Koi aapsa Abhigya,Swasan,Tanshi FF Part 14

Koi aap sa Part 14

Part-14…

Rishi takes Tanu out.

He keeps staring at her.She becomes shy.

Mann yeh saahib ji
Jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane

Rishi:Tanu..I have brought a gift for you which I wanted to give you on our first meeting itself.

She smiles.
He gives her a big red heart:This is my heart for you.
She blushes.

Naina nawaabi ji
Dekhe hain sab ji

Suddenly it starts raining.They both hold umbrella together..they are shy being close to each other under one umbrella.

Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)

Suddenly in breeze the umbrella blows away.
Tanu:Oh no..
R:No problem.
He holds her hand and they start dancing passionately.

Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo

Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo

He carries her in his arms.

Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere

They share a romantic eye lock.

Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo-– Shor in The City

The next day is farewell function. Abhi sees Tanu.
A:how was ur 1st date with ur wud be?
Tanu was shy:cool and hot!
Pragya sees them 2gether.she thinks:i think Tanu also told Abhi that she luves him.
Pragya becomes sad. the pepsi gang stand 2gether during the farewell party given by the juniors.
Swara and Sanskar feel difficult 2 face each other.so Sanskar stands away.
ppl were dancing.
TANU:cum every1,we’ll dance with our juniors.
A:i don’t hav a mood.
TANU:whats this Abhi?ok i’m not forcing u.what about Pragya?
PRAGYA:even i don’t hav a mood 2 dance.
TANU:ok,then u cum Swara.
SWARA:no Tanu. TANU:no way.
Tanu pushes her 2 the platform and they dance .

Swara and Sanskar bump into each other.
They looked at each other emotionally.
Sanskar says in his mind:You broke my trust Swara.So even for a formality I don’t feel like biding good bye.
Swara says in her mind:I broke your heart.But try to understand Sanskar..I am not doing it for a purpose.I don’t want you by snatching your mother’s happiness.I had promised your mother that I will never do it.Sorry Sanskar.
Sanskar says in his mind:You broke my heart Swara.It is still bleeding.
Swara says in her mind:Sanskar..I want to heal the wounds in your heart by standing close to your heart.But I am helpless.Please don’t hate me.
Sanskar says in his mind:Even if I try hard I can’t hate you Swara.I still love you.But what is the use of this relationship when my love has no value for you?
Swara says in her mind:For me your love is the most precious thing.I can be happy till the end thinking that you used to love me once.But unfortunately I can’t express my love to you.

They part ways silently and tearfully.

Pragya tells Abhi:u & Tanu look cute 2gther.i knew that Tanu will luv u.no 1 can reject u Abhi.
Abhi becomes sad.
PRAGYA:bcoz u r the hottest property of our college.
both laugh.
Pragya becomes sentimental:i’m sum1 nobody wants.
A:who told u?see ur dream guy will cum 2 u 1day.
Pragya feels funny.she tells in her mind:that’ll never happen Abhi.
Abhi thinks:i’ve 2 tell Pragya that my luv was a failure.shall i tell now?
unexpectedly their juniors push them 2 the platform. in that rush ,Abhi falls down & Pragya falls on Abhi’s body.they look at each other’s eyes.

Abhi thinks:i feel that Pragya has sum worries.
Pragya thinks:why do i feel that Abhi is not so happy?
they both stand up.
A:if i ask wil u tell the truth?r u worried about anything?
Pragya was stunned:why?
A:i saw worries in ur eyes.

PRAGYA:i’m worried that pepsi is going 2 split up.u hav any worry?
Abhi keeps silent.
Pragya thinks:what foolish question did i ask?Abhi is so happy that he won his luv.
The background music of the song Tum paas…{KKHH}was played.
every1’s eyes were filled up with tears. Abhi-Pragya dance 2 that music.every1 cries due 2 departure.

Pragya goes abroad 4 higher studies.

Then comes the 5 YRS LEAP..HOW WILL BE THE PEPSI GANG AFTER 5 YRS? CAN U GUESS?

13 comments

  1. Baniaz

    Nice one
    Abhi never told Pragya that he never got chance to confess his love
    5 year gap since abhi has saw pragya wonder how much she has changed
    As for swara n sanskar I hope these 5years have been spent missing each other m sanskar wanting to give their love another chance
    Looking forward to next update
    Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
    Heatsha8176

  2. Piyali

    |Registered Member

    Yiipppe…..praises for Ppiyali…….right guess na…………….leap but 5 years?? Quite big…………TanShi date was superb and the song…….I loved it dear……..they both were shy……It was so cute………………now coming to SwaSan -i loved their hearts convo….It was really heart touching…….each and every line reached my heart dear , so beautiful specially this one “:Even if I try hard I can’t hate you Swara.I still love you.But what is the use of this relationship when my love has no value for you?” This was beautiful , the pepsi gang was sad while Parting ways yet there were other reasons , some untold conversations affecting them…….it was so beautiful dear…………..Abhi……….why you did that? You could have told the truth…….wish even Pargya mustered up some courage to confess……….chalo , lets wait for the leap , I am really excited , update soon…….Love you………be happy……..

  3. Aheli

    Hey Jas! Superb update. 😀 TanShi date was so cute. They were very shy to stand close to each other but still they danced together. 🙂 Awwww my SwaSan! Felt very bad for them. 🙁 Loved their heart conversation, actually battling with their feelings for each other. 😀 It was very emotional one. 🙁 Pepsi gang was very sad about their parting. 🙁 Felt bad for AbhiGya too. 🙁 So unspoken truth about the either one was affecting each other. 🙁 Now that the story’s going to take a leap of 5 years, I’m hoping that TanShi will be married now. Also I hope that Sanskar comes to know about Swara’s innocence somehow and is waiting for her. 🙂 I really hope that Damini has not set any other girl for Sanskar. And same for Sawra too that her parents have not set any other boy for her. 🙁 I’m really tensed r my SwaSan. 🙁 And I also hope that in these 5 years, Pragya has become much more self confident and independent girl. And much more stylish too. 😉 Not that I didn’t like the bubbly and funny Pragya. 🙂 And also hope that Abhi understood that his feelings for Tanu was just a infatuation. And he misses Pragya badly and is in real wala love with her now. 😉 😀 Update soon. 😀

  4. Shreya

    This episode was 2 gud I luv tanshi date and I hope too that it will be more interested after 5 years leap.

  5. Minu

    Loved all the pairs yaar the way you shaped the story is nice you narrated all the emotions in super way I want all of them cherish their dreams and carrier from this leap eagerly waiting for the next update

  6. Krkavita

    |Registered Member

    Loved tanshi rain scene. It was very romantic. feel bad 4 swasan. their state of mind was quite understandable. Sad that Pepsi gang is parting. Abhi did not confess his love to Tanu. Hope that Sanskar and Swara talks to each other face to face and sort out things. Hope that damini understands that it was not swara’s fault. waiting to see what will happen in 5 year leap.

  7. Arshi

    |Registered Member

    Wowowowoowoowowwowo precap is the thing which i m so excoted….

    Afyr 5 yrs.. i m dam sure that pragya would be super hot… or something else.. and i wish abhi to fall for her not by seeing her beauty but by her nature….

    And i couldnt guess abt others.. swara sanky..

    And abt tanshi.. i guess they would be happily settled…

    Lets see…. superb updte..

    Really loved swara sanky emotional convo in mond….

    And ofcoyrse cute romantic tanshi moment…

    U alwayz add their steps in between lyrics which give full visual… tat i like it most….

    And u like my long comment.. its really gud to hear.. as i really worst in this… its bcz f ur comment in my ff which made to give comments like this… i alwayz feel hapoy to read ur comment whoch give immemse pleasure as a payback for each and every word…. and from that on i tried a lil bit to give comment as urs in all stories whichever i m reading…😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

    • Jasminerahul

      |Author

      Happy that I could inspire you to write long comments.yes..we should always give detailed comment. One word two word comments are not at all encouraging

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