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Kriyam os

Character sketch
Main leads
Sayyam: 26 yrs old handsome boy… A psychiatrist
Krishna: 20 yrs old pretty bubbly girl… Who love to enjoy her life…
Others
Yuvaan: Sayyam’s brother
Natik: Krishna’s uncle
Suhani: Sayyam’s mom
Bhavna n sharad: Sayyam’s chacha n chachi…
Let’s start
A hospital is shown…A handsome gentleman enters n went towards the reception… He reveals as sayyam…
Receptionist: Gd mrng Dr.Sayyam
Sayyam: Gd Mrng… I’m going to my cabin send Priti to my cabin with the appointment list..
Receptionist: Yeah sure doctor..
Then sayyam goes towards his cabin… While going he helped few ppl with happy face..All patients like sayyam becoz of his helpful n frndly nature…
Sayyam was sitting n looking at a file when priti enter into his cabin..
Priti: Sorry doctor I was late…Actually I went to give injection to that patient..so I got late…
Sayyam: Oh god I forgot about that as I went to meet lawyer today mrng… Is she ok..
Priti: Haa doctor she is fine.. Sir here is the today’s appointment list
Sayyam attend to his appointments
After few hours..
Sayyam: Is it all for today?
Priti: Yes doctor
Sayyam: It means I can spend sometime with her ryt?
Priti: Yes doctor..
Sayyam: Ok I’ll go if needed call me ok
Priti: Yes doctor…
On the other hand a room actually it’s hospital ward is shown one girl was sitting on the bed… Then she goes towards the window n she peeps out..she heard the door opening sound n look towards it… The girl reveals to be Krishna
Sayyam: Hi Krishna
Krishna runs towards him n hugs him… sayyam also hugged her back..
Krishna: I was waiting for u prince…
Sayyam: Who is prince… Is he ur new frnd or what?
Krishna:(breaks the hug) u r my prince…
Sayyam: Oo… So how r u princess…
Krishna: Fine… But u didn’t come in the mrng… One chipkali came n hurt me..see..(show him the inject mark)
Sayyam: Their doing it for ur betterment.. N I said her to give that for u..
Then suddenly priti comes inside the ward to give sayyam his phn which he forgot in his cabin…when Krishna saw priti she starts to shout…
Krishna:(shouts) she is the one…she is a murderer… Tell her to go away… She will kill me als like she killed my parents….
Sayyam:(to priti) go out n wait…I’ll come…(to Krishna) princess… See ur prince is here.. He won’t let anything happen to u.. I will save.. Now calm down..(sayyam hugs Krishna) calm down(point towards the door) see now she is gone… No one will harm u ok..
Meantime Sayyam take out a chocolate from his pocket n extend it to Krishna…
Krishna:(excitedly) woow… Chocolates…
Sayyam: This is for u take it…
Krishna takes it n starts to eat
Sayyam: U eat I’ll come ok
Krishna nod his head like child obeying his parents..
Sayyam went out n took his phn from priti n again comes inside the room and stared at Krishna lovingly….
—-Flashback—–
It was the day sayyam took Krishna’s case from her pervious doctor…Dr.Malvika
Sayyam: What happened to her??
Dr.Malvika: It’s not a too long story Dr.Sayyam actually 2yrs ago when Krishna was 17yrs old.. She found unconscious in her house n police officers brought her here..her parents were murdered that day… Her uncle natik came to visit her several times… He said that she was a very bubbly n talkative girl… Aur Dr. Sayyam according to my assumption… I think she saw her parents murder that night…she is suffering from that trauma…n anther thing…I think she feels scared to females.. I guess… She don’t shout at his uncle n our ward boys but she shouts to me n other nurses as murderer… So I think the murderer may be a female person… I couldn’t examine her properly becoz she don’t let me go towards her…
Sayyam: So now u want me to take this case..
Dr.Malvika: Yes I want u to take this case becoz of 2 reasons..1st is I’m going to Australia for a reason n I won’t be able to handle this case any more nit won’t be successful either…
Sayyam: And the other reason…
Dr.Malvika: She gets scared to female doctors…so no point of giving this case to another female doctor… I considering ur skills n all… I think u will be able to treat her
Sayyam: Ok i will take this case..what is her name?
Dr.Malvika: Krishna… Krishna mathur… Here is her file… Examine it n start her treatments… Thank u Dr.sayyam…
——-Flashback ends—–
Sayyam’s POV
That day by I taking ur file I took ur responsibility… N I talked to ur uncle natik also..he seems to be very nice person… I still remember the first day I came to this room with priti…u reacted exactly same like today…then I sent her out of the room n extend a chocolate for u… After seeing chocolate u became calm..but u looked at me confusedly…. Slowly we became frnds… Then we become best frnds… U started to be comfortable with me… We had soo many sweet moments also… After about 10 months I reopened ur parents murderer case… Our lawyer is telling to bring u back to normal as u r the main eye witness in this case… So I have to make u fine…i will do it somehow…n look today u r getting better day by day… I can feel the change in ur behaviour… Expect ur scared towards women… I will make u normal… Just wait for sometimes my frnd.. I will make u fine…
Sayyam’s thoughts break due to krishna’s laughter…
Sayyam: Why r u laughing?
Krishna: Why r u staring at me?
Sayyam: Becoz u r beautiful…
Krishna: Yes I am.. Becoz I’m a princess…
Sayyam: yeah..yeah..
They both spend time together…
Time passes.. Sayyam was in his apartment room.. He was looking at the sky from the window … His brother yuvaan came inside the room..
Yuvaan: Thinking about Krishna…
Sayyam(unknowingly) yes…
Yuvaan: O really..
Sayyam:(came to his sense) woh.. Mein..bas..
Yuvaan:(while laughing) woh Mein bas.. Kya?.. Will u say something…?
Sayyam: I was thinking how to make Krishna back to normal….
Yuvaan: Ok fine… Sayyam if I asked u r question will u give me an answer honestly…u have to tell me the truth
Sayyam: Yeah sure bro..go head… U don’t need permission for that…
Yuvaan: Why r u helping Krishna this much? U r his doctor..n she is ur patient…u both have doctor – patient relationship n sayyam u r doing ur best towards her… When the day u reopened her parents murder case I felt like u have something more than doctor patient relationship with her.. Isn’t it so… U can share ur feelings sayyam..
Sayyam: ( he start to think for a while) I don’t know yuvaan.. I don’t understand what feelings I have towards her… She is my patient I know… I feel attract towards her.. I feel soo happy to see her happy n at the same time I feel her pain when she in pain..i don’t no what these feelings are.. I’m treating her since 1year… I feel so close to her… May be I consider her as my beat frnd though she is mentally unstable..
A lady was hearing this from outside the room.. N come towards them..she reveals as Suhani…
Suhani: Don’t make it soo complicated sayyam.. Make it simple…
Sayyam: (gets up) maa u here?
Suhani:(make him sit on the bed n she also sit next to him) u r fall in love with her sayyam…
Sayyam: Maa… What r u saying…
Suhani: The things u told just before happens when u fall in love with someone… U just close ur eyes n see u will see ur precious moments with her u love her beta.. N I’m happy… I hope u will realise it soon… I knew this when u reopened her parents murder case.. Bring her here n make her fine.. Till she gets fine we will shift to our mansion… I trust u.. Y will make everything fine..
Then after sometimes Sayyam realized his feelings for Krishna… After 2 days Sayyam brought Krishna to his apartment with Krishna’s uncle’s permission.. Then they spend time together… They both played games..ate ice cream… Watched movies together… Sayyam was falling for Krishna more n more…
One fine day Krishna was sleeping in her room… Suddenly she heard some sounds from a room next to her… Sound of few ppl… She gets up from the bed… She gets flashes of that dark night of her life she started to cry n she started to talk to herself…
Krishna: Maa … Papa… I have to help them… I can’t let them die… I can’t be scared…i’m not a coward..
Then she slowly goes out of her room n peek to the other room…she get flashes how her parents got killed… She see a same scenario like that… She slowly opened the door.. She saw 2 ladies n a man n one lady was facing opposite to the other… One lady was shouting to the other one… Krishna saw a vase n she took it n went towards the lady n hut her head with it…she falls on the floor… She revealed as Suhani n other lady was bhavna (sayyam’s chachi) n the man revealed as sharad (sayyam’s chacha)… Krishna’s vision was getting blurred and about to fall… But two strong arms hold her…
Krishna: I saved my mumma n papa… I saved them..(she falls unconscious)
Sayyam: Krishna..(while patting her cheeks)
Then suhani gets up n asked sayyam to take her to her room.. Then sayyam gave her an injection n went to another room..
Sayyam: Maa r u ok?
Suhani: Haa sayyam…nothing happened to me.. I was wearing a safety helmet so no need to worry… How is Krishna
Yuvaan: Do u think she will be fine?
Sayyam: Can’t tell until she wake up… I have given her a injection.. She will wake up after about 5 hours…
After 5 hours… It was mrng all family members were out at the room sayyam was inside the room n waiting until she wake up..slowly Krishna woke up n gets up… Sayyam make her sit on the bed comfortably…
Krishna: She killed my parents… How can I live without them…
Sayyam: Who killles them..?
Krishna: My aunty…
Sayyam: But ur aunty…. Ok fine.. D u remember me…
Krishna: Haa…. U r my doctor ryt?
Sayyam: ( he felt little sad) yes I am… R u ok?..
Krishna: Yes I am… Thank u so much for the thing u have done for me… Thank u so much..
Sayyam: It’s ok .. No need to say thank u…It’s my duty to make u fine…
Then sayyam take Krishna to her uncle’s place Krishna’s uncle thanked him… Then sayyam come towards his house… Suhani were waiting for sayyam in his room.. Sayyam was soo sad but he is not able to react but when he saw her mom he went towards her n cried his heart out…
On the other hand Natik Krishna’s uncle explained everything to Krishna how sayyam cared for her… She gets all those flashes of their moments…
Months passes
Krishna got to know that her aunty killed her parents as her husband (krishna’s uncle) lost a business deal due to krishna’s father… He has won the deal so she killed Krishna’s mom n dad… N gets to know that Krishna’s aunty was also dead by an car accident that day itself so she closed the case… She used to visit sayyam’s clinic sometimes… N sometimes visit his house.. His family… n sometimes they went to watch movies also.. Slowly Krishna also started to fall for sayyam.. She didn’t knew that sayyam also loves her… But one fine day she decided to tell her feelings to sayyam.. So she called him
Sayyam: Hello Krishna… I was going to call u.. It’s good u called me
Krishna: Really why did u want to call me.?
Sayyam: Can we meet in the evening actually I want to tell u something…
Krishna: Same here I also want to meet to… Let’s meet at the evening…
Sayyam: I’ll come to ur place.. Is it ok..?
Krishna: Yeah sure…
Their end their call…
Time passes
Krishna was practising how to propose sayyam.. She was struggling with words…
Krishna: Sayyam I don’t know when n how I started to feel for u.. I know u were my doctor… I feel so lucky to have u as my doctor.. U were not only my doctor but u were my best frnd during my hard time..one one will do soo much for a person like that… Now I realized my feelings for you I love u sayyam… I love u soo much…
Krishna: I’m feeling soo nervous…will he accept me… I don’t care whether he love me back or not I will tell him my feelings n I will accept his answer…
she turns towards the door n got shocked to see sayyam…
Krishna: Sayyam tum..
Sayyam: R u telling the truth… I mean just now u confessed something…
Krishna:(closed her eyes) haa sayyam that’s the truth… U have helped me when u was mad… Thank u soo much…. I promise I will be with u near u i love u sayyam i love u so much…
Sayyam: (overwhelmed, he slowly went towards her) whatever happened in ur past I can’t change it but I promise I will make ur future full of happiness… I will never let anybody hurts u.. I will never leave u…if death has to come it have to face me first… I love you Krishna I love u soo much…
Krishna: (opened her eyes n saw sayyam with a ring in his hand)
Sayyam: Will u be Mrs. Krishna Sayyam Birla
Krishna happily nod her head positively… Sayyam slid the ring to her ring finger… N gets up n saw tears rolling from Krishna’s eyes.. He wipes it n kissed her forehead… Don’t cry.. U won’t cry hereafter… He hugs her tightly..
After few days both leads to a happy married life with elder’s blessings
The end…

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32 Comments
  1. Mayesha

    aaaww..aaaww….aaawww…what a sweet OS..!!! loved it… SO much ideas!!! where did u get them??? Brilliant.. Just speechless..I think that I am not that much worthy to evaluate ur writings.

    1. Shaani

      Aww thank u so much sweet Nanga… Thank u so much it means alot to me..? it’s a random idea…yesterday I went to hospital…at that moment I get the idea to make sayyam (kj) a doctor..?

  2. Superb….

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ?

      1. Plzz upload the ff soon…

    2. Shaani

      Just now I started to write it dr.. Actually becoz of this OS I have not written it in the mrng… I will upload another part soon..

    1. Shaani

      Thank u so much?

  3. Swetha7

    wow shaani…. different approach,very nice one.we want more…….

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ? I’ll try to give more… Thank you for the support ?

  4. Minerva

    A pristine and beautiful piece of prose. The concept was extremely unique and the presentation was truly artistic. This was a wonderful piece of art enriched with magical words and budding feelings. I have absolutely no idea as to how to express myself presently. The storyline was pretty awesome and was fantastically conceptualised and presented.

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment ? glad to know that you liked it..? thank you so much ?

  5. Naina-

    nice concept ….. surely it would be loved by kriyammites

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much Naina ? glad to know that you liked it…

  6. Such a sweet OS. Loved it!

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ??

  7. Amazing❤❤The story was amazingly written❤It touched my soul?

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much…glad to know that you liked it ??

  8. Superb epi..
    It’s so much related to kyunki film
    Bt I loved this os…

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ?. But I didn’t know about that movie… Anyways u can imagine this as a kyunki kriyam version ?

  9. This story is like Durjoy Dutta’s “till the last breath” I loved that book and what would be best than getting a kriyam os on the same plot!!! Beautifully written!! ????

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ? glad to know that you liked it … I haven’t read that book… Thank you for commenting ??

  10. lovely story….

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ??

  11. AnahitaAnnie

    When I started reading it I knew it was ur writing.. Becoz such beautiful abd intricate details can only be given by u… It was soo adorable.. I can feel it flowing before my eyes.. The OS was really very meaningful and the kriyam was ??? it was sooo good.. Loved it soo much..

    1. Shaani

      Awww….. Thank u so much Annie… Ur these appreciation words means alot to me dr…. Thank u soo much?

  12. Gajaaa…..Bb shani,

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much dr. ….??

  13. great one!!! something different

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ?

  14. Fidato

    Cute OS Shaani….Loved it so much….

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ? glad to know that you liked it ?

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