Kriyam SS: A journey though love By Annie – Shot 1


Hi everyone.. U all compelled me to continue the SS i posted an intro on.. If u still missed it than here is the link below….


Now, after this SS I won’t write on Kriyam anymore as I am out of ideas on them.. But, I am certainly not going to quit TU. I will stick around reading ffs here and might as well post on others couples.. And surely would love talking to all of u.. Now I needed to add a little more characters…

Arjun: Commander of the scout regiment.. A strong and well sorted man.. Close with Saiyyam.has huge eyebrows..(interpretation of Erwin Smith)

Nisha: Section-Commander in the scout regiment.. Is a bit crazy and close with Saiyyam and Krishna… Has an creepy affection for the titans that she held captive as test subjects.. Might as well add she will be playing cupid..( interpretation of Hange Zoe)..

And yes Saiyyam will be short here (5 feet and three inches) just to add humour in the story..

Now, if u are lost pls read the intro and u will know the plot.. Its an SS so everything will be fast and speedy..

Lets start…..

After a huge day of training all the cadets are at their dorm.. Captain Saiyyam has given them a day off from cleaning.. Cleaning the entire headquarters is a big job.. Not to mention Yuvan had nearly collapsed.. Where Yuvani was inspecting what to do next… Suddenly, Nisha comes running in..

Yuvan: oh here comes the mad scientist.. Hope she isn’t here to continue more experiments on me..

Krishna: relax Yuvan.. I think she might be here for something else..

Nisha: Cadets, I have an amazing news for all of u.. Shorty approved us having the mess hall to play.

Krishna: captain accepted it.. That’s strange.. How did u conceive him?

Nisha: I told him that me, u and all the cadets wanted to have a little get together free time.. And he gave some cleaning lectures and gave us the keys..

Krishna: ssee guys.. Captain isn’t as impassive he acts to be..

Yuvani: u are saying this because u like him but I will never forgive him for beating my brother in court.

Yuvan: Yuvani that was a plan to save me from the military police.. Geez, get over it.. Krishna is right the captain isn’t bad.

Yuvani: Whatever…(in a monotone voice)

Nisha: Now everyone gather up in the mess hall after dinner and pls don’t dirty of throw any trash.. Than shorty will make us clean till it’s tomorrow’s morning..

Time skip to the mess- hall where everyone is gathered…

Krishna: What do we play Nisha?

Nisha: truth or dare..

Krishna: that’s the worst and most boring game ever.

Yuvani: we could play mimicry.. We could imitate others…

Krishna: great idea.. Since u started it.. U should go on first..

Yuvani goes infront and Krishna tosses out the name..

Krishna: imitate Commander Arjun..

Yuvani:(gets into position and does the military salute) Together we destroy the titan and regain Humanity with my big eyebrows of freedom..(in a high pitched voice like Arjun).

Krishna: Awesome, Yuvani.. Didn’t know u had acting skills.. Now u choose someone else..

Yuvani: ok Krishna.. I choose u.

Krishna goes up and someone tosses Yuvan’s name..

Krishna: mimic Yuvan..okay.. (Clears her through) All of the titans will die!!(shouts) I will drive all of them out!!(shouts on the top her voice)

Yuvan: that’s so not me..(pouts)

Nisha: thats exactly what u do Yuvan.. She has great observation skills..

Everyone cheers and says Krishna to act another character..

Nisha: Krishna, imitate shorty..

Krishna: imitate captain Saiyyam.. But why me..(blushes)

Well, pretty much everyone knows about Krishna’s little crush on Saiyyam except Saiyyam himself.. And Nisha ships Kriyam too much.. Doesn’t leave a single chance to tease them..

Krishna: okay..(gets a deep bored voice) brats, stop playing such stupid games and clean the entire HQ.. And stop staring at me.. U all don’t need to stare at me just becoz I am so handsome… (Laughs) he is such a paranoid at cleaning..

Someone from behind the door says..

Someone: excellent acting cadet except the last part..(in a deep and bored tone)..

Krishna: Yuvan, why are u taking out voices like captain Saiyyam?

Yuvan: i didn’t do anything.. I was sitting right infront of u..

Krishna: don’t tell me its… Oh no.. No..

Yuvan:(smirks) oh yes.. It is him..

Krishna turns around and sees Saiyyam glaring daggers at her..

Krishna: Sir, I am so sorry.. We were just playing around..

Saiyyam: I need to teach u a lesson on how to respect ur superiors. Come to my office whenever this idiotic chattering are over..

Saiyyam walks away back to his office..

Nisha: okay, that went well.

Krishna: well?? Now he is going to give me cleaning duties.. Especially if he tells me to clean the stables.. I am dead.

Yuvani: don’t worry krishna.. If the captain tortures u than tell me.. I will break his bones..(says over protectively)

Krishna: keep ur voice down Yuvani.. He will put u in cleaning duties too.

Time skip to Krishna walking to Saiyyam’s office..

Krishna: ,anything but the stables,anything but the stables(keeps chanting)

She knocks on his door…

Saiyyam: state ur name and purpose.

Krishna: cadet Mathur, sir.. U told to come here..

She enters the room and sees Saiyyam took off his jacket and covered his nose and mouth with a handkerchief and his head with a white cloth.. He was dusting the Windows with a broom..

Krishna: seems like u are busy sir, should I come later?

Saiyyam: no, I am nearly finished.

He complete his dusting and sits in his chair.

Krishna: I am so sorry sir, we were just playing around.. Pls don’t give me cleaning duties and especially not the stables..

She sees Saiyyam smirking a bit..

Krishna:(in mind) did he actually smile?

Saiyyam;: Krishna, did u really meant what u said?

Krishna: no sir, I don’t think u are paranoid about cleaning.. Cleaning is an art and keeping away from germs is the best way to stay life..(chuckles nervously)

Saiyyam:( clears his throat) not this part.. The other one..

Krishna: the other one?

Saiyyam: u know about me being handsome..(blushes a little bit)

Krishna:(in mind: of course sir.. I meant it) outside: sir.. I mean I an not telling u look bad but that was just to create a sarcastic moment.

Saiyyam: ok..(stays slient)

Krishna: am I dismissed sir? That means no punishments?

Saiyyam: u need to be punished for bad mouthing about ur superior.. Now, (throws a duster at Krishna and she catches it).. Clean the shelves of the office.. I will check ur work..

Krishna: ok, sir.. Are u going to go?

Saiyyam: No, i have some paper work.. And I need to keep a watch that u don’t slack off during the punishment..

Krishna Nods and starts her cleaning..

Saiyyam’s POV:

Don’t know why I feel attracted to her.. Is it becoz of her dreamy brown eyes or her beautiful chestnut colored hair.. Or becoz she is strong, sarcastic, bubbly and extremely beautiful.. What are u thinking saiyyam?? U can’t fall for her.. Not when the titans are still invading our territory..and besides, u don’t even know of she likes me back..

Precap: Saiyyam: what is ur relationship with Yuvan? Krishna: He is my best friend.. Saiyyam: are u sure he is just a friend? Krishna: yes sir.. But why are u asking me all these?

Bye bye, people… Pls let me know ur views.. I know its not very interesting.. So pls tell me if u all want me to discontinue it..

Till than bye….?

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  1. Annie this was amazing. This is new story and m with u. U should continue it it must be interesting how feeling in kriyam of love developed

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much for all the positive responses diya.. I really appreciate all encouraged words..

  2. Mithila Farzana

    It’s really amazing annie…i enjoyed a lot…plz continue this one…it’s so the next epi soon…

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Mithila.. I am going to continue it.. Thanks for all kind words..

  3. Amazing

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much..

  4. Loved it… Just loved it….. Awesome

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank soo much Jenita.. I am. Very glad that u liked it..

  5. Hi Annie….. nice story line. Any plot on kriyam will be chalega. So I luv thz captain saiyyam. Pre cap is interesting I will keep reading dear. Update soon

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much for always being there Yura.. I have submitted the next one.. Hope u like it..

  6. AnahitaAnnie

    In the above its Convince not conceive… Hate when phone auto-corrects

  7. Hi Annie…fresh start to kriyyam…very nice…as long as kriyyam is there it can never be less interesting…so dont u even think to discontinue the story…its really amazing.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much for ur constant support Muniya.. I am soo happy that it wasn’t bad.. Hope u like the next part.

  8. Awesome epi
    I love the epi very much
    And precap is really interesting
    Waiting for next

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much for ur sweet words Pallavi.. I am overjoyed that u liked it.. I have submitted the next one.. So hope u like it..

  9. thnk you annie for new ff

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Don’t thank me.. Thank u for all the support..

  10. Aarti32

    Hey, it was interesting!!
    Shorty ?? good one!!
    Is it gonna be of 6 parts only??

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      I am happy that u found it interesting Aaru.. And yep shorty.. I thought it would bring a sarcastic environment.. Anyways, sad truth yeah its only six shots.. Thank u for ur comment..

  11. Hi Annie, I was waiting for this and I’m so glad you started it. It’s a very good start. Looking forward to how this story will develop.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Faeeqa.. Yes, I started it.. This won’t be that long.. Just 6 shots.. Thanks for commenting..

  12. Story is too interesting..!! i m really happy that u started a new story Annie??…waitng for the nxt part

  13. AnahitaAnnie

    I very happy that u found it interesting Ishita.. Thank u soo much for ur sweet comment.. Next part is submitted.. Hope it will be posted soon..

  14. Mayesha

    new story line!!! where do u get that mind blowing ideas…. very nice….. loved it…

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      I am full of surprises apu.. And I am so happy u liked the storyline.. I tried something different with kriyam.. Giving them an alternate universe.. Thank u soo much for ur support..

  15. First… Congratulations for successfully completing two ffs… Loved both of them…. And this one is also mind blowing…. Love the way you come up with new ideas like the horror and this one… This ff is also funny… You said about how you want post more on Kriyam after this but…. It would be really nice of you to write a OS on them… Anyways this one is awesome and different… Keep writing….

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much prethiga.. Yeh, two ffs complete.. It has been possible due to all of u amazing readers..and due to support.. Don’t worry I will keep posting OS.. I am glad that u liked it..

  16. Shaz19

    Excellent start Annie, loving the story so far. I can’t wait to find out what happens next!

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thank u soo much Shaz.. I am glad u liked it.. I am not a gifted writer like u.. But I try.. And I am in love with ur ff.. I just keep waiting for it everyday.. Thank u soo much again..

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