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Kriyaam OS : Proposal & Dance

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Saiyaam and Krishna loves each other and they are going to married in upcoming month.Saiyaam tooks Krishna saying they are going for long drive.

At Nanda’s farmhouse

Both reach at dark place, he made her stand.

Krishna: it’s so dark.

Saiyaam: just hold my hand and keep walking. Do you trust me na?

Krishna: more than anyone else, even more than myself.

Both kept walking, sudden she felt some height under feet.

Krishna: Saiyaam

Saiyaam; just some more time.

She keep feet at 1st stairs, then only her image flashes there.

Krishna: it’s me, but I guess here is no mirror+ dress is also different.

Saiyaam: it’s not you.

Krishna: then

She tried to touch it, image scratch little and her hand passes through it.
She sees toward him, he passes smile.
She take second step, there two image flashes. That is her pic with her Kashish Dii and Sujal jiju.
She kept third step, there again two pic flashes. Her and Shreyash Bhai.
She sees toward him, he signal her to keep walking.
She kept forth step , there her childhood pic with her parents.
She became emotional seeing it.
She kept forth step there was her pics with frnds.
Like this she reached at last step, there was not any flash. She sees toward him.
He was sitting on knees.
She give questionable look to him.

Saiyaam: This time I don’t wanna give speech, I just wanna ask will you marry me?

Krishna: we are already going to marry na?

Saiyaam: yeah but I wanna marry you right now.

Krishna: means? Here but Saiyaam …

Saiyaam: just say yes or no?

Krishna: yes but …

Saiyaam: you can’t even think how much happy I am, thank you Krishna. I really love you so much.

He happily hug her and kiss her forehead. Then Saiyaam took her to garden area where he already collects some wooden sticks and light up fire. Saiyaam and Krishna took 7 rounds and made 7 promises to each other and smiles and sits there for sometime and talks of their future life.

Saiyaam sat on his knees ask Krishna for dance while forwarding hand. Krishna puts their hands in Saiyaam’s hand and smiles.

“Jeene Laga Hoon, Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada, Tumpe Marne Laga Hoon
Main..Mera Dil…Aur Tum Ho Yahaan
Phir Kyun Ho Palkein Jhukaye Wahaan
Tum Sa Haseen Pehle Dekha Nahin
Tum Is Se Pehle Thhe Jaane Kahaan
Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada Tumpe Marne Laga…
Hmmmm… Ho..Ho…Hmmmmm… Ho..Ho”

Saiyaam’s one hand was resting on Krishna’s waist and Krishna’s on his shoulder and their other hand entangled. They dance slowly and beautifully.

“Rehte Ho Aake Jo Tum Paas Mere
Tham Jaaye Pal Yeh Wahin
Bas Main Yeh Sochun…
Sochun Main Tham Jaaye Pal Yeh
Paas Mere Jab Ho Tum… (Twice)
Chalti Hai Saansein, Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada, Dil Theharne Laga…
Hmmmm… Ho..Ho…Hmmmmm… Ho..Ho”

Saiyaam then lifts his lady up in the sky, and then he gets her back to the ground and they dance matching each other’s step. And then Krishna is in Saiyaam’s arms.

“Tanhaaiyon Mein Tujhe Dhoonde Mera Dil
Har Pal Yeh Tujhko Hi, Soche Bhala Kyun
Tanhaai Mein Dhoonde Tujhe Dil
Har Pal Tujhko Soche (Twice)
Milne Lage Dil, Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada, Ishq Hone Laga..
Hmmmm… Ho..Ho…Hmmmmm… Ho..Ho”

They go away from each other then runs to each other and Saiyaam lifts Krishna and made round. He pulls her close and share a eye lock They were lost in each others eyes so deeply .

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Hello Cuties !! Remembered me or not; this is Fenil only. Just proposal idea came in mind so choose Kriyaam and dance sequence toh mene mere FF se hi copy paste kiya hain.I know too short hain but its fine next time when i will come i will serve long OS.Let me know your views.
Keep missing and Loving Kriyaam !!
Love yaa !!

25 Comments
  1. bro I loved it
    i too miss my kriyam
    i seriously hope karan jotwani becomes male lead in durga and then in no tym it will become a hit show
    i love my kriyam and so happy u wrote on them
    fantastic aapki writing ke toh kya kehne
    wow wow and just wow
    u knw i wud feel so small in front of u if i praise ur writing and the way u write on every serial and every character is soo amazing , it shows how well u adapt to the shows
    normally ppl stick to one show n write abt it only but u r so versatile
    kudos i luved ur os and its so great to have a person lyk u on tu
    who likes every character of every serial
    thoda bada comment hai , sorry but dil se kaha hai
    again loads of love to u bhai
    it was aweeeeeeeeeeeesome as usual

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Polly Sissy.
      Your each and every word means a lot for me.
      bas bahut taarif mat karo…I don’t like praises.
      Yaa , I believes in move on but with old one , I saw some ppls still sticks to SR.I love to accept new story.
      Love you more.

  2. Misbah4

    Awesome😍😍😍😍😍

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Misbah

  3. Muniya

    OMG…such a cute piece of writing….Loved it Bhai😍😍
    Just awesome…
    Kriyyam dance is so romantic😘😘
    Song is very nice…
    Ending with eyelock is the best part❤️️❤️️❤️️
    Try to come up with such cute os again and again…😃😃😃

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Muniya.
      Glad that you loved it.
      Yaa will try to write more n more

  4. Fidato

    Wow….Fenil… It’s been long time…. Kriyam almost…Dried up..Nowadays… Thank you so much… for this OS… Please I’m waiting for another… eagerly….
    The proposal really unique… And the dance sequence is mind blowing…. Please come up again with OS, SS or Ff…

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Fidato
      Glad that you loved it.
      Yaa sure i will try for OS not sure about FF or SS because 3FF is on hand.
      Your words means a lot.

      1. Fidato

        Oh…3rd ff.. please tell me which one.. I didn’t get any ff to read…From you..I was so late to come TU..And other also…If you can provide it’s link…Or something…

    2. Fenil

      Hey Dear Fidato , My FF list is as follow.
      1.Endless Love Everlasting Family By Fenu(Kaira)
      2.Do Dil Bandhe Ek Dori Se By Fenu(Ishkara and Kaira)(Shivika and Rumya)
      3.Kaira:An Arranged Ishq By Fenu
      4.Shivika TS:Anika ka sanskari Shivaay.
      Kriyaam OS-4
      SwaSan OS-1
      ManYasa OS-1
      DiRa OS-1
      Ishkara-1
      Naksh,Kaira And Keesh OS-may be 5-6
      Aap bologe uski link de dunga.

      1. Fidato

        I read one Kriyam OS.. of yours… It’s a long list…. Oh my…How you managing your time for all these….🤔🤔🤔
        Thank you so much…For info.. If you can provide link…. then Please…And If you have time..Take look on my ff.. I really wish to get a suggestions from an experienced person like you…

  5. Such a cute os it’s beautiful come back soon

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much.

  6. Fenil glad to see u back it’s amazing os thanks for giving such a cute os

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Mahi.
      Glad that you liked it.

  7. Aarti32

    Bhai!! Mujhe to bilkul bhi idea nhi tha ki ye aapne likha hoga..but it’s so cute n sweet..
    Aage kabhi OS ya FF likhne ka plan ho, to mujhe plzz pehle se bata dena..I’ll wait😄😃

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Aru.
      yaa sure i will inform you.

  8. AnahitaAnnie

    Woow, bhaiya.. That was so cute… I have to praise u for being able to write so cutely on divergent couples.. A big time clap for a stupendous writer and an amazing writer.. Loved the dance soo much.. Thanks for taking out time and writing such a beautiful OS. Loved it..😊

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Annie
      Glad that you loved it.
      Your each words means a lot.

  9. Faeeqa

    This was beautifully written and so romantic! Really enjoyed reading this 😊

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much
      Glad that you loved it.

  10. Komal

    Its lovely and so cute os….
    Loved it a lot..

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much
      Glad that you loved it.

  11. Just awesome… it’s beyond words. Beautifully written!

    1. Fenil

      Thank you Ankita.
      Glad that you liked it.

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