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Kriyam OS
Characters
Srishiti jain as Krishna-an innocent girl who loves her family n her sister gauri very much.
Shrenu Parikh as Gauri- a girl who loves here family… well mannered girl… wife of sayyam n loves him a lot….
Karan jotwani as Sayyam- a silent person he also respect his family and husband of Gauri
Saumya & Gaurav- parents of krinshna n gauri
Suhani & Yuvraaj- parents of sayyam
“Mumbai private hospital” board is shown.. some people are standing outside the operation theater… few of them were walking here and there in tension.. a lady & girl come there…
Lady (soumya)– Gaurav …what had happened??..me & krishna have gone to temple & when we return ..none is present at home…Neighbors told us u all have come to hospital..so we both come here directly….nd suhani….tum log yaha…& where is gauri nd sayyam?…. kuch toh boliye na…
suhani- actually soumya… Wo…gauri nd sayyam had gone to hospital for gauri’s checkup for her pregnancy but during their return they met with an accident…
( saying this she started crying)…
Doctor came out of OT…
Doc- ur son is safe now he is out of danger…but sorry we couldn’t to save ur daughter ln law..as she had major internal bleeding.. we r really sorry…

Some days later…
Every one is present in hall of BM….after some death ceremony… both mathur n birla families r present..
Suhani ( crying)- what has happened suddenly… everything was so fine..sayyam nd gauri was so happy even they want to begin their family but God had decided something else.. how will my sayyam live without gauri..they both r childhood Best frnds..nd love each other a lot.. both were together since childhood in school college nd anywhere but why now gauri had left him alone…we r missing our gauri a lot…
Bhavna: suhani plz sambal ke… u have to be strong for sayyam…
All others were also crying….
A knock happens at door..
Man- Mr. Sayyam birla nd Mrs. Gauri sayyam birla..
Sayyam came forward…
Sayyam- yes m sayyam
Man- sir this letter for u nd ur wife from hospital..

(After giving letter he left)
Sayyam opens the letter and have a blank expression after reading it.. his eyes were filled with tears..
Everyone was eager to know what is in this letter..
Yuvraaj- what is it sayyam??
Sayyam-..wo..we..i mean gauri & i had gone to hospital for gauri’s checkup..so its her report..
Saying this tears starts to come off his eyes.. while everyone r quite as they don’t knw how to react.. suhani was confused n grabbed the reports suddenly from sayyam’s hands.. after reading it she sits on sofa n starts crying.. everyone was shocked to her like this…
Yuvraaj- Suhani kya huwaa?
Suhani(while crying)- I want to tell u something.. n she looks at sayyam..he nodded in yes… n she continues..
suhani- few days before Gauri came to me.. she said she had gone to hospital for her checkup as she want to conceive but she is not able to conceive becoz of a problem in her womb.. so it is very difficult to her to conceive baby normally..so she want test tube baby..
Bhavna: kya? Kya huwaaa?
suhani- yes I was also shocked earlier but then she told me that they will take sample from gauri n sayyamonly n after a process they again transfer it on guri’s womb.. so she asked permission from me to start the process then I asked sayyam about his opinion he was also agreed with it…So I also gave permission
Soumya- suhani..but y u haven’t told us…..
suhani- Gauri nd sayyam wanted to tell you all at that time only.. but I asked them not to say anything now.. we decided to tell after procedure is completed.. but….
Bhavna: lekin suhani wo.. letter..usme kya taa…???
suhani- it’s says that doctor had started the procedure n after some time.. they need gauri to keeping the baby in her womb…
All r shocked…
Soumya was crying vigorously…
Soumya- means that’s my gauri’ s child.. I cn get my gauri back.. plz get my child back… Plz….sayyam do something it’s Ur child.. how cn u let ur child die…Plz…
Sayyam was also crying…
screen fades

After two days..mathur family came to BM
Gaurav- yuvraaj …we all came here with some reason…We want to talk u all about something..
yuvraaj- yes plz say boliyee…
Soumya- actually yesterday we went to hospital n met gauri’ s doctor.. we told her abt gauri’s death.. then she gave a solution to bring gauri’ s child in this world.. she said after the process dey can transfer it in someone’s womb n make her surrogate mother…
suhani- haaa I have heard about it..
Sumi- yes..
bhavna- but who will be surrogate mother..
Soumya- krishna…She wants to do this…
All were shocked listening this…
suhani- lekin…
Soumya- I know what u all thinking.. we were also thinking same when krishna told this to us.. we were also against it…But she want to do this for her sister.. krishna also loves gauri a lot.. we all can’t understand what she is feeling without gauri..both sisters were soul mates..
All agreed for it.. then they informed sayyam about this…
sayyam- what u all r saying.. how can u all agree for it.To bring a new life hw can u all spoil a life… that’s is my child also.. I also want this baby..but that does not mean that I will spoil krishna’s life.. she has her own life her own dreams n expectation about life n if u all want that baby.. then we can search some surrogate mother..
Soumya: sayyam by giving birth to a baby work of mother does not finishes.. n only krishna can give that child the love a mother gives to her child.. same love Gauri could have given to that baby if she is alive.
sayyam- maa what r u trying to say??
Soumya-we all know how a society reacts if they got to know an unmarried girl becomes pregnant.. n dat baby also needs a mother nd sayyam is also young he can’t Spend his whole life alone.. so we r asking for krishna n sayyam’s marriage..
Sayyam- maa what r u saying??
While others agree for it but sayyam does not agree..
Suhani- sayyam nd krishna u go n talk.. then tell us ur decision..

In sayyam’s room..
Krishna n sayyam r standing…
sayyam- krishna…y r u destroying ur life…Does somebody pressurize u for this?
krishna- no sayyam it’s All my decision…I want this child..it will be my pleasure if I give birth to my gauri di’s child..and about my happiness.. I’m getting married how can I be not happy.. however dadi is finding alliance for me..so it’s Just like arrange marriage for me.. I know u love my di alot.. n I don’t want her place just give me some other small place in ur heart n in ur life… .I will manage with it.. I will do my all responsibilities of a wife n I don’t expect anything from u.. just now I want my gauri di back n I know u also want ur child…So pls say yes for it…
Sayyam agreed for marriage n After two days their marriage happens as after that had to go for surrogacy…

On wedding night, in sayyam’s room…
sayyam- krishna u sleep here…I will go to another room..
Saying this he starts to leave..but Krishna holds his hand..
krishna- would u leave ur bride alone on wedding night..
sayyam- I think u will be uncomfortable with me in sharing the room..
krishna- y will I be uncomfortable with my husband..??
After that they both sleep on their side of bed..
After that.. they visited hospital n process got completed n Krishna got pregnant… All were so happy..

In starting sayyam was more reserved to Krishna but with time he becomes open to her…he took good care of her n she also care about her husband a lot…he took good care of her diet n medicine… handled her mood swings well..
sayyam- krishna have u gone to doctor.. all is fine na.. u nd baby…I asked u to come with u to hospital but u asked me to attend to meeting… now show me the reports..
krishna- relax sayyam everything is fine.. come here sit…
sayyam came n sit with Krishna on bed..krishna showed him reports..
krishna- seesayyam.. it’s ur child..
sayyam put his fingers on her lips..
sayyam- no krishna..it’s Our baby..
Both had eyelock… Krishna took his hand from her mouth nd put his hand to her bump…
krishna- won’t U talk to baby.. he wants to talk to u…
sayyam starts caressing her belly..
sayyam- thank u..krishna..for giving me dis happiness…
Saying this he hug her..she gets shocked by his action but reciprocate do hug after that…
krishna- aaaooouuchhhh….syyam …aaaahhhh.
sayyam get worried..
sayyam- what happened krishna..or u fine…??
krishna- ya…i’m fine…baby kicked..
Both smiles n see into each others eye…
Both r falling for each other… n one day Krishna gave birth to a baby girl.. they named her as gauri….
After the birth of gauri… sayyam used to remain annoyed with Krishna.. he does not talk to her…He became reserved…krishna can feel it…But she was not able to confront him…
krishna- take these clothes sayyam…Go n get fresh…Its too late to sleep…
But sayyam goes without paying attention to her..
He took another set of cloth…krishna get sad by seeing this..she come in front of him…” y r u doing this sayyam??”…krishna asked…
He again goes without answering her back.. but. today she was asking him again nd again…She was not letting him go…now it’s enough of his annoyance.. she can’t Take this anymore…
sayyam- (rudely) what the hell r u doing krishna.. can’t u understand there is nothing to talk…Go away..
krishna( we teary eyed)- I won’t Go anywhere… First tell me y r u avoiding me???
sayyam- y won’t U go ?? U also want this na…u want to go far from me… then go.. n no need to take tension of gauri..my her father willl take care of him.. u r not needed…Just go from here..
krishna- she is also my daughter.. m her mother how can I leave her..sayyam??? Hw cn u ask this?? n m ur wife.. nd I’m not going to leave u…. First tell me what is reason u r doing so??m ur wife.. u can’t hide things from me..
sayyam-…wife…Really…U can hide things from me.. n can’t I have do right to behave like this ..u r saying urself wife.. had u told ur husband that u had serious complications in ur pregnancy that can risk ur n child’s life.. you had told that doctor if only one life can b saved during childbirth.. had u told ur husband u had choose ur baby’s life…
His face becomes red n eyes we’re Filled with tears.. her face becomes pale..
there is silence between two for sometime..
krishna- how did u come to know about it…
sayyam- doctor told risk during ur labour n told us that u had signed the papers stating to save baby’s Life..
Krishna – sayyam …wooo…Actually..
She was crying silently…
sayyam- Krishna I don’t want u here from now.. go from here…. u thought that I can take care of gauri alone… then fine I will take care of her alone.. here nobody needs u…Its my final decision I don’t Want any discussion on it..
Saying this he left the room…After sometimes he when he returned he does not find krishna in their room… he remembers what he said to her in anger.. he searched in whole house..but could not find her..at last he went to terrace…Nd she was there…..
sayyam- krishnaa…..
She turned around to find sayyam present here… Her eyes were swollen nd face becomes pale..
sayyam pulled her by her waist n put his lips on her lips… n starts kissing her deeply… when they broke the kiss.. both we’re Looking into each others eye… she is still in his arms..
sayyam- r u mad… I was searching u so long.
Nd u r present here…
krishna- u only said to leave.
sayyam- so will u leave me…
sayyam took krishna’s hand nd put it on his chest..
sayyam- see my heart beat.. he fast it is.. just by thinking if something had happened to u.. if really something had happened to u then?? U have not thought about me while taking such a big decision..
krishna- what should I had to dothen?? How could I let my child die just to save myself…Its ur nd di last sign how can I let anything happened to her?? U had married me due to her sake if something had happened to her then what was the meaning of our relationship…All were so happy n waiting for this child.. hw can I ruin evryone’ s happiness?? Hw can I let anything happen to di’s child??
sayyam- nd hw can u let anything anything happen to gauri’s sister??Do u think she would be happy to loose her sister Just to save her baby….soumya maa has already lost her one daughter n if something happen to u also then??
krishna- I’m sorry.. please leave allthat…forget all this.. see.. I n gauri both r fine..
sayyam- no…I want to say something more…If something had happened to u then I also was not able to live.I LOVE u krishna..
krishna- I luv u too sayyam..
Both hug passionately….
Screen fades….

one day Krishna nd sayyam were returning from a party..
In sayyam’s room…
krishna- I will go change clothes…
sayyam stops her n hold her closer in her arms… Krishna looked at him surprisingly
sayyam- u r looking so beautiful In this sari.. don’t Change na..
krishna- sayyam..how can I sleep in dese clothes… this is so heavy..
sayyam- I won’t Let u sleep u today…
Saying this he kissed her lips…she hold his shirt tightly.. he was kissing more passionately….when they broke..krishna was blushing hard.. she was looking downwards due to shyness …sayyam lift her chin.. she was about to go due to shyness.. but he pulled her closer nd hold her by her waist.. he whispers in her ear..”Krishna…pls don’t test my patience today.. I can’t b away from u anymore…”
then he lift her to bed nd both become one…

Time passes on..
Nd they were living as a happy family. Every one was happy…
In sayyam’s studyroom… Krishna was finding some file… which sayyam had asked her.. but she found an old diary written “ LOVE OF MY LIFE” on it’s front page….in it she found her photos from her childhood… n then she found sayyam name written on it…She was shocked to learn that sayyam used to love her from childhood..
sayyam- krishna.. wha happened?? Y u r so late?? Have u find the file??
Krishna turn towards sayyam with that diary..he was shocked to see his old diary in Krishna’s hand…
sayyam- krishna..how u found that…It’s nothing….it’s just…
krishna- sayyam..I want to hear truth n only truth nothing else..
sayyam- as u know gauri n I were chilhood best frnds..but she was just my frnd.. my Best frnd..we both shared everything we each other.. but from childhood I had crush on you.. n slowly I started falling in love with u…gauri was aware of it that I loves u deeply… n I was also aware dat gauri loves me… but I can’t Accept her love as I loved u only… I can’t give ur place to anyone… then one fine day I decided to tell u my feelings soon.. but then we found that u also love someone else .. as u share everything with gauri nd gauri told me so.. then we started to find ou twho is the guy u love…n we found him shivaay…as u both we’re So close to each other.. I was heartbroken… on other side my family was pressurizing me for marriage…But how can I marry anyone when I love u.. nd soumya maa gets to know about gauri being in love with me… n our families had fixed our marriage…All we’re Happy.. I told gauri that I can’t love her.. then she asked me just to marry her nd she will never ask anything more from me as it’s her pleasure she marrying her love… n i promised her to give respect n place of a wife except love of a husband.. n we got married n after that we find out that the guy u loved is not shivaay as he asked for his marriage with anika.. gauri tried to ask u about ur love by u never told her… then one day she came to me n said that she wants to be mother of my child… I was shocked…then she told me about test tube baby…I was reluctant at first but then she made me agree… then we consulted our doctor… rest u knw…
krishna- u r such a lier…Hw could u hide such a big thing…I hate u… I hate u… she starts hitting his chest with her hands.. She was crying loud…He tried to calm her but all in vain…at last he smashed his lips on her nd starts kissing her…She calm down n hug him..
sayyam- I’m sorrykrishna..my really sorry..
krishna- Can’t u confess ur love earlier??? Can’t u ask me once about t heguy I love…..it’s U idiot…Its u… U r d one whom I love…But I know that gauri di loved n u agreed for marriage so I thought u loved her…I love u sayyam…U r my first nd only love..
sayyam- I love u too Krishna
Story ends with a happy note…
Credits goes to Ria (my frnd) n myself..

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13 Comments
  1. Too gud yaar loved it.u r a great writer keep it up

  2. Awesome story

  3. Nairan_kriyam_lover

    Awsm shaani..u have got good writing skills pls do write more kriyam os😘😘..

  4. Fidato

    Wow. ..shaani….Such beautiful os… Really beautiful…No words…

  5. Awww ria and shani😍😍this one was perfect🔥😍 I loved each bit of this story😍

  6. Beautiful and adorable storyline..❤
    Loved this OS..
    Hope u’ll write more like this.. 😊

  7. Wow ria and shani , ur os is too good .I’m a die hard fan of IB and recently became a kriyyamite also thus it was double happiness for me to see shivika and gauri in kriyyam os. Thank u guys. expecting more os.

  8. ahhhhhh…wat an awesum stry loved it..at first i was shck to read dat saiyyam is married to gauri…but d end was beautifull…

  9. AnahitaAnnie

    Wow…now thats an OS. U can’t believe how much I enjoyed it. Especially due to the mixture of my two fav serials… Nice combo of Ishqbaaz and SSEL. And I was soo happy to see Saiyyam’s real love is Krishna…loved it… Always u nailed ur writing….it was a great OS

  10. This one shot was truly ethereal.
    Krishna’s selfless nature and sayyam’s selfless love make them a great couple. The way in which krishna assented to give birth to gaur-yam’s child was the greatest sacrifice ever. Its a great deed and the person who commits it is truly divine. The later part of the story was really fantastic.
    How could you write this uththara?
    I seriously think that this episode was not composed by some human. It would have been compiled by a demi-god. The way you nailed it was superb.
    The love confession and romance was just scorching. Its truly intense and romantic. The romance was beyond the ordinary….
    KRIYYAMASTICALY FANTASTIC..

  11. Marvelous!!! Your writing is just stunning. I can’t but keep smiling after reading your OS. It is really a best one and my fav one ….. Keep writing.

  12. Aarti32

    It’s awesome shaani n Ria.. great story

  13. Wow just wow 😯😯😯😯😯😮😮😮how can you write so good.. I’m just mesmerized…..

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