Kriyam: Takkar Ka Rishta By Annie Part 33

Hi guyz, its me Annie.. Well 33rd episode. I guess they will go to the Griffith park and have some peaceful moments near the Hollywood sign and news I am given AP Capstone for 10th grade. I am soooo happy. I thought I am not good enough to get into AP Capstone but yeah.. Its major important for getting into Universities though. Anyways, after this summer I will be finishing my freshmen year.. I feel so sad to leave 9th grade.. Hope 10th grade is not hard..

Ok, so lets start….

Next morning….

They have a meeting but Saiyyam is still in his sleep

Krishna: Saiyyam, get up.

Saiyyam: krish, let me sleep. Its just 6 am in the morning. We should sleep and pls let me also sleep.

Krishna: 6 am? Its 8:30…

Saiyyam: (wakes up) 8 in the morning? But just a second ago it was 6 am. Looks like I lost track of time after last night.
Krishna blushes  thinking about yesterday.

Krishna: past is past. Now, today the last day of our meeting and conferences. After that we can roam around as our wish.

Saiyyam: (holds her hand)  we will have time for each other. What if we go into that mood again (tilts his head)?

Krishna: u really want to get in that mood? (Comes closer).

And she pinches him on the hand..

Saiyyam: oww, krish.

Krishna: u don’t need even a second to get naughty.

Saiyyam: what to do? U are looking so pretty today.. Your eyes, ur hair (holds her hair).

Krishna: saiyyam!! You will mess my hair. I don’t have the time to tie it up all over again.

Saiyyam: sorry.

Krishna: we need to go to work.

Saiyyam: only work and work. U don’t care about me..(makes a puppy face).

Krishna: if I didn’t care about u than why did I spend time with u yesterday?

Saiyyam: (pulls her) maybe u will be kind enough to spend some more time today?

Krishna: yep, we will be going to the Griffith park and the Hollywood sign.

Saiyyam: wow, hollywood sign.. I love that place. I mean I have never been there before but it looks so cool.

Krishna: ok, now we should leave.

Time skip to inside the car after the meeting..

Saiyyam: so Krish. We successfully completed our first international deal.

Krishna: we did together thats why we got it..(kisses his cheeks).

Saiyyam: so where are we going now?

Krishna: to the griffith park, ofcourse.

They drive to the griffith park..
While driving..

Saiyyam: krish, did u notice US has a lot of cool places for kids?

Krishna: I know, all parks..and especially the disney land.

Saiyyam: when we have kids we will come for a holiday together..and visit a lot of places.(looks on excited)

Krishna: (blushes) are u that excited for kids?

Saiyyam: krishna.. Stop blushing like that. U don’t want me to ride back to the hotel instead of the park..

Krishna: (still blushing) I didn’t do anything.

Saiyyam: anyways, back to ur question. Of course I am excited for our kids.. Why aren’t u?

Krishna: I… I. Never thought about it that way.

Saiyyam: are u sure? (Comes closer) becoz i think u are lying.

Krishna: am not..

Timeskip to inside the park..

Kriyam firstly go inside the Griffith park zoo.

Krishna: saiyyam, look at that monkey.. He is jumping around.

Saiyyam: so?

Krishna: doesn’t that look similar?

Saiyyam: does it?but who?

Krishna: i was talking about u silly.  U always jump around here and there like a monkey.

Saiyyam: what krish u called me a monkey?

Krishna: no I didn’t. I said u jump around like it.

Saiyyam: looks on annoyed.

Krishna: achcha baba.sorry. now lets go to the observatory.

They go to the observatory, than the park theatre and then the heritage tree.
Near the end of the day they..
They come out of the park and the Hollywood sign is near.

Saiyyam: race u to the Sign..(runs)

Krishna:(while running) why are u running saiyyam?

Saiyyam: becoz, u were walking slow.

After some minutes from running..

Krishna: (panting) I can’t walk anymore. U made me too tired.

Saiyyam: its ok. I will take u..

Krishna: what do u…woah.

Saiyyam lifts krishna up..

Saiyyam: ok u are heavier than I thought.. But I think I will manage.

Krishna: what are u doing? Put me down.

Saiyyam: but u said u couldn’t walk as u were tired. So i tried to help u.

Krishna: But I think I am ok now..

Saiyyam puts her down and shakes his hand..

Saiyyam: man, u were so heavy. My hands are hurting.

He looks at krishna who is standing crossing her arms and raising an eyebrow.

Saiyyam: I meant that u are a human being.. So u are bound to have weight..and I am weak..(looks down).

Krishna laughs at his cute antics..

Krishna: (kisses him) i am sparing u becoz u are looking so cute..

They reach on top of the hills. The sun was about to set. Krishna sits on the hills. The sign is behind them. Its so peaceful and quiet here.

Saiyyam: i thought people would be swarming in here.

Krishna: there would be but at weekends. Its a working day today. That’s why people are not here.

Krishna walks to the edge of the hill and takes a deep breath. Saiyyam holds her from behind.

Saiyyam: I have an idea, to make this day more special..

Krishna: what?

Saiyyam: lets do the titanic pose. Come on edge of a hill, quiet and birds flying. Its the perfect moment.

Krishna: if u insist..

Saiyyam shouts….: krishna I love u..

Krishna: I love u too.

Krishna turns towards saiyyam and pulls him for a kiss. For a moment they kiss on the edge of the hills..(author’s note: should I push them? Nah, i will just let them enjoy ?)

Saiyyam: what was that krish?(smirks).

Krishna: to show how much I love u….

Saiyyam: (hugs) I love u too.. My Queen.

The screen freezes at a hugging kriyam and the sun setting.

Precap: trip to Krishna’s friends house..

Ok, that was the most funny and filmy thing I wrote. I am sorry if it was horrible becoz I am laughing at myself…

Anyways, plz share ur views… And ur words are really encouraging guyz.. Thank u soo much everyone…

Thats all until the next episode.. Plz let me know ur feedbacks. Till than bye.

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  1. Yay I m first to comment simultaneously in three ffs. Wow I m so happy. Thnx for the episode

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Anaita.. I am glad that u liked it..

  2. Epic wala episode?❤well done?

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      I am glad u enjoyed.. Thanks for ur comment..

  3. Hey Annie ,this epi was actually very funny & filmy. Enjoyed it to the fullest. Titanic pose is really unique idea.I can imagine the scene happening.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank soo much Muniya.. I am glad that u liked the idea..❤❤

  4. Swetha7

    Romance in the hotel room….wow?romance in the car…double wow??…..romance in the hill top…triple wow???….your author’s note is really funny…Annie I have an ideas…first you wrote horror ff ??..after that romantic one?? which is still going on.. Next you should try on comedy one??.what do you say…funny kriyam ff.sounds good….

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u for all the appreciation swetha.. I am really very glad u liked it.. Comedy with kriyam is good but I am afraid this might be my last not so sure but will still try..and thank u soo much for ur words..i am glad that u enjoyed it..

  5. Wonderful, I love the Way U have given sayyam a naughty and funny personality sorry if this doesn’t make sense it’s because I’ve been having tests all week and now im kinda tired but glad as tomorrow is the last day of tests

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Annie.. I am glad u enjoyed it.. Yeah I know tests are a pain..but lucky ur tests are going to end of luck..

  6. U srsly drive me crazy with ur dialogues man way to go girl❤️

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Maria.. I am soo happy u liked the dialogues.. Keep enjoying..?

  7. the eppisode was sooooooooooo cute

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      I am glad that u liked it Adarsha.. Thanks for commenting..

  8. Great I’m a huge fan of attack on Titans it’s a Japanese series season 2 is gng on now I know that, that’s my favorite anime series too I’ll wait for that episodes every week with lots of patience eren,mikasa,armin are my fav and also it’s gonna be intresting Reiner is a Titan and also Ymir OMG I can’t wait till Saturday.u know I love anime

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      High five… U can’t believe I am a huge fan of animes My whole room is with anime pictures..especially karma and Levi.. I even have a Scout jacket.. I usually watch animes in english dub..but I am watching AOT season 2 in japanese dub.. I knew Reiner and bertholdt is a titan as I read the manga.. I also watch episodes in saturday morning everyday…and Levi is just my fav character..basically a crush… He is so cute…and I also like eren and Hanji.. And have u watched assassination classroom or fullmetal alchemist or bleach or Naruto or code geas.. I know many animes… I am glad to meet an anime fan..high five..✋

      1. Highfive ? I also want to give u high five when I came to know that u too watch anime .and I also watched assassination classroom only 3 to four episodes but I’ll watch all the anime u mentioned above after tomorrows exam.And am crazy about sketching anime I did many of their sketches where u will find all those in kissanime orelse some other website or in YouTube tell me plz and my cousin he loves or piece but I’m bored with that.have u seen season1.if not watch that it will be awsm.eren and mikasa besties….and one punch man will be gud actually funny if u have free schedule try to watch I think u’ll feel bored.sry I didn’t commented on ur ff that was gud.

      2. Levi is my fav too well mannered and dignified????…

      3. Highfive..? actually I also want to give highfive to u wen I came to know that u too love anime I’m crazy about them I also love Levi as u said same here kind of crush…u know I’m mad about sketching anime I have many sketches of anime I used to do them when I’m 9 th standard now also I’ll do sketching.and u know season 1 will be intresting,u watch that if u don’t see it yet.eren and mikasa besties….and sry for not commenting on it ff that was gud.i’ll watch anime that u have mentioned after tmrw ‘s exam …..OMG I too want scout jacket…? and I’m excited to see ur room Annie.but how?

    2. AnahitaAnnie

      I usually watch them on kissanime, crunchyroll.. Or english dub in animeland.. And I love all the animes soo much.. I haven’t watched one piece but i did watch one punch man.. It was funny.

  9. Nairan_kriyam_lover

    Annie don’t mind me saying this but I think u r dragging the business cum honeymoon trip alot like going for different places is only making one episode so it’s kinda boring..
    Don’t take my suggestion wrong pls pls

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      My readers has requested me to give them a second honeymoon with proper time and I can’t ignore their requests.. Hope u understand.. So I need to listen to them and give them enough time to visit.. They will return to India soon.

  10. Hey I was also thinking will they fall from the edge… ??????

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Yeah, writing about the edge made me think to push them..??

  11. Minerva

    Fantastic episode. You perfected every dialogue and action up there. All the depictions and portrayal of emotions is plain superb. Its lovely to read about romance but it feels lovelier still when it is in moderation. Therefore, I am extremely glad to read such a wonderful piece of art. The conception, composition and wordplain was amazing..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much minerva.. I am very glad that u enjoyed u enjoyed it. Thanks a for all of the appreciation..

  12. Nice episode.update soon

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Sree..

  13. Shaani

    Hey bagwaan… How may new ideas u have inside ur mind… Very creative… I really loved it n I enjoyed it alot… Very nice episode… I truly loved it…
    U r every talented yaar… Keep writing… Keep smiling…?
    Waiting for the next episode…

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks I am glad u enjoyed it Shaani..and thanks a lot for writing a new ff… I am soo happy.. Ur writing rocks..

  14. Hi Annie episode was outstanding dear. My favourite country places, You explanations damn awesome. Hollywood sign scene loved it. Imagined the titanic pose by our kriyam. You nailed it girl

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Yura.. I am happy that u liked it.

  15. Thank god u didn’t pushed them from that edge???
    Nyc episode annie?

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot ishita..and yeah i backed down from pushing them..

  16. Amazing❤

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks Anshu…❤

  17. Fidato

    Annie… Thank you for the LA trip…Wo nahi free fund mein…. You are right…You are very good at comedy….So funny and cute… Kriyam.. loved it…

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for the compliment… I am glad u liked it Fidato..

  18. Alvia

    This is so good loved it

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      I am glad that u liked it Alvia.. Thanks for ur comment.

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