taking d decision..Coz it’s a very big decision..It can change our lives..)
Boy: u trust me??
D gurl nods in yes. Boy smiles.
Boy: to hum sab handle kr lenge..(then we’ll handle everything..)
Gurl: sath mein..(together)
D boy smiles wider. He gets up. D gurl too gets up.
Boy: so let’s start from today..Ok jaanu??
Gurl: ok jaanu!! [Smiles wide]
They leave from there hand in hand.

So how was it?? I know it was filmy, so is d title n so m I!! But it’s not gonna be like d movie..I haven’t even seen d movie till now..So r u looking forward to it..N I’m not a regular person, but will try to post twice a week..So plzz be patient!!

17 comments

  1. Khushi1707

    Khushi1707

    |Registered Member

    Hey dii.. according to my browser, I”m the first one commenting.. id thats true then I’m vry vry vry happy…it was great..I was eagerly waiting for it..when I saw ‘SS’ I was sure it was u and just scrolled down to check.. update ASAP

    • Aarti32

      Aarti32

      |Author

      Thanx khushi..Yeah, darlo u’re d first one..Haha..Glad day someone waited for my post..Even before it started..
      I’ll try to edit d pic if I get time..N I’ll definitely change d pic..When I was submitting d prologue, I fell short of Kriyyam pics, so I had to give dis pic..

  2. Aarti32

    Aarti32

    |Author

    Guys, if anyone can make a nice pic for my SS, wid d title ‘Ok Jaanu’ in it..Plzz post it on my wall..I’ll be grateful to u🙏🙏

  3. AFANFICWRITER

    AFANFICWRITER

    |Registered Member

    Hey dear arti! You never fail to post a lovely comment on my posts to brighten up my day and i couldnt help but return the love… i must say di, i didnt think this was overly filmy at all…. it was so so so cute and sweet and romantic and i just cant wait for the next part! So excited di! Please stay happy and blessed and post soon, Shreya xx

    • Aarti32

      Aarti32

      |Author

      Aww.. Lovely comment..Thank u so much Shreya 😚😚
      Di?? Wats your age??I’m 18..
      If dis wasn’t filmy..Then d episodes can surely be filmy..I’ll post d first episode surely dis week..

      • AFANFICWRITER

        AFANFICWRITER

        |Registered Member

        Im only 15, i wasnt sure if you were di or not but i presume that almost everyone is probably older than me. Sorry if you felt bad… thank you… no i was saying it wasnt overly filmy like you were apologising for, its perfectly filmy 😊

  4. AnahitaAnnie

    AnahitaAnnie

    |Registered Member

    Wooooow. It was sooo good. EspeciallyDialogues were amazing. I was waiting for this ff so eagerly. I knew that would be a fantastic work and it is…. It is great .. Can’t wait for the chapters…😍😘❤

    • Aarti32

      Aarti32

      |Author

      Thank Rockstar..It may take few days to post d first episode as I’m getting less comments..But I’ll post dis week

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