Kriyam: Takkar Ka Rishta By Annie Part 32

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Hi guyz… I am back with the 32nd episode.. And am putting a little bit of romance in this chapter.. I better tell u, I am terrible at writing romantic scenes.. I am good at comedy and all.. So hope it won’t be too much bad and in USA we do special birthday party at age 15 year.. Though my birthday is in September but I brought it up becoz my cousin’s from BD are coming on June especially for my Birthday..i have a cousins named Jazmine who is my age and we are besties… I can’t wait to see her…

Anyways, lets start the episode….

Kriyam is getting ready for their conference..

Krishna: I hope everything goes well today. I don’t want to miss this deal.

Saiyyam: we won’t miss this deal. After all u are here.

Krishna: (tensed) I hope so.

Saiyyam: come on. Don’t be so tensed. We will just win the deal.. And after that…

He starts walking towards krishna..

Krishna: i am really not in a mood to joke now..

Saiyyam: whose joking? I am just trying to remind u about some certain surprise.

Krishna: Excuse me.. I am the one who is supposed to give the surprise than why are u reminding me again and again.

Saiyyam: so that u won’t forgot..

Krishna rolls her eyes at saiyyam and they both reach the conference room. Krishna is wearing a white shirt with a black knee length skirt. She has tied her hair up in a pony tail with her bangs upto her eye-brows. Saiyyam is wearing a black suit with a white-shirt.

The conference starts…

Time skip to 2 hours.. The conference is nearly over and the other company agreed to sign a deal with B &M industry.

They come out…

Krishna: (hugs saiyyam) yipee. We got the deal.

Saiyyam: yeah, but sad part we have to do a meeting again tomorrow to finalise papers.

Krishna: aww, don’t worry. We have plenty time after the deal..like 2 days more roam around.

Saiyyam: no I am not worrying. After all I have today as a compensation for tomorrow.

Krishna: But now we are going to Universal studios.. And Harry potter world is my fav.

Saiyyam: yeah, its good but what do u see in Harry potter anyway.

Krishna: come on Daniel Radcliff is soo cute. I love his acting and he is handsome.

Saiyyam:(a bit jealous) if u look around u will see more handsome guys around u.

Krishna: for example..

Saiyyam: like our own husband. U should notice him first than others (looks away).

Krishna: come on.. There is no comparison between both of u.. (Pulls his cheeks) u are my cute husband while he is just an actor with a good face.

Saiyyam: don’t I look good to u?

Krishna: (hugs him) of course u do. To me u are my prince charming.

Saiyyam: (happy) right…

They go inside the City-walk malls which is before the studio park.

Saiyyam: krishna, u told me we are going to a park and a theatre. But its a shopping site.

Krishna: oh Didn’t I tell u? City Walk malls are before the studios.

Saiyyam: You are not going to shop now, right?

Krishna: Just a little bit. I need to buy some souvenirs.. Like the Darth vader statue or the light Sabers and not to forget the Hogwarts Cloak.

Saiyyam: oh.. No.. Not soo many stuff.

Krishna doesn’t listen to him and drags him to the shops with her.

Time skip to inside the universal studious park..

They get on the Krusty Roller coaster..

Saiyyam looks on excited while krishna is a bit scared.

Krishna: I know its a cool ride but isn’t it a bit scary? I mean the height.

Saiyyam looks down..and sees they are at a great height.

Saiyyam: don’t worry I will hold u..

The ride starts… As soon as it takes turn from above the Kwik-e-Mart they both start shouting hugging each other..

Saiyyam: krishna, its scary…(shouts)

Krishna doesn’t say anything and tugs onto saiyyam even harder. After getting down…

Krishna: thats was really very scary.

Saiyyam: of course it was.(shaking a bit).

Krishna: how about we watch a movie now?

Saiyyam: A romantic one..

Krishna: ok.

The go inside the theatre and watch a movie..

Saiyyam: Krishna, I hope u remember my surprise is still due.

Krishna: i do remember now let me watch out the movie..

After coming out of the theatre they catch a shuttle train and go to their car which was parked outside the City walk.

They are at the LA streets…

Krishna: remember u wanted a surprise.

Saiyyam: yeah, u are going to give it now?

Krishna: hmmm.

She takes out a bracelet with her and Saiyyam’s name engraved on it. Saiyyam looks at it happily.

Krishna: do u like it?

Saiyyam:(hugs her) thanks a lot krishna. I love it…though.

Krishna: what happened?

Saiyyam: i thought the surprise would be u know….something else.

Krishna: u never know. What if there is some other surprise for u that u will get it afterwards?

Saiyyam: can’t wait to know what it is

Timeskip to their room..

saiyyam is standing leaning against a wall. At that time krishna out of the washroom. She sees Saiyyam.

Krishna: do u want another surprise Mr.Birla?

Saiyyam notices wearing a black frock.. Krishna comes towards Saiyyam..

Krishna: u wanted another surprise right?

She moves towards Saiyyam and kisses him. She keeps her hand on his shoulders..

Krishna: Happy with the surprise?

Saiyyam: remember I told that today no excuses would work and I am still not satisfied with this surprise.

Krishna: (blushes) but I gave u ur surprise.

Saiyyam: Hmm, but what about mine?

Saiyyam takes krishna and pins her to the wall. He holds her hands and comes closer and they both share a romantic kiss. They move apart but soon saiyyam pulls her closer again. He holds her by the waist and removes a strand of her hair and   kisses her neck. Krishna hugs Saiyyam. He breaks the hug and  unties one strap of Krishna’s dress and they move towards the bed.
Krishna lies on the bed and Saiyyam comes on her side.. He leans towards her but…

Krishna: Saiyyam, I have work to do..

Saiyyam: (cups her face)what did I say before? No excuses will be considered today..

Krishna: but….

Doesn’t let her complete as Saiyyam kisses her again and they both start moving towards each other….

And the screen goes black…..

Precap: i guess trip to the Griffith park and the Hollywood sign..

Guys, I apologize for not being able to put up a good romantic scenes as thats my weak spot while writing. i am even struggling with the interpretation of Romeo and Juliet in my Honours English class. I don’t know how to re-write a Shakespearean story.. And thank u soo much for all the support.. Thank u soo much everyone.. Ur comments are my motivation…

Hope to hear ur reviews

till than bye…?

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34 Comments
  1. Fantastic ep Annie? and I can totally relate with Krishna loving the Harry Potter series as they r my absolute favorite too ?

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Annie.. I am glad that u liked it..and Harry potter series is my fav too..?

  2. Hey i love ur ff its just amazing…. i have something to say…. you can like make krishna a little angry on sayyam because he is always asking for romance and as she said she has work but he doesnt let her so they lose the deal… then sayyam tries convincing krishna by pulling her cliser kissing her or anything else…. if possible…. if not then its fine too ur ff is always great

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Shiza.. I am glad that u liked it.. Actually in this episode I was already showed the deal is accepted and I have finished the next episode too.i apologize for not being able to put ur marvellous suggestion.. I am really very sorry..anyways, i am happy that u enjoyed it..

  3. Hey Annie nice one.. Keep it up… And I am also from bd.. And my age is 15 too.. But I read in class ten…

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Oo u are from BD..actually I was born in USA…but we went to BD to stay fir 4 years..but as high school started and I have to do it in USA we came back..and we are not going back anymore ??..except next year for a two week visit.. I am not 15 yet.. I will be September and I will promoting to 10th grade in this summer..in June I will be starting my new 10th grade classes.. Which district are u from??

      1. Well I live in Dhaka but my home district is Noakhali.. ?????

  4. Shaani

    Superb as always dr keep writing… I love this episode… Very well written Annie… It’s too good…
    Keep smiling ??

    1. Dinu

      Hi Annie? hw r u? Sry i’m commenting after a long time. Loved 2dy epi 2 d core???? I must say our sayyam is vry desperate???? bt cute???? waiting 4 nxt epi dr.byeeee tc???

      1. AnahitaAnnie

        Thank u soo much Dinu..and yeah saiyyam is desperate… I am glad that u enjoyed it..

    2. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Shaani.. I so happy that u liked it..

  5. Hi Annie. This epi was amazing. Harry potter series & Daniel Redcliff r my fav too. & being a english honours student i knw its very hard to deal with shakespearean novels bcs he was master of romance.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks Muniya.. My Honours classes are not like the Universality classes in BD.. I am in 9th grade..and if u are advanced in english u are known as an honours.. And this quarter its Romeo amd Juliet…and I am so happy u enjoyed it.. I hope u will like the further episodes too

  6. Nice episode. Next part update soon.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot sree..next one is submitted..

  7. Awesome ❤

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Anshu..

  8. Arrey nahi baba?this episode was too cute❤

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u zani.. I am glad that u liked it..

  9. Minerva

    Pretty awesome. The dialogues and actions were just stupendous. Romance was really well-conceptualised and presented. Amazing descriptions of all the landmarks and fantastic places of los angeles. Immense amounts of gratitude for helping me enjoy LA from India itself..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      I am happy Minerva that I could help u visualize LA.. I am so happy that u enjoyed it… Thanks a lot for ur comment.. I love reading them..

  10. Mayesha

    Oohhhoo…u’re so goooddd in romantic scenes…..hope u have a gd tym with ur cousine. Advanved sry,,As I wont be able to comment for next 4-5 days..My xms r hammering on my head..I have to give full concentrate on that..till then bye..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Don’t apologize apu … I know u will do great on ur exams… Will be waiting to see u again..and thanks for all the appreciation..

  11. Nairan_kriyam_lover

    Nice episode….
    Landed in USA going to the universal studios…
    Which grade are u in?now I’m in 10th grade

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      I am a 9th grader.. Will be in 10th this summer..and u are in my city!! Thats exciting.. I must not forget to mention my house is near the universal studious..and thanks for ur comment..

  12. Splendid one Annie u nailed it the romance was well presented have a good time with ur Xenia hope u still won’t forget us huh???

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Don’t worry maria.. I can never forget u all..and thanks a lot for ur comment..i am glad that u enjoyed it..

  13. Annie baby u nailed again I loved it.not Krishna I think u love Harry Potter? right.im having exam on 12 th of this month and I’ll be free after that I’ll be regular to ur ff till then bye.take care ,read well.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Somi.. Frankly speaking, I like the series but I not that much.. I just needed a scenes to make comedy..and I am more of a attack in titan fan..if u know what attack on titan is? And hope u will do great in ur exams.. And thanks again for ur kind words..keep enjoying..

  14. Hi Annie episode was so romantic. I love harry potter films. Bracelet scene was superb. Loved the surprises. Keep writing

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Yura.. I am glad u liked it..❤?

  15. Fidato

    Nice one Annie… Like always just nailed it…

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much fidato..❤❤

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