Khaab- Twinj OS

Here we go…

Kunj ws shown sitting in the centre of a cafe type place holding a guitar in his hand….

He started singing…

Main jadon tere khaab an wale raah tureya
Main turreya bada na maithon jawein mudeya
O jive rehnde panne nal panne judd de
Main ravaan tere nal ohna waangu judeya

Main likhda hunda si tere baare adiye
Jaa ke puchle gawah ne taare adiye
Jo karde mazak ohna hass lainde
Jo taane kassde ohna nu kass lainde

…….
While singing the whole while..he was seeing a particular direction as if his whole life is settled their……
Yeah in tat direction a beautiful girl wss being sitted she was busy reading smething…while the rest of the ppl in the cafe were busy listening to his voice…. nd was appreciating him while tat girl ws nt giving any sort of attention to him….. bt he was trying his best to gain her attention…. he have never talked to her…bt always followed her… he is soo mad for her… he loves her more than himself..bt like always tat girl never gave even a smile to him….
………..

Next day on a road….

Kunj was being sitted at the roadside nd was continuing wid his song……as he know tat the girl…or can say his dream girl will pass thru here….

Dil tainu rehnda sadda chete karda
Kise hor te na maare tere te hi marda
Ban meri rani tera raja ban jaan
Tu hi ban mera ghar darwaza ban jaan

O tainu vekh jaava tere val rudeya
Tu fool te main tahni wangu naal judeya
Main jado tere khaab an wale raah tureya
Main turreya bada na maithon jawein mudeya
O jive rehnde panne nal panne judd de
Main ravaan tere nal ohna waangu judeya

Layi na tu mainu bahute laare adiye
Ni hor kitte rehjiye kunware adiye
Mere supne bade ne keh lainde
Na bhejj main dur nede reh lai de

Ae pyar rahe pura na rahe thudeya
Main umraan tayi teere naal raha judeya…..

Main jado tere khwaab an wale raah tureya
Main turreya bada na maithon jawein mudeya
O jive rehnde panne nal panne judd de
Main ravaan tere nal ohna waangu judeya

All the crowd gathered near him for listening his song bt tat girl jst passed away without even looking at him…. its nt like tat crowd has nt attracted her bt smething might have stopped her….dont know wat…..
This was enough for kunj…he jst wanted to knw tat why is she doing like this wid him…ya she might nit love him bt ignoring him is also nt the option….. he jst left the place behind her…..
Their he saw her wid smeone else bt talking in sign language nd the person was also replying him the same way….. he was in total shock to see this…tears were rolling down his eyes…
The girl for wwhom he sang all the while….is nt reacting to him..bcz she cant listen nd even tslk tooo….
He felt very bad nd even guilty as either for a moment or two he cursed her…….
He was in total shock tat wat jst happened now…

he left the place heartbroken….
he was seen nowhere after tat to her…. this is ofcourse nt like tat she have nt noticed him…. she noticed him evrywhere bt due to her weakness nd all….she never got courage to go near him nd talk to him…as she feared she will even loose his sight…. bt now is tat fear changed into reality…has she lost him forever…. evn his sight….

tw was thinking all this sitting in the cafe at her regular seat…bt her questions get the answers wen the lights of the cafe gets switched off nf a spotlight ws pointed to a particular chair…. their he ws sitting like always looking breathtaking bt the thing which make him different today tat he was having no guitar wid him today….has he left singing?????

The answer to the question is no….bt he have improved himself….

then again he started to sing the song bt now wid the hand actions describing the meaning of each nd every word…pointing towards his lady love…. .

Aa kathe ho ke duniya bana laye
Rusiye te ta jhat hi mana laye
Choli teri khushiyaan naal bhar daunga
Supne aa wala tainu ghar daunga
Khaab Lyrics at lyricsted.com
Ae fikke nahi laare eh sahchi gudde aa
Tere lai ae haath Rabb agge judeya

Main jado tere khwab an wale raah tureya
Main turreya bada na maithon jawein mudeya
O jive rehnde panne nal panne judd de
Main ravaan tere nal ohna waangu judeya

Tw was having tears of happiness in her eyes feeling the song….she was soo happy…..

Kunj jst opened her arms inviting her for a hug… she immediately ran nd hug him tight….
He responded to his hug wid equal passion…. both were soo happy at that moment nd was shedding tears of happiness….

After 5 yrs….

A small boy ws seen singing a song on the middle of the stage….

Main jado tere khwab an wale raah tureya
Main turreya bada na maithon jawein mudeya
O jive rehnde panne nal panne judd de
Main ravaan tere nal ohna waangu judeya

After finishing his song…he jst ran nd hugged his parents standing in front of him…
Boy- happy anniversary maa papa….
Yes the parents were revealed to be our twinj..nd tat cute little boy was their kid…. Akhil…( the original singer of the song…??)…

Tw picked him in her arms nd he kissed her cheeks…kunj forwarded his cheek bt he refuses to kiss him…
Saying papa…boys shud kiss only girls…??….
Listening this kunj pouts whereas tw laughs….
( yeah guys tw can listen now……as she wss undergone an operation…)…
Kunj- okkk..i think i hve to bring a sister for u to get me a kiss…nd winks naughtily at tw…
Tw beats him playfully… nd then they all laugh….

Screen freezes on their happy faces…..

The end….

# ridhima….

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Hi guys…i m ananya….friend of ridhi….
Actually this story is based on the song in the story nd is written by ridhi ofcourse…
She wrote is a long back bt have nt posted it…wenevr i asked her to post she always refused me saying tat this is nt her ideas bt based on a song…. so she cant cheat….
Bt fortunately i get mobile yesterday…yeah…
I loved this os so thought to share this….nd i can say tat the idea is same bt their is always ridhi
s twist in between…..tat is her way of expressing… use batana mat i praised her otherwise she will not let me live….
u guys must be thinking tat why i telling this all to u..the thing is vry clear that dont tell her abt this os ever…othrrwise she will eat me alive….??…nd i dont want to die soonn….
if possible watch the video of the song u will love this more than…. bie all of u…thanks for bearing my bakwas nd ridhis os….??…
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Credit to: ridhima

11 comments

  1. Sanam

    Wooooow . I loved it . So emotional
    And ya a silly error happened ie twinkle was passing by and not passed away .

  2. Hey ananya ya I had dat song n video too its jusss amazing n osmmmmmmmm loved its ending Ik dat ending is added bt yeah song is jus superb very heart touching yaar really shld once again watch d video yea guyz go n watch d video it fab loved it….????????ty for writing it buddy

  3. Khaab is my fav song and Akhil is my fav singer and twinj are my fav couple….so u know that I’m just overjoyed….luvd it…

  4. dreamer

    Ananya actually I never have seen that video but I loved the os.ridhi very good.
    Luv u both.

  5. Sayeeda

    Hey Ananya thank u so much that u posted this os or else our dambo Ridhi would always make us unaware of such beautiful one…let her come back I will surely scold her for saying that this is not good enough….nd is so good to see an os based on song..awesome idea… nd the song is one of mine fav in my playlist…. loved it…

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