KOI MIL GAYA – SWASAN FS

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KOI MIL GAYA – SWASAN FS

A little wooden house is seen…There we can see a man in his mid 20’s trying to calm his lil daughter…The man took the baby in his one arm as she is nearly one month…while with other hand he is poking his hairs…

” abh…aa…ham…ham…kya karun…my…my daughter is crying…baby….see…ham…ham…hmm papa….kya karun…i m also like u na…plzzz….dont cry baby…” said person while the baby cries more loud…

He made the baby lay in the cardle…he gives some syrups..in that effect the baby slept…He bends near the cardle nd pats the baby…

” baby…..tum…tum…hmm…u sleep…ham…papa is here na..” said the man nd getsup he goes towards the shelf nd arranges the medicines…while poking his hairs inbtw…

after sometime he takes the baby nd left for his work….This is their daily routine….

LEAP OF FOUR YEARS
The same wooden house…the same scenerio but thiz a time a lil diffrence…the man is running while a cute baby girl of four yrs is chasing the man with a stick in her hand…

” papa stop….eat this tablets…than only ur fever will leave u…papa plzzz stop na…” said the girl while running behind the man…but the seems to be not affected…he is running while waving his hands in a no…nd poking his hairs…

” nhi nhi ishu…that…that table will be bitter…what if i…i…get dizzy…no…nhi…nhi…ishu…me ye tablets nhi kalunga..nhi kalunga…nhi kalunga…matlab nahi kalunga…” said the man while running…

” papa…sanskar is good boy na…!! ” said ishu while stopping…to which sanskar also stops nd nods…” than come nd eat this medicines..” said ishu while putting her hands in her waist..!!

” nhi..nhi…me nahi kalunga…” said sanskar nd again starts to run…!! ishu gave a pissed off sigh nd shouts ” ahhh papa..” she fell on the floor…!! Sanskar came runningly to her…!! He sits beside her…!! Nd takes her in his lap…!!

” ishu…tum…u…what happened to u baby…!! ” says sanskar with a innocent look..!! ” now i got u..!! ” said ishu while holding his hands..!! ” u cheated me..!! ” sanskar said while pouting..!!

Ishu holds his face..!! ” papa is good boy na ( sanskar nods )…plzz take tablets for ur baby..!! ” said ishu while holding his chin..!! Ishu gives him tablets while sanskar made faces..!! Ishu hugs him..!!

“U r the best papa..!! “Said ishu..!! ” ham…ham..hmm u r the best.. baby…!! ” said sanskar while taking her in his arms and getting up..!!
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SANSKAR : Father of a baby girl…he dont know his surname,,his parents anything…!! he is mentally unstable…!! his wife kavitha died during delivery…!! now sanskar is taking care of his daughter..!!

ISHITHA SANSKAR : daughter of sanskar…!! now 4 yrs going to be 5 soon..!! Or we can say the caretaker nd mother of sanskar..!!
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Sanskar takes her in his arms..!! Both gets ready soon they both reaches the school where sanskar is working as a violin teacher..!! Sanskar straightly goes towards the principle room..!!

“Gud gud morning aadharsh bhaiya..!! ” said sanskar while entering the princi room with ishu in his one arm..!! Nd a tiffin carrier in other hand..!! Aadharsh takes ishu in his arms..!!

“Gud morning sanskar..!! Gud morning princess..!! What did ur papa ate his tablets today..?? ” asked adharsh..!! ” haan uncle u know..!! Today he did a big drama..!! ” said ishu while spreading her hands in air..!!

” oh acha..!! Acha sanskar u go to 10B today u have to teach them only..!! ” said adharsh..!! ” bhaiya…phar..wo…!! They are big big childrens na..!! ” said sans with puppy eyes..!!

” sanskar dont worry..they wont do anything ok..!! Go..!! Nd keep this in ur mind u r their teacher ok..!! U should not afaird of them..!! ” said adharsh in a stern voice..!!

Sanskar nods like a obeyed kid nd leaves while again nd again chantting “i m their teacher..!! I should not afaird of them..!! I m their teacher..!! I should not afaird of them..!! ” sans chatting this continuously while entering 10B…!!

While he entering the class a paper ball came nd hit his head..!! Sanskar shivers he turns again nd was about to run..!! Again adarsh’s word rang in his mind..!!

He chant ” i m their teacher..!! I should not afaird of them..!! ” sans said nd steps in..!! All students sees him nd smirks..!! Some starts to laugh at him..!! Some is making fun of him..!!

Sanskar walks in with shivering hands nd legs..!! He goes in..!! Nd kept the bag in table nd took out the violin..!! ” chil…childrens…!! Hamm..hamm…!! Plzz take ur violins ” said sanskar with shivered voice…!!

” are u going to teach us…!! Guys see this mad is gonna teach us..!! ” said a boy while laughing at sanskar..!! ” i m…i m…i m not mad..!! I m ur teacher..!! ” said sanskar while looking down..!! Nd griping the violin stick tightly..!!

” oh u r a teacher..!! So we should respect u na..!! ” said the boy..!! ” haan..!! U have to respect me..!! Adarsh bhaiya told me that i m ur teacher..!! ” said sanskar still gripping the stick in his palms..!!

” oo acha..!! So guys come lets show our TEACHER,,what is respect..!! 1..2..3 start..!! ” saying so he throws a paper ball on sans..!! Another boy split ink on sans..!! Like wise evrey students starts to throws papers nd ink on him..!!

Sanskar shivers…!! “Nhi..!! I m ur teacher..!! Adarsh bhaiya told me..!! ” but the students are not effected they are throwing it continuously..!! Sanskar crosses his hands..!! Nd sits down while crying..!!

Sanskar was sobbing while chantting ” I M THEIR TEACHER
..!! I M THEIR TEACHER..!! ” but the students seems not affected..!! Suddenly they stops hearing a voice..!!

” What the hell..!! ” said a lady while standing infront of sanskar..!! ” yeh tho nayi teacher hai na..!! ” said a boy..!! ” yeah she is SWARA mam..!!” Another boy murmured..!!

” what the hell..!! U all are students is this a way to behave with ur teacher..!! For god sake understand this he is ur teacher..!! First learn how to behave with ur teacher..!! ” swara said sternly nd turns to sanskar who is shivering while closing his eyes nd chanting ” I M THEIR TEACHER…!! I M THEIR TEACHER..!! ”

Swara bends nd touches his hands..!! Sanskar immediately hugs her..!! Nd chants ” I M THEIR TEACHER..!! ” swara didnt hug him back..!!

He shivering like hell..!! Swara parted from him nd made him stand..!! All the while sanskar is only saying “I M THEIR TEACHER..!! I M THEIR TEACHER..!! ” Swara takes him to princi room..!!

Adarsh who is chatting with ishu getsup seeing swasan..!! ” Swara kya hua..!! Sanskar what are u doing here dont u go to class..!! ” said adarsh..!! ” actually sir wo..!! He is lil afaird thats it..!! ” said swara while making sans sit in the chair..!!

“Hmm..!! ” adarsh nods..!! “Papa kya hua apko..!! ” asked ishu while cupping sans face..!! “I M THEIR TEACHER na ishu..!! But see..!! They..!! They are not..!! Not listening to me..!! They are..!! They are beating me..!! ” said sanskar while hugging ishu by her waist who is sitting in the table..!!

Swara is seeing sanshu ( sans + ishu ) being amazed the way ishu taking care of sanskar..!! Adarsh came towards swara..!! ” i know swara u r really confused..!! Come let me xplain u..!! ” said adarsh while both left the room..!!
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SWARA MALIK : A bubbly kind hearted girl..!! Completed her b.ed..!! Now joined the red mount convent as science teacher..!! Her father is the no.bussiness man in india..!!

ADARSH MAHESHWARI : Principle of red mount..!! Knows sanskar from the past 7 yrs as kavitha is his sister..!! Loves sanskar nd ishu..!!
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Thats it guys..!! Actually i planned it as a os only but nowadays here swasan ffs are so less..so i cant let my swasan to loose that much easily..!! So i m writing this as fs from my side..!! This iz not only writers duty u guys readers also needs to support us hope u guys will support me..!! And yeah suggest me sm title for this..!! Do cmnts..!! Babye..!!

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54 Comments
  1. Sus

    awesome dear, dont worry dear swasan ff doesn’t affect their fandom
    Swasan is not just a couple on tv screen which their fans liked or loved them
    Swasan are inspiration for the people, how a person should and how a person should be positive towards everything, etc.

    For swasan fans marriage, love, relations and their heavenly couple Matters alot.

    1. Mahavir

      yes dear ofcourse our swasan is THE BEST..!! nd thank u..!!

  2. Asha

    Hey Chellakutty how are you ?new story at first I thought it was that vikram movie after reading fully I realised it was not that…. concept nice waiting for next part.. how is your studies going….. I think you forgot me???

  3. Asha

    I forgot something ?????? for your fs

    1. Mahavir

      oye u idiot how can u thought that i ll forgot u..!! huh..!! i m angry on u..!! aanalum nan unkita kepen..!! how are u..!! nd yeah first idhu andha strya,dhan represent pannichu but its not that..!! keep reading love u..!!

      1. Asha

        Hehe sorry apadi kepaen nu nenachina athu nadakavae nadakathu…… and you know today I made yummy yummy mushroom biriyani I won’t give u ????

    2. Mahavir

      hahaa adha neeye vachiko inga already inaiku biriyani dhan..!! heheee

  4. Loved it…and don’t worry di I am also a swasan lover and will support you always…regarding the title I am not getting any suitable name sorry…will you accept me as your supportive little sister maha di ?

    1. Mahavir

      awww thank u..!! lil sissy i would love to get another lil sissy..!!

  5. Awesome dear….. Swara as techer want to c how vll she fall fr him…. Yup now a days swasans r too low…thanq sooo much fr this stry….its tooo goood continue sooon

    1. Mahavir

      thank u dear..!!

  6. Rachna

    Awsm Dr… Update soon next part

    1. Mahavir

      thank u dear…!! :-*

  7. Pummy

    Awesme plz post nxt pdrt jaldi

    1. Mahavir

      thank u dear…!! will post soon :-*

  8. awesome starting dr i think it is very emotional story n i m very eager 2 read further keep writing

    1. Mahavir

      thank u dear…!! :-*

  9. awesome update next part soon

    1. Mahavir

      thank u dear…!! will post soon :-*

  10. Yes nowdays there are many ragsan ff . Thanks for a swasan fs . It was awesome .

    1. Mahavir

      thank u dear…!! :-*

  11. nice dear

    1. Mahavir

      thank u dear..!! :-*

  12. hey maha even i am a swasan fan and i love them dearly yes its true that nowadays swasan ff are decreasing. but swasan is a magical pair and they can never fade from our heart.
    we all the swasan fans will come together and revive their love

  13. and regarding this ff the concept of story is really different it is a love story which is beyond love so you can name it as
    A RELATIONSHIP BEYOND LOVE OR A LOVE STORY BEYOND LOVE.
    its just a suggestion or else its your wish what to name it

    1. Mahavir

      thank u soo much dear..!! thank u for the suggestions..!! :-*

  14. SNY

    Superb thangachi???Na frst deiva thirumagal movie nu nenachen?????ana idhu semmaya irukku idha stry ?? sikiram post pannuma maha????????tc thangachi..!!!

    1. Mahavir

      hahaaa thank u akka..!! :-*

  15. Raina

    this is very nice! i remembered a tamil film reading this.. not everything.. but only the part the the hero is mad and the daughter is taking care of him..
    umm.. you can keep the title as: “their love is indescribable!”
    because i know it is a love story.. so swara will love a mentally unstable person! so their love is so pure.. so true with millions of emotions!
    just a suggestion of mine.. otherwise your wish..

    1. Mahavir

      thank u sago..!! will definetly take ur suggestions…!! :-*

  16. Arshaanya

    Loved it..
    Continue soon

    1. Mahavir

      thank u..!! :-*

    1. Mahavir

      thank u a..!! :-*

  17. nice one..

    1. Mahavir

      thank u kumu..!! :-*

    1. Mahavir

      thank u sri..!! :-*

  18. Simi

    Loved it

    1. Mahavir

      thank u simi..!! :-*

  19. Aarushi_99

    I LOVED this! Reading the title, I first thought it would be based on “Koi Mil Gaya” movie, but it’s totally different…
    It’s true, SwaSan ff’s are deceasing day by day but it’s mostly because SwaSan fans are leaving TU and moving to Wattpad..
    Anyways, waiting to read upcoming chapters of your FF..
    Update soon, take care! 🙂

    PS: I SUCK at suggesting names…

    1. Mahavir

      hahaaa thank u aru…!! :-*

  20. Superb….!!!! New concept…!!!! Continue dear we swasan fans r here to support u…!!!! I am also wondering dat why swasan ffs hv become less nowadays….?? But dont worry we can nvr evr forget dem….

    1. Mahavir

      yeah dear..!! thank u so much..!! :-*

  21. Hi maha it’s so nice when I start to read I think it’s vikram movie but it have some changes

    1. Mahavir

      thank u priya..!! :-*

  22. Scooby

    Fabulous dr ?? im loving it ?? yup swasan wil never fade but ppl r moving from here to watpad which makes me feel bad.. But we cnt force them right?? but i will “TUnian forever” ?

    1. Mahavir

      thank u akka love u..!! yes we r tuian forever…!! :-*

  23. nice…

    1. Mahavir

      thank u veena..!! :-*

  24. Seebu_s

    loved it dear…u r girl or boy?sorry for this stupid doubt??

    1. Mahavir

      omgggggg…!! i m a girl only..!! 🙁

  25. Awesome dear

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