Koi aapsa Abhigya,Swasan,Tanshi FF Part 17,18 (Ending)

Friends..I am very happy that you all gave me detailed comments last time.It really encourages me.Special thanks to Sethidisha002,Heatsha8176,Piyali,Kavita,Aheli,Arshi,Shreya,Minu,Nirmal,Ayushi for detailed comments.Thanks to Princesskrisha, Soujanya, CuteVanshu 4 commenting.Really surprised to know that there r many TanShi readers too.Because all Tanshi writers discontinued their TanShi ffs because of no comments.But I’m glad that I got good encouraging tanShi readers.I dedicate these 2 chapters to the TanShi fans especially Ayushi and aqsa who want TanShi scenes.

Part-17….Sanskar’s fiancee eloped with another guy. every1 becomes sad.pepsi gang consoles Sanskar. Damini goes near Sanskar:don’t worry son.
SANSKAR:i’m not sad mumma.this is nothing compared 2 the pain i had years ago when my luv did’nt hav any value.
Swara weeps as she understands that Sanskar is talking about Swara telling him that she will accept him only if she becomes a famous foot ball player. all others especially Damini becomes sad.
D:everything happens 4 good.ur wedding is cancelled 4 good.god created this situation 2 fulfil ur biggest dream.
SANSKAR:my biggest dream was 2 become a football player.now i’m a popular football player.
D:u had another dream 4 which u were even willing 2 sacrifice ur career.Ur luv.u’ve only luved 1 girl ie Swara.
Sanskar,Swara & others were staring at damini.
Sanskar:I loved Swara.But my love was not valued by her.
Swara weeps.
D:don’t misunderstand Swara anymore.she loved u sincerely.but misunderstanding her luv,i was rude 2 her.i requested her 2 leave u.she was carried away by my tears.that’s why she avoided u.
Sanskar was shocked:mumma..
Damini cries silently:Sorry beta.I did’nt realize that time that Swara was a gem.I thought she will ruin you.That’s why I did that.
Sanskar is very sad.He looks at Swara.

Oh dil se dil ka rishta juda
Pal do pal mein mitta nahi
Bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi
Bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi

Sans:Without knowing the truth I hurt you.Sorry..
Swara:No Sanskar…
Both are in tears.

Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain

They share an emotional eye lock.
In aankho se har aansu
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain

D:I want to correct my mistake,Sanskar..2day ur wedding will take place.the bride will be Swara. Sanskar,Swara,her parents & pepsi gang become very happy and surprised.
Sanskar Swara smile at each other.

Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain
Pragya and Tanu dress up Swara like a bride and bring her to the mandap.
Sanskar is lost in her.
Sanskar:You look gorgeous in the bridal attire Swara.
She blushes.
Sanskar Swara get married following all rituals.
In aankho se har aansu
Mujhko churana hain

When Sanskar puts mangalsuthra around her neck and sindoor on her forehead Swara becomes emotional.
Mujhko churana hain
Mujhko churana hain
Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain

-Koi aap sa.

Tanu becomes emotional seeing the wedding.
Rishi smiles at her:You are reminded of our wedding.Right?
Tanu:How did you understand that?
Rishi:I love you Tanu.I understand each and every thought of yours.
She smiles.
Tanu:Are you not reminded of our wedding?
Rishi:Of course yes darling.How can I not forget that day?
They remembered how they got married in front of fire,

taking saath phere around the fire…

looking at each other happily of getting united.Thanking Devi Maata for uniting them..
Rishi:When I put sindoor on your forehead…when I placed nuptial chain around your neck..
Tanu:You were shivering.
Rishi:What?
Tanu:I saw your hands shivering.
Tanu laughs.
Rishi is embarrassed.
Rishi:Ok I agree…I shivered as I was tensed.But you also shivered when I touched you on our first night.
Flash back…
Tanu is sitting on the bed.Rishi sits close to her.
Rishi looks at her deeply:You look beautiful.I am sure that no other bride is as beautiful as you in the wedding attire.
She blushes.

He caresses her face passionately.She is losing in his passionate touch.Still she shivers.
Present…
Tanu becomes shy:Yes..I shivered as it was my first experience.Men like you don’t understand that.Women are like that on first night.
Rishi smirks:But you were sweating darling.
Tanu:But later I became alright.Right?

Flash back…
Seeing Tanu Shiver Rishi takes off his hand from her.
Rishi:Tanu..I think you are not comfortable with intimacy.I will wait for you.Sorry for disturbing you.
He stands up and tries to walk away.Suddenly she holds his hand.He looks at her.

She smiles at him.
She moves closer to him resting her head on his chest blushing.A smile appears on his face and holds her closer.

Present…
Rishi looks at her deeply:Of course…I am so handsome that you lost your control and made me yours immediately.
Tanu gets irritated:You shameless creature!I made you yours?No..you only made me yours.
Suddenly he pulls her closer passionately:Whatever it is the fact Is that we both became each others that night with love.

She blushes.
Rishi gets cozy with her rubbing his nose on her cheeks sensually:I miss that night.
She blushes enjoying him getting cozy with her.

They share a passionate eye lock.

They all go to have wedding dinner.While having food Tanu feels like vomiting and goes to the wash room vomiting heavily.Rishi is worried:Tanu..Are you ok?Guess it’s food poisoning.
Tanu:I don’t know Rishi.
Pragya brings a doctor:This is Dr.Sita who was present at the wedding.Let her check.
After some time..
The doctor checks and says:Good news.Tanu is pregnant.
All are surprised.The over excited Rishi embraces Tanu and pecks his cheek.
Rishi is very happy:Finally you are going to produce someone to call me dad.You are the sweetest Tanu.

Tanu blushes.
The pepsi gang:Hey Tanu..we should call you preggy now.
Due to shyness Tanu covers her face with her hands.The Pepsi gang hugs her happily.

Now again pepsi is going 2 split.they all r biding bye.
Abhi 2 Pragya:when will we see u again?
Pragya smiles:god knows.
she goes.
Swara:we all r here.but still u r asking this question only to Pragya.
A:u all r near.but Pragya is far.no guarantee whether we can see her again.
Swara smiles:u r too foolish 2 understand that its bcoz of ur luv u r missing Pragya this much.
A:what?
SWARA:yes.
A:what rubbish!
SWARA:its not rubbish.its luv.
Swara goes.
Abhi thinks about that.
Pragya tells Swara:so u r happy.u r so lucky 2 win ur luv.
Swara smiles. SWARA:can i ask u sumthing b4 u go? r u happy?
PRAGYA:what?
SWARA:i always doubted whether u luv Abhi,when u wished 2 get ur luv with the rose petal,ur eyes were searching 4 Abhi.right? Pragya was stunned.
SWARA:Abhi is still single 2 giv u luv.b4 u go,u must reveal ur luv.thats all i can say now.
Pragya gets confused.

WILL PRAGYA REVEAL hER LUV?WILL ABHI UNDERSTAND HIS FEELINGS 4 PRAGYA?
Part-18….The pepsi gang go 2 the airport 2 see off Pragya.Swara looks at Pragya.Pragya looks at Abhi.both of their faces were moody.
they all bid bye 2 her.Pragya’s eyes were full of tears.she turns back.every1 was going back,but still Abhi was looking at her.she runs 2 Abhi.his face was cheerful:Pragya…
Pragya takes a cover from her bag.
PRAGYA:this is 4 u Abhi.
Abhi takes it.
A:whats this?
Pragya did’nt speak.
PRAGYA:its time for me to go.
she goes.
Abhi becomes sad. he opens the cover.it was a valentine’s day card.
he reads:Abhi,this i bought 4 u during our college life.but i cud’nt giv u.bcoz i understood that i hav no place in ur heart.but i can’t hide that secret anymore.u r my 1st & last luv. ur Pragya.
Abhi was shocked:that means Pragya’s luv was me..oh my god.. i did’nt know that.
Abhi hurriedly runs 2 see Pragya.pepsi gang is wondered why Abhi is running fast like this. Abhi sees the plane flying.he becomes upset.his eyes get filled up with tears.
A:Pragya has gone back.i lost her 4ver.why did i become so late in understanding my feelings 4 her.
he was depressed.
‘Abhi’.he hears a voice. he turns back.he cud’nt believe his eyes.it was Pragya.
Abhi smiles emotionally.
They share an eye lock.
La la la la……..
Aap jo pas aaye mere, aap se jo huyee dostee

A:Pragya..u did’nt go?
PRAGYA:no,b4 that i want 2 know what u feel knowing my secret.do u luv me?
Khwab jagne laga, dil ko lagne laga
Duneeya me na koyee aap sa

Abhi smiles.Pragya becomes happy.

Khwab jagne laga, dil ko lagne laga
Duneeya me na koyee aap sa

Abhi hugs her.
Aap jo pas aaye mere……..

Pepsi gang comes there.they were surprised 2 see that romantic sight.
Swara:yes,they r in luv.
.they smile at them.Abhi-Pragya become shy.
Tanu:guys,lets go,let them enjoy…
Rishi:Yes leave the lovers to romance.
they all laugh and go.
Abhi pulls Pragya closer to him romantically.
Aap jo pas aaye mere, aap se jo huyee dostee
Khwab jagne laga, dil ko lagne laga
Duneeya me na koyee aap sa
Aap jo pas aaye mere……..(Koi Aap sa).

THE END

32 comments

  1. Arshi

    |Registered Member

    Wkwowowow a perfect ending…. all gets sorted out….

    And i love tanshi sce a lot today… its awesome.. awww soo romantic….. and yeah whenver we see some mrg our mrg do come in front… how cute….. they r so adorable…

    And fonnally… swara sanky became one…

    And the best thing s pragya propses abhi befre abho could say… tats really wonderful… abhi pragya’s end is best

    • Arshi

      |Registered Member

      And i liked that song for swasan.. such a touchy song… my fav…. whenevr i hear that lines.. its sooo touchy… omg… i could see swasab in that song… they r perfectly match for that song .

  2. Aheli.

    Awww! Jas darling! Superb update and awesome ending! 😀 Good that Sanskar’s fiancée ran away! 😉 Finally Sanskar comes to know about Swara’s innocence from Damini herself and Damini herself got Swara and Sanskar married. 😀 Awwee! Sanskar staring at Swara! 😉 Finally my SwaSan r together and happy. 😀
    Rishi-Tanu part was cute. Loved their flashback scenes and their romantic talks. 😉 Aww! Tanu pregnant and all r happy for her and teasing her as ‘preggy’! 😉
    Abhi-Pragya part was emotional and very sweet. Loved the way Swara made Pragya understand and how Pragya professed her love for Abhi to him with a valantine’s greeting card, which she had planned to give him during their college days. 😀 Abhi finally realized that Pragya’s love was him and realized his love for her when he realized that once gone, Pragya will be gone forever. ;)It was so sweet of Pragya that she didn’t go and waited to see Abhi’s reaction. 😀 Finally AbhiGya became one too. 😀
    This was such a beautiful ending with all the 3 couples i.e., SwaSan, TanShi and AbhGya r together and happy! 😀 Thank u for this beautiful story and this awesome journey dear. love u! <3

  3. Krkavita

    |Registered Member

    In part 17, Sanskar’s fiancee eloped away. Though Sanskar was hurt, Damini consoled him and agreed to get Sanskar to marry Swara. Nice 2 know that Damini accepted her mistake. Glad that Sanskar and Swara confessed their feelings for each other and are happily married. Loved the other girls dressing up Swara. Tanu is pregnant wow. In part 18, Abhi realized his love 4 Pragya. He was sad that thinking Pragya left the place forever but the good news is Pragya didn’t go anywhere. Glad that both confessed their love 4 each other. This particular scene reminded me of the last scene in DIL movie.

  4. Minu

    Awesome!!!!! Jasmine just loved it the ending is very nice loved Tanshi moments with wedding, swasan marriage with family and finally abhigya’s union with whole Pepsi gang loved each and every scenes it is lovable than the original movie I am going to miss this ff you can also write epilogue some beautiful moments with the couples it is my pleasure to comment this ff love you. waiting for other ff

    • Jasminerahul

      |Author

      thanku very much.Can u tell me why u liked this FF more than the movie?I wrote this FF bcz I was very much disappointed with them not uniting arya pooja even in the climax

  5. Shakaib

    |Registered Member

    Really superb updates by you on this fan fiction. Abhigya’s reunion and Tanshi’s reunion and Swasan’s reunion. To be honest, jasmine I’m not fan of Swasan fan but really find them superb in your ff. Flash backs of tanshi was too best. To be honest I’m inspired by you how to give detailed comments, and improving myself in detailed comments.

  6. Baniaz

    Awe that was the best ending ever
    Thank god sanskars bride eloped
    N sanskars mum finally told truth
    Both got married straight away
    Think sanskar wouldn’t have had it anyother way incase he lost her again lol
    As for rishi n tanu they r still so much in love n about to become parents
    N cherry on top was pragya getting her love abhi at end with swaras advice for both
    Loved how he was sad she was leaving n how he ran to stop her the moment he knew she loved him too 👌🎉☺️😍How romantic
    Sorry sucker for guys running to stop their loved from getting on their plane 😉😂
    Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
    Heatsha8176

  7. Nirmal

    Sorry for being late to comment… Nice episode… I didn’t thought that Pragya will say that first….

  8. Mica

    |Registered Member

    uugghhh,, love my swasan finally shorted out their problem..uuggh they are married..
    and the song was perfect to describe my swasan feeling…
    aaww Tanshi..ahem ahem…well Rishi, good job Dud!, you made Tanu pregnant :3
    Abhigya…. huh! you both soo stupid, you love each other but uughh need a cupid to understand that feeling ?

  9. Shreya

    The ending was too nyc whole tanshi scene were so nyc. Happy for swasan they get united after many difficulties and abhi realizes luv for pragya. Tanu and rishi’s gud news were so gud. Very nice ff u r jeneous and I wish u made a one more ff. Plzz make a tanshi ff but not on a punar janam story.

  10. aqsa

    Omg I just dont have words for todsys episode omg my tanshi thankuuuuu well a very nicee appreciateable ff do write another season and I just love cooperation and todays part wassss too goooddd a big round of a plause for u 🙂 🙂 🙂 heads of luv u bye bye

  11. Minu

    As you said na arya pooja separation it is one of the main reason that I like ff more than movie and abhigya; tanshi moments and the characters are just awesome jasmine they lived in your ff especially in painful scenes you made them real and changes you made are very much lovable honestly I must say I loved ff more when you made this changes it remains as unique one thks for writing this wonderful ff keep rocking

  12. Piyali

    |Registered Member

    Beautiful end to a beautiful story dear …….Ii already had some thoughts like Sanskar’s fience related and that happened………happy Ddamini accepted the truth and SwaSsan united and married happily…………it was so beauitufl and your explanation made it more beautiful………….aww…..TanShi scenes were just mind blowing………I loved them both sooooooo much,………Loved them remembering their wedding and first night………it was so beautifully described , Tanu pregenet………Loved the preggy joke……………………loved AbhIya’s eunion lot…….they both were meant to be together………..happy they did……..well nenver knew Bandhan dilo ka song was from a movie……..I thought it was orginal but amazing song and wonderful….Loveds the reunion a lot though I wanted this ff to continue……..wish it could but no problme……….thanks a lot………Live you………be happu………….

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