Kismat Konnection {Epi-21} (#Khamoshi) GOA TRIP SPECIAL

THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR PRECIOUS TIME AND VALUABLE COMMENTS u have given to previous episode of my ff. All the words and appreciation really means a lot to well as criticism, but u guys r so sweet that u never criticised me or corrected me.. Plz suggest me anything without any hessitation.. If not in public then DM me on my account.
Everything, Every Suggestion or Appreciation o welcome whole heartedly.


Episode 20 here

RECAP: Our Gang with Riya finally reached GOA and they have alloted with their rooms. Gang plans to go for site seeing after getting freshen up. Here Riya hides Sanchi’s Bag in her room and Sanchi is in a dilemma What to wear and go outside…SO LET’S SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.

RIYA : i will not allow you to come near my Kabir Baby.. Miss.Behenji. Now what u will do without your bag?.. Now i will go with Kabir and u will stay in your room alone.
(She smirks)
1 Hour Late:


VEER is wearing a Blue T-shirt with Shorts and is busy on call.. talking with savitri and informing her that they all reached safely to Goa and are going for sightseeing after some time. Suddenly his eyes goes on a man and he is dumbstruck to see him.
VEER: Ok Maa i will call u later. Love you and Take care.
He cuts the Call… The Man is none other than our handsome Kabir Kapoor.
He was wearing Black Sleeveless T-Shirt (as in DP of this episode) and Cammando Printed Narrow Pant.
VEER: Sir u are looking dashing.
KABIR: Thanks Veer for the compliment…but don’t look at me like this.. It’s really weird.
VEER: Sorry to say Sir but i am not able to move my eyes from u.. You are wearing clothes like us.. It’s unbelievable.. We interns always saw u wearing Formal Garments..this is unpredictable. (Mouth Open)
KABIR: Stop it Veer !! (Glaring him) i am too a human being.. I always not wear Formal wears idiot. Now stop behaving like a child. Where are others?
VEER: Sorry Sir.. I am already ready to go … Since 30 minutes i am waiting for u all..wait i will call Isha and ask her..

Just then RIYA enters wearing a fashionable Short Dress of Red Colour.
RIYA: Hello to u both.(She also seeing Kabir with sparkling eyes) Sorry i got late ..lets go now.
KABIR: Wait Riya !! SANCHI & ISHA are still not come.. We have to wait for them.
VEER tries to call Isha but she doesn’t pick his calls.
RIYA: Sir i must say..we compliment eachother so well.. (Kabir Glares her) i mean to say..u are wearing Black and i am wearing Red.. This combination is always compliment to eachother.
KABIR ignores her and moved away from her without answering her.
Just then Isha (wearing a comfortable simple crop top and a shorts) enters the frame ALONE. Riya smirks seeing Isha alone as her plan hits the target according to her.
KABIR looks for Sanchi while Veer is mesmarized to see Isha in bold avatar.
Just then Sanchi comes from back side of Isha ..trying to cover her body..
She is wearing a fancy white crop top with a capree (Isha’s clothes and as per DP of episode). She is very much nervous coming front of Kabir like this.. She hessitantly slowly moves forward and came to the Gang still stretching her crop top down to cover her stomach part. On other side Kabir was totally lost in her beauty and admiring her glance. Riya is shocked to see her there and frustrated to see Sanchi in Modern avatar (as she is looking reallh very preity in that attire).
KABIR: SANCHI you are looking gorgeous.
SANCHI: (Nervously Smiles) Thank You Sir.
VEER: Chalo finally tum dono tayyar hoke aa hi gayi !!! Btw Sanchi you r really looking good.. I din’t know u have modern clothes too (teasing her)
SANCHI: Shut up Veer !! (fumes) this are not my clothes..i borrowed this from Isha as my Bag is misplaced somewhere in hotel .
KABIR: In that case i think we should complain.
SANCHI: NO we can’t complain.. Otherwise the staff member will lose his job. He told me that he will soon find out my Bag till then i have to wait.
KABIR: Ok as you say.. If you want then we can go for a shopping also..
RIYA is irked with it.
SANCHI: No Sir.. No need. I will manage somehow..
ISHA: OK if u both want to spend whole day talking here only then i think u both stay here and continue.. We go out and enjoy. What say? (happily enjoying teasing them)
KANCHI (Together): No need.. We are coming.
ISHVEER moves ahead towards exit while KaNchi walks after them..
Just then Kabir pulls Sanchi’s hand to bring her closer, hold her by her open waist and make her walk along with him ..
SANCHI: (She gets nervous with his touch) What are you doing Kabir.. RIYA is standing behind us.. What will happen after that…do u have any idea? (trying to move away from him by trying to release from his clutches)
KABIR: Shh!! No more worries now.. I can’t control my feelings now after seeing u.. Let her think whatever she wants or let her do whatever she wants to..i don’t care anymore now. I just care for u.. U r only mine and always will be mine only. By seeing u like this..if any person steals u from me then what will i do without u nd ur love?? I only have the right to see u like this and touch one else..??(dramatically)

Sanchi: i love you Kabir.. Ok i will not over react on this. No more worries as you are with me. (She also comes closer to him) By the way Mr.KKK you too are looking stunning in black..? Don’t go far from me..if any girl steals u from me then what will i do without ur love? (dramatically replies him)??
Both smiles and walk along together.?. And someone is getting angry? seeing all this lovey dovey talks.. Yes RIYA, She was so angry that she can’t even able to control it.. a waiter of hotel was passing from her way..just then she collided with him bcoz of her own fault.. The juice which the waiter was carrying fell on Riya’s dress and it gets spoiled.
She shouts at him for HIS CARELESSNESS. Waiter apologises her inspite of his No Mistake. She continues yelling while ISHVEER & KANCHI tries to calm down riya.. She still angry.
WAITER: I’m so sorry Ma’am. Plz give me one chance to rectify my mistake.
KABIR: Riya stop behaving like a child.. Go and Change your clothes?.
RIYA stills angry.Manager of the Hotel comes in rescue of Waiter.
MANAGER: Ma’am we are really very sorry for the trouble.. plz handover your clothes to me..i will do dry clean of it and send your clothes with any staff member asap to your room.
Please give us a chance to rectify our mistake.
RIYA finally agrees and leaves towards her room after telling ISHVEER & KANCHI to wait for her to come..she will go like this and come like this.. She leaves in hurry. Manager also leaves after her to collect the dress for further procedures.

VEER: LET’S GO.. We are getting late.
SANSHA: Veer.. We have to wait for Riya.. We can’t leave her alone here.
KABIR: Look girls.. I think Veer is correct. We are really getting late. She already troubled us lot i think we should enjoy our holidays. If she will come here, she can call us.. We can meet her at any place after that. She is not a small child that she can’t stay alone in hotel. SHALL WE LEAVE NOW?
SANSHA agrees jaise taise !! And They all leave for GOA SIGHTSEEING happily.
After Some time.. Riya comes at the meet up point and finds no one there..she gets more angry.
RIYA: So you left me here alone and gone to enjoy.. I will not forgive u all especially Kabir and Sanchi..u both will not stay together any longer i will not let u come close to each other. You both have to pay for this..
She leaves back for her room and starts planning something.


Here both couples prays to jesus for there love. They prays that the love they share now will never should only increase with the passing time and always they stay together.
Both guys are just admiring their lady love praying for their love with their eyes closed.. Both girls were looking like a angelic ??figure. They were mesmarized with their innocense and pure emotions.
Now after praying they all left for another location holding eachothers hands (Ishveer & Kanchi).


They pass some romantic time there talking with eachother looking at the Sea. Both couples are sitting at different corners of the fort. They share some cute noke jokk ??(KaNchi- reason Riya) Romance? (Kanchi & Ishveer) and fun talks etc..
KANCHI calls Kusum and talks to her on speaker:
KABIR: Hello Maa !! How are you?
KUSUM: I’m Doing well beta.. Don’t worry about me..i am chilling here with my sister without your restrictions. (Taunting him in happy way)
KABIR: Be careful about your health.. Don’t eat much oily food or spicy. Tell Masi (aunty) that i will be back soon to take u from her u both don’t get very much happy..i will check your health graph…and if anything wrong happens naa..then u can’t get save from me (warning her like a typical Son)
KUSUM: Heyy.. Don’t behave like my father..i am your mother. Now don’t worry about my focus on Sanchi.. If you trouble her little bit also naa.. Then i swear u r gone !!
SANCHI (interupts): ?Namaste Aunty. Kabir is not at all troubling me. Don’t worry.
KUSUM: Namaste beta?. Now you can call me MAA also dear. I would love to hear Maa from u.
SANCHI:OK Kusum aunty…sorry Maa. Kusum Maa How are you?
KABIR looks on to her lovingly while Kusum gets happy hearing Maa from her.
KUSUM: Now thats like my daughter. If Kabir trouble you naa then inform me..i will pull his ears tightly.?
KABIR: Oh Maa Beti ki Jodi..Bete ko bhul gayi Maa ? (little bit jealous??)
Both Kusum and Sanchi laughs loudly??..
Kabir fumes? and pull sanchi close ? to him and wrapped her in his arms. Naughtily hugging her.
KUSUM: Ok beta.. U both enjoy we will talk later…
Just then Kabir interupts her talk and says to talk with him for little he is missing her so much (Just to hold Sanchi more bcoz..JAB TAK PHONE CHALEGA..SANCHI CAN’T STOP HIM TO DO SOME ROMANCE WITH HER)
SANCHI understands it and talks to Kusum.
SANCHI: Aunty Yes.. I remembered now..Kabir has really troubled me.. (She is about to speak when Kabir Kiss her cheeks) hmm… I was saying..he troubled me (he again kiss her..on behind her earlobes)…. (She now can’t able to say anything.?. She is speechless and go with the flow)
KUSUM: Tell me beta !! WHAT KABIR DID TO U?
Sanchi unable to say anything..
KABIR: Yes Sanchi.. Tell Maa.. What i did to u? I also want to hear what i did to u? (teasing her)
Sanchi Blushes..
SANCHI: Woh Maa.. He woke up late we missed some places to travel because of him. That’s only.
KUSUM: Ohh that was the thing.. I thought he really troubled u. He is time punctual in Mumbai..God knows what happened to him in GOA !!
KANCHI both looks at each other lovingly and smiles.
KUSUM: Ok Beta !! We both sisters are going for Shopping.. We will talk later. Bye and take care of eachother. And Don’t fight.
KANCHI: Bye Maa.. We will not fight,Promise. Take Care of yourself.
KABIR: So Sanchi.. Now tell me what i did to u? (teasingly)
SANCHI: (moves away from him & sits at a distance) Don’t you even dare to touch me again.. u Mr.KKK !! I am warning u..
KABIR: So Miss soon gonna be SKK. If i again do this with u..then what will happen? Will you lose your cotrol over yourself? Your Feelings for me..overpowering your mind dear? (teasing her at top level)
SANCHI don’t have any answer to his question..she blushes? and runs from there getting Shy.
Kabir chases her and caught her after so many failed tries. They hug eachother tightly forgoting the world around them. They were lost in each other embrance.
Soon Isha shouts aloud from other corner and tells them to come soon as they have to visit other place too. Both smiles and gets parted from the hug. All leaves from there.


Both Couples after the whole day travelling from one place to another..finally comes to the Saturday Night Market of GOA ..Famous for most countries Speciallity in Clothes, Jewellery, Food ,Fun , Tattoo artists, etc etc around the world. They first go to have some local food. Then they carry on with the Shopping. Everyone buys something for eachother and also for friends & Family. Kabir buys some clothes for Sanchi to gift her as she lost her bag. He wants to give his choiced of dress to her as a surprise gift. So he didn’t informed her. After Shopping both couples saw a Tattoo Artist. They all imprinted their beloved names initial on their Shoulder except Kabir. He imprinted Sanchi’s Whole name on his Chest at heart side.
SANCHI: What was the need to be so filmy? It’s hurting u naa? (Worried for him with moist eyes)
KABIR: it’s nothing dear.. The real pain is seeing your eyes getting moist. (SANCHI Hugs him tightly and beats on his chest lightly) I did this to always keeps you & your name close to my heart.
SANCHI: Why u love me so much Kabir? Sometimes i feel i don’t deserve you..You are very special to me.. I love you.
KABIR: Shh!! No more questions.. I will give all the answers to your questions soon. (tells huskily in her ears- Meet me tonight..i will give u all answers)
Sanchi gets Shy and breaks the hug.
IshVeer: Awww.. So much love.. They all share a group hug.
SANCHI: Now shall we call Riya for the borne fire at beach ?
ALL: Ok as u wish.
VEER messages Riya the address and told her to come at the place. They are waiting for her.


She takes a transparent pouch containing some white powder from a stranger.
She reads Veer’s message.
RIYA POV- Ok Kanchi.. I am coming. U won today but not anymore. Now the Game will be on my side. Now it’s my turn and i will turn both of yours life forever. She smirks evil.

Borne Fire is there and a group of Visitors playing different musical instruments..some are singing..some are dancing. And KANCHI, ISHVEER & RIYA joins them.
SanSha: Sorry Riya we left u alone at hotel.. We were late for the church and if we waited then Church would have got closed.
RIYA: (Trying to be sweet) It’s ok Yaar.. No Problem i can understand.. Infact we came here to don’t think much..lets enjoy.
SanSha gets surprised with her reaction but ignores the doubts and starts enjoying the night and the mood.

Khalbali Hai Khalbali… (3) Hai Khalbali
Khalbali Hai Khalbali… (3) Hai Khalbali

Shola Shola Balkhaye
Dariya Dariya Lehraye
Zarra Zarra Tharraye
Hai Khalbali
Khalbali Hai Khalbali… (3) Hai Khalbali

RIYA & ISHA Starts dancing with Veer and other visitors/tourists also joins them.
KANCHI sitting there and looking at each other with a smile.

Khalbali Hai Khalbali… (3) Hai Khalbali
Khalbali Hai Khalbali… (3) Hai Khalbali

KABIR drinks a drink which was given to him by a Visitor.. He taste it…(don’t think much..that’s just a soft drink). He drinks it half.

Hone Hone De Nasha Khone Khone Ko Hai Kya…
Ek Saans Mein Pee Ja Zara Zindagi Chadha
Hai Yeh Toh Ek Jashan Tu Thirakne De Kadam
Abhi Saanson Mein Hai Dam Abhi Chalne De Sitam

KANCHI stands and dances together like a carefree Couple of Bollywood Movies…

Aankhon Mein Hai Khalbali
Dhadkanon Mein Khalbali
Mausamo Mein Khalbali
Hai Khalbali

SANCHI also drinks same drink from same Can from which Kabir Drunk. (Jhootha khane yaa pine ke Pyaar badhta hai)

Kaisi Yeh Tabdili Hai
Sheeshi Botal Pee Li Hai
Raat Neeli Neeli Hai
Hai Khalbali

Both Couple Dances coming closer to eachother.. Riya left the place getting angry.

Ham Lapatke Saaye Hai
Ham Sulagne Aaye Hai
Ghar Bata Ke Aaye Hai
Hai Khalbali …

Khalbali Hai Khalbali… (3) Hai Khalbali

IshVeer wants to spend some more time on beach so they Stayed there to view the magical night of GOA and it’s beauty. While Kanchi left for their Hotel.

PRECAP: Kabir Gifts Some clothes of his choice to Sanchi. Some Romance is gonna happen… So just wait for it Friends.

( Original pics belongs to Swarda & Vikram IG account. And editting done by me).


> Riya (Priyanka) as per your suggestion dear.. I did not spoiled every Kanchi Fan’s i kept Riya whole day in her room only..yeah i did not locked her in room but Juice spoiled her dress.

> Soon i am writing a Maha episode on demand of my regular reader Sajnana900.

> SORRY friends i never visited GOA and really don’t know much about it..i just named and imagined some scene with the help of GOOGLE BABA TRIP ADVISOR. Names of places i randomly chosed.

> And last but not the least i want to mention 3 readers name; Jessicca, Yaashi and Dhruti ??? who previously missed reading my episodes but took so much efforts .. They really touched my heart and made me feel so special… THEY READ ALL MY PREVIOUS EPISODES and made my ff so special with their love… Love u guys.


Lots of Love to u all.

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  1. Wow..yr great..superb…!!

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Pickoo dear ? i am so glad that u liked it

  2. Aafiya

    Awesome dear

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u Aafiya dear..?

  3. Maisarah

    Hey chocopie, I m so sorry for not being able to comment as I was really busy … But but but I ‘ve read all the ff written by all of you… This FF of yours is one of my fav. … And the episode was as always a fab one ….
    Love you❤

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Sarah ?? i am so happy that u like my ff dear.. it really means a lot to me.. and it’s ok dear..i also sometimes misses to comment on my friends ff…they forgive me. So how can i say anything to u hmmm? So are we friends?

      1. Maisarah

        We r already friends, sweetie?❤❤❤ Big Hug❤❤❤

  4. Trisha139

    Omg awesome dear superb just speechless dood ! Too good

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Trisha dear ☺? i am so glad that u liked it.

  5. Anonymousaa

    This was superb epi.I am so glad to know that Riya missed the trip.
    And what about Riya’s plan for trapping Kanchi today?
    Plz post next epi asap.

    1. Khamoshi

      And i am so happy to know that u liked it dear.. thank u so much sweetie..
      And wait for the suspense to get will be entertaining for sure..
      And tha result of the suspense will be the idea of Anu ? so use mat puchna woh nahi batayegi ?

  6. awesomee dear
    loved it

    1. actually im too lazy to comment on every epi but u should know na ur silent reader love ur ff
      keep it up dear

      1. Khamoshi

        Thank u so much swetha dear.. i can understand.. i am not angry on silent readers infact i am glad that they do read my ff.. it makes me feel more special. Once again Thanks dear. Lots of love to u dear

    2. Khamoshi

      Dear i am so happy to receive 1st comment from u dear ☺? thank u dear

    3. Khamoshi

      Dear i am so happy to reci
      Eive 1st comment from u.. Thank u so much ? and plz don’t be lazzy ….we writers need readers support and love ??

  7. Riyarocks

    Mitu dear, omg……….itna itna itna zyaada romantic……..awwwww………I just loved it…..& jab sanchi & kusum convo ke waqt kabir ne jo sanchi ko chheda…..haha……..actually I was blushing throughout while reading their romance……….matlab ye toh ek dum khidkitod, darwaazatod..etc.etc….splendid, out of the world episode tha……..toooooo good…….I hv just one last thing to tell…u r a flawless writer…..meri mitu ke writings ko kisi ki nazar na lage……haha……..luv u loads sweetieeeeeeeeee……….

    1. Khamoshi

      Awww… Priyu u made my day dear… itni achhi baatein koi kaise kar sakhta hai..?
      I love u siso.. lots of love and huggs to u dear. Daro mat dear..aaj fak tumhare writings ko nazar nahi lagi to mere writing ko kaise lagegi? Tum mujhse bhi achhi writer ho to mujhe darne ki zarurat nahi ??? hash tumhe yeh romance achha laga..bcoz i m seriously a worst romantic writer.. and i know that..i accept it ??

      1. Riyarocks

        u r saying this bcz u urself r very good at heart……tum khud itni achi ho, isiliye tum dusron ke baare mein achha bolti ho……….bahut kum log aise hote hain & I’m really glad(in fact grateful) to hv a friend like u in my life……..luv u loads….

    2. Khamoshi

      Ab rulayegi kya pagli?
      Thank u ..ab kya bolu kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai.tum ne to bolti hi bandh kardi.. dear we r frnds but usse zyada v r like cheers for our sisterhood

  8. Omg sweeti u just nailed this one….amazing,awesome , superb. loved this part completely dearie .Do update soon sweetie….lots os love u too sweetie.

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much my frnd ? i am gkad that u liked it Niyati.. i will soon try to update next..

  9. Anuradha123

    Sorry for commenting late dear.. U know na I m not feeling well… Episode bohot accha tha… Tum hamesha hi bohot accha likhti ho… Well done sissy

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much partner ? i am glad u liked it.

  10. Awesome epi dr..
    Keep writing..

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Mayoori..?. i am so happy to see ur 1st comment on my ff… lots of love dear..

  11. My dear cutie pie this is amazing fabulous mind blowing update soon can’t wait my dear cutie ???

    1. Khamoshi

      Thabk u so much dear Divya ? i am glad u liked it. Stay tuned

  12. Yaashi23

    Ossssuummmmm dear. And see ria what happened.dusro k liye gaddha banane wala khud hi usme gir jata hai… kanchi romance was so lovely. Keep rocking ..

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Yaashi ?.. i am so glad that u liked it.

  13. hi khamoshi..Iam comment here on ur ff for the first time and episode was amazing dear and ur writing skills are amazing superbsuperb……………… I love kaanchi scenes and love their bonding……….truely superb

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Praveena dear.. i am so happy that u commented on my ff.. it really means a lot to me that u liked it and being a silent reader u took the effort for me to comment here.. i am really very happy. Welcome to KISMAT KONNECTION ff dear ??

  14. RuCh23

    Oh my mata Mitu ??? tremendously excellent epi dear ??? I think Veer has a little crush on our Kabir ??? seeing him in casual wear. Good thing Riya wasn’t there with them!! If she saw Kanchi’s cutesy romantic exchanges ??? her heart won’t be able to tolerate it and she’ll have a ??? major heart attack ??? but it’s very suspicious her calm behavior. ??? I think she’s planning something really big. That white stuff she bought I think is either some sort of poison or drugs (heroin or something). Either way your story is so amazing and currently it’s my No. 1 favourite ??? luv u so much dear ???

    1. Khamoshi

      Awwwww thank u yaar.. i am on cloud 9 with ur appreciation.. i am totally dumbstruck that my ff is ur nom1 fav right now.. i m nervous..will i able to maintain it or not.. THANK YOU again dear.. lots of love to u ?
      Jaise girls main hota hai naa Girl Crush vaise socha Boy Crush bhi to hota hoga ??? to rakh diya episode main ?. Stay tuned dear

  15. Sajnana900

    Hey mitu dear ( i didnt knew that ur name is mitu but jzt yo read priyu’s cmnt i came to know ur name)
    The epi was spr dpr hit
    Excelent best ever marvelousssssss.
    And many more
    And thnx for accepting my request of maha epi
    U r such a great writer
    How to describe ur writing skills dont know
    But atlast u r jzt amazing dear

    1. Khamoshi

      Aww yaar.. i don’t know how to express my happiness after reading ur comment dear.. i am speechless.
      Thanks for liking my ff dear. It really means a lot to me that my readers likes it. And my Name is Mitali but nickname is Mitu.. my family and friends calls me whatever they u r also my frnd so u xan also call me anything u like dear.
      And again thanks for the appreciating words dear..i am really on cloud 9.

      1. Sajnana900

        Plsr is all mine dear
        And m glad that u take me as a frnd thnx for this

    2. Khamoshi

      Yeah offcourse we are friends Sanju..(Sanjnana). Hope i can call u Sanju.. u all r my friends and family as well.. lots of love dear

      1. Sajnana900

        Ofcourse u can call me sanju
        And ya its sanjana i was in hurry so jzt by mistake it typed sanjnana
        Luv u too dear

  16. Moonlight25

    Mitu dear….this is one outstanding epi….it was superb splendid epi! I am in love with it…..and was too romantic as well…..i can say you are the queen of romance…..i feel Veer has a little crush on Kabir after seeing him in the casual wear…hehe…its good what happened with Riya and don’t know what she is planning….well.anyways dear..your epi is on top….just awesome..loved it….
    Post ASAP..
    Love you loads ??❤❤

    1. Khamoshi

      OMG …yaar now i can’t handle so much love.. i am so nervous by knowing that some of u r considering my ff on no.1 position.. yaar aise mat daraya karo..
      Thank you so much dear for the kind words ..i am totally speechless today..u all made my day with so much love.
      Kabir hai hi aisa ke harr koi pichhe pad jaye ?? and dear i am not at all queen of romance.. i am worst romantic writer..i accept it..??? . Thanks again dear. Lots of love and kissed to u ?? not like Veer ?

  17. Niyaaa

    Awsome mindblowing mitu dear nd jaise ria ki band baja rahe hi kaash jake makes ki bhi baja sakte… Again late nd iss baar meri koi galti nahi cvs ne itna paka diya ki frustation nikalne gayi thi IF per or kuch kaam karne lagi taki dimag ko sukun mile.. Ufff chodo warna baat karte karte subah ho jayegi phir bhi khatam nahi hogi… Nd sweety superbly u design the goa trip jisme tum janti tak nahi goa ke bare me.. Hey waise ye sab goa meher ki sagai ke liye aaye h wo kahan h … Okk ye sab nxt pe pta chal jayega…Bye warna m aise hi dimag khati rahungi tc lovv u post nxt maha epi asap m waitting tik talk

    1. Khamoshi

      Hmm i am too frustrated dear after watching i can easily relate to it.. par gussa nikalne jau kaha..
      And yes they all r in goa for attending Meher’s marriage but 5 days baki hai marriage waha theherke kya karte to socha GOA ghuma du..or khud bhi ghum lu ?.
      Mahaepisode shayad episode no.23 hoga..bcoz abhi tak to 22 bhi nahi likha hai. To sure nahi hu. Par jaldi post karne ki try karungi.

  18. Niyaaa

    And last kanchi romance r one level up hats off too u nd veer ki tarah meri ankhein bhi hottie se nahi hat rahi kya krun..hehehe u r wonderfull writter chahe suspense ho romance ho yaa comedy scene etc u did very well keep going on lovv u dher sara gud ni8

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much for liking romance wala part..bcoz i was nervous for that only..i was not sure that u all like it or not..and don’t embarasse me with so much appreciation..sometimes i think DO I DESERVE ALL THIS? lot’s of love to u dear. A teddy hug for u to calm you..itna gussa mat kara karo dear..?

  19. Dhruti

    mitu this ff what i say just love it you nailed it today……specially kanchi’s romance….sanchi and kusum’s convo time……….. how kabir was jealous and usne kya chheda he sanchi ko tab i just love this wala part …………………and thank god ria was not there…………………..kash isme se 1% bhi kuch serial me hota to baat hi alag hoti but live it……………….from where you get that much good no no mind blowing ideas?(in gujarati : kya thi aave 6e atala saras vicharo?)………….thank you for mentioning me at end………actually i forgot some ff part and some confusion in my mind because there so many ff so i’m confused…so i have to read all ffs then i remember everything……………………..shubhratri(good night)…………………

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Dhruti dear .lots of love to u..” mane bau gamyu ke tane aa ff gamey chhe. Aabhar taro “???.
      And i don’t really know from where this ideas comes to my mind…? but will surely find out soon..dimag main locha to nahi ?

  20. Palak.Sharma

    This was amazing!! Lol Riya failed once again…and such romantic moments. Keep it up, eagerly waiting for the next update

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Palak ? i am happy that u r happy with the absence of Riya ?? i am glad u liked the episode dear

  21. Again sorry for late sweetie. Sorry is my favorite word. Anyways it was so so so so so so amazing outstanding mindblowing ravishing lovely historic unlimited package khidki tod darvaza tod marvelous fabulous awesome superb and many many many many many many many many many many many many many many many many more. And it’s beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond everything. Sorry for same comments everytime wat to do u always always always stole my words. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv loads

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so so so much Ashnita dear … i am so glad that u liked it..
      Lots of love and kisses to u too dear

  22. Anee

    MItali dear Sorry for not comment on your previous updates……………..Bt dear it was mindblowing………………………………….bhi…………..zada…………….mindblowing……..Tum ne aaj mera day bana diya yaaaaarrrrrr………………Tum boht energetic and fresh minded ho yaaarrrrr….itni simplicity koi kese scene ko imagine karwaskta hai yaaaarrrr…..goood joobbbb keep doing….Mitu.

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much anee.. ur appreciation is totally a different level of achievement for me.. thank u for th compliments sweetie.. u made my day..i am so glad that u liked it..and no need tosay Sorry..i can understand sometimes u don’t feel to say anything but u really like it..bcoz same happens with me also dear.. ? keep smiling

  23. Amazin…. Loved it very much…. And sorry for commenting late

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Amnaa… ? no need to say sorry. I am happy that u commented and u liked this episode..thats enough for me dear.

  24. Jessicca

    So sorry Khamoshi… I’m again late… But it was awesome… Amazing… Mine blowing… Outstanding… Loved it from the core of my heart ❤ Fantastic…

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much need to say sorry.. i am happy with ur response dear.. lots of love to u

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