Kriyam- Journey From Hatred To Love (Chapter 6)

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So guys this is the 6th chapter….please don’t forget to leave your comments…

Krishna feels a bit uncomfortable after throwing the mangalsutra and wiping off the sindhoor…
Krishna(thinks)- am I over reacting…?.did aunty feel bad..when I talked in that way…?.(.she suddenly remembers how she threw the mangalsutra..in her anger…she goes to the window…and sees..she…tries to take it…but she couldn’t…she then decides to go out and take..it..but yuvani comes there…)
Yuvani-come Krishna….we will have dinner…
Krishna-haan…yuvani..you go ill come now…
Yuvani-no….u cum with me…maa asked me…to bring you there…if I don’t ..ill get nice from her…so come…(she drags Krishna..to dining hall…saiyyam was already present there…kriyam exachange looks…)
Baby started her plotting on harming suhani by now…so she made all the arrangements on switch…so that suhani gets electric shock…suhani was coming from kitchen..holding two plates…
Baby-mummyji…cud you please on the fan…?
Saiyyam-maa..you go keep the plates….ill on it….(baby gets tensed..)
(saiyyam goes and on the switch…he gets electric shock from it….and starts shivering….nobody notices…as all were facing the other side…)
Krishna(thinks)-does anyone take this much time to switch on a fan?….oho…krishna…why do you always think about him?…stop thinking about him…but(she turns back…and gets shocked seeing saiyyam)
Krishna-saiyaaam!!!!!(everyone turns and gets shocked seeing saiyyam…krishna runs to him….before she could catch him..sharad holds her back…)
Yuvraj takes a wooden chair…and hits saiyyam…..saiyyam falls unconscious on floor…
Krishna-saiyyam.!!!
Suhani ,bavna and yuvani runs to saiyyam..krishna also runs towards him..but realizes wat she is doing…so she stops……suhani takes him in lap..everyone tries to wake him up….they take him to room..and calls doctor..

Doctor was checking saiyyam…all were waiting outside,,,suhani was crying….unknowingly even krishna’s eyes were filled…she suddenly goes outside the house…and takes her mangalsutra….and then she goes to suhani who was crying…she was about to say something when doctor comes..
Doctor-he is out of danger….he might be tired now..so let him eat some food..and take rest
Yuvraj-any medicines?
Doctor-no he is perfectly fine now…its..ok
Yuvraj-thank u doctor
Doctor- your welcm…ill leave now..
(suhani and yuvani goes to him…krishna doesn’t go..she just stands there…holding her mangalsutra…and looks at it..)
Suhani-beta are you okay now?
Saiyyam-haan..maa..im fine..but what was wrong with that switch…was it like that before only…
Yuvraj-no..today morning I turned it on…don’t know what happened..
Yuvani-now stop talking…ill bring something for you to eat…and keep queit and sleep…ok?
Saiyam-ji madam ji…(Everyone leaves from there….suhani sits with saiyyam caressing his hair….)
Suhani-you scared me today….do do this again….ok?
Saiyyam-oho…maa…you are talking like I intentionally went and did this…
Suhani-shut up now…doctor said that you will be tired..but it doesn’t seem like you are…
Saiyyam-why?are you sad that im not tired…do you want me to be tired?
Suhani-saiyyammmm……
Saiyyam-ok ok….zip…(yuvani brings food for him and suhani…all the three had food together..suhani was feeding…yuvani and saiyyam…saiyyams eyes were teary…but as usual…he hid it…)
Krishna was watching all this…..

Krishna(thinks)-saiyyam is behaving well with aunty and yuvani…is he acting to be good..or is he really good…was i over reacting….maybe he was doing all this because of his past….mm but no…I cant ever forgive him…to what he did to me…never..(she goes to the her room….she keeps her mangalsutra..in cupboard…she suddenly remembers something…she thinks to go and ask..suhani…)
Krishna-no…its too late aunty might have slept…ill ask tomorrow…
The next day morning suhani was cooking in kitchen…krishna comes there…
Krishna-aunty…actually…u remember one day when v were cooking in kitchen like this….ur mangalsutra broke and fell down….
Suhani-haan krishna..what happened?
Krishna-actually aunty..i was ..i mean…why were you so..worried when it broke…you were so tensed..and you even called daidu and asked…where he is…
Suhani-its different beliefs for every1 krishna…but if magalsutra breaks..or falls down or even if we loose our mangalsutra…its considered as a bad sign….
Krishna-bad sign?
Suhani-haan krishna…remember that day yuvraj met with a small accident and fractured his leg…?even I dint believe in all these when my mummy used to tell me…but its somewhere…true krishna…mangalsutra should always remain close to our heart..till we die…or till our husbands die….acha…y r u asking all these now?
Krishna-no ..nothing…I just asked simply…
Krishna comes to her room …
Krishna(thinks)-is it because I threw my mangalsutra ,saiyyam became unwell yesterday….?
(She goes to her cupboard and takes the mangalsutra..)
Krishna-mm…I hate him….i will never love him…but I don’t want him to be in trouble because of me…(she wears her mangalsutra and sindhoor….)

Precap-Yuvan and yuvani’s birthday plans and party..

Kk guys….so as u saw in precap….its yuvan and yuvani’s birthday …so pls give me your suggestions on kriyam scene….during planning or party…ill try to add…if possible..and guys…is it becoming boring?…am I dragging?please give me you’re your reviews..even if it is bad….please..

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23 Comments
  1. Nice episode.add some kriyam plz.update soon plz

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much…yaa ill add kriyam scenes…

  2. Like that scene in which baby added the alcohol to the cake and kriyyam gets bit romantic!!but yew can renovate the scene and make it more romantic!!ok enough of my stupid ideas??well done❤this one was amazing ?

    1. Agddiya

      thanku so much…4 ur suggestion…i did not think about a drunk scene….and afterall its a party by birlas….they dont drink….lol…but yeah drunk scene is on way….after few episodes…

  3. Love it. Love how krishna is being this way. She will feel bad slowly and fall for him but hope before that we get some of saiyyam’s point of view like he did bad with krishna so if she’s happy without me then divorce is better and all those scenes and then later krishna realizes saiyyam’s change and her love for him and all. Superb

    1. Agddiya

      thanku so much….keep reading….and keep supporting..

  4. I looooooooooove ur FF ??? keep updating

    1. Agddiya

      thanku..so much..keep reading..

  5. Nice❤

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much..keep reading..

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much keep reading…

  6. AnahitaAnnie

    Dragging? Nah, its interesting..and all the scenes were described beautifully. I agree with Zani.. U can modify the drunk scene or create ur own like a dance or Saiyyam getting drunk and revealing his emotions about guilt to krishna, which makes her re-think her decision. Anyways, u are a really talented writer. I know whatever u choose will be the best.. The episode was min blowing.. Loving the ff…and eagerly waiting for the next one..I know I am always greedy for episodes..after all ur writing makes me want to read the whole day..keep going..

    1. Agddiya

      aww….you always take me high..with your comments….thank you so much..keep reading and keep commenting…im sorry dear…ive planned another drunk scene..after some epis…so here i wont be doing that..im so sorry….but…yaa…ill try to keep you entertained..

      1. AnahitaAnnie

        Why are u saying sorry? Whatever u choose will be the best.. I know ot for sure..

  7. Hi Diya superb episode . I m reading ur ff from the first epi but couldn’t comment before. But i loved this and loved how u show sayyam and suhani bonding. Loved krishna today.

    1. Agddiya

      thanku so much…saiyyam was such a good character of great potential..his bond with suhani yuvraj yuvan yuvani..all cud be shown…but this cvs..were so desperate to show their favourite baby and dadi…and thnku again…and keep commenting..cos im really greedy for your comments….

  8. Aaravjaikar

    nice epi as always .. plzz update soon ..

    1. Agddiya

      thnku so much…keep reading and commenting..

  9. Mayesha

    superb…… Sayyam can be drunked and will share his sorrow with Krishna…wht about that?

    1. Agddiya

      seems like every1 is a fan of drunk saiyyam…lol….including me…ive already planned a drunk scene..after sometime…so dont worry guys…im sorry….thanku so much…

  10. Fidato

    Hi…I was reading your off from first..But couldn’t comment…Sorry… Nice storyline… Liked Krishna’s bold avatar… Keep writing..We waiting…

    1. Agddiya

      thanku..so much and…im a bug fan of your ff…was a silent reader….but ofcourse will start commenting….thank u so much..this means a lot…

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