Kriyam: Takkar Ka Rishta – By Annie (Part 1)

Hi guyz its me Annie. Well, I already gave my intro before so many of u already know me. But there’s one thing I forgot to tell. Thats my full name. My full name is Anahita Inayah Islam …. Well Annie is my pet name. My dad kept my name Annie.
Anyways…my friendz, cousins and parents call me Annie. So its Annie for u all too. Oh well, lets start our first episode…..

At Birla House…..

The whole house is decorated with flowers…and lights… People are seen busy working with dishes and decorations…

Suhani: Yuvraj my happiness has no bounds today….

Yuvraj: I know after all my Ladla beta is coming today.

Suhani: Tumhara ladla? He is mamma’s boy….

Yuvraj: Ok fine baba. But Suhani even I am so happy today. After 6 years I am going to see my little boy.

Suhani: He is not little anymore Yuvraj.

Yuvraj: He might as well have grown but he will be a baby for me always…

Suhani smiles…

At Mathur Mansion….

Aryan: Yipeee, Krishna will be landing in India really soon.

Disha: I know Aryan. even saiyyam is coming today…

Aryan: Saiyyam? Wow…its going to be a blast.

Soumya: Aryan beta… U r going to pick Krishna right?

Aryan: Ha bari ma. Don’t worry I will pick her. Is Bare papa coming too?

Soumya: no. Kishan wants to welcome his darling daughter at home.

Disha: I understand bari ma. After all bare papa’s ladli is coming today.

Well preparations at both places are on full swing…


A beautiful girl is seen coming out of terminal 2. She is wearing a dazzling black short frock with golden high heels and is also wearing a black sunglass. She has tons of luggage with her.

Krishna: Oh god… So much of stuff. Roshni ordered so much make-up that it nearly took half of the luggage.
Now where is the Aryan?

On the opposite side….

A dashing young man is seen coming out of Terminal 1. He is wearing a black long sleeved Shirt and dark blue jeans….

Saiyyam: Yuvani will be soo happy when she will see the stuff I brought for her. Oh, I am soo excited to baby Rishab…. I never got the chance to see my sweet nephew. When will my ride arrive..

Both start walking in a filmy style…
Saiyyam is looking at his watch while Krishna is looking at her phone.

Crash…. Krishna’s phone falls down….

Krishna: what the hell?

Saiyyam: Excuse me Miss, are u blind? Keep ur eyes on road when u walk instead of sticking ur eyes to phone?

Krishna: Excuse me… How dare u talk to me that way?

Saiyyam: How dare I? Aapke galti hai… So I should complain.

Krishna: Meri galti? My foot..

Saiyyam: Exactly ur foot. U should keep a watch on ur steps.

Krishna fumes in anger and takes off her sunglasses. They have an eye-lock which is broken my Krishna.
She snaps her finger at Saiyyam and points her finger at him.

Krishna: Look mister u don’t know who I am? So speak to me with respect.

Saiyyam: I very well know who u are. A spoiled brat. But u don’t know who I am?

Krishna: (smirks) oh well I know… U r a scrap dealer. Its clearly evident in ur attitude. U don’t even have manners to talk to a person.

Saiyyam: i….(tries to speak). Well, I don’t want to waste my time with u. My family is waiting for me at home.

Krishna: Same here!! Even I am not interested to argue with u.

She turns and her chestnut brown hair hits Saiyyam’s face.

Saiyyam: What a girl? Was she a person or a nuclear bomb..

He goes and finds Yuvan…

Saiyyam runs and hugs Yuvan.

While with Krishna….

Aryan: Krishna I am here.

Krishna walks ahead and their driver comes running to help her with luggage.

Krishna: Kaka let it be. I will do it myself. Even Aryan is here. U shouldn’t lift such heavy stuffs at this age..(smiles innocently).

Their driver kaka smiles back…

Aryan: what yah krish? Why is ur phone switched off?

Krishna: My phone…

Looks at her phone and sees its turned off.

Krishna: oh some arrogant guy. We actually hit each other and my phone fell down. He was so..

Aryan: Let it be Krish…. Forget all this and enjoy India. Bari ma, Bare papa, Choti ma, Choti papa and ma and papa are eagerly waiting for u. Come on we should head towards home.

Krishna: U r right…

They leave..

While with​ Yuvan and Saiyyam…

Saiyyam hugs Yuvan…

Yuvan: Saiyyam how r u?

Saiyyam: I am fine bhai.

Yuvan: So I hope u didn’t face any problem.

Saiyyam: I didn’t face any problem. Except an egoistic girl. Uff she was so annoying.

Yuvan: Achcha chor na. U know even Krishna is coming to India today….

Saiyyam: Really krish? I haven’t seen her in years now. I did talk to her in phone but she never sent me any of her picture and didn’t let me send mine too.Everytime she said we must see each other in person. Till than only auditory meeting.

Yuvan: Sounds filmy…

Saiyyam: Exactly she wanted it to be filmy where bestfriends meet after ages and so on.

Yuvan: But she isn’t just best friend for u? Is she?(teases Saiyyam)

Saiyyam: Kya bhai.

Yuvan: Ok saiyyam. I think we should leave. Ma and papa is waiting. And dadi is chanting ur name since morning.(guyz in my ff dadi loves Saiyyam a lot)..

Saiyyam: Yeah.

They leave…

Precap: Saiyyam: Tum? Krishna: what are u doing in my house?

Well guyz its my first episode…..

Hope to hear ur reviews….

Till than bye….?

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  1. Hey nice one…. ?????

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Jenita….?

  2. Awwww I’m loving this??????plz update asap?

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Zani… I will post the next one soon…

  3. Ohh i loved it to the core its simply amazing. Waiting for next one

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Asia. It means a lot…. I will most next one soon…

  4. This is a great track uwriteso well carry on

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Maria…glad u liked it…

  5. Aaravjaikar

    Loge t… another ff… by u.. Awesome..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Aarav. Glad u liked it…

  6. Aarti32

    Amazinggg start..I’m enjoying it a loooooot

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Aaru. Glad u liked it…

  7. Kriyyam fight…. I love that part. Fantastic epi. Upload next quickly if u r free. I am waiting. I like the name of u Anahita & Annie.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Ayesha…. Glad u liked it. Well my name Anahita was given my mom and my dad made my pet name Annie…. Hey I am from Bangladesh tooo. But sadly I don’t live there anymore…..

  8. It was a awesome episode….
    Loved it…
    U r a fabulous writer…
    Waiting for next

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot dwidha……

  9. Superb…No words to explain my feeling.All the best for next episodes just rock them with your amazing writing …..?

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Nadhiya…. For ur wishes…..

  10. I am speechless. This episode was so stupendously amazingly awesome. The first meeting was like… Oh god… Just crazy. This is one of the best first episodes till date. All characters were introduced in such a marvellous way.
    Now I cant find words to praise you enough. You have left me dumbstruck and in awe. Seriously magical…

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Shivani… I am soo happy that u liked it… I am glad that I could live up to ur expectations…. Thanks a lot again… I will post next update soon…

  11. Rockstr

    This looks really interesting..pls update soon

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Rockstr. Will update soon…

  12. Shaani

    Woow. . Nice. waiting for the next part..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Shaani…will try to update soon ?

  13. Great one….I always wanted Krishna to have same attitude as saiyyam. And you did the same…waiting for your upcoming episode

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Sanjana. Looks like we hv same veiws…

  14. Fidato

    Hi… Annie..This is so lovely…cute arguments… Liked it a lot.. waiting for real meeting of kriyam..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Fidato… Next episode is the real meeting of kriyam…

  15. Wow Annie episode was outstanding. Krishna ‘ s confidence and her new avatar was superb. I am very excited. Keep writing. Update asap

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Yura…. Glad u liked it…next one will be posted soon…

  16. I loved it. Plz update next part soon.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Kriyam fan….will post next one soon..

  17. A different story u came up wid really enjoyed their tashan…anyways super epi..I want know their reaction when they get know this thing…anyways loved it annie ..Update ASAP 🙂

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Isha…. Their reaction will be visible tomorrow…

  18. Wonderful epi Annieeeeee (I like ur’s so cutee☺?) my most favorite prt was when krishna said “galti my foot” n sayyam replied her “exactly ur foot”??? dat prt was funny. Sayyam baby was right. She always slip somewhere ? plz post nxt epi soon dr.i’m eagerly waiting 4 it.bye tc???

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot dinu…. Oh well Annie was kept my father… He said it sounded cute… Anyways… Even my fav part was that foot wala part. Will post next one soon…

  19. Arshi123

    First of all the title is just so unique and interesting….. Loved it ??

    And amazingly wrote ….. Keep going ????

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Arshi for ur appreciation…

  20. Fenil

    I loved it.
    Sound Interesting, storyline has something different.
    Can’t wait for next !! I know 2nd chppy is already posted.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Fenil..hope u like the next one.

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