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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyyam FF ‘Love Story’ (Part 8)
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Kriyyam FF ‘Love Story’ (Part 8)

muniyaBy muniyaNovember 18, 201723 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello Friends…Muniya here…back with 8th part of ‘Love Story’.
Here is the link of part 7…

http://www.tellyupdates.com/kriyyam-ff-love-story-part-7/

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Kriyyam went out. Krishna entered the kitchen and saw Suhani and Bhavna has made everything ready for breakfast. She felt bad.

Suhani: Krishna…come.

Krishna: Sorry Aunty…I got late.

Suhani and Bhavna smiled at her.

Suhani: Pehli baat…ab tum humein aunty nahi…mummy bulaogi…and dusri baat…no problem if u r late…see we hv made everything ready…so now let’s go and serve these.

Krishna smilingly nodded and helped them to carry all the dishes to the table.

All were sat on the dining area. The trio came out of the kitchen and served them breakfast.

Dadi: Krishna…tell me…which of these dishes hv u made…I’ll try that first.

Krishna felt really bad as she didn’t make any. She doesn’t reply first and looks at Suhani and Bhavna. They assure her with smile.

Krishna: Actually Dadi…I didn’t make any…I got up late…that’s why…

She didn’t complete her word and looks at Dadi. Dadi understands and smiles.

Dadi: Ok…Koi baat nahi…but u hv to prepare lunch today…as today is ur first ‘rasoi’.

Krishna gets happy and nodes happily.

Krishna: Sure Dadi…I’ll prepare lunch.

Dadi: Ok…ab tum bhi baith jaao.

Krishna goes and sits beside Sayyam. They all start eating.

Time passes to lunch time

Krishna prepares all the dishes for lunch as Dadi said and serves. They all eat and praises her as the food she made was yummy. Krishna gets happy.

Dadi: Wah Krishna…tumne toh bohut achha khana banaya…

Krishna: Thank u Dadi…

Dadi gives Krishna a set of bangles as a gift. Krishna takes her blessings. All becomes happy except Baby. Her anger and jealousy increased more.

Dadi: Krishna…ab se tumhe hi roz khana banana padega…theek hai?

Krishna nodes happily.

Time skips to few days

Kriyyam became enough free with eachother. Both started to understand the other well.

One day

At night

Yuvraaj, Sharad and Yuvaan come back from office. Sayyam was not back yet.

Suhani: Tum sab aa gaye…aur Sayyam kahan hai?

Yuvraaj: I called Sayyam…he said he has some work…so he’ll be late.

Suhani: Ok…

They all took dinner. Krishna was reluctant to hv dinner as she thought to wait for Sayyam. But Dadi and other elders asked her to hv. She couldn’t deny them and hv dinner together with them.

At 11 pm

All disperse to their room except Krishna and Suhani. They were sitting in drawing room, waiting for Sayyam. Krishna was getting tensed as his phone was unreachable. She was trying again and again. Suhani too was tensed. She went up and took a tablet. Krishna saw that.

Krishna: Maa…kya hua aapko?…r u not feeling well?

Suhani: Wo…actually…I hv headache.

Krishna: Then why r u sitting here?…u go and take rest.

Suhani: But Krishna…then u’ll be alone na?

Krishna: So what?…Sayyam will be coming at any moment…and then I m at home only…if I need something I’ll call u…now plz u go.

Suhani hesitates to go but Krishna lead her to her room and again comes back to the drawing room. She continues to call Sayyam but with no result.

Krishna: Sayyam…kahan ho tum?…itni der kyun ho rahi hai?

She was thinking to again try his phone when her phone rings. Sayyam was calling her. She immediately takes the call.

Krishna: Hello…Sayyam…where r u?…when will u come?

Sayyam: Hello…Krishna…meri baat suno…pehle batao…ghar mein sab so gaye?

Krishna got tensed at once to hear his voice as he was panting heavily.

Krishna: Sayyam…kya hua tumhe?…kahan ho tum?

Sayyam: Krishna…first tell me…sab so gaye?

Krishna: Haan…sab so gaye…I m waiting for u…maa was also with me…but…I hv send her.

Sayyam: Ok…then listen…I hv reached home…but…plz don’t call anyone…u come and open the door for me.

Krishna was getting more and more tensed to hear him. But was also relieved to know that he has reached home. She runs to the door and opens it. Sayyam was standing at the doorstep. Krishna gets shocked to him. Blood was oozing from his forehead. He was injured. She holds him.

Krishna: Sayyam…ye kya hua tumhe?….kaise hua?

Sayyam: Krishna…plz don’t talk so loud.

He comes inside and closes the door.

Krishna: U go to room…I’ll call everyone.

Sayyam holds her and whispers.

Sayyam: Wait…no need to call anyone…they’ll get tensed.

Krishna: But Sayyam…

Sayyam: Krishna plz…

Sayyam goes towards the room and Krishna too follows him. He goes to the room and sits on the bed. He felt weak due to pain. Krishna gave him water with trembling hands.

Krishna: Sayyam…plz now tell me what happened to u?

Sayyam finished the water and heaves a deep sigh. Krishna sat beside him and caressed his hair. Sayyam looks at her moist eyes.

Sayyam: Krishna…actually…when I came out of the office…some goons followed me.

Krishna was shocked and afraid.

Krishna: Goons?…but why?

Sayyam: They were send by the rival company…they want to get this project back…and the day after tomorrow is the final presentation…so they tried to snatch the files from me…they attacked me on the way…and all this happened.

Krishna couldn’t hold back her tears and they started to flow down her cheeks. She side hugged Sayyam and was crying.

Krishna: Why didn’t u call anyone at home?…agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh?

Sayyam felt bad to see her crying for him. He tried to console her.

Sayyam: Krishna…plz don’t cry…mujhe kuch hua toh nahi na…

Krishna breaks the hug and looks at him.

Krishna: So what else do u want to happen?

Sayyam became silent. Krishna brings the first aid box and dresses his wounds. Sayyam closes his eyes, wincing in pain. Krishna gently blows on his wounds. Sayyam opens his eyes. They look at eachother. Krishna’s eyes were still teary.

Sayyam holds her hand and makes her sit beside him as she finishes dressing his wounds. He wipes her tears.

Sayyam: I m fine now…plz stop crying.

Krishna couldn’t keep his request and broke down crying more hardly, in his arms. Sayyam too holds her back.

They spend few moments in that state and break the hug. Krishna speaks up in a heavy tone

Krishna: I’ll bring ur food.

Sayyam nodes. She brings his food and feeds him. Sayyam smiles and looks at her lovingly.

Krishna feed him and then they go to sleep. Krishna helps Sayyam to lie down and carefully places his head over the pillow. She too lies down beside him. None of them slept and were looking at eachother, one with concern mingled with love in eyes and the other lovingly at the concerned face.

Sayyam unknowingly holds Krishna’s hand and brings her near him. Krishna, as if was waiting for his one move, holds him tightly and gently places her head on his chest. Sayyam gets shocked first, but then smiles. He holds her back and brings her more close.

Time passes in silence and they dozed off in the same position.

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So guys, that’s it for today…Let me know ur views on this epi in comment section.
Thank u so much for reading.
Love u all.
Yours Muniya (Moumita)

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    23 Comments

    1. Palak on November 18, 2017 10:54 pm

      hy, muniya u r giving us daily dose of kriyam n if we get addicted to it na….then only u hve to repay it by giving more n more ff n os ?? ….just suprb one. thnku

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 9:37 am

        Awwww…Thanks a lot Palak…
        So glad that u like my ff so much…
        I’ll surely try to update next one soon…

      • Palak on November 19, 2017 10:13 am

        actually, i lyk all ur os also vry much….i still remember u r the only one who complled me to comment on ur os “humsafar” which i liked vry much and i cnt stop myself from commenting (it is still one of my fav)……earlier i used to b a silent reader only…..and personally i lyk to comment on ur ff and os….they are jst amazing yar…….and thnks for all these on my fav couple kriyam…..and if u dnt mind can i ask u r from which state of WEST BENGAL and what do u do…i mean study or job…..only if u dnt mind….

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 1:41 pm

        Hey Palak…thank u so much dear…for ur sweet comments in my writings…It really means a lot to me.
        Kriyyam is my always fav…I just love KJ…He is a sweetheart???…
        And off course I don’t mind to answer ur simple questions??
        I m from west bengal…my place name is Mejia…District Bankura…U may know about Asansol-Durgapur…Mejia is near…
        And I m a student of Burdwan University…M.A in English…just finished my final exams…now preparing for job…as a teacher…now hving a lots of free time…that’s why indulged myself in writing??..
        Where r u from??…and what about ur study????

      • Palak on November 19, 2017 3:29 pm

        i am frm Jaipur, Rajasthan (known as Pink City)…..and i am pursuing my MBA and i am in 3rd semester…as well as also giving exams in banking sector for govt. banks…..i m too kj as well sj fan and of course kriyam also and ur ff n os too.

      • Palak on November 19, 2017 3:33 pm

        its nice to talk to u….first tym i make someone unknown as a friend through online chat …..can i call u friend na….

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 5:51 pm

        Ohh…That’s so nice…
        And we r already frnds dear…
        Same here…after i joined TU…met many unknown persons and later became frnds with them..

    2. Kriyyam fan on November 19, 2017 5:41 am

      Amazing

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 9:39 am

        Thanks Kriyyam Fan…

    3. Wd sravya on November 19, 2017 6:09 am

      Wow so nice and awesome and wonderful and superb update I loved the Kriyam scenes. Update Kriyam scenes like this only. I loved ur ff so much. I’m eagerly waiting for ur next update

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 9:40 am

        Thank u so much Sravya…
        Really happy that u like it…
        I’ll update next one soon…

    4. Diya on November 19, 2017 7:26 am

      Hey awesome post next onr soon

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 9:40 am

        Thank u Diya…
        I’ll update soon..

    5. Harini on November 19, 2017 8:04 am

      Wow ,superb episode update next soon , congrats muniya

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 9:42 am

        Thank u so much Harini…
        Glad to know that u like it…
        I’ll update soon…
        Btw…urs is a very sweet name..

    6. Fanficwriter on November 19, 2017 10:54 am

      Hey Muniya, I just finished reading all the chapter of and I absolutely loved it. I love the way you portray both Sayyam and Krishna, and their bond is just amazing. ??

      Awesome characterization, I absolutely love this ff❤?

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 1:44 pm

        Hey Shreya…
        Thank u so much…Glad that u like my new ff…
        It means a lot…

    7. sabana on November 19, 2017 11:34 am

      hey muniya ami ki bolbo khuja pa6i na stti ajkar episode ta pora ami pagol hoya ga6i.ami chok bondho korla sob scene dhakta pa6i darun darun love u muniya…

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 1:55 pm

        Hi Sabana…
        Ami tomar comment er opekkha korchilam…tomar bhalo legeche jene satti khub bhalo lagche…
        TU te onek bangali achhe…onekei amar frnd…but mostly onno couple fan…but u r only one…who is Kriyyam fan…so u r always special to me
        Thank u so much for ur lovely comment…

      • sabana on November 19, 2017 7:17 pm

        ami 1st vabtam ami hoi to kriyyam er jonno pagal pora tomer os pora janlam amer moto er ku a6a ja kriyam jonno sotti e pagal.ami tomer sob os gulo kom kora 4thaka 5 kora pora6i tobu oo amer mon vora na.tumi stti khub e Swt….love u sooo much muniya…..

    8. muniya on November 19, 2017 1:51 pm

      Hi Sabana…
      Ami tomar comment er opekkha korchilam…tomar bhalo legeche jene satti khub bhalo lagche…
      TU te onek bangali achhe…onekei amar frnd…but beshir bhaag…onno couple fan…but tumi ekmatro Kriyyam fan…so u r always special to me…
      Thank u so much for ur lovely comment…

    9. Isha on November 19, 2017 4:05 pm

      ❤❤❤❤❤ that’s all I can tell?!

      • muniya on November 19, 2017 5:43 pm

        Awwww..thank u so much Isha…
        Glad that u like it..

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