Kriyam – Love After Marriage (Chapter 02)

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Link to previous chapter – Chapter 1
Thank you so much for your lovely comments on the previous part… Thank you so much for welcoming me… Keep reading… Don’t forget to comment…

Chapter 02
Next day…
It was a holiday… BM is shown… Suhani, Sayyam, yuvaan n pratima was at dinning table… They r having their lunch…
Suhani: Beta sayyam.. I want to talk to u…
Sayyam: Ji maa… Boliye… U don’t need permission…
Yuvaan: But maa u have to take permission from me… Bhaiya took a leave for me… So technically… (saw the elders faces n stopped talking)… It’s ok maa carry on… U can have ur son..but not for the whole day ok…
Sayyam: (to yuvaan) hogaya… Drama king… (to suhani) boliye maa…
Suhani: Wo.. Actually sayyam baat yeh hai ki… I want u to get married soon…
Sayyam: Maaa… Lekin I don’t have any interest in marriage…
Pratima: Lekin beta… U have to get married na… Ur again is also ryt?
Suhani: Haa… Aur beta do u have any girl who like… Meri matlab (interrupted)
Yuvaan: Girlfriend….

Suhani: Haa… Wohi… Bolo…
Sayyam: No… I don’t have any girlfriend… Maa now u tell me..what kind of a bahu u want?
Suhani: Matlab u r ready to get married ryt?
Sayyam: Maa I didn’t said like that na…first u tell me … What kind of a bahu u want?
Yuvaan: Bhai r u marrying for u or for maa…
Sayyam: Yuvaan stop it yaar…
Yuvaan: Ok..lekin maa I won’t ask that question from me becoz my marriage will be a love marriage… So u have to accept my gf as she is ok…
Suhani: Kya..??
Sayyam: Yuvaan u r still not in a age to think about those things…first do ur studies… Then think about other things..
Yuvaan: Ok..
Sayyam: Bolo maa
Suhani: I need a DIL who can take care of u after my death…
Sayyam: Maaa…
Suhani: U just listen to me first… I need a bahu who is well mannered… Sanskari ladki… Lekin she can me modern… I have no problem in that lekin she should have respect towards elders…( suhani keep telling qualities of the bahu she wants).. Aur most impotently a girl Who care about u like I do… A girl who loves u more than anything…
Sayyam: Wait… Wait maa… Take a breath… Ok fine then I will marry a girl who u choose for me…
Suhani: Lekin beta..(interrupted)
Sayyam: Lekin wekin kuch nahi… Maa I know u will choose a best girl for me… I’m ok with it….
Suhani: Ok I’ll find a good match for u..
Screen fades away…

Sayyam was driving his car shown. He is in a traffic. he saw a girl who help a grandma. An unknown smile comes to his face. He come to his sense when he heard horn sounds from other vehicles he drives his car to an orphanage… He gets down from the car n take off his sunglass…
Screen fades….
After sometimes same orphanage is shown whr a girl is shown playing a guitar… Her backside is shown… Kids were dancing around her. Suddenly Sayyam comes thr n wave his hand to the kids. Then kids ran towards him.. Sayyam smiled seen kids. Then that girl who was playing guitar turns. She revealed as Krishna. She also smiled seen kids running towards sayyam..
Sayyam: Bachcha party… chocolates for u guys…
Krishna: Loo aagya… Bochcho ka hero.. Mr.Sayyam Birla…
Saying this she goes away…
Question of the day- Do u guys think Sayyam n Krishna know each other?
Give ur views…

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26 Comments
  1. Nairan_kriyam_lover

    Good going shaani…
    I think Krishna knows sayyam very well but not sure about sayyam wether he knows Krishna….

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much dr… Good guess… Let’s see what will happen.. Keep reading..keep commenting ?

  2. Awwww so sweet…..

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much…keep reading keep commenting ?…

  3. Hi Shaani. Hope u r fine. I could not comment on last chapter due to net problem but i liked it. Thank u so much for coming back with a new kriyyam story. However its a ss, its ok. It is enough that u r back .we can enjoy ur fabulous writing skill once more. This epi is interesting. I think kriyyam know each other. Kriyyam u r my strength was a huge success & I wish u all the best for this one.

    1. Shaani

      Hii Muniya… I’m fine what about you… Thank you for ur welcome… Nice guess.. Let’s see what will happen in the next episode.. I’ll try to upload soon as I can..
      Thank you so much for your wishes??
      Keep reading, keep commenting n keep smiling

  4. Superb i think they know each other next post soon

    1. Shaani

      Thank u so much dr… Good guess.. Let’s see what will happen… Thank u for commenting.. Keep reading keep commenting ?

  5. I think Krishna has seen Sayyam with the kids but don’t know him personally nor Sayyam knows Krishna personally

    1. Shaani

      Nice guess dr… Let’s see what will happen.. Keep reading.. Keep commenting ?

  6. AnahitaAnnie

    Maybe just an acquaintance as they both come to the orphanage and Shaani this is amazing.. The table discussion between suhani saiyyam and Yuvan was really cute.. I am getting so much intetested.. Believe me the story track is awesome…and I love it as much as I loved the previous one..Becoz ur tracks are always unique.. Keep going and can’t wait for the next one..

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much Annie for encouraging me… N thank u so much for ur support… I’m really thankful to you Annie…??????
      Nice guess… Let’s see what will happen… I’ll try to upload soon…

  7. RAOne

    hiii…. shaani happy you stared you new project SS ramjouli……..
    it is clear that man doesn’t know that girl because when krishna was helping an old lady he would identified her their only…. he comes regularly to orphange so… he is famous and krishan must be knowing her…. not male protaganist doesn’t know her ….please ignore my insanity…

    all the best keep your good work….keep writing your best at your business….. your Gulzar Shabh here…. you carry on…..

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ? nice guess…
      Thank u so much for ur wishes…
      N I also wish u all the best… U also Keep writing…

  8. Awnnn ? wat a episode yaar? i think krishna knws sayyam somewat cox he comes to orphanage and maybe sayyam dosent knw her. Anyway its such a amazing concept ❤❤ eagerly waiting for the next. Shaani you are an amazing writer. ❤❤?? keep posting. ???

    1. Shaani

      Thank u so much Anshu? it means alot to me… Nice guess.. Thank u so much for ur appreciation words… I’ll try to upload next episode soon..

  9. Super.keep posting.update soon plz.

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much ? keep reading… I will try to upload soon ? keep commenting ?

  10. Shani superb story line❤i think that ythey know each other?and I’m excited for their rishta proposal??

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much Zani ? nice guess… I will try to upload next part soon.. Keep reading n keep commenting..

  11. Amazing story line absolutely amazing loving it already can’t wait for their encounter n yah I think Krishna knows him but not sayyam ya even if he does they never talked probably

    1. Shaani

      Thank you so much Maria ? it means alot.. Nice guess.. Let’s see what will happen… I’ll try to upload soon

  12. Dinu

    I think they know about each other bt didn’t hv a proper conversation vth each other. May be only Krishna knows about sayyam, bt didn’t talk vth him.dats my opinion bt nt sure. Btw 2dy epi was nice. Loved yuvan’s nok jok.eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi.byeee dr tc

  13. Dinu

    Oh no shit.i’m so sorry dr.I commented on first epi of dis ff yesterday. Bt jst nw I saw dat it didn’t posted here. Don’t know why.so I couldn’t tell u dat tnk u sooooooo much 4 coming again 4 us.n i’m really happy dat u listened 2 ur frndz n started a new ff about kriyam. N i hope dat in future u’ll change ur mind n write another long story of kriyam (sry dr bt i’m too greedy 2 read ur ffs) or will make dis short story a long one.n it’s k if u updated a one epi per day.it’s enough 4 us coz it’s better 2 hv a one epi per day 2 read rather than having nothing 2 read. Again welcome back dr.love uuuuuuuuuu bye tc

  14. Naina-

    Nice plot of the story really keen to know what going to happen next
    I think that kriyam dont know each other but just have seen each other at orphanage

  15. I think krishna knows saiyyam very well. But the orphanage scene nice dear. Family bonding also. Shaani like always perfectly written. Can’t wait for next one

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