Kriyam : kyun karte ho muhjse itna pyar (Chapter 24)

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The episode starts with Kriyam doing aarti.. Krishna gives Prasad to everyone and everyone disperses elsewhere. Saiyyam too is leaving when he notices that Krishna is still covered in sindoor.. He goes over to her and offers her his handkerchief..
Saiyyam : sindoor poch lo ( wipe the sindoor )
Krishna : nahi saiyyam pati ke haath se jab sindoor lagta hai toh usse pochna apshagun hota hai… aur yeh sindoor toh aarti ki thaali se giri hai..shayad mata rani ka aashirwad hai..humare rishte ke liye ( no saiyyam when the sindoor is put from husband’s hand, wiping it off is a bad omen, besides this sindoor fell from the veneration plate..maybe it’s the godess’s blessing…for our relationship )
Saiyyam : oh please.. yeh sab bakwaas hai.aur main in sab cheezon pe vishwas nahi karta..and agar tumhe sindoor nahi poch na hai to mat pocho….jaakar apne kapde hi badal do.. ( this is all nonsense..i don’t believe in all this, and if you don’t want to wipe the sindoor, don’t wipe it go and change your clothes itself)
Krishna : tumhe har cheez mein dadagiri kyun karni hoti hai.. maine kaha na main aise hi rahoon gi..kya problem hai tumhe… ( why do you have to boss me around for everything I said I will stay like this only.. what is your problem.. )
Saiyyam : Tum aise nahi maanogi ( You want listen to me like this )

Saiyyam drags Krishna to their room..
Krishna : Yeh kya kar rahe ho..saiyyam cholho.. ( what are you doing.. saiyyam let me go )
Suhani was watching everything from afar.. she was worried. Yuvaan and yuvaani came to her.
Yuvaani : kya hua mumma? Humare lovebirds kahan gaye.. ( what happened mumma where are our lovebirds )
Yuvaan : kaam hua ken ahi ( did it work )
Suhani : poor aka poor aplan toh ulta padgaya.. saiyyam bohot gusse mein lag raha ta.. dono ke beech mein jagda ho gaya aur saiyyam Krishna ko zabardasti kamnre mein le gaya ( The whole plan backfired. Saiyyam was looking pretty angry they both had and argument and saiyyam forcefully dragged Krishna into the room)
Yuvaan : Oh no
Yuvaani : humein chalke dekhna chahiye mumma… ( we should go have a look mumma )
They all headed towards kriyam’s room when yuvraaj called out from behind..
Yuvraaj : Ek minute… muhje tum sabse baat karni hai..abhi.. sab mere kamrein me chalo.. ( wait..i need to talk to you all…now..everyone come to my room )
Yuvraaj seemed serious.. all three obediently followed him..
Yuvraaj : koi muhje bata ey ga yeh maa aur bachon ke beech mein kya chal raha hai…bahar notice kiya maine..woh sindoor girne ka tum theeno se koi connection zaroor hai..( will someone tell me whats cooking between you mother and children…I noticed outside that you three had something to do with the sindoor incident..)
Suhani tells yuvraaj everything….
Yuvraaj : kya? woh dono ek doosre ko pasand karte hain… ( what? They like each other )
Suhani : haan hamein lagta hain dono ek doosre se pyar karte hain.. ( yes I think they love each other )
Yuvraaj : tumhe lagta he..matlab tum sure nahi ho…aur anpe bachon ki life mein interefere kar rahi ho..( you think? So you’re not sure and are just interfering in your children’s lives )
Suhani : Are hamein poora bharosa hain ki who dono ek doosre ke saath khush hai bas ek doosre ko apne dil ki baat nahi bata paa rahein hain.isiliye toh hum sab unki madat kar rahe hain..aur sirf hum hi kyun karein. woh tumhare bhi toh bache main tumhara bhi koi farz banta hai ke nahi.. ( no im damn sure they are both very happy with each other,they just cant express their feeling to one another..thats why we all are helping them..and why just us..they are your children too don’t you have some responsibility towards them as well )
Yuvraaj : Please suhani yeh filmi wala emotional dialogue mat sunao..aur….muhje batao karna kya hai..main..help karne ke liye tayar hoon ( Please suhani don’t use these emotional filmy dialogues on me…and …tell me what I need to do….im.. ready to help.. )

Suhani was about to hug yuvraaj when yuvaan and yuvaani coughed
Both together : HUM ABHI BHI YAHAN HAIN!! (WE’RE STILL HERE )
All four of them have a good laugh
Yuvaani : Mumma ab aage ka plan toh batao.. (mumma tell us what’s planned ahead )
Yuvraaj : haan suhani aur main bhi iss plan ka hissa banunga.. ( yes suhani I will also participate in this plan )
Suhani : abhi jis tarah se saiyyam Krishna par chila raha tha hamein nahi lagta ye chote chote nuskein kaam karenge..isliye humne kuch bada socha hai.. (just now when saiyyam was shouting at Krishna I realized these small tricks wont work..that’s why ive thought of something big….
Suhani tells them her plan… All are shocked…
Yuvraaj : ( angrily ) suhani maine tumhe apne plan mein hissa banana ko kaha ta..tum toh muhje iss love story ka villain bana rahi ho… had he yaar ( suhani I told you to include me in your plan.. not to make me the villain in this love story.. this is too much.. )
Suhani : toh kya hua har prem kahani mein villain hi toh sabse zaroori hota hain…ab humari kahani ko hi dekh lo.. poore ek saal lage te tumhe apne pyar ka izhaar karne ke liye aur who bhi sirf isliye kyunki tunhara dost rohan villain banke humse shaadi karne ke liye sabko manaane laga…( so what? In every lovestory the villain has the most important part to play.. just look at our story..it took you an entire year to propose to me..and that too because your friend rohan became the villain and was trying to convince everyone to get me and him married )
Yuvraaj : oh please suhani..aisa kuch nahi tha.. main bas us waqt bohot confused tha.. ( it was nothing like that I was just very confused at that time )
Suhani : toh wahi toh saiyyam ke saath bhi ho raha hai..iss waqt humare bete ke andar ek yudh chal rahi hai… who apne dil aur dhimaak ke beech main pas gaya hai.. jab uske andar chal rahi yeh jang woh jeet jaayega usse apne aap ehsaas ho jaaega ki Krishna ke liye uski zindagi mein kya jage hain ( that’s whats happening with saiyyam too. Right now he’s at war with himself..he’s stuck between his heart and his mind..when he wins this war then only he will realize what importance Krishna has in his life )
Yuvani : par mumma agar yeh plan fail ho gaya toh..yeh bohot zyada risky hai.. ( but mumma what if this plan fails..its very risky )
Suhani : bhagwaan pe bharosa rakho yuvaani..woh do pyaar karne waalon ko aise judaa nahi hone denge..sab acha hoga.. ( have faith in god yuvaani. God wont separate two lovers. Everything will be fine )
Yuvaan : teek hai ma. Aap jaisa kahengi hum sab waisa hi karenge.. ( ok maa we will do as you say )
Yuvraaj nodded and suhani smiled..

Back at kriyam’s room
Saiyyam dragged Krishna to the room and went towards the washroom.. He brought a bucket of water and poured it over Krishna….Krishna was shocked… But the sindoor still had not faded.This made saiyyam angry..He grabbed krishna’s dupatta, removing it from her and started wiping the sindoor off… Krishna felt extremely upset and angry at his behavior…
SHE SLAPPED HIM….
Krishna : ( crying uncontrollably ) BAS KARO SAIYYAM….. KYUN….KYUN KIYA TUMNE AISA….. ( STOP IT SAIYYAM…WHY….WHY DID YOU DO THAT )
Saiyyam was still reeling from the slap. Krishna had fallen to the ground…she felt shattered..she never thought saiyyam would cross his limits..
Saiyyam : YEH SINDOOR ZABARDASTI LAGA YA THA MAINE….. ZABARDASTI RISHTA JODA THA…ANI GHALATI SUDHAR RAHA HOON MAIN KRISHNA…. ISS SINDOOR KI AUR KE NAAM KA THA…MAJBOORAN APNE NAAM KIYA ISSE MAINE…MUHJE TUMHE SINDOOR LAGA NE KA KOI HAQ NAHI..( I FORCEFULLY PUT THIS SINDOOR ON YOU ..I FORCEFULLY MADE THIS RELATION.. THIS SINDOOR WAS SUPPOSED TO BE OF SOMEONE ELSE’S NAME BUT I FORCED MY NAME ON IT..I HAVE NO RIGHT TO PUT SINDOOR ON YOU )
Saiyyam noticed that he was holding krishna’s dupatta..He felt disgusted at his own behavour…he went over to Krishna and helped her up.. He draped the dupatta around her and said in a really quiet voice…
Saiyyam : Im sorry…
He started walking away when Krishna called out to him..He turned around and she was holding her sindoor container..
Krishna : Par main tumhe yeh haq de chuki hoon..sache man se main tumhe apna pati maan chuki hoon saiyyam.. ( But I have given you this right..i have accepted you as my huband wholeheartedly )

Precap : Krishna makes Saiyyam fill her forhead with sindoor.

Hello guys.. I know ive been updating slowly but it’s a busy week for me.but here’s a long episode hope this makes up for it. Also please comment and let me know how my ff is going.. rate it out of 10 and do tell me any points I need to improve on. Have a lovely day all you lovely people 

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25 Comments
  1. Rockstr

    I love it..i give u a 10…just update soon…

    1. Nnnya

      Aww thank you dear.. dont worry i shall go back to updating regularly after this week. This week its been hectic

  2. Nnhi… Its oossmm

    1. Nnnya

      Thank you. 🙂

  3. Loved it but want more kriyam scenes ❤️

    1. Nnnya

      hi dear. yes i will try to include more of kriyam. altohugh have you read earlier chapters of my ff it’s filled with kriyam moments..you will surely like those.

  4. pls update d epi soon…

    1. Nnnya

      Will try saniya.. thank you for reading

  5. So good. 10 out of 10 from me ?

    1. Nnnya

      Aww thank you soo much 🙂

  6. interesting track. I would give it a 13 out of 10 becoz it is really good Nnnya. Can’t wait for the next epi.

    1. Nnnya

      Awwwww sooooo sweet of you nisha.. i will try to uplaod the next one soon Stay blessed and keep reading. 🙂

  7. Awesome!!
    Please continue writing.
    Waiting for next chapter!

    1. Nnnya

      Thank you pooja. i will surely continue..and try to update soon. keep reading 🙂

  8. Aarti32

    It was fabulous..A complete dhamaka episode..D precap is superb too

    1. Nnnya

      Thank you aarti dear.. 🙂

  9. Nnnya

    Thank you all for your lovely comments and a special thank you to everyone that rated my ff. Thank you so much for the love i will continue writing and hopefully you will all continue to like my ff.

  10. Awesome episode!!
    I will give 10 out of 10 to your ff…
    update ASAP…..WAITING…

    1. Nnnya

      Thank you sooooo much sanjana… i will try to update please keep reading 🙂

  11. 10/10 it was so amazing?

    1. Nnnya

      Thank you zani dear 🙂

  12. it was really nice but you should include a negative character so that it becomes more interesting

    1. Nnnya

      hmm i’ll consider it nathalia.. Thank you for reading and for the feedback

  13. very nice epi pllz updte soon 10/10

    1. Nnnya

      thank you 🙂

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