Kismat Konnection {Epi-14 MAHA-EPISODE} (#Khamoshi)

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Episode is already too long so without wasting much time..today i am directly jumping to the episode only. TODAY’S EPISODE IS FULL OF FUN , DRAMA, ROMANCE AND TWIST.
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Previous Episode Link as well as reply to all your comments: (Sorry for not mentioning name thus time)

http://www.tellyupdates.com/kismat-konnection-epi-13-khamoshi/
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RECAP: All misunderstanding between Kabir and Sanchi gets cleared. Kabir is upto confess his love to Sanchi. Sanchi has idea about it but being nervous ..she avoids Kabir’s talk. PRASHA’s Plan Love Possible gets successful. Now the MAHA-EPISODE begins here…
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THE EPISODE STARTS WITH PraSha coming late to the Hostel room while Sanchi was waiting for them since so long. They came tired.. Exhausted.. Keeps their belongings to their bed and sits on Sanchi’s bed next to eachother.
PRAGYA: Aise tukur tukur hume kahe dekh rahi ho be? (Why are you looking at us like this?)
SANCHI:? (Fuming) don’t be innocent. I know what u did today.. How can u do this to me yaar? And that too u involved Satish in it.. Are u both out of ur mind?
ISHA: Sanchi listen to us naa.. We are sorry. We were just having fun.
Sanchi turns her face and stand folding her arms.
PRAGYA: Isha don’t say sorry to her.. (Sanchi glare her) Don’t u dare say anything to us.. We both have done all this to bring two lovers together. And we took Satish help bcoz he is my …. Let it be. None of ur business..
SANCHI: Who told u to say false things about me to Kabir Sir.. What he thought about me?
ISHA: See… U r not angry on us for playing prank on u..but u r angry on us bcoz u care for What Kabir Sir thinks about u…
PRAGYA: Arey Waah Heroine.. Aaj pehli baar matlab ki baat ki ho..(Wow Isha !! I first tym u said anything meaningful) I’m impressed.
Isha smiles but then realises that she insulted her little bit..so she make faces.
SANCHI: Nothing like that..i don’t care about Kabir Sir.
PRASHA: Ok as u wish.. we will continue this topic later..we are already getting late. Go and change..we also have to get ready.
Sanchi agrees and hugs them.
SANCHI: Sorry i know i over-reacted. Plz forgive me. I was little tensed today thats why.. (she remembers Kabir warning to be prepare for the confession).
PraSha: why? what happened?
SANCHI: Nothing..i will tell later.. Now shall we get ready? (They break their hug)
PRASHA: OK. As your Wish.
Trio gets ready.

(Author’s note: GUYS U CAN CHECK OUT TODAY’S PARTY OUTFIT ON MY WALL POSTS)

PRASHA are already ready and just doing some final touch up …when Sanchi came wearing a long off shoulder gown with Open bouncing curled hairs with long metal earrings. Perfect balance of Makeup. SHE WAS LOOKING LIKE A PRINCESS. Who’s PRINCE has gifted her this dress. She feels happy from inside by wearing it.
PRASHA: (Mouth Open) OMG !!! You are looking so beautiful.
PRAGYA: Aaj to kya gazab dhaa rahi ho tum.. Aaj pakka JIJU tumhe dekhte hi reh jayenge..Riya ka to koi mukabla hi nahi hai tumhare samne.
SANCHI: What u said just right now?
PRAGYA: (bite her tongue) (she remembers Promise given to Kabir for not telling anything to Sanchi) Riya ka koi mukabla nahi hai tumhare samne?
SANCHI: BEFORE that..
PRAGYA: AAJ GAZAB DHAA RAHI HO..
SANCHI: AFTER THAT…
PRAGYA: ( tring to change talks) AAJ JIYU PAKKA TUMHE DEKHTI REH JAYEGI…
SANCHI: NO U SAID JIJU..
PRAGYA: JIJU? Tumhe aaj kuch Zyada sunayi de raha hai kya?.. I said JIYU. (our batch friend JIYANSHI, Fashionista…her nickname is JIYU) She always come in fashion clothes naa thats why…
SANCHI: JIJU… (with low tone then also Pragya heard her)
PRAGYA: Again JIJU…. kaun jiju? Hum to kisi JIJU ko nahi jaante…hum to sirf JIYU ko jaante hai. Haa agar tum hume kisi JIJU se milwana chaho to hum tayyar hai.. (She pulls her leg and tease her)
SANCHI: (She still confused) So why u brought RIYA in between?
ISHA: Stupid.. We all know SDCH ki SUPERMODEL Riya always looks for Kabir Sir.. And all boys looks for her..so today u r giving her much competition..thats why pragya mentioned Riya’s name.
SANCHI: (thinks in a possessive way) If all your talks has completed then shall we leave? We are getting much late..party have been started till now..be quick.
PraSha smiles because they know what’s the reason behind Sanchi’s sudden time punctuality mode ?? (INSECURITY)
ISHA: Yeah of course. But first take this from me…(She handovers 2 masks to them and keep 1 with herself) How can u go without this.. It’s a Masquerade party dear.
PraSan: O !! Thank u dear..we forgot about it.
They leave Hostel to attend SDCH 20th Anniversary Masquerade Party.

SCENE SHIFTED TO PARTY VENUE:
Everything is decorated in high profile way.. Lights, media, camera flashes, photographers, high profile guests, Liquor Bar, Music and yes HOSPITAL STAFF.
Kabir is looking handsome as always. He has worn a perfect party outfit (check it out on my wall..bcoz i don’t know much about mens wear). Mask is colour co-ordinated with the Outfit He was chilling out with other senior doctors. Riya constantly trying to grab his attention towards her. But of no use as always.

(Author’s Note: Everyone present there ..are wearing Mask.. So the mask ON and Identity Gone ߘ←
Then our old matchmaker Meher comes to him with a tall guy in black outfit..i must say he is looking handsome too..or u can say same level as Kabir.
MEHER: HI Golu !!
KABIR: Don’t call me GOLU yaar.. Here i am just KABIR KAPOOR for u all.
MEHER: OK OK..Don’t get angry Mr.Golu Kapoor (Teasingly)
(Kabir makes faces) Ok i want to introduce you to my Fiance Mr.Namik Paul, India’s top most business tycoon and a BACHELOR who is now booked on my name.
KABIR & NAMIK introduces themselves to eachother and do little bit chit chat when suddenly Kabir gets attracted towards a girl wearing red gown with red coloured mask…yes she is Sanchi. (Kabir kaise usey nahi pehchanta?) She looks so gorgeous in red gown that Kabir not able to move his eyes from her. He lost in Sanchi’s beauty that he didn’t noticed that Sanchi came to him and standing just in front of him. Sanchi makes Snapping sound by fingers and bring him to senses.
SANCHI: Sir are u fine? I am talking to u .. (Sanchi also identifies him)
KABIR: (After coming back to senses) Yeah i am fine Sanchi.. You are looking gorgeous.
SANCHI: (blushes) Thank you Sir for this dress.
KABIR: You’re Welcome…. (he noticed that they both are around PRASHA (PRAGYA + ISHA) & NAHER (NAMIK + MEHER).
MEHER: Hey Sanchi, if u both finish with your talks then …i am too here standing with u.
SANCHI: Of Course dear … I know. Thank You !! They shared a hug.
MEHER: Thank you for what? (teasingly)
SANCHI: Hmm nothing.. Just my heart told me to say Thanks to you..so i did. (smiling)
MEHER: Ok dear…You’re welcome for any reason.. Btw meet my Fiance NAMIK PAUL.
SANCHI: Hello.. I am very glad to meet you.
PraSha, KaNchi and NaHer chit chat.
Then Mr. Malhotra’s secretary came to call Meher to make her meet some VIP GUESTS of today’s function..so she leave.
Namik is standing with our SDCH Gang.
Kabir and Sanchi just looking at eachother.. Both are waiting to talk to eachother alone..without any disturbance..
So as the time is passing… Some events are organised to entertain all guests.

So after some fun related activities and games…next thing happens is a dance performance by random people.. Whoever wants to dance can come to the dance area and dance with their partners. (announcement made by anchor)
So the song BEHKE BEHKE plays from the movie AISHA. (Dance Style: Salsa, Speedy track) with MASK ON
Everyone goes and select their partners to perform..
Pragya goes with Garv (Veer’s friend) , Isha goes with Karan (Random Intern) Kabir was just about to ask Sanchi for a dance when Riya grabs his hand and request him to be her partner for a dance… Kabir was about to say NO to her but then to make Sanchi confess her love to him.. by making her jealous made him to say YES to her. While RIYA goes on Cloud Nine as if she wins a match against Sanchi.
SANCHI gets upset seeing Kabir going with Riya to dance.

(Author’s Note: Plz don’t miss the scenes between the Song lyrics)

Behke behke nain, cheenay dil ka chain
Toh yeh pyaar hai
Koi intezaar karde bekaraar
Toh yeh pyaar hai

(Sanchi feels jealous seeing Kabir and Riya so close.. She can’t bare seeing them together.)

Yaadein, dil ko tadpayein
Saansein, ulajti jaaye
Aankhein, sapne dikhlaye
Jab anjaane

(SANCHI asks Namik for a dance till Meher comes. Namik firstly hessitates but after he saw Sanchi ‘s anger towards Kabir…he easily understands and agrees for dance) {Meher told him the whole story of KANCHI…an UNREALISED LOVE to him already}

Aankhon, se tu gabhraye
Raaton, mein so na paaye
Haathon, ko malta jaaye
Tu deewane

[SANCHI and NAMIK joins the dance floor with intense dance steps like Kabir and Riya ..infact all dances same way only..just like song in movie]

Hote hote oh yeah
Ho jaane do na pyaar

Sh sh shake that booty
Till I wanna get? Summer back duty
Everybody know user queue
Everybody get little bit movie
Now your body your? Revenge got style
Tell me wonder in the about all dua
She just fuse the way that you move
She got gang she got the moves
Just bombay, just bombay

[The Partners gets exchanged now… Pragya & Karan, Namik & Isha, Riya & Garv and Of course now our Kabir & Sanchi]

Dhoondti hai nazar, ik haseen ko agar
Koi armaan leke
Toh prem mein nagar ki taraf hai safar
Dil ka sauda leke
Pighla sa pighla sa ho ju mann
Sundar sa sundar sa ho ju tann
Dil jo dhadakte hain shole bhadakte hain, hosh toh khota hai, pyaar jab hota hai

(Kanchi now Dances more Passionatly..Kabir tightens his grip on sanchi by her waist and make her come more closer to him)

SANCHI: i am surprised Sir, you are dancing on a this song and that too Salsa.
(KABIR TWIRLS HER)
KABIR: You have not known be completely dear..(Speaks in her ears with husky voice) i am a surprise package for you .. i must say you dance well..but
SANCHI: (Curious) But What?
KABIR: (Teasingly) But not like Riya.. She is good.
SANCHI: (fumingly) Ok so u dance with her only. I am going. (she is about to go when kabir pulls her with a jerk by her waist..and continue Salsa Dance steps.

Hote hote oh yeah
Ho jaane do na pyaar

SANCHI: Leave me Kabir.. You think Riya is better than me ..then just go to her.
KABIR: (Pulling her more Closer) When i said Riya is better than you? You are above all… You are Special.. You are everything to me.. (He whispers in her ear) I LOVE YOU SANCHI.
SANCHI: (Speechless) She blushes. But do not give him reply.. They continue dance.

Behke behke nain, cheenay dil ka chain
Toh yeh pyaar hai
Koi intezaar karde bekaraar
Toh yeh pyaar hai
Yaadein, dil ko tadpayein
Saansein, ulajti jaaye
Aankhein, sapne dikhlaye
Jab anjaane
Aankhon, se tu gabhraye
Raaton, mein so na paaye
Haathon, ko malta jaaye
Tu deewane

KABIR LOOKING AT SANCHI LOVINGLY.. She Smiles and Kabir lifts her up with hands..like a step in salsa ..everyone does that so no one paid much attention towards our KANCHI.

Hote hote oh yeah
Ho bhi jaane do na pyaar
Hote hote oh yeah
Ho bhi jaane do na pyaar
SONG FINISHES.
Everyone Cheers for the dance while Kabir ask for the answer from Sanchi. She leaves dance floor blushing. Kabir Follows her. THEY REMOVE MASKS FROM THEIR FACE. While others continued with their dance.
They sit next to eachother at Bar. They orders 2 orange juice mocktail (without alcohol contains). Kabir and Sanchi talks with eachother while RIYA makes a plan and execute it with the help of the Bartender by giving him some bribe. Bartender mixes some alcohol with 1 glass of mocktail while other is perfectly fine. Riya orders him to serve that alcohol content mocktail to KABIR ..so she can come closer to him and she will keep sanchi far from him.

Bartender: (Giving alcoholic mocktail to Kabir) Sir here is your order. KABIR TAKES IT.KABIR: Have this Sanchi. You need this more than me.. Bcoz i know you are feeling more thristy after what i said to you (Mujhe pata hai..maine jo tumse kaha ..woh sunke tumhara gala sukh gaya hoga…BCOZ OF FEAR & NERVOUSNESS.) (TEASINGLY)
SANCHI: (feels Shy but takes it ) she drinks it in one go. (She gets doubtful with its taste but ignores it)
Kabir Drinks Mocktail which is for Sanchi.
While Bartender gets tensed bcoz Sanchi drank that particular drink which was supposed to be for Kabir..he tells this to Riya. Riya gets angry but after that she thinks..its good only, now Sanchi will destroy her life by her own hands only. She forgives bartender and he leaves.
RIYA: Just wait and watch Sanchi…how i snatch kabir from you.
Now Mr. MALHOTRA announces some future plans regarding SDCH and officially closed the event by a thanks giving speech to all staffs and VIP GUESTS. Everybody gets upset by hearing about closing of party which was noticed by Dr. Malhotra.
Dr. Malhotra: Hmm guys… I have a gift for u all…my all doctors and staff.. Your Party is still On. Continue with it. We are leaving this venue but not u..
(Everyone gets happy and cheers Dr. Malhotra’s name.)
But to inform u all… Don’t break any rules as well as any head (Joking).
He leaves to see off his guests and leave the party venue with his family except Riya.
Meher and Namik comes to Kanchi after having argument (Prem Bhari Nok Jokk).
KABIR: What happened to u Miss. Drama? (Smiling bcoz of good mood, Reason-Sanchi)
MEHER: Huh.. Nothing
NAMIK: What Nothing? You are angry on me like i have snatched something from u without your permission… (Showing attitude)
MEHER: Yeah you did… How can u snatched the right of mine to dance with u…? You didn’t even waited for me…how mean u are !!!
SANCHI: Sorry to interupt u guys..but plz stop fighting..it was my fault.. I asked him for a dance bcoz Kabir was…. (She stops)
KABIR gets happy from inside by seeing Sanchi’s jealousy for Riya.
NAHER gives smile to eachother (hidden plan)
MEHER: So in that case i want to dance with u namik and Kabir & Sanchi u have to join us for a dance as a punishment.
KANCHI hessitantly agrees bcoz they thought the fight between them caused by them.
MEHER: OK DJ ..now play my favourite song.

Suddenly Rain starts.. All the guests and Hospital staff leaves for their home bcoz of bad weather condition. There are only KANCHI, NaHer and PraSha are present. Riya also there but seeing all this hiddenly…to have a check on Sanchi’s activity after alcoholic effects.

(Author’s Note: Other than performers are not getting drenched in rain water bcoz they are standing under a small shelter where 3-4 people can stand comfortably)

The Song “Pyaar Ki Ek Kahaani Suno” from the movie “Honeymoon travels” plays.. (Dance Style SALSA and FLAMENCO, Tempo – Normal , MASK ON)
First NaHer starts with their performance… Romantically.
Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha, Ek Ladki Thi
Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnabi
Dono Tanaha Se The
Par Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi )…

KANCHI ENTERS THE DANCE FLOOR AND NAHER EXITS.

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi

Gumsum Gumsum Rehte The Dono
Phir Bhi Dil Mein Kehte The Dono
Koyi Sapana Hum Bhi To Paayein
Ek Din Tute Ghum Ke Woh Ghere
Jhilmil Jhilmil Aaye Savere
Mausam Badala Jaagi Fizaayein
Woh Mil Gaye, Woh Khil Gaye
Aur Pyaar Ho Hi Gaya
Jo Maanga Tha, Woh Paaya To
Hosh Kho Hi Gaya
Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi

NAHER JOINS THEM AGAIN ON DANCE FLOOR. NOW BOTH COUPLE DANCE MORE PASSIONATLY

Haule Haule Abb Woh Deewaane
Gun Gun Gaaye Dil Ke Taraane
Sun Sun Jhumein Saari Hawaanyein
Dhadkan Dhadkan Hai Behaki Behaki
Mann Mann Mann Mann Chaahat Hai Mehaki
Sapane Apane Jaadu Jagaayein
Phir Dekhoge Toh Jaanoge

BOYS LEAVE THE DANCE FLOOR AND GIRLS PERFORM SOME FLAMENCO DANCE STEPS (FOOT TAPPING STEPS)
KABIR GETS A PHONE CALL FROM KUSUM..HE ATTENDS THE CALL WHILE SANCHI STILL DANCING WITH MEHER.

Kya Hai Nasha Pyaar Ka
Yahi Sochoge Yahi Chaahoge
Sun Rahi Ye Sada

BOTH GUYS ENTERS ON DANCE FLOOR. WHILE NOW THE ALCOHOL STARTS SHOWING IT’S EFFECT ON SANCHI… SHE CAN’T ABLE TO SEE PROPERLY…EVERYTHING IS BLUR.. BUT ONE THING IS REPEATING CONTINUOUSLY IN HER MIND THAT..SHE LOVES KABIR. NAHER STARTS DANCE WHILE SANCHI DANCE WITH HER PARTNER.

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha, Ek Ladki Thi
Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnabi
Dono Tanaha Se The
Par Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi…

SONG FINISHES. WHILE SANCHI IN ALCOHOLIC EFFECT..CONFESS HER LOVE.
SANCHI: I LOVE YOU… I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. YOU CAN’T EVEN THINK OF IT. PLZ NEVER LEAVE ME.
EVERYONE GETS DUMPSTRUCK FOR A WHILE.. BUT THEY CLAPS AFTER THE MASKED PARTNER OF HER ALSO CONFESS HIS LOVE TO HER IN FRONT OF EVERYONE.
MAN: I LOVE YOU TOO SANCHI. (HE HUGS HER TIGHTLY) I PROMISE…I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU AGAIN. (HE REMOVES HIS MASK… PRAGYA, ISHA, MEHER, NAMIK AND …….KABIR (standing at a distance) GETS SHOCKED TO SEE THE MAN——VEER)
(VEER HAS CO-INCIDENTALLY WORE A SIMILAR KIND OF OUTFIT JUST LIKE KABIR)….SO OTHERS ALSO GOT CONFUSED.
Due to Alcohol effect, Sanchi is not aware of the fact…she thinks the man to be Kabir not Veer. After that Sanchi loses her balance and rest her head on Veer’s shoulder & hugs him. Kabir gets misunderstanding and leaves from there with heavy heart. His tears starts rolling down to his cheeks. He rushed towards his home in his car heartbroken. He is just gettling glimse of SANCHI & VEER’s Love Confession in mind repeatedly. NaHer also leaves from there by seeing the situation.
VEER on other side feeling happy without knowing about the confusion..he lifts Sanchi and goes to hostel with Isha & Pragya to drop Sanchi in her room. PraSha didn’t get time to clear his misunderstanding due to stress regarding Sanchi’s health. Riya Smirks. She calls Dr. KABIR on his cellphone But he didn’t pick her calls.

PRECAP: Veer’s apology to Sanchi for his deeds….A Small Leap is ahead … So just wait and watch what happens next.

THANK U ALL MY DEAR FRIENDS…FOR READING MY STUPID LONG EPISODES EVERYTIME AND GIVING YOUR PRECIOUS TIME ON MY ARTICLES.
Hope you guys like my 2 current favourite sound tracks which are amazing for Salsa Dance performance.
Do Share Your Opinions On this ff episode…It really means a lot to me. And a request to all silent readers..plz do comment on my ff..so i get to know..i am writing good or wasting everyone’s time. If u all are getting bore with this..then i will stop writing it.. Plz share honest opinion on it..if anyone want to correct me..plz feel free to do so..u can msg me on private chat also.

HAPPY NAVRATRI TO ALL… Jai Mata Di

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50 Comments
  1. Khamoshi

    Sorry…typing mistake.. it’s 14th episode..not 13th

  2. Anonymousaa

    Oh no misunderstanding created !!!! 🙁
    I hope the misunderstanding gets cleared soon. No lambi judaai plz
    Party scenes were awesome though I am sad about the climax scene.
    You r not wasting ur time n neither we r doing so. Personally I love ur ff so much that I wait for it.
    Plz post next epi ASAP.
    PS. Happy Navratri to u too my dea !

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u do much anonymoussa for ur kind words..and trust me..u will gonna enjoy thr next part.. no more lambi judaai for sure..just wait and watch. And i am very much glad to know that u like my ff .. i was little bit in bad mood so i wrote stupid things in this ff and before submitting it i forgot to remove it.. so sorry

      1. Anonymousaa

        Wow toh mein aaj chan ke neend soungi afterall my Kanchi will not be separated for long.
        STUPID THINGS?????? Where are they? I haven’t seen anything of that sort. What I know is that ur ffs are always superb. Keep rocking dea! Luv u loads.

    2. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Anonymousaa for so much of love.. love u too dear.

  3. Anuradha123

    Wish u a happy navaratri too…. May maa durga gives u all the happiness n showers her blessings.. Coming to the story, fantastic, marvellous, wonderful, extraordinary…. I m speechless yaar… The story created a spell now I can’t wait for the next part…. Please update soon…

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much anuradha dear.. i am glad u liked it..and i will try to post asap bcoz i am preparing for UPSC thats why not getting enough time to write much. But still i will try my best.

  4. Niyati

    Aww, misunderstanding created between veer & kabir. Episode is awesome & song is suted.Pragya dialogue was too funny. Love it from botton of my heart. Ya,cleared misunderstanding & update soon.Lots of love & hugs to u.

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u do much niyati dear.. i am gkad that u liked it.. and yeah i will try to post next one asap ? stay tuned

  5. sweetie it’s not boring it’s beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond everything. iam ur Jabra fan.i think I should learn from u. it’s just outstanding. I kill u if you say it’s boring because boring is my dialogue and my ff. anyways lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads ?????

    1. Khamoshi

      Forgot to tell… lots of kisses and huggs to u too dear..a big wali jhappi to u ?

    2. Khamoshi

      Ashnita don’t copy me…i am your jabra fan ??..i am learning from u dear..and i didn’t wished to copy ur BORING tag line..hehe but i felt that again and again i am creating misunderstanding between KANCHI..so u l be feeling boring to this..so i said sorry for boring episodes..but kehte hai naa..jaha pyaar hota hai waha hi gussa or takraar hoti hai.. so just stay tuned dear..i will try to post next one asap.

  6. Palak.Sharma

    Oh No!!! Kanchi was so close to … but then that stupid Riya and now Veer thinks that!! ????
    But overall an OUTSTANDING episode!! Hats off to you

    1. Khamoshi

      Thanks Palak dear.. i am glad u got involved with the story.. ? don’t feel sad for Kanchi.. more twists are ahead

  7. Happy Navarati yaar.????.Episode bhut acha hae but last part par kar i am feeling very sad please yaar don’t separate kanchi…….. please please please kanchi ko ak kar do …….. plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz?????????????????…………

    1. Khamoshi

      Thanks anu dear for the liking my episode ..before climax ? no issue.. but i give assurance to u..i will not going to separate saBir for long tym.. stay tuned

  8. Aafiya

    Awesome episode..
    Please clear the misunderstanding soon.
    Waiting for your next update

    1. Khamoshi

      Thanks Aafiya ? and yeah i will do it soon…stay connected

  9. Amazing Superbbbbb

    1. Khamoshi

      Thanks alia ?

  10. Khamoshi

    Ashnita don’t copy me…i am your jabra fan ??..i am learning from u dear..and i didn’t wished to copy ur BORING tag line..hehe but i felt that again and again i am creating misunderstanding between KANCHI..so u l be feeling boring to this..so i said sorry for boring episodes..but kehte hai naa..jaha pyaar hota hai waha hi gussa or takraar hoti hai.. so just stay tuned dear..i will try to post next one asap

  11. Amazing…. And its not boring at all.. Loved it

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u Amnaa dear?

  12. Abhilasha

    Awww so sad for my kabir……..but u r always amazing dear and so is ur story ……….dear keep Rocking and plzzz make kanchi met soon!!

    1. Khamoshi

      Thanks Abhilasha … and i promise i will fufill ur wish/demand/order asap ??

  13. My dear sis.. Its wonderful yaar…kya misunderstanding create kiya hai aap ne mind blowing…pyar ki ek kahani suno…is my favorite song dear…keep writing.. Navratri wishes to you dear:-)

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u pickoo dear ? i am glad that u liked it.

  14. Niyaaa

    Hey khamoshi again a wonderfull amaz epi dear hey u know my fav dance style is also salsa hehehe….mujhe achcha laga jab tumne salsa style use kiya i lovvvv dancing a lot actually ye kah sakte h ek passion h mere liye leave it btw mitali mujhe current track seriously bhut achcha lag raha h far betterrrrrrr than seriel yakkkk seriel ki to baat mat karo awsome nd sach kahun mujhe ye judai scene kuch jyada pasand h hehehe…actually jab patch up hota h to pyaar or gahra ho jata h thats why iska matlab ye nahi ki tum inhe durr kar do no way m just kidding …. Ek help chahiye thi tumse dear agar kisi ko TU pe personal msg krna ho to kaise kare i mean id ki jarurat nhi hoti naa or agar koi post ex. K liye os post krna ho to kaise krte h wo bhi ussi sereil ki wall page per mujhe nahi pta agar tum bta sako to plzzz help me mujhe kuch ideas h per isliye post nahi kar rahi kahin galat jagah post naa ho jaye….sorry tumne itna pakane k liye awsome dear keep it up post nxt asap tc..

    1. Khamoshi

      Niyaaaaaa first of all a big hug to u bcoz i love watching dance but don’t know how to do it…and i am happy that u do Dance..so cheers to that.. lots of love to u for appreciating my ff and being by regular reader….
      Second.. i am not at all afraid of big comment bcoz i do write long long Mahabharat in my ff ?
      So here we start
      Just take example of my profile. Follow steps:
      Click in my name KHAMOSHI..then u will see my profile.
      You will see 4 options there..
      1st-Wall
      2nd-Profile
      3rd-My posted articles
      4th-My Comments on variius Posts
      And top of all a msg symbol..from where u will directly msg me there. (I don’t know any unregistered id can msg or not)

      And i never posted any OS till now so i can’t say much about that but still the steps are:
      Go to hope page..click on three lines at top left corner of page.
      Select Submit Your Articles.
      Then follow as per rules and select FAN FICTION in Category and upload a pic as a thumbnail..and submit the article till it gets successful..i posted my 1st article for twice bcoz of confusion but u don’t do that.. Articles Submitted Successfully msg will appear and ur post will be publish soon after TU approves it.

      Simple thing…waiting for ur first try dear.. post soon ..best wishes

      1. Niyaaa

        Thankkkkkk uuuuuuu veryyyy muchhhh mitalli nd os main abhi soch rahi hun ki krun ki nahi actually sach to ye h ki meri grammer bahut buri h thats why m bilkul bhi post nahi karna chahti otherwise mere pass ides to bahut h per himmat nahi ho rahi sochungi and thanks for wishes…lovvv u post nxt one and i tried to send u msg but some error occured i’ll try later thanks again

  15. Riyarocks

    no yaar………..no more misunderstandings plz…………can’t bear to see them away even for a sec.I just hope that kanchi would solve all this soon………..& dear, I just luv salsa,(though I’m a contortion dancer, but I just luv the grace involved in salsa…..)….& the song u chose was also perfect for the situation….luv u dher saara……….plz post nxt one asap………

    1. Khamoshi

      Chill riya..i am not going to separate KANCHI for long time.. i also can’t see them away for a sec..trust me siso..haha
      Thanks for ur love and comments dear..it always bring a wide smile on my face.

  16. Trisha139

    Oh my god such a beyind perfect update
    I don’t have words for this seriously yaar
    AMAZING ! SUPERB ! MARVELLOUS !
    Pls don’t separate Kanchi !
    Luv uh loads

    1. Khamoshi

      Thanks trisha dear.. your compliment really means a lot to me.. it’s not just an appreciation for me but it inspires me more.. i feel i improved my skill of writing compare to my 1st post..just bcoz of u all and ur advices..i feel lucky to have u all

  17. Dhruti

    superb one ,marvellous,amazing,mind blowing!! i have no words for your this wala ff i just love this one
    all outfits are awesome specially sanchi’s outfit
    again misunderstanding is create awwwwwwwww!!!
    please short out this misunderstanding soon
    update next one soon

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much dhruti… i am glad u liked it..and sorry for creating misunderstanding again..but more twists are ahead in my ff..just stay tuned

  18. Hey what is this yaar y u maked it totally collapse….

    1. Khamoshi

      Sorry dear.. but what u want to say? i didn’t get it…
      Hmm if its about separtiin of KANCHI..then dear plz wait for the next coming episodes..i give u assurance that ur wish will soon get fulfilled…till then just stay tuned

  19. RuCh23

    Wwooww ?????? awesome!!!! I have no words to describe this Mitali!!!! Outstanding ????

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much Ruwani… i am so happy that today u were the only one who didn’t say anything to me for separation Kanchi ???? thank u

  20. Anee

    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god Mitali…..First off alll amazing updates dear………….then a huge misunderstanding…………………hope sort out will be soon…………………………Happy Navratri To you Dear….JAI MATA DI.

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u so much dear for ur kind words..and yeah it will be clear soon..just wait for the right tym ?

  21. Awsm epi…feeling bad fr Kabir….Hpe their misunderstanding wl soon b over…

    1. Khamoshi

      Thank u Sanjukta dear..happy to see a new commenter on my ff.. i am ver glad u liked it dear.. stay tuned to know what happen next

  22. Moonlight25

    MITALI DEAR…I AM SO SORRY FOR COMMENTING LATE I JUST CAME FROM DANCE CLASSES AND I AM EXTREMELY TIRED BUT AFTER SEEING YOUR EPI… I WAS SOOO HAPPY….IT WAS JHAKAAS…I AM COME COMPLETELY FAN IF YOURS…YOU ARE TOO GOOD TO BE PRAISED…AND I JUST LOVE SALSA ALTHOUGH I AM DOING ORIENTAL….GREAY GOING DEAR….AND PLEASE CLEAR THE MISUNDERSTANDINGS…..POST ASAP…
    LOVE YOU LOADS ❤❤❤

    1. Khamoshi

      Thanks Tania …and no need to say sorry..i understand it very well. And in friendship..no sorry but thank u can be accepted…so accept my thank u ?? .
      And dear i already posted the next part but TU publishers made a mistake and posted my update on Swaragini section.. u can get the link of it on my wall..if u want to read it then go ahead..bcoz may be tomorrow my resubmitted part will also published on SDCH section.
      Thanks for the appreciating words ..for boosting my morale..lots of love

  23. O.M.G ….
    It was just just just an outstanding and stupendous episode dear…
    It was a long chapter but it seemed to me shorter … I was glued to it …. U writing is so phenomenal sweetie ….
    A bow for ur honour….
    Loads of love and kisses????

    1. Khamoshi

      Awww.. thanks for the wonderful comment dear..it’s ue first comment on my ff series..i am so happy to see u dear. Yeah my episodes are usually of long length only (unintentionally) but this was Maha One..thats why LONGESTTTTT.. ??? but thanks for the mind blowing appreciating words..it really touched my heart and brought a wide smile on my face

  24. Jessicca

    Khamooshhhiii…. You mailed it girl… Enjoyed every single part of the episode… It was truly awesome… Amazing… And you date call it bring up kill you… It’s so interesting… Superbbb… I’m a big big fan if yours sweetheart… Love you … Keep going…❤❤

    1. Khamoshi

      Tysm jessicca dear..i am glad that u liked it.. happy to see u back.. awww such a lovely comment dear… now i will not say my articles boring.. i want to live not to be murdered by my sweet lovely frnd ??
      Sorry for the lengthy articles.. ?

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