Kriyam- THE ARRANGED LOVE- By-Mayesha (part-1)

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Hi. It’s me,Mayesha.
I m going to write an ff for the first time. But it wil be small,I guess. I don’t know whether u will like it or not. Here is the intro……..with part 1

Sayyam Birla: A successful, young, handsome businessman . Just joins his family business. Loves his family very much. Age – 27

Krishna Mathur: A cute, beautiful, nice, amiable but diffident girl. A very meritorius student and a doctor . Serve treatment in some slums. Age-25

Suhani and Yuvraaj Birla: Parents of Yuvaan, Yuvaani and Sayyam Birla.

Soumya and Kishan Mathur: Parents of Krishna and Souhan Mathur.

Yuvaan Birla and Yuvaani Birla Rayzada: Both r twins. Age-29

Souhan Mathur: sibling of Krishna Mathur. Age-23.

Abhay Rayzada: Husband of Yuvaani

Yuvaabh Rayzada: Son of Yuvaani and Abhay. Age-5

Ayza Singh Birla: Wife of Yuvaan Birla

Ayaan Birla: Son of Ayza and Yuvaan. Age-5

Sparsh Sharma: Friend of Sayyam.

It was a warming morning with a mild sunshine. A cute girl is showing in her balcony without her face. She is watering her plants in her little but a beauteous garden. The garden was full of various flowers. The girl was smiling at the flowers looking like they were her children who are playing. Suddenly a fresh breeze comes and the smooth and silky hair of the girl comes in front of her face. She gently places the hair behind her ears and now her face appears. Then her mother calls her………….

Soumya: Krishna, is ur wicket bro still sleeping? Just wake up him. Otherwise he will get a slap from me at this
age just like he has got till this age….

Krishna:Ok, mom….. Souhan….Souhan… Souhan..wake up or I
will pour water on u….souhan…souhan……
I am counting from 10..
10…9…8..7…6..5..4..

Souhan:NO,di, plz 10 mins more…I will bring more plants for u today..plz

Krishna:No no no no,hansou…ur name is like han sou…that’s mean ” hundred yes”..but there is always “NO” in
your bakbak 3…2…1..&..0 Now u watch…

After 1 min 25 seconds…

Souhan: Oh..di. What did u do?? I told u na that I will give u bribe.

Krishna: So , u thought that I will be traped just like every time?? Not at all,my little bro. Now, wake up..

Souhan: yea di bhi na. pata nehi kab jayegi sasural..yea jaye to main bach jayu isse..uff…Now I have to wake up..
Ohhnnnooo…

After 3 days……in Krishna’s room

Krishna: ma, u here? Do u need something?

Soumya: oo..Krishna. Today a family is coming to see u for marriage in the evening.

Krishna: umm..ok

Soumya: ok, my princess. Be ready.. Plz go for shopping and buy some new dresses for u .. And also plz go to the
parlor .

Krishna: No,ma. I don’t wanna go. If they like me the way I am,only then I will marry. Otherwise I wont . I hope
that u will suport me in this matter.

Kishan: Ur mother support u or not, I’ll definitely support u, my princess..

Souhan: And also the prince charming will support u….

Soumya: Hence what will the queen do? She also has to support the princess.

Krishna: Souhan!! And prince charming !!! Yea to ek bandar hain..

Souhan: I’m not saying anything just bcz my mood is very happy 2day..

Krishna: Sooo happy!!! By the way. Ma, I have to go to slum today…I will be at home at the r8 time.

Soumya: Aaj bhi!!! Ok..tum mere baat suntiho kaha!!
U’re such a briliant student plus a cardiologist..hence u serve the slum dwellers like a medicine
doctor…

Krishna: Ohho..ma.. I want to better their lifestyle and also wanna provide them with better
treatment..aab sab ko to heart ki bimari nehi hoti hain..to isme aab mein kya karoon?
Aur last time when papa had a heart attack,then I decided that I will be a cardiologist..

Soumya: Yeah,beta.. I know..Ok..but don’t be late.

Krishna: Ok, the queen..

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So,guyz…How is it?

I think it’s a boring one..I need ur consent whether I should continue or not…!!!!
So plz let me know..

AND criticism is always invited…So, don’t hesitate..Bye

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18 Comments
  1. Plz continue its really nice…. looking forward to it

    1. Mayesha

      thnkx a lot for ur support ..I’ll submit the next one in a few hours..hope u will enjoy that..kep commenting..

  2. Please continue it. It’s really exciting to see how kriyam lovestory start

    1. Mayesha

      keep patience Samaria…I hope that u will be keep commenting like this..thnkx..if u have any suggestion,u can pass me that..thnkx again for supporting me..!!!

  3. Nice one.plz continue ff.waiting for next one.update soon plz.

    1. Mayesha

      sorry,actually I wanted to submit the next one yesterday night. But there was some problem regarding my wifi..so,I hope u can understand…BTW.thnkx for reading..

  4. Hey mayehsa❤welcome?and story line is aamazing?

    1. Mayesha

      thnk u..hope u will also find it amazing in future..u r frm pakistan,r8?

  5. It’s nice… Different concept… Keep updating

    1. Mayesha

      thnkx Jenita…thnkx for the appreciation..

  6. Shaani

    Hi Mayesha… Glad to have u..
    Nice concept keep writing…
    Waiting for the next episode..

    1. Mayesha

      thank u akka…thnkx a loooottt…..ur supprt means a lot 2 me…

  7. AnahitaAnnie

    Boring???? Apu, don’t joke.. The intro was part 1 was fabulous..and fabulous concept I wanna know who’s Krishna’s fiance.. This is sooo interesting. I k ow u have exams that why I won’t force u to update quick but I am dying to know what happens later..keep going and have fantastic exams..

    1. Mayesha

      U’ll know that in the next part,appi…thnkx for ur support and the best wishes……also thnks for understanding my situation..

  8. Plz continue this ff. Its amazing .haan but plz update regularly. Gayab mat ho jaana. Apne ff ko complete karna.

    1. Mayesha

      yes,dr..I will continue for sure…I’ll try to update regularly..As it’s a small ff,I guess I will end soon..but I will definitely end it…

  9. Looking forward ?? really amazing. Plx update regularly

    1. Mayesha

      thnkx.anshu..I have already submitted the next one.hope u will like that also..

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