Kranti- A Fire from within ( MMZ) Few Shots. Part 1

Inspector Arjun Mehra, looked at the mutilated dead body of a 18 years old village girl in jungle. She was brutally raped & then killed. Bad odour filled the atmosphere. The father of the girl sat there like stone. He is a blind so, he just spared that he can’t able to see his daughter condition. Arjun’s heart ached. He himself is a father of a daughter. In fact, that father self want to shoot whoever did this. The Villagers murmured that the girl was preparing for her Higher Secondary Exam & worked in Baddi Haveli under Rana Thakur, who is the leader & everything of the village. He is a king maker in politics & his wife is now the head of village Panchayet as it became a woman seat. After sending the body for post-motem, Arjun, went to the Haveli.
Rana Thakur- hmm, The New Inspector. What your name?? haa Arjun. Listen, We don’t know how this happened.
Arjun- I came here to investigate, so let me decide that here anyone know or don’t.
Rana Thakur gave him a cold look than started laughing.”Go & first bring search warrant.”
Arjun looked at him narrowing his eyes. The old Constable nodded his head to leave.
Rana Thakur- Arjun, Do you know what happened with the Inspector before you?? He died in an encounter with some criminals. CBI Investigated the case. But see, Zero result. ( He smirked). I heard that here in Quarter you have a family, a beautiful wife & a cute daughter. But don’t worry. They will be safe only if you don’t get loggerheads with me.
Arjun perfectly know about Rana Thakur before he came here. He never wanted to bring his family. But Radhika, she always follow him in his every posting. A chill ran down his spine, hearing the man’s voice & words. He can do everything. The old Constable beside him put his hand on his shoulder. “No need to mess with him. No one will help you against him. Everyone is afraid including our higher authority. So, why should we care?? Let’s go from here.”

Arjun knocked the door of his Quarter. His wife, Radhika opened the door with a smile. His six year old daughter, Avika, came running towards him leaving all her home work. Arjun lovingly kissed his daughter.
Radhika- Ava, leave papa & complete your homework. Arjun, you looked tired. Go & fresh up. I am going to make tea for you.
Arjun locked himself in bathroom & frustratedly banged his hand on the wall. He stood in front of the mirror but he just unable to face his own reflection, which giving him a mocking smile. He splashed cold water on his face.
Radhika noticed her husband. Whenever, he came early at home, he always spend time with her & Ava. But today, he locked himself in their room. Now, he is eating dinner in silence. After dinner, Arjun climbed up the terrace & looked at the full moon & feel the stillness of the cold night. He lit a cigarette but threw it away as soon as he heard his daughter voice.
Ava- Papa, papa.
Arjun- Sweetie don’t come outside. You may catch cold. Wait, I am coming.
He closed the terrace door, took his daughter in lap & climbed down the stairs.
Arjun- Dear, why you came up? Why don’t you slept? It’s already late. Where is your mom?
Ava ( gave him her best toothless smile, as her upper front two teeth fallen out)- Papa, I pretended to sleep when mom came in my room to check. Today, you don’t talk with me.( made a cry face).
Arjun- ohh sorry dear, in fact, double sorry that today I forgot to bring chocolate for you.
Ava- Today, mom gave me chocolate.
Arjun- Really??? What is the occasion? Your mom seems to be in very good mood today.
Ava- that what I want to tell you. But you did not talked to me.( with a pout)
Arjun- ohh baby.
Ava- papa, I got 100/100 in my Mathematics exam.
Arjun (with a proud smile)- arre waah!!! My intelligent sweetie.
Ava- Miss praised me in front of the whole class that how I improved after last exam poor performance.
Arjun- I told you naa not to give up hope. Try, try & Try.
Arjun stopped suddenly. He gave advice to his daughter which he unable to follow. He is giving up afraid of threats. He put his daughter in her bed & covered her with a blanket.
Ava- papa, today in school, we made so many small, small flags for 26th January. Our senior didis are practicing for many programs. Miss told us that this day is as important as 15th August. It’s our Re….. ( she made face as she unable to remember.)
Arjun- It’s our Republic Day.
Ava- Republic mean??
Arjun ( murmured)- We got our Constitution, became a Democratic Republic.
Arjun looked at his daughter confused face & smiled. “I will explain you later. Else night will be over. Tomorrow, you have school. So now sleep.
Ava- papa, Miss gave us special home work. We have to find the names of Independence Heroes from our GK book & write five lines on them. I wrote about Netaji Subhas Chandra Bose.
Arjun- ohh, that’s great.
Ava- papa, For me, You are my HERO. Mom said, you punish bad men & protect us all. ( with a proud, bright smile)
Arjun bytes his lips. His face fell. Ava encircled her small hands around Arjun & kissed his cheeks. “Love You papa.”
Arjun- Good Night Sweetie.
Arjun lovingly caress her forehead, switched off the light & came outside closing the door.

Hey Madhumita again. How are you all?? First , I thought made it a OS. But when I started writing, many things came in my mind. So, I am making it few shots. 26th January Special. Update length will be short, coz of my busy schedule. Want Honest Opinions. Plan to Start writing Checkmate again. Anyone Interested???

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  1. Your varrious ff are pendin like checkmate,lethal deal and aa
    I want you to write aalllllaalll your pending ff pls write them plssssssssssssssssss

    1. Madhumita

      Yes, Will surely complete all my pending FFs. Thanks for remembering almost all. Well, going to start with my first one Checkmate.

  2. Hiiii I’m Ritwika…..I’m new in this page.i loved your story line….i think it’s a true face of our society n politics…… Waiting 4 next update… soon….

    1. Madhumita

      Hiii Ritwika. Welcome here. Thanks for reading & commenting. Glad that you liked & relate with our society. Will update soon. Loads of Love.

  3. Nice start di.please come with next one soon

    1. Madhumita

      Thanks Chashni. Glad that you liked it. Will post the next update soon. Loads of Love.

  4. Brin

    Outstanding Shot, I would love to read all your ff, when ever you have time, waiting eagerly. ?

    1. Madhumita

      Heyy Brin. How are you?? Got your msg. Will soon read your new story & let me tell you I finished reading Rectify & it’s awesome. Thanks for reading & commenting here. Glad that you liked. Will try to update all my FFs.

  5. Sulbi

    Fantastic dear…

    1. Madhumita

      Thanks Sulbi.

  6. Aasthu

    Hey !!!!!! Back again with an intruguing plot…….u properly depicted today’s society….even though officers wish to do justice, the fear for the safety of their family they refuse to do so……..well though checkmates is an ArSam ff…I’m interested….u should also continue all that you have left behind….never leave a work incomplete…..u started an ardhika ff didn’t u?? Rads marrying Arjun who has a past and how he freaked out on first ni8 as he didn’t get his sleeping pills ???????? can u update that if possible 1st?????

    1. Madhumita

      Hii Aasthu. Thanks for the lovely comment. Glad that you liked the plot. Thanks for loving Checkmate. Will complete all my stories. Yes, that’s Ar-Dhika short story is JUST FOR U. Soon, I will update. But, first I will complete this one as it’s a few shots. Loads of Love.

  7. Good one…… Do continue…. Your story is a bit different… Seems patriotic…. Waiting for the next episode ?

    1. Madhumita

      Thanks for commenting. Glad that you liked it. Not much good in writing love stories. That’s why, try different. Patriotic?? Well, U will decide. Will Update the next part soon.

  8. Jnana

    Hey!! Your FFS are beautiful…. Pls do complete all of them…. We are waiting for you to post…. And this one is just awesome…. Waiting for the next….

    1. Madhumita

      Thanks, thanks Jnana for appreciating all my FFs. Will surely continue them. Thanks again for liking this one. As it a few shots, so first complete this one. Update coming up soon. Loads of Love.

  9. arti viswanathan

    Outstanding episode madhumita dear…. I lived it… I liked all the scenes…tc loads of love to u from me…..

    1. Madhumita

      Thanks Arti for your lovely comment. Glad that you liked all the scenes. Loads of Love to U too. Will surely continue with next part.

  10. Sammy

    You write something new??????me fangirl mode on?????this was so lovely. ..madhu ….awesome?????superb se uper …pls update rest soon and take your time ..i will wait for your ff????

    1. Madhumita

      Heyy Sammy, how are U?? First I want to read all you stories & want to steal some romance from them. Yes, something new. Not stopped myself from writing this one. First thought as OS, then many things came in my mind. Thanks for reading & loving. Will try to live up to your expectation. Next part, coming soon. Thanks, that will wait. I am soon coming up with Checkmate & another one, which I still now not decided. Loads Of Love.

  11. nice plot. interesting. Whoever did that to that girl, they should be punished.

    1. Madhumita

      Thanks Moni. Glad that you liked it. Lets see, the culprits get punished or not.

  12. Jewel

    this plot is really nice madhu…. really interesting and it is different…. liked it a lot…. waiting for next one…. plz try to post ur ardhika story just for u also….

    1. Madhumita

      Heyy Jewel, Thanks for your lovely comment. Glad that you find it’s interesting. Will surely Update soon. Yes, will try to update JUST FOR U soon.

  13. Hi Madhu it was awesome ..???n plz complete your previous one also Ithas been many days missed you????

    1. Madhumita

      Heyy Shreya. missed all you too. Will surely complete all my incomplete stories. Thanks for liking this one. Loads Of Love.

  14. Gianna

    Madhuuuuuuuuuuuuu, missed you so much. Happy new year.
    From the first paragraph itself I had a feeling it was you and I was right. You always have these kind of concepts that make one thinks.
    Awesome update, you have depicted human emotions in the most natural way. Arjun knows what he is supposed to but fears for the safety of his family, but his own daughter reminds him of his duty, so sweet. Waiting for the next one.

    1. Madhumita

      Heyy Gia, How are U dear??? Missed you too. Started reading the epilogue & soon read Chasing Destiny. Welcome Back. Happy 2017 to U too. Thanks for liking the update & for the sweet comment. Will update the next part soon.

  15. Hemalattha

    Really good to hear that our aradhika have kid. Awesome dear. Continue. Make ardhika’s romantic scenes.

    1. Madhumita

      Thanks for the lovely comment. Glad that you liked. The Story is not Romantic One. But definitely U can find glimpses of romance in upcoming updates.

  16. Samreen246

    guys guya guys
    i found this awesome fan fiction called drawn together and later name changed to strings of hearts ….. can any1 pls give me the link of all it’s chapter or pls help me find chapter 16 !!!!!

    1. Madhumita

      Sorry Samreen, I don’t think I can help you. I am not that much regular here. Please ask some member who is a regular reader here. Thanks.

  17. Sreee

    Madhu di….. woooooow i missed u soooo sooo much.. how r u di?…a new story?.. that’s just soooo awesome to hear it from u…..u know, i just started jumping seeing ur name meaning ur comeback…Wooow, how more could my day be awesome….. this update was superb… arjun’ helplessness due to that big shot was soooo realistically penned… his family was sooo cute….and ava, was a cute little angel to remember him of his duty.. am just now soo much waiting, to know wats going to happen next….. oh god, di u r asking us if u shld continue or we r interested?.. wat a que di?… ofcourse we all r sooooo eager for ur stories…and Checkmate is my favvvvvv …pls di, i know u r busy still if u can na…update small chaps of ut di..plsss..pretty pls…love u sooo much….muahhh… bear hugs?????

    1. Madhumita

      heyy Sreee, How are you dear?? ohh, I too missed all of you. I am fine. Yes, first I planned it as an OS. But when I started writing, many things came in my mind, So, I thought to make it a few Shots. A big thanks for accepting the concept. Thanks for liking this Arjun & his family.Yes, I soon will be coming back with Checkmate. I need to wrap up my stories. Let me first finish this one. Thanks again for such a lovely, inspiring comment. Loads of Love to you too.

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