Kriyam- Journey From Hatred To Love (Chapter 7)

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Hey guys….how r u all doing…im really happy that you guys are enjoying my ff….so keep supporting….and im sorry many of you wanted..a drunk saiyyam in party..but ive already planned it for another one…in a different situation…so pls forgive me guys….
So heres the 7th chapter…so hope you guys like it…

Yuvraj and Suhani were sitting in hall…
Yuvraj-suhani…day after 2morrow its yuvan and yuvanis birthday….
Suhani-wat..?oh god how did I forget it?
Yuvraj-leave it…u always forgets thing…but I dint think you wud forget this…
Suhani-ok ok…now do you have any plans?
Yuvraj-mmm yaa….when I was in jail…every year this day I used to ask sharad to buy gift for them from my side too….its after many..years im getting a chance to be with my children on their birthday…I wanna make it memorable…im planning for a surprise party…
Suhani-surprise party…in some hotel?

Yuvraj-no in our house…
Suhani-but yuvraj….yuvan and yuvani will be here around all the time…
Yuvraj-its ok weel send them out saying something…today full planning and tomorrow.full executing ok?
Suhani-done….

Saiyyam krishna yuvan and yuvani….were having breakfast…bavna and suhani comes there…
Suhani-look at this…yuvraj…got some tour package….from one of his clients…
Yuvani-wow…mumma…come we all will go enjoy…
Suhani-no…I wont come…yuvraj is having some work..i wont come without yuvraj..
Bavna-and I wont come without suhani…
Yuvan-ok don’t come but we wont miss it…baby start packing…

(suhani and bavana signs yuvraj…krishna also starts to go
Krishna-thanks daidu…I very badly wanted a change…I even told yuvani…that we can plan for a picnic
(….when yuvraj says….)
Yuvraj-krishna…theres only ticket for yuvan and yuvani….the rest tickets I gave back…(krishna feels a bit sad and embarrassed…..saiyyam notices…this…)

Saiyyam(thinks)-why did he not take tickets for krishna…?just yuvan and yuvani?he always says that krishna is also his daughter….(he looks at krishna…who was a little teary eyed..)
(yuvraj goes to krishna…)
Yuvraj-krishna….its our plan…to keep yuvan and yuvani out of house for 2 days…(saiyyam and krishna looks on..)day after tomorrow…its their..bday…so v r planning for a surprise party..so v want your help…that’s why no tickets for u okay?(krishna hugs yuvraj..)

Krishna-I thought…
Yuvraj-I know wat u thot…stop thinking a lot ok?(everyone laughs….saiyyam smiles seeing krishna smiling..)
(yuvraj suhani bavna sharad krishna and pratima.. start decorating the house…..saiyyam comes and looks on…)
Saiyyam(thinks)-should I help them?….will they like if I interfere in their matter?(yuvraj comes that way..)
Yuvraj-what?
Saiyyam-mm…actually if u want any help….

Yuvraj-no thanks….v all r here…weel manage…(saiyyam feels a bit sad..)
Saiyyam-ok…(yuvraj looks on…)
Yuvraj-ok listen….heres the list….just buy these from shop…(saiyyam feels happy..)
Saiyyam-ok…
Suhani-yuvraj…there are a lot of things to buy….how can saiyyam do this alone..krishna you go with him…

Krishna-aunty….me?…why me?
Suhani-krishna…v r doing this for yuvan and yuvani…ur best friends…wont u do this?
Krishna-ok aunty….(krishna looks at saiyyam…they both leave..)
Kriyam were on their way(krishna sat at back seat…saiyyam was annoyed for that..)
Saiyyam-y do you always make me your driver….?
Krishna-I m not interested in talking to you…I don’t need to give you explanation…
Saiyyam-who do u think u are…?
Krishna-saiyyam stop the car….
Saiyyam-why?

Krishna-I said stop the car…
Saiyyam-ok ok…fine…zip….(krishna…smiles a bit at his response so fast…)
(They go to market….they buy the necessary….things…it takes a lot of time..as there were many things to buy….and it was a sunny day..too….)
Saiyyam feels thirsty and tired….he checks his pocket….but realizes that he forgot his purse…. ….saiyyam thot of asking to krishna….
Saiyyam-arent you hungry…?
Krishna-no…
Saiyyam-atleast thirsty?

Krishna-no…
Saiyyam-but you look so tired…cum weel eat something…
Krishna-acha…when did u start caring for me so much…
Saiyyam-if anything happens to you then your daidu and aunty wont leave me…that’s why…cum weel have something..
Krishna-why cant u ask directly….just say u are feeling hungry….
Saiyyam-shut up…nothing like that…
Krishna-ok …fyn..im not feeling hungry..so I don’t want…cum there are more things to buy…cum fast don’t waste tym..

Saiyyam-actually im feeling hungry….i forgot my purse in home….soo….
Krishna-mmm so this is the matter…if you wud have asked me this directly I wud have agreed…but not now….and anyways…u used to torture me a lot….im getting a chance to take revenge…so I wont miss this….
Saiyyam-ok then come fast….finish everything fast….and weel go home….(krishna thinks not leave this so easily…so she maximum does everything slowly…saiyyam notices this….and gets irritated…)
Saiyyam-u take your own time…and shop…ill be in car….(saying this he goes….)
Krishna(thinks)-its fun to irritate him like this…..i wont give up so easily..Mr saiyyam….you will have to pay for wat all you did….(she laughs..)

(suhani calls saiyyam…but his phone charge was low…so he switched it off…so she calls krishna..)
Suhani-haan…krishna…why aren’t u people back….till now…?
Krishna-actually aunty..there a lot of things to buy naa…that’s why?
Suhani-but krishna…saiyyam is not well na…doctor asked him to take rest for two days…I totally forgot about that…otherwise I wudnt have sent him…(krishna suddenly remembers…about that…)
Suhani-krishna..canu give your phone to saiyyam..his phone is switched off..

Krishna-aunty…he is in car…weel weel come fast aunty…ok bye….(she quickly cuts her phone..and runs to saiyyam…she sees saiyyam…sleeping in car holding steering of car….she gets relieved….she gets inside…and asks saiyyam to wake up..but saiyyam doesn’t….krishna gets tensed…)
Krishna-saiyyam…saiyyam…wake up..please…saiyyam…(she rubs his hands…and pats his face….she was almost near to tears…her eyes started filling up….suddenly….)
Saiyyam-Got scared!!!(Krishna gets relieved….)
Krishna-so u were acting?(she looks at him angrily…)

Saiyyam-now I was acting….but if you don’t finish your super long shopping fast…then this will happen for real…so please….(he makes cute faces..)
Krishna-come weel eat something….

Saiyyam-haan..ok….
They go to a hotel there and starts eating…throughout..eating..saiyyam was looking at krishna….
Saiyyam(thinks)-she is just like maa …she is even good to her enemy..….mmm….anyways..thank god…she decided to separate from me…she doesn’t deserve a devil like me…even I don’t deserve someone like her….hope she will be happy…throughout her life….

Krishna-weel go..?(saiyyam comes out of his thoughts…)
Saiyyam-haan..yes..(they leave…and reach birla house….there almost everything was done…)
The next day…yuvraj and suhani…were calling yuvan and yuvanis friends….for the party…
Yuvraj-I hope the party goes well…
Suhani-haan..yuvraj….i wish they both like our surprise…(they both hold their hands..)

Precap-Krishna and Saiyyam dance

So guys..dont forget to give your comments and reviews on epi…..im really really greedy for ur comments..especially long ones….thnku..4 supporting me..and..keep supporting….luv u all…

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12 Comments
  1. Nice episode. Next part today only post.I can’t wait.plz.

    1. Agddiya

      THNK U SO MUCH..NEXT CHAPTER UPDATED..

  2. Akshaya

    Hey that was awesome. I read your previous parts of this ff just now and those were also awesome. Waiting for the next

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much…keep reading…and pls do comment..

  3. Amazing ❤update asap?

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much…next chapt updated..

  4. Dinu

    Hiiii sry I couldn’t comment these days coz I was damn busy. Bt I read all d prts of ur ffs.i’m loving dis ff soooo much.?? Feeling bad 4 poor sayyam. Krishna is being so harsh to him.bt he was also tortured her a lot.so he deserves it.anyways 2dy epi was superb.??loved 2 see krishna’s concern 4 sayyam???. Plz update nxt epi soon dr.cnt wait. Byeee tc????

    1. Agddiya

      pls dont be sorry…i dont like it…..and thanku so much….and pls do keep reading and comme nnting..

  5. Super duper awesome

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much..keep reading..

  6. AnahitaAnnie

    I loved the shopping scene.. It was soo funny and he stood up for krishna…and the shopping wala scene was even more funny… Each of the dialogues is so creatively inscribed that i could feel it coming in live..and plz don’t apologize for not giving the scene rather I am excited for something new.. Sorry in advance If I can’t comment on the next one but I will try my best..actually I am having Socratic Seminar this week in English and I need to do a lot reading..secondly we are having the Romeo and Juliet play.. Here we have to create our story but still keeping ot like shakespeare. I am the director to writing scripts for my actors are taking a lot of time.. Than the stage rehearsal.. Anyways, the way u are presenting kriyam, where saiyyam is guilty and Krishna the courageous one is absolutely out of the world. It makes ur writing so different and creative.. I love ur dialogues, the description of their emotions and everything… Loved it.. Keep going..and I am hungry for the next episodes..

    1. Agddiya

      awww…don feel sorry dear…i dont like it….and thnku so much….and all the best for your seminar…

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