Kriyyam OS – Meri Hi Galti Thi (Valentine’s Day Special)

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Hey guys!! Most of us had thought dat dadi’s memory loss track wud be beneficial to Kriyyam, but..I guess we’re not dat lucky..So I’m writing an OS on wat we all wanted.. Jealous Saiyyam without love triangle..D story starts from d day of Suhani coming to d hall in her Amma Mai avatar. But I’m warning u, there r many things which can be funny or illogical. So plzz, forgive me. So, d twist arises when….

After Amma Mai went to her room, Dadi saw Krishna standing wid Saiyyam n Yuvaan standing at her either side. She goes to Krishna n says, Amma Mai k saamne sir pe pallu rakha kro..She turns towards Yuvaan n says, tumhari patni ko itta bhi nhi pata.. Saiyyam, Krishna, Yuvaan n Baby look at Dadi wid shocked faces. She looks at Saiyyam n says, tumhari patni ko to kya kahein, wo to saree hi nhi pehenti. (Here, Dadi doesn’t think of Baby as maid, but as Saiyyam’s wife.) Dadi says, ab sab apne kamre mein jao..Kriyyam look at each other n so do yuvaaby..Then they move in opposite directions..Krishna n Yuvaan towards Yuvaan’s room n Saiyyam n Baby towards Saiyyam’s room.

Baby comes to Yuvaan’s room n yells, Badi Dadi ko ho kya gya h!! Wo Krishna ko tumhari wife kaise samajh sakti h!! Aur tum Krishna, mere pati ke pass ane ki koshish bhi mat krna. Krishna is angry now. She says, dekho Baby, mujhe Yuvaan ki wife banne ka koi shaukh nhi h. It’s just dat Badi Dadi ko aisa lagta h aur hum unhe stress nhi de sakte. Air behtar ye hoga ki tum mere pati se door rho. Krishna leaves d room. Yuvaan is surprised at wat Krishna jst said. She goes to d lawn n sits there. She thinks, Badi Dadi ne ye kya kr diya!! Baby Saiyyam ki wife aur main Yuvaan ki!! Lekin main kyu itta soch rhi hu. Sirf natak hi to krna h, wo bhi sirf Badi Dadi k saamne. Lekin maine baby se aisa kyu kaha ki wo Saiyyam se door rhe.

Mujhe kyu itta farak padta h. Kya main jealous ho rhi hu?? Nhi nhi..Main kyu jealous hone lagi.. suddenly she hears someone saying, Tum jealous ho rhi ho na. She turned back n saw Yuvaan. She stood n Yuvaan said, Krishna, tum jealous ho na ki Badi Dadi ke saamne Saiyyam aur Baby ko couple ki tarah behave krna hoga. Krishna looked away n said nhi, main kyu jealous hongi, mere aur Saiyyam ke beech aisa kuch h hi nhi ki main Saiyyam ko lekar kisi se jalu. Yuvaan said, Krishna, tumhari shaadi hui h Saiyyam se, tum biwi ho uski, tumhe poora haq k jealous hone ka, kya galat h ismein! Tum usse nafrat krti thi kyuki pehle wo sabko galat lagta tha, lekin ab jab hum jante h ki wo ye sab galatfahmi k wajah se kr rha tha, to hum sabki soch badal rhi h use lekar. Tum to dosti krne ki bhi koshish kr rhi ho.

Krishna says vry innocently, lekin wo to nhi krna chahta na. She had a cute puppy face. Yuvaan said, tum koshish kro, ek din wo bhi zarur manega, dekhna. Krishna asked, sachi? Yuvaan smiled n nodded in yes. Krishna smiled back at him n said thank u Yuvaan. Saiyyam was watching them from d balcony of his room. (Does his room hv a balcony?? Lol) his jealousy n anger resulted in him banging his fist tightly on d railing. Yuvaani came there wid a mug of coffee for him, but he left angrily. Yuvaani was first confused by his behavior, but when she saw Krishna talking to Yuvaan, she smiled saying, to mera chhota bhai jealous h..Nice!!

All r having dinner, when Baby comes n sits near Yuvaan. Krishna n Saiyyam r already sitting side by side. Dadi comes n sees dis. She says, Krishna, Baby, tum dono apne-apne patiyon ke pass baitho na. Suhani looks at Dadi wid a shocked face n then looks at d 2 exchanged couples. Yuvaan makes a pouty face n signs yes. Krishna n Baby exchange seats. Now Krishna is sitting opposite to Saiyyam n Baby is sitting opposite to Yuvaan. Neither Krishna nor Saiyyam is interested in eating.

Next day, Saiyyam came to d hall n asked Krishna to make him a coffee. Krishna was moving towards d kitchen, when Dadi came. She saw Baby passing through d corridor n said, Saiyyam k liye coffee uski patni bana degi, tum hamare sath chalo Krishna. Baby said, par Badi Dadi..Dadi cut her off n said, kabhi to bi a par-war kiye kaam k liye haan kr diya kro. Baby made a face while Dadi took Krishna wid her. Baby was moving towards d kitchen when Saiyyam said, rehne do, mujhe coffee nhi peeni. He left from there.

For few days, everything continued like dis n Krishna n Saiyyam, both were jst burning in jealousy. Seeing dis, Yuvaan n Yuvaani had understood dat they’re falling for each other. They decided to make them more jealous n they did so. Krishna n Saiyyam were really annoyed seeing d other wid Yuvaan n Baby respectively. One day, Baby slipped due to water on d floor. She shouted, ye paani kisne giraya h yahape?? All gathered there. Krishna came n said, I’m sorry, wo mere hathon se galti se paani gir gya. Main mop lekar aa hi rhi thi ki tum.. before she could complete, Baby yelled, tumse koi kaam sahi se hota bhi h ya nhi. Jab dekho koi na koi gadbad krti hi ho. Dadi said, ab behes band kro aur Saiyyam, tum Baby ko kamre mein le jao. Saiyyam nodded, unwillingly n tried to make Baby stand up. But she couldn’t stand up, so Dadi asked him to lift her n take to d room. He looked at Krishna n she frowned n signalled him a NO. But Dadi forced him n he had to lift Baby. He took her to d room n signalled Yuvaani to come wid them. Yuvaani followed. Dadi asked Krishna to prepare her ever so famous haldi doodh for Baby.

Here, in d room Saiyyam was scolding Baby for shouting on Krishna. He said, tum dekhke nhi chal sakti. Paani gira hua dikha nhi tumhe, andhi ho kya. Giri to giri, tumse khud utha bhi nhi gya. Pata h tumhe uthane mein kitni mehnat lagi mujhe. Baby shouted, oh plzz Saiyyam. Tum behave to aise kr rhe ho jaise ki kitni hi fikar ho tumhe us Krishna ki. Kahin pyaar vyaar to nhi ho gya us dumb ladki se. Yuvaani was abt to lash Baby but stopped seeing Saiyyam boiling in anger as she wanted to know Saiyyam’s answer. Saiyyam was quiet for sometime n then he stormed out of d room saying, Yuvaani, isse kehna mere saamne chup rha kre. Baby frowned while Yuvaani gave her a disgusted look.

Saiyyam was sitting in his room thinking abt watever Baby said. He was talking to himself, kya mujhe sach mein Krishna ki itni fikar h. Lekin mujhe uski itni fikar kyu h? Hamari shaadi mein to shaadi jaisa kuch h hi nhi. Pati patni chhodo, hum to ab tak thik se dost bhi nhi bane. Phir mujhe usse pyaar kaise ho sakta h!! Ek minute..maine pyaar hi kyu kaha..Kya main Krishna se pyaar krta hu??..Haan mere Bhai, he heard a voice from behind.

It was late night. Dadi had asked Krishna to sleep in Baby’s room n take care if Baby needs anything at night. Krishna had come out of d room to fill d water jug. While she was coming back, she saw Saiyyam entering the room. She said, itni raat ko Saiyyam yahan kya kr rha h? She moved towards d room n she stopped at d door when she saw SAIYYAM HUGGING BABY. Krishna was taken aback by d view. Tears were gushing down her cheeks. She drooped d jug n jst ran away from there. She come to d garden n cried while sitting on d bench, digging her face between knees. Yuvaan came there. He said, Krishna, tum to kyu rhi ho? Krishna wiped her tears n said, kuch nhi..Yuvaan said, ab agar tumne nhi bataya to mujhe lagega ki tum mujhe an apna dost nhi maanti. Krishna again cried n said everything to Yuvaan. Krishna was crying again. Yuvaan, after a pause, asked, lekin tum kyu ro rhi ho? Krishna looked at him n said, Kya matlab main kyu ro rhi hu? Aisi situation mein kya mujhe hasna chahiye!! Yuvaan says, Arey hasna rona kuch bhi kyu? Tumhe isse kya?

Saiyyam Baby se mila to mila..Dono dost h bachpan se. Baby Saiyyam ki ex-girlfriend h. Krishna cut him off n said, par biwi to main hoon na..Aise kaise Baby se mil sakta h wo! Yuvaan said, kyu nhi mil sakta! Wo kisi se bhi mile, tumhe usse kya..Tum to usse pyaar krti nhi.. Krishna said, aisa nhi h..Yuvaan said, kaisa nhi h Krishna..Tum uspe haq kyu jata rhi ho, jab usse pyaar hi nhi krti.. Krishna finally blurted out, karti hoon pyaar..Pyaar krti hoon usse.. Yuvaan smiled n said, yahi to main tumhe samjhana chahta tha. Krishna looked up at him said, to tumhe pehle se pata tha..Par kaise!! Mujhe khud ko bhi nhi pata tha.. Yuvaan said, kyuki tum meri dost ho aur tumhari feelings ka pata tumhare behaviour se chalta h. Krishna smiled at her realisation n thanked Yuvaan wid a cheerful smile.

Saiyyam was watching them from his room’s window n was burning in jealousy. He went in his room n was continuously thinking abt Yuvaan n Krishna. He says to himself, ye aadhi raat ko Yuvaan se kya baatein kr rhi h?? Aur ye Yuvaan to Baby se milne gya tha na, ab garden mein Krishna ke sath kya kr rha h?? Lekin in dono ko sath dekh k pata nhi mujhe bura kyu lagta h!! He heard someone say, kyuki tumhe pyaar ho gya h.. Saiyyam said, aisa kuch nhi h Yuvaani..Yuvaani asked, agar aisa nhi h to tum itna jal kyu rhe ho usse Yuvaan ke sath dekh k?? Saiyyam retorted, oh plzz..Main kisi se jalta nhi hu.. Yuvaani says, oh..To Tum Krishna ki khud se zyada care krte ho, lekin usse pyaar nhi krte..Wo na banaye, to coffee nhi peete, lekin usse pyaar nhi krte..Use Yuvaan ke sath dekh k jealous hote ho, lekin usse pyaar nhi krte..Wow Saiyyam, u’re great!! Hum jaise log to ise pyaar hi kehte h..Lekin tum to sabse alag ho..Tumhare pata nhi pyaar kya hota h!! Yuvaani storms out of d room leaving Saiyyam in thoughts. Saiyyam thinks, Yuvaani kuch bhi bolti rehti h. Main.. Krishna se pyaar..Aisa kaise ho sakta h..Lekin, mujhe Krishna ko Yuvaan ke sath dekh k itna bura kyu laga..Itna gussa itni jealousy, ye sab to sirf pyaar mein hota h..To kya main.. Krishna se.. pyaar krta hu?? He remembers all d moments he spent wid Krishna. A smile appears on his face. He thinks, Saiyyam, aisi million dollar smile kis baat pe..Tujhe to sach mein pyaar ho gya!! Krishna se..Lekin kya wo bhi tujhse pyaar kregi?? Both Saiyyam n Krishna r happy after realizing dat they’re in love, but r worried abt d other one’s feelings.

Next day
During breakfast, Krishna n Baby were again made to sit next to Yuvaan n Saiyyam respectively. Seeing them Krishna remembered Saiyyam hugging Baby n she was angry again. Saiyyam also remembered seeing Yuvaan n Krishna talking in d garden. He left d breakfast table.

After sometime, Krishna went to her room n saw Saiyyam working on his laptop. She opened d cupboard to keep her clothes in it. Saiyyam said, looking at his laptop, Mujhe ek coffee banake la dogi? Krishna was abt to go but stopped n said, apni biwi se kaho na..Baby se keh do, wo bana degi.. Saiyyam looked up at her n said, main jhagde ke mood mein nhi hu. Krishna said sarcastically, Haan jhagde ke mood mein to hamesha main hoti hu..Tum to hamesha gale lagne ke mood mein hote ho..Saiyyam got up from d bed n said, maine kise gale lagaya..Tumhe coffee nhi banani to mana kardo..Faltu ka jhagda mat karo..Mujhe bohot kaam h..Krishna said, Haan haan main to faltu hi hoon..Kaam to sirf tumhe hi h na.. Baby se, right!! Saiyyam said, ab Baby kaha se aa gyi.. Krishna yelled, nhi nhi..

Beech mein to main aa gyi..Tumhare aur Baby ke..Haina? Bohot maza aa rha h na Baby ka pati banke. Saiyyam now got frustrated. He held her by her arms n said, kyu tumhe maza nhi aaya Yuvaan ke sath. Garden mein kitni kitni der tak baatein krte the tum dono.. she yelled, tum baat badal kr apni galti chhupao mat Saiyyam. Saiyyam’s grip got tighter n he said, galti meri nhi tumhari h..Maine Baby se theek se baat bhi nhi ki..Galti tumhari h..Tumhein to Yuvaan se baatein krne mein bade maze aa rhe the!! Dis was it for Krishna. She jerked away his hands n said, haan galti to meri h na..Saari galti meri h..Tumne mujhse zabardasti shaadi ki ye bhi meri galti..Maine dosti ka hath badhaya ye bhi meri galti..Tumhare itte rude behavior ke baad bhi maine acche se behave kiya ye bhi meri galti..Tumhari itti care ki ye bhi meri galti..Aur tumse pyaar kiya ye bhi meri galti..She said all dis in one go n with tears brimming in her eyes. Saiyyam was shocked hearing all dis. He felt so happy.

His lady love too loved him. But she was having tears in her eyes. She was abt to leave d room, but Saiyyam held her wrist. She yelled, kya h?? Chhodo mujhe?? Her voice was heavy due to crying. He said, itti galtiyaan yaad thi, sabse badi galti nhi batayi. Krishna looked at him wid disbelief n said, ab bhi tumhein meri galti dikh rhi h!! Saiyyam said, haan tumhari hi galti h..Tumne mujhe kabhi nhi bataya ki tum mujhse pyaar krti ho.. now, Krishna realised wat she had said in her frustration. She didn’t look at him said, nhi krti tumse pyaar..Tum bohot bure ho..Bohot bure.. he said, lekin main to tumse pyaar krta hu..Bohot bohot pyaar..Kya tum abbhi mujhse gussa ho! She hit him on his chest wid her fists, again n again. Finally he hugged her tightly n said, but I love you..

Krishna too hugged him back n said I love you too.. they had a loooooong hug. Finally Saiyyam broke d hug he cupped her face n wiped her tears wid his thumbs. He kissed her forehead n she smiled. Suddenly she remembered something n said, lekin kal raat ko tum Baby se kyu mile the? She looked d most cutest possessive wife ever. He said, oh to isliye mujhe itna kuch sunaya gya..wo main nhi Yuvaan tha. Wo mere kapde pehen kr Baby se milne gya tha. Badi Dadi to kabhi bhi kahin bhi aa jati h, to isliye Yuvaan mere kapde pehen kr gya tha.. Krishna widened her eyes n said, oh, to wo Yuvaan tha.. lekin use pata tha ki mujhe laga wo tum ho, phir bhi usne mujhe bataya kyu nhi?? Saiyyam said, accha h na nhi bataya..Wo bata deta to ye jhagda nhi hota.. he held her hands n continued, aur agar ye jhagda nhi hota, to shayad humein ek doosre ki feelings ka pata bhi nhi chalta.. Krishna smiled at him. Both joined their foreheads n smiled at each other….

So guys, dis was my Valentine’s day spcl gift for all Kriyyamites n Kriyyamians.. basically, it was a love triangle n it wasn’t totally a love triangle too.. I know many things were illogical n kinda stupid..But I’m also no less stupid n weird!!

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39 Comments
  1. Superb
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    1. Aarti32

      Thanx dear..

  2. Awesome…super story line…..hope to get a ff from u….

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx..N I’ll think abt writing an FF but only after March..

  3. Hiya if you don’t mind could you translate this in English because I could understand what was being said sorry xxx

    1. Aarti32

      Im so sorry dear..n I’ll try n translate it in Hindi..but it’ll take a lot of time

  4. Wow i wished this happned in the serial too yaar…u deserve an applause fr this os…very good yaar?

    1. Aarti32

      Thank u so much..n I too wish dis happens in d show

  5. So cute ???

    1. Aarti32

      Thank u sugar

  6. Shaani

    Aree… Superb yaar… This is super awesome…. Yeh story superrr se… Bohot …bohot.. Bohot.. Uppar hai…
    I enjoyed it alot… Very nice Aarti.. I wish this happen of real…

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx shaanu.. I’m glad dat u enjoyed it..n I also wish to see dis in d show

  7. Love it….. It was sooo cute. Why don’t u start an ff? You will make a great writer.

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx Annie..n if i start an ff, it’ll be only after March

  8. Rockstr

    That was amazing man…how i wish u start writing a kriyam ff

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx Rockstr..n I’ll try writing an FF, but after March

  9. Loved it soooo much!!!! Especially loved Yuvaan and Yuvani…cute 😀 Sayyam’s jealousy was.awesome…

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx sana.. I didn’t want to show anyone as villain..but jst couldn’t make Baby positive by any means??

  10. Best story on kriyyam till date. Loved it from the core of my heart. Great…
    Your imagination and writing skill is fantastic. Seriously wish for cvs to learn something from you…

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx kriyyamite, but there r many writers who r far better than me..so d cvs need to learn from them first..your appreciation means a lot to me

  11. Amazing??

    1. Aarti32

      Thank u..

  12. Mystery

    Superb!!!!!

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx Mystery

  13. Really nyc…. hey aaru [can i call u that] it was amazing we don’t think of logics we only think about kriyyam..Can u write ff on kriyyam as ur writing style is really impressive…

    1. Aarti32

      U can surely call me Aaru..My frnds call me Aaru only..So no problem..
      N I’m thinking of writing an FF but after March

  14. just epic. if this happend in serial i’ll be veryyyyyyy happy .just Amazing

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx Asia..Yeah, if dis happens in d show.. It’ll be a treat to watch

  15. Taniasharma

    Yaaar..that was so awesome..seriously..u really are good at writing

    1. Aarti32

      Thank u so much..N u’re no less great

  16. Pinkyyy

    Awesome OS dear

    1. Aarti32

      Thanx Pinkyyy..

  17. Arshi123

    Am I late to comment ?
    Aarti aka our aaru ,u literally nailed it
    ???? Thousands of like would be less.
    Sayyam got jealous,awww ??
    So nice imagination…… cvs should read it.It’s must for them
    And such a nice gift for kriyamites 🙂 🙂

    1. Aarti32

      Yes..U’re vry late..Frnds shud be first na..I’m hurt!! Deeply hurt!!?? Lok..Sorry..U know I’m too melodramatic..
      Thanks yaar..Glad dat kriyyamites like d gift..

  18. Thestarkfromhogwarts

    This is perfect. (P.S: I am very choosy about perfect things)
    You can literally replace the Cv’s and write for SSEL.
    Geez, your stories are very much imaginative and speaks out every single Fangirls’ dream

    1. Aarti32

      Aww..Thank u ThestarkfromHogwarts..If I was d writer of SSEL..It wud hv Ben total opposite of wat it’s now..I wud hv killed Dadi on d vry first day..
      Btw your name is too long ??

      1. Thestarkfromhogwarts

        Well, starkfromhogwarts is a pseudonym. You can call me Ruth

    2. Aarti32

      Ouk Ruthless

    3. Aarti32

      Sorry..Auto correct’s fault..Not mine

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