Kriyam- Journey From Hatred To Love (Chapter 8)

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So here is the 8th chapter guys…hope you all like it..please please comment guys…I wud love to read your comments…

So it was yuvan and yuvanis birthday….everything was well arranged…the dress code was black….Saiyyam was wearing…a super black shirt..krishna was wearing a black kurti type top and a blue jeans with her hair opened..(like she used to wear in initial epi..)
Bavna-saiyyam…did u enjoy yesterday?

Saiyyam- what?..
Bavna-I mean …me and suhani intentionally sent krishna with u yesterday…so that u both can spent some time together…and yesterday….it was clear from your face that…you were so happy…
Saiyyam- no nothing..like that..and you people don’t have to do all these….both of us don’t like it…
Bavna-really?(saiyyam goes…escaping from questions after questions from bavna..)
Saiyyam(thinks)-yaa…mausi is right….i liked…yesterdays shopping with krishna…but krishna?no way….
but I was…so free to krishna yesterday…I was keeping on talking with her…will she think that im trying to get close to her?mmm…I think I should maintain a distance from her….
Suhani-saiyyam..wat are you doing here…?(saiyyam comes out of his thoughts….)help krishna….in arranging…the dishes….

Saiyyam-maa….u don’t have to do all this….i know u r trying to unite me and krishna…but maa..thats never gonna happen….so pls…maa..stop all this…ill…arrange the sound system….(suhani luks on….bavna comes to her…)

Suhani-di..i don’t know about krishna…but…im sure….saiyyam loves krishna….maybe its not love yet…but im sure….he likes krishnas company…he likes krishna being around…its his guilt wat is pulling him away from her….thats why it will take some time for him 2 realise it….
Bavna-haan..suhani…even I felt the same….yesterday how happy he was…after coming from shoppin…u know suhani…it was for the first time I saw some genuine happiness..on his face…
Suhani-haan di….i hope that soon my children unite….(suddenly saiyyam gets a call from office..)
Saiyyam(on phone)-haan sir…tell…now?….but sir….ok…ill come now…
Saiyyam-maa…I got an urgent call from office…I have to go there..
Suhani-but saiyyam…
Saiyyam-maa…ill come fast…

Suhani-ok then…come fast…don’t be late….(saiyyam goes)
After a while yuvan and yuvani’s friends come….krishna knew most of yuvan’s friends…so she was busy talking with them and greeting everybody…yuvraj also comes with yuvan yuvani and baby…yuvan and yuvani gets surprised..seeing all this…they hug yuvraj and suhani..they change their dress and comes for the party…
Girl 1-krishna….this mangalsutra…?did you marry?
Krishna-( sighs)hhmmm…
Girl 2-this early?and by the way you loved yuvan wright?then y dint you marry him?
Baby-because yuvan doesn’t like behenjis…..(smirks at krishna..)its only krishna who loved yuvan…but yuvan dint love her back…(yuvan comes there…baby sees this..)
Baby-infact…krishna is not lucky..as she dint get yuvan as her husband…and I was lucky…that’s why yuvan loved me…and we got married…(krishna looks on..)

Yuvan-baby…stop all this now…
Baby-no yuvan baby…its your friends…they all should know…how happy I am with you…and how lucky I am…to get you as my life partner…(they start romancing..)
Yuvan-no baby I am lucky..that I got you as my wife….
Girl 1- but yuvan…u knew wright that krishna loved you…?

Krishna-stop all this…it was nothing like that..everything has changed..
Yuvan-krishna….u cant talk to my friends like that…if you have any problem with me..it just between you and me…just because..i dint accept you…you cant take that anger on my friends….(krishna was about to say something..wen she remembers its his bday…so she dint want to fight with him today…so she just goes from there..
Baby-its ok yuvan baby…she is jealous of me….thats why….she is still not over you….im scared..will she snatch you from me
Yuvan-mmm iknow baby….dont know wen she will leave this..and start her life…leaving us alone….and don’t worry baby..your yuvan will always be yours…(yuvan’s friends gets irritated by this and goes to krishna…)

Girl 1-krishna ypu should thank god that your marriage dint happen with yuvan….he just knows….to paster and pamper his wife…he thinks..that he is some hero…wen he is really a zero…
Girl 2-exactly..even back in collage..he used to always think that all girls are behind him…don’t know what that baby saw in him to love him…
Krishna-watever it is its his bday 2day…so v shud not talk…anything bad…about him…
Girl 1-mmm..ok…im sorry..but I was actually saying..that nowadays girls don’t like guys like yuvan…who goes around wife pampering her
Girl 2-exactly…nowadays we like angry young man type ladka….and by the way krishna..where’s your husband?(krishna gets irritated..with that question..)
Krishna-I don’t know…(and she goes..)actually where is he?he was here just bfore….dont know wat is wrong with this ladka..
Suddenly yuvraj starts speaking..
Yuvraj-all attention here…so today its my son and daughter yuvan and yuvanis bday…I cudnt be there with them these many years…so I want to make this day memorable…so everything is there….dance music games..and many more….so hope you guys enjoy…
Yuvani’s friend-what enjoy..?..wen uncle told me that both yuvan and yuvanis friends will come…I thought…as yuvan’s friends will be there..there will be many hotties….but look…all are boring like yuvan…
Yuvani-oyye….you are saying that my bro is boring?

Friend-even if he is not boring..he is married…so no use in looking….(they joke and laugh..)
Saiyyam comes from office….as he steps…in everyone especially GIRLS starts..looking at him….most of the girls fall flat…seeing…him in his black shirt….their eyes..widens….They start discussing about this new hottie..among themselves….
Girl-look there…we’ve not seen him here before…is he yuvan’s friend
Yuvan’s friend-no…I thot he is yuvani’s friend…(krishna was listening to all this…she was confused..)
Krishna-wat happened..?
Girl1-hey krishna..do you know..who is that guy…whose talking with suhani aunty…
Krishna-hhmm…why?
Girl1-don’t you think…he is so hot?
Krishna-wat?

Girl 1-first tell me who is he..?
Krishna-mm..he is yuvani’s brother…(yuvani comes there..they ask them about saiyyam..they ask yuvani..to introduce them to him…yuvani understands the matter…..)
Yuvani-he is krishna’s(krishna looks at yuvani..)I mean he is krishna’s friend..u can ask her to introduce you people to him…isn’t it krishna…
Girls-u cud have told this before only krishna…now come fast…just make a situation where v can talk with him…
Krishna(thinks)-why are these girls bhind him?what is so much in him..that these girls bhind him..
Girls-wat are u thinking….?luk..he is coming…go go go..(and they push her wen saiyyam comes..krishna was about to fall wen saiyyam catches..her on time..they have an eyelock..)
Saiyyam-wat is this now..
Krishna-sorry…I dint see…(saiyyam goes…from there..the girls go to krishna..)
Girls-if..u cant do something..then say that…(krishna feels a bit angry..at their behavior..but she controls it…)

Then there were some games…so saiyyam…was busy with the sound settings..and passing the mic from one to another…the girls..all were wooed…by his..looks and personality….
One girls intentionally..goes…and falls down….saiyyam helps..her
Girl-oh..thanku so much…
Saiyyam-its ok…take care..
Girl-wait..your yuvani’s brother wright?name?

Saiyyam-saiyyam…(she keeps on talking..with..him..krishna was watching all this…she felt some feeling which she dint experience..before…)
Krishna(thinks)-I thot he wont talk….i thot he doesn’t like to talk with other girls…but he seems so comfortable….(that girl say something and saiyyam laughs…krishna burns in jealousy…she decides..to go there..she goes there and clears her throat…they both get interrupted…saiyyam sees..krishna..)
Saiyyam-so you both carry on…(and he goes..)
Krishna(thinks)-look…when I came he went…he don’t have any problem in talking with other girls…
Girl-krishna..i don’t understand what is your problem..v asked u 4 help…u dint help…and now me myself…created situation and got a chance to talk to him….u came and ruined..it…wat was the need to come her now…(krishna was already upset that saiyyam dint mind her..with this she was even more angry…she was about to say something wen…yuvraj announced for couple dance…so yuvraj- suhani bavna-sharad yuvan-baby got ready….

Yuvraj-others can choose partners for your self…but its necessary that all should participate…..(krishna…luks at saiyyam even saiyyam looks at her..…yuvani comes to her…)
Girl-yuvani…can I dance with your brother…anyways..i think even he is looking for a pair….(yuvani looks at krishna…she goes to krishna and asks her..do you wanna dance with saiyyam?to which krishna nods..in a negative manner..
Yuvani-acha..riya..u can dance with saiyyam…go ask him..he will agree…(krishna luks at yuvani..the girl was about to go wen krishna pulls her back…)
Riya-ouch…krishna..wat is your problem…?
Krishna-sorry..u cant dance with him….
Riya-why?krishna…just do all this afterwards…now no time….he mit go with someone else..please…
Krishna-im gonna dance with him….
Riya-wat …?shut up krishna…and anyways…you people don’t even talk properly to each other…so please…(krishna turns to go to saiyyam..when riya stops her..)
Riya-I said I will go…..
Krishna-who are you to stop me from dancing with MY HUSBAND?
Riya-husband?(yuvani couldn’t control her laughter..at krishnas sudden behavior…krishna goes to saiyyam…)
Krishna-actually I was thinking…everyone was dancing…I mean…aunty will feel bad…if we don’t dance…so…

Saiyyam-maa..wont feel bad…afterall she knows everything….(krishna gets annoyed by his answer..yuvani was watching all this…)
Yuvani-krishna its..ok…luk there..he is rahul..my friend..anyway even he is looking for a pair..so u can …if u want…(krishna gives saiyyam a stern look…and is about to leave…when saiyyam grabs her arms…and takes her to the stage….krishna smiles…as he was walking…holding her arms…saiyyam had a blank face…suhani and bavna were happy seeing them come forward to dance…
The music starts…and the couples starts dancing…krishna and saiyyam first feel a little uncomfortable….but then they get lost in each other…the screen fades on….krishna and saiyyam dancing….lost in each others eyes..)

Precap-Yuvan insults yuvraj….

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So guys…..im a bit sad..that I got less comments….for the last epi….please guys…its by reading your comments…i get encouragement…so please…..do give me your reviews..and sorry for long epi….i personally feel this epi dint do that good…I was in a bad mood…so I just wrote..it that way..i dint get much dialogues…so please tell me wher I can improve…thnku guys…

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49 Comments
  1. No it was really gud…. loved it…?

    1. Agddiya

      thank u so much…keep reading…

  2. awesome epi…dint expected dat kridh will b jealous..but let c wat happns nxt…

    1. Agddiya

      thank u so much….ofcourse krishna shud be jealous…..na?

  3. Amazing update as always and the previous one was good aswell plz keep updating I love reading ur story

    1. Agddiya

      thanku so much…im happy that you all r liking it…

  4. Amazing loved it keep writing

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much….keep reading.

  5. AnahitaAnnie

    Of course it was really very good… Sorry I couldn’t comment on ur ff earlier due to our time difference.. When its morning in India its deep night in USA… And don’t worry about the comments.. People might be busy and there are also certain silent readers and I bet all of them love ur fantastic writing..so don’t get discouraged or sad over comments.. Coming back to the episode. I knew girls would drool over saiyyam as he is that cute but Krishna’s husband dialogue was epic..and her jealously was cute to watch..hmm, precap is tempting… And as always I am greedy for ur writing.. Try to update when u are free.. Loved the whole epi..keep posting and we will keep loving..

    1. Agddiya

      thnk u so uch..i dint knowabout the silent readers…thats why i thot…many are not liking..it..butnow i wont b discouraged by less comments…thank so much

  6. Awesome one plzz keep posting..:-)

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much..

  7. Akshaya

    Hey dear this episode was so cool . Don’t make yourself comment oriented type . Get motivated by uploading stories. It will make your writing skills to attain perfection.
    Don’t get demotivated. If you consider comments as your motivation, then less comments are also not less to motivate you

    1. Agddiya

      true that dear…..thanku so much….this means a lot….now i wont gets demotivated…with less comments….cos i know i have many silent readers….so thnks again

  8. I love reading your ff everyday!!!❤❤❤keep uploading!! Can’t wait for the next one!!!❤️❤️❤️

    1. Agddiya

      thnk u so much….keep reading…

  9. Really good episode.Krishna jealously is nice.next part update today only plz

    1. Agddiya

      thank you so much..yes ill update next part..2day itself..

  10. It’s amazing and don’t feel bad because there are many silent readers also

    1. Agddiya

      thanku so much…and yaa i got to know that 2day…im so happy..

  11. It’s True I am a silent reader to, But I am commenting for first time to show my support.
    So, keep up the good work.

    1. Agddiya

      thanku so much for that….keep reading..

  12. Hi Diya ur story is really amazing…love kriyyam jealous about eachother…and about comments, dont get disheartened bcz i m sure there so many silent readers also who read ur ff but may b they dont get enough time to reply. Besides u hv so many commenters who reply and wait for ur marvellous story. So plz keep posting good epis and keep smiling….

    1. Agddiya

      thanku so much…i got to know about silent readers today…so im really happy now…ya…ill try my maximum to post good epi…

  13. Good epi next uplod fast and I think new entry honi chahiye interesting story hogi

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much…yaa…ive already planned for a new entry..but ull have to wait for it…

  14. Ahhh… I love your ff…!! Krishna’s sudden outburst on that girl Riya was amazing!! And kriyam dance!! How realistic ur ff is. Waiting for the next part!! ??

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much….happy tht u liked it..

  15. Hi dear.. Your ff s going just so wow. I wish CVS did the same without messing it up. I love the way u focus on on every aspect. Yuvraj – saiyyam , yuvai – saiyyam etc. Very well done. Just love the way the ff was narrated today. Go ahead give us more update. Falling in love with ur ff. Great work..cnt wait for the next long one.

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much..keep reading..dear..

  16. No no its really good. Loved the way krishna was jealous. And kriyam dance…. i love your ff. Keep posting dear.. waiting for the next part. And dont be dishearted there are so many silent readers. So always keep smiling ❤❤

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much….keep reading..

  17. Ooo wooowwwwww….you described it so beautifully.. fav year…

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much..keep reading..

  18. This is amazing

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much..

  19. Fidato

    Hi… Diya…I know exactly how you feel..
    I’m also in the same situation…When I started… But a lot of people…Told me don’t get demotivated seeing less comments… But I must say ur ff is amazing… Beautifully written…And handling so much characters..With ease…

    Yuvaan…Just like in ssel….May be worse..Lol.. anyway your storyline is really very nice…Keep going…Writing… We were waiting…

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much…im so happt to get an appreciation from a writer like you…thanku so much..

  20. Hi diya… Loved ur plot. I’ve read all of your episodes. Totally u nailed it. Plot related to the serial is the best thing. U are handling it very well. Plz in btw the updates some bond btw saiyyam and the family members also(just a request ). I am expecting a lot. Keep writing

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much…yes…i will try to show bond btw saiyyam with family members…as of now im only concentrating on yuvraj saiyyam…saisu bond…

  21. Hi diya… Loved ur plot. I’ve read all of your episodes. Totally u nailed it. Plot related to the serial is the best thing. U are handling it very well. Plz in btw the updates show some bond btw saiyyam and the family members also(just a request ). I am expecting a lot. Keep writing

  22. Such a fantastic episode n I’ve commented regularly on urs keep uploading??I’m sure there are silent readers ?‍? too

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much…yeah i got to know that now…and do keep reading..

  23. New entry that sounds interesting but will it be a girl or a boy i want it to be a girl so krishna can keep getting jelous lol we always ready bout saiyyam getting jelous i wanna see krishna jelous for a change but its upto to u i will still enjoy the story no matter wat.

    1. Agddiya

      mmm…lets c wat happens…keep reading…thnku so much…

  24. Diya I think u shud make saiyyam jealous because in every ff we saw Krishna jealous. I m Just giving my opinion if u didn’t like u just go with your plans…….I hope you don’t mind…..and yeah I m already commented above

    1. Agddiya

      mmm…lets c wat happens….anyways…there will be a new entry…thats 4 sure….and thanku…

  25. Keep updating because i love it ?????

  26. Woah that was beautiful!!! And soooo cute o my god
    !!!!!

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