kriyam- the love that can really happen (episode 1)


Kriyam-a love that can really
Hello this is sunaina this side. I hv read many ffs and now is going to write one.

First of all let me give an intro of my writing.i m a writer who doesn’t want to leave viewers in an imagination world which can never exist like getting lost in a jungle and entering one’s changing room which looks cute but actually are stupid.

The episode starts with focusing on Krishna, (wearing a simple kurti with plazo which exactly suits her) living in a middle class family and lives with his mother SAUMYA.
She is an independent girl who is happy in her small world. She enjoys her life to fullest and loves her caring ones whose life changes when she get interacted with Birla’s .The camera rolls over her beautiful and innocent face and showing her natural innocence.
Krishna:uff…ab yeh file kaha h

Maaaaaa where the hell is my file pata nahi kaha jakar enjoy kar rahi h
Saumya :yeh rahi.kabhi theek se rakhi ho toh time par mile
Krishna;ha ha ha abhi pravachan(lecture)k time nahi h bye n TC
At the door someone shouts sona hurry up.
Its none other than nandini, krishna bff’she is waiting with her scooty.
Krishna :oh god kya hota mera agar tu na milti mughe.bhagwan g ne badi mast setting ki h teri meri.

Nandini ;sonaaa(pet name of Krishna by nandini)flutter ja jakar kisi ladka ko bol
Krishna:ab hum ja sakte h plsss
Nandini:as u order
They both laugh and nandini rided the scooti.she drops her and goes ahead to her office.
Krishna ;beta aaj toh tum gayi.sahi kehte h tumhe ‘syapa queen.’

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  1. Rockstr

    Nice concept,seems different..update soon

    1. Thank u a lot it really means for a beginner

  2. Aarti32

    Nice start..But where’s Saiyyam..Bring him fast..He’s d hero after all!!

    1. Thnx…hv patience I would him asap thnx fr support

  3. Really like this and the fact u are makimg it realistic! but pls can u put the english translation in brackets as i dont understand All of the hindi just some xx

    1. Thnx it means a lot that u really love it and even my purpose of making a realistic story n I would keep ur suggestion in mind

      Guys I also want to say that sunaina is an other account of naina so pls don’t get confuse

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