KB story of faith season 2 (Episode 63) last episode

At present

That day I was fully shattered but I got the support of my him as per his wish which was Papa please never ever shed tears reminding me and don’t let do so maa also its your Pulkit’s request these words by him was my support and I supported them also from getting out from that shock which we faced It was good that Dadi sent Chhotu out with Purab as looking his elder brother in that state was not good for a kid so Purab with Chhotu went that day somewhere else and after we completed all the rituals they were back we hide that his dada was not more to play with him for some time but when he was big enough to understand the things we told him that where is his beloved dada now that boy is more naughty then his brothers and sisters I know he is now a tall handsome boy of 24 but he is still a kid from his heart and not him my all army is a kid still now from heart. I kept his promise that I have to keep my family happy and I did so that day my two daughters Abhigya and Subuhi lost their dada but in return got two more brothers who were monkey like creatures for my wife and jokers for my rest of the family we have crossed each and every face of life together and today almost 50 years of our marriage are completed in which 20 years of our son’s rebirth are included. Re-birth?

Yes the rebirth actually I am not saying that Fuggy said that he got re-birth why? I will tell you it was the day of 26 Jan as usual brave people were awarded so does my son they called us both there to receive the price and we received it then next day we were called again as they called us to share our feelings for an interview as we have lost our son so we went all other parents were also there some of them were like us some were just came with their relatives just for knowing what people think about Army after losing their loved ones I was tensed that how will she tell this to the world that how she is feeling and although she was still sad but one incident changed her mind and that was there a mother was scolding her son on his choice of serving for the nation she said that you will die if you will go there and no one will remember you your existence will end after sometime govt. will appreciate you then some news channel will show your story for some days and after that we will have to suffer who will take care of us you are not going to do so don’t know what came in her mind and she wiped her tears with a grace and went to her and slapped her through her words she said that

“if these are your thoughts then I should say that you are very much narrow minded you are not thinking that your son will save the nation your son will be the reason that you will be proud of him that because of him several lives will be saved and several people sleep calmly with a believe that they are safe and it is not necessary that he will die if god has given him life then he will live for sure the women whom she was scolding became angry and shouted on her with glare “who are you to talk about my family matter like this what you will know that how it feels when someone lost their children I know that my sisters son was in army he died in a seize fire I have seen her condition it is worst you rich people what would you know how it feels when anyone lost their children” don’t know but that time she didn’t spoke a word but when it was the time for her to share about her pain as all were there that lady was also there and she started her speech which was really appreciate able I still remember her words from which a clear proud was showering she said

I Am Pragya Abhishek Prem Mehra wife of your beloved rock star Abhi aka Abhishek Prem Mehra but today I am not here as his wife today I am here as mother of Captain Pulkit Mehra yes the same Pulkit Mehra who died saving his flag and batch mates sorry I am wrong he is not dead actually according to him he took rebirth he always said to me that maa I will make you proud one day and see he actually did it he made me proud My husband always believe that it is better that parents should be known after their children name and today I am proud that it is done by our son you people know us as Rock star Abhi or Pragya Abhishek Prem Mehra a famous singer but do you know how the rest of the people know us they don’t use to say that see he is Pulkit Pragya Mehra’s son they use to say see she is Pulkit’s mother that Pulkit who saved our country’s pride and believe me it made you proud more I met one lady today she was saying that army men parents have to suffer a lot and since we are rich people we will not understand it so i want to answer her that I know how it feels when we lose our love just thoughts are different look at me that if one son’s martyr gives me this much pride then what if my every son joins army yes i have two more sons and I wish they too join army follow their brother and believe me I will be cloud nine then because I think that because of those two sons of mine many mothers have their children safe with them every person of this country is safe because of them I will say with proud that I am their mother we people always use to feel bad over their death but have you ever thought what would be their thought when they feels that they will be no more

I can tell you as my son told me he wrote me he said to me when he was closing his eyes that MAA I am leaving for now but for sure i will return don’t feel cry maa and don’t even cry because i am going to live again it will be not a life being a human but it will be life of my country i know you will cry as i will be not with you from now but you know that lady whom i saved she gave me wishes that i will live more and see i am doing so i have lived for you and now living for myself so its my re-birth just think that and other words i want to say that just pray to god everyday that he gives me birth from your womb he make me your son again so that i will be able to live this life again

these were his words so why should I say that my son is died I will say that my son is alive he is near me he is with me everytime now you people tell me that those people spend their life sacrifice their life for us then what we are doing for them what is our responsibility towards them just to comment over them when they face failure just to praise them when they won any war I don’t think so that it is our responsibility I think if even one person from us will fulfill our responsibility then we will be able to comment on them otherwise not for example if I give you that NIRBHAYA INCIDENT in Delhi over which all over INDIA everyone was angry over those culprit that how badly they treated her I want to ask you were there when she was treated she was able to open her eyes she was able to give at least statement regarding what was happened with her what they did with her where were they when she was lying on road without clothes where were they when she was lying unconscious state on that road when her friend was shouting for help no one stopped to help them but what they were doing making video instead of helping so tell me whether it is our responsibility ?

why always if an accident occurs on road then beside saving the person we use to make video of that why we use to gather there is that a drama going over there no right !! then why we use to do so there are many more such incidents if I will describe it to you then it will take much time so I want to say if you want to comment over them then just do your responsibility which is helping others never feel shy over that’s it“

And these words of her slapped that lady again that lady was looking down her face was clearly describing that she is feeling ashamed of her words that day Fuggy was appreciated a lot for that everyone was praising her thoughts and believe me I was the one who clapped hard and went on the stage and covered her through my arms to make her believe that I am always with her there still to protect her from that day I have never saw that Fuggy who was much tensed for her kids although she was as she is a mother after all but not that much and today as I have seen her every face so I am not feeling to write in this diary I have written almost every feeling in it I know it is not filled much because I have written only those moments in it which I found new in her like when she sacrificed her love for Tanu and didn’t even dropped a tear then when she came back to save me from that wrong decision that tanu is carrying my child and I should marry her that day I came to know that she can do anything for saving her family for saving me if she had to die she will do so then when she got in deep shock looking Pulkit in that state when he was just fainted by that heat stroke when she sacrificed her life for me yea that accident then the second face was when she cried and begged in front of Tanu for leaving Subuhi and when she put her life in danger for me that horrible pregnancy period in which I had almost lost her but she was saved as my love and her faith in me brought her back to me then when she took a step of leaving everyone for making Abhu realize her mistake and she was successful in that as from that day Abhu didn’t did that mistake again this diary has seen every horrible and happy as well as sad face of her and today as 50 years are completed of our marriage

so I am shutting this diary as there is no need of it I have seen almost all faces of her and now which are left I want to live that phase with her because now no work will left as my both the princess are going to be married soon they are just waiting for their brother to return as he will return they trio will marry luckily we have got a good groom for Abhu who can handle her very well as he is so good person and his name reminds me of my sweet bhaiya Raj and Subuhi I have to say the groom we have found for her is same like us as Subuhi totally resembles me and his groom is like Pragya haha right he is chashmish we are thinking about their marriage as our twins are almost of 35 and now they should marry and my Subu is also of 30 so it is good that both the sisters will get marry on one day now the only work is left that is we will spend our whole time together only me and my soul mate Mrs Pragya Mehra true definition of wife mother and daughter so GOOD BYE +

Yes it was Abhi who was narrating his story in the diary (we were reading his diary entry) and as he shut the diary a girl wearing cream color pants which have slight cuts on it and black loose tee she rushed in like a storm and said to him “ Papa papa papa he came he is back my idiot is back come soon” yes you guessed right it was Abhigya not Abhigya actually Pop star Abhu yea she made this name her brand name and Abhi said “oho Abhu its ok na don’t be so hurry otherwise you will fall and tell me first what the hell is this have you worn why your pants are torn on your knees give it to your mother she will sew it”
Abhigya : Papa I have already tell you that it is a fashion and by the way we can discuss about it later first come na my idiot is back after five years oops sorry not idiot my Leftenant general Idiot

Abhi laughs : you will not change come lets go
They both leaves and there meets another girl of course she is Subuhi and Abhi scared looking her in that state and shouted hearing his sound she also shouted and with their voice all came out Aliya who use to wear kurta and jean with a high puf bun and Vijay in his formal wear Rahul in his check shirt and black pants and our Mrs Mehra who was wearing light blue saree there was no change in her look but the thing was changed two members were increased in that family yea Rahul was married now and his wife was the same girl whose photo he used to keep hidingly in his physics book and her name was Radhika and they were parents of 10 years old boy named Pranay now dadi was not with us after marriage of Rahul she also went and now she lives in Punjab she is old enough now and lives with Bulbul and Purab there as we set up our company there also so now Purab is in Punjab with dadi.
Pranay : what happened daduu why you shouted like this
Radhika : yes chachu what happened

Abhi : Ask your sister in law and You junior ask your bua how many times I have said Subu that never come out wearing this face pack you look like ghost almost you scared me
Pranay : Bua you scared Dadu bad manners haah dadi scold her she scared me dadu (holding Abhi’s finger)
Subuhi : what I can do didi said that Bhaiya is back so in excitement I came like this only why should I waste time in removing this face pack
Abhi : you mean to save your time you will go anywhere like this only
Subuhi : Of course
Abhi : look girl…….

Pragya cuts off : arey you both father daughter again started leave it now Subu wash your face and Abhishek you come with me and what is this Abhu I have said that don’t wear these clothes at home still you are wearing them go and change them otherwise I won’t let you meet him
Abhigya : But maa…
Pragya and Abhi in chorus folding their hands : no ifs no buts
Subuhi and Abhigya in chorus : dadagiri
Abhi : Papagiri
Pragya : mama giri
Abhigya and Subuhi left the place stamping their feet and one voice came from back aah didi this will not give effect try to wear horse shoe that will give great effect what say Aryan bhaiya and shares a high five and he was none other than chhotu
Subuhi with a glare: Chhotu don’t dare you say that otherwise I don’t know what I will do with you understood
Chhotu : what you will do kick me like a horse
Subuhi : maa stop him otherwise I will surely kick him like that google.com itself will be unable to find him
Chhotu : and what if yahoo.com found me then
Subuhi : ughh maa stop him otherwise…….

Pragya goes and pulls his ears and he shout
Chhotu : mummy its paining leave please
Pragya : Then why are you teasing her say sorry
Chhotu : sorry to this knife face no way
Abhi : then Pragya why will you leave his ear no way
Chhotu : ok ok I am saying……. sorry didi
Pragya : that’s like my boy

All laugh over that and then enters Koyal and all said oh no she again now listen her price of nail polish and she done this as same as she entered she started telling Bade papa maasi maa see my new nail paint and as she started all left from there and she was blabbering alone then the bell ranged and Pragya opened the door and here comes our Prabhas came in he was wearing his uniform and a hat over his head he joined army for his brothers wish not exactly for that yes as he was totally inspired by his elder brother he always wanted to follow him so he did I remember that day when we asked him why he is taking this decision as he has saw his brother what happened to him Pragya asked that why he is doing so he said that I want to complete dada’s dream as all of a sudden it happened now I will complete his dream I know he completed itself but he died at early age now I will serve for nation on his behalf and that day he went on path shown by you my dear Pulkit see how papa kept his promise “

and as Prabhas was hugging everyone Abhi was looking the impression of Pulkit in him he was able to watch that same smiling face same gestures same attitude and then a tear drop from his eye and one voice echoed in his ears “Oho you again broke promise papa see he is return home go and hug him naa otherwise I will not get happy go soon I always say right you are not papa you are maa see how you are crying like her” Abhi looked around and it was Pulkit who was talking to him actually it was his imagination that he is surrounding him so he smiled over himself and went to meet Prabhas he went forward and hugged him then Prabhas said
Prabhas :- what say Popsii how am I looking
Abhigya interrupt : Just as idiot as you are
Prabhas : and you just like that dumbo as you are

Abhigya : How dare you called me dumbo again
Chhotu : then what he should call you didi tell him he will call that only what say bhaiya
Prabhas : Exactly
Rahul : tell us fast Abhu we have to decide that what we should name you
Subuhi : Why are you all priest that you will keep didi’s name
Koyal : don’t know how to talk with girls huh crazy peoples didi ignore him
The argument rose and then a voice came from back yes it was Anirudh and Shitiz although Pulkit was not with them but yeaa they were still here to complete his absence there thought were that we cant be a single Pulkit so we two are complete Pulkit Anirudh always supported Abhu and Subu and Shitiz to Prabhas Rahul and Chhotu Aryan use to stay away with their argument
Anirudh : who Is teasing my sister

Abhigya goes and hugs him : Ani bhaiyya see na how they are teasing us
Anirudh : don’t worry I am here now I will see
Shitiz : What you will see hah my brothers are here what say Yash
Chhotu : Bhaiya I am always with you so no doubt on that
Rahul : great chhote
They were having their nok jhok Abhi and Pragya were looking at their happy world smilingly with mixed emotions when Anirudh and Shitiz came and took blessings from them
Anirudh : kaka we are here to meet you someone see (kaka means Uncle whom we respect same as father )

Shitiz : yea kaki see whom we have brought (kaki means aunty same as mother)
They both called their wives as Abhi and Pragya have seen them but today they were became father so they brought their kids to meet them Anirudh’s son was of 3 months and Shitiz’s son was of 6 months as they both were not with their wives when their kids born so Abhi and Pragya were unaware of that and looking them they got happy and all shared a family hug and Abhi sensed some presence near him and it was Pulkit’s soul who was really present in that house yet and looking them happy like that he folded his hands smilingly and waved bye with one hand which Abhi looked clearly and then that image vanished off and he understood that now his son left looking his family extremely happy.

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The end
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shocked right !!!!! yes this is the end i don’t wanted to end this but i felt that ending story at this point is right decision because dragging unncessary is not good what will happen if i will continue that story will take leap then children will get marry then abhi and pragya will die bla bla bla so that will not good for it thats why to save the charm of this story i am ending it here only today i am thanking each and every person who supported me who read this every silent reader every commenter every one i want to thank god that this story reached till episode 63 still i remember that when i started writing KB story of faith season one there were not much readers so i ended it then at last episode i got to know that there are many readers who are reading this so i continued to season2 i am feeling very much sad that i am ending it but other then that i am happy also because although i didnt got that much response but yes i got much appreciation my story made you people cry laugh sad happy every emotions i felt sucess in describing emotions you know i always use to laugh when you people comment surbhi i was laughing aloud i felt that emotions when you said what you did surbhi made us cry i think i am the worst person because i have made you cry more than laugh but you know i just wanted to show the reality nothing else but as it was the story so something were filmy also but its ok some people were saying that i should convert the whole last episode into a dream sequence so dont take me wrong but i want to question them that i have written that it was a tribute to that great indian soldier hanuman thappa so will it be a justice with him if i will convert the whole sequence into dream think yourself and answer me please and last but not the least this ff will be ALWAYS MY BEST MEMORY BECAUSE IT IS MY FIRST FF AND SECOND REASON IS I GOT MANY FRIENDS HERE SOMIYA REJI SHIRITI RESHMA PRADEEP VAISHALI MY DEAR SIS NIVEDHITIA SHRAYA AKASHYA KANAN KUTTY AKA MANU AND MY BEST GANG LOLZ S.R.R.S didnt got it arey yr somiya reji reshma shiriti THE BEST PART OF THIS FF WAS THAT STAR RATING WHICH I WILL MISS ALOT so now its time to say good bye to you it is
KB STORY OF FAITH SEASON-2
BYE BYE GUYS

Credit to: Surbhi

42 comments

  1. Salisha

    Are you gonna wrote a new ff cuz I love reading your ff. Btw can you give me a link to season 1 of this ff because I can’t it. Thank you??

  2. Maya

    Will miss this ff badly! Ur writings has brought out an array of emotions from me! Now when will i get that chance again to experience all kinds of emotions in just one ff?? Whenever i felt sad ur ff made me happy! Whenever i felt stressed ur ff made me stress free! And on top of all these i will miss the family bonding that u showed in this ff! But its ok as u said its not good to have unnecessary dragging… if there was then it will only lower the value of this ff. Thank u for all the precious thoughts that u have shared through this ff. Thank u for giving me the pleasant experience by reading ur ff and hope if u don’t mind can i call u di? I have alrdy called u as Surbhi di before but i felt its better to get permission from u first.I would also like to wish u the best for whatever ventures that u take in the future!

    • surbhi

      oh Maya thank you so much dear i know that in friend ship their is no sorry no thank you but a sis can say thank you na 🙂

  3. Am surprise…..because u ending ur ff…an slient reader of ur ff…it’s to amZingggggggg and no words to explain…..plz again u can write another ff also and it’s also u can write inspertion story…..it’s was amZing….plz u can think and write the story…..plz it’s humble request……u r thought was sooooo insipring meeeeee………and tqqqqqqqqsoooo much for ur story….it’s was amZing……..

    • surbhi

      thank you so much Sadhna really thank you so much and yea i am writing the another one yr and it is game of destiny hope you will like it

    • surbhi

      yes dear i will and i hope that you understood about how to post ff from last comment as i told you 🙂

  4. durga

    Superb yaar really u r grt writer I proudly say I’m Ur fan yaar… Till now I have read many ff Ur ff vl always close to my heart I won’t forget it Ur ff its s a best ff 4 myself n no story vl tk Ur place really u r grt yaar I’m going to miss Ur ff kb story of faith badly really I don’t even imagine tat all of a sudden u vl end Ur ff its really shocking bt it’s true if u drag thn it vl loss it’s cherish thn v also vl felt boring bt u made a CRT decision bt really I dint even thk Ur single episode s lk dragging r boring lk tat u made every episode rocking with full of love cuteness care family response everythg I thk u dint left single emotions … thn u r just amazing writer keep rocking in Ur life

    • surbhi

      thank you so much durga i am very happy that you understood my decision and supporting me thank you so much dear

  5. shashi

    When our loved ones go away from us it gives a huge pain forever. This is the life although we wouldn’t ready to accept. But “someone should have to sacrifice their own happiness for others lives to make happy.” This is the my sister’s last statement used to say me when she was left me. I was ten that she told this. I thought she had gone crazy. But now I know it’s not a crazy ; it’s a duty. Which gave honour. We can’t stop being die. But we can lead our life with honour. Actually your last two episode make me too emotional. Because this incident very closet to my heart. And thanks for realizing me that. As well as I think I should fulfill my sister’s dream which can’t fulfill. U r awesome and nice story! I think u will meet us another wonderful ff. Onece again thanks for realizing me my sister’s dream which I forgot!

    Great work! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • surbhi

      thank you shashi and yes we all have some responsibilities which we have to fulfiil dear thank you so much and i am impressed by your thoughts seriously

  6. Reji

    Arreyy kyun iss ff katham kar diya…???I am surprised. …tum mujhe promise kardiya hey na??that I will continue this 2 ffs. ..phir kyun u broke that promise…..???ok leave it…tum doosra ff start karoongi na? ?agar tum nahi start karoongi then how will I learn hindi???????? …..tum iss ke waje se u taught me hindi…oh god i forgot ..tumhaare nayi ff love vs destiny mein uss ff ke waje se i will learn hindi …ok??tuje iss baath ke liye koi problem nahi hey na??aur haan ff ke credit will reach too ff writer…so ff writer tu hey na??awesome writer hai tu…evry episode u will write it with a feel….today’s episode also little bit emotional. ….aur haan surbhi ke liye ke zor dha taaliya …..?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ….and one thing agar tum meri comment ke baare mein do u have any angry mujhe ek thappad maro….!!!ok ?? ???????????☺☺☺

    • surbhi

      pagal hai kya reji mai tumhe thappad kyu lagaungi mai nahi marungi yr i agree with you ar chinta mat karo mai zaroor hindi sikhaungi tumko haan mai bilkul angry nahi hoon tumse yr 🙂

  7. ash(akshaya kannan)

    Awesome story yaar
    I have read a lot of stories but your story is the most realistic one i have ever read and you are the sweetest person I have ever talk with I will really miss you so please come with another story

    • surbhi

      oh ash thank you dear i know i again broke that friend ship rule but believe me i am saying that as sister not as friend and an elder sister can thank her younger one right 😉

  8. Aaj mein thujse dil kolkar baath Karna chahthi HOON……Patahe,Jab Meine thumara 62th Episode which means Second last Episode….. Raath ke 11:00 baje padna shuru kiya DHA…..tk 12:00 baje Meine vo Complete KIYA……Sach kehrahi HOON……Aansu ruki nahi DHI MERI aankhon SE……Tab Mujhe samajh mein aaya Kitna lagaav HEI Mujhe Iss FF ke saath………Meine kabhi bhi EK kahaani keliye aansu NAHI bahayi dhi……Par tere kahani KE aage mera sar chuk gaya………Us din Meine ro rokar soyi dhi…..Par achanak Meine EK sapna dekha……Meri Brother ki death……Accident SE………Meine chillakar ud GAYI…..Tab Mujhe samajh mein aaya Teri FF sochkar soyi DHI na……Issliye hua DHA……….Par Meri Mamma – Pappa ne aake MUJHSE questions Karna shuru KIYA…….Kyun chillayi? Kya dekha? Tab tak Meine Rona shuru KIYA……Then mein Mamma ke saath soyi dhi……….Then next morning, Means kal Meine FF mein comment karne keliye socha…….But I have no words to say…….Issliye Meine EK sentence SE comment KIYA DHA…..But Thuje Pata HEI aaj mein phirse royi …..Iss FF ki last episode padkar………But it have a difference….. Kal Meine Gham SE royi DHI……..Par aaj mein khushi SE royi HEI………….ZINDAGI ki Anek khoobsurat Rishthon KE baare mein thune iss FF dauraan share KIYA…….Bhaiyoon ki ,Behenoom ki , Bhai – Behnoom ki ,Dosthi ki , PYAAR ki ……………..Aisi anokhi rishthon KE baare mein thune Hame EK Nayi Arth DIYA………..Aur tho aur Emotions describe karne keliye thujse behter koi nahi HEI……….&Haaa I am soooooo Happy……….It ended in correct time….Varna iski charm chali jathi…..ABHIGYA ki EK khoobsurat kahani Dene keliye THANK YOU soooooo much…..Mujhe Pata HEI Thank you NAHI bolna chahiye….Phir bhi…………&one more thing I like our group name S.R.R.S………..Haa mein Teri FF keliye intezaar karungi……VO Jo thune shuru KIYA dhana……”Game of Destiny “……USKELIYE……..
    Telly updates Plzzzzzzz post this comment…… Its a humble request….. Plzzzzz……….
    EK baath bataana bhool GAYI,Kabhi NAHI bhoolungi Iss FF KO….Especially second last episode……….. I will miss this soooooooooooo badly…………Love u Mere Dosth…………….??????????????????????????????☺☺☺??????Its for u…?????

    • surbhi

      Reshma tu mujhse dil khol kar baat karti hai na mujhe bohot achha lagta hai pata hai mai kabhi kabhi smile karti hoon aur kabhi kabhi emotional ho jati hoon kyuki tu mujhse baat nahi kar pati but comment ke through sab express kar deti hai isliye you are my fav and my gang member 😉

  9. prasu

    surbhi it is a great ending
    i really got tears in my eyes when abhi imagine pulikt & bond b/w abhi & pulikt was awesome
    please yaar start another ff i really love your way of narrating the story
    please start new ff please

  10. Bhoomy

    I am silent reader of your ff. U r amazing. I liked ur ff more than other ones. Actually ur ff is awesome. I don’t have words to describe about it. U always suprised me in ur ff. Thanx for writting this ff. You re a amazing writer. I wish you bright future. Plz upload your other ff soon. Eagerly waiting for that. Good bye.

    • surbhi

      thank you so much Bhoomy thank you so much and i am glad that you commented and liked the story so much dear

  11. Abhigya

    awesome ending…surbhi I will miss ur ff badly…your ff was one of the best ff…the way u describe each nd every emotion is superb I never got that much emotional on any story but your story was a different one….I can’t express my feelings through words…u r an amazing writer….I will never ever forget this ff……
    I started reading ur ff from season 2 I liked it very much so I read all episodes from seasons one nd u always surprised me by each nd every episode…nd yes plz update ur another ff soon “Game of Destiny”….nd one more thing will u accept me as ur friend?
    And in the end I will say that thank you soooooooo much for giving this amazing ff…I will miss ur ff badly….❤️❤️❤️??????????????????????????????????????

    • surbhi

      Abhigya now i wont thank you as i have accepted your friend ship na thats why welcome to the gang yr

  12. Somiya

    I knew this is episode is last one but…. I still….. Oh God, chod de bas kya toh mast episode tha, hayee cha gayee tu toh! Har scene ko imagine kar na, wow full pf emotions and feelings though I was busy but i managed to read your episode and as i said k m comment karoongy, per yaar this is last episode ab pata nhi iss website per aa nay ka dil kahe ga bhi ya nhi, 1st season mujhe buht ziyada acha laga tha, 25 episodes, they were so best and 63 episodes of 2nd season, i tried my best to explain how much i love your ff through comments but yor creativity in these 88 episodes was so great that no one can imagina of….. Seriously surbhi, to be honest surbhi mein itni aa saani say kisi kay saathh itna baat nhi karty, and log kehte hain somiya is full of attitude, its just bcoz m chup chup rehty hun or kisi kay saath ziyada baat nhi karty even mujhe 1 year lag jata h kisi kay saath comfartable honay mein, but i remember teray saath toh bas Kuch hee dino m itna free hogayee k ek din teray saath baat na karoon na mera din hee nhi guzrta, theek h teray saath baat nhi ki or din guzr bhi gaya lekin jab tak tera Ff nhi padhty mujhe mzaa nhi aata, kyun k m nay aaj tak kisi ki story baar baar nhi padhy lekin teri walee 1000 baar bhi padhun phir bhi din na guzray, and i m serious wo alag baat h k m srf 2 yaa 3 baar padhty hun lekin agr padhayee wagera say free ho, jaoon na toh sara din bas tera ff padhun, aaj lay episode ki baat hee na kar wo pulkit as a soul wala idea mast tha, prabhas toh bassss kitna acha h, pragya kay words, chottu …. Abhu as apopstar, subuhi with face pack and those monkey creatures…. I loved itt bas pulkit ko buht ziyada miss kar rhy thy coz i always wished for elder brother….. I m gonna miss this ff, jo bhi ho jaye yeh ff mera humesha favourite rahega, kyun k iss ff ne mujhe buht ziyada hansaya hai…. Rulaya kabhi nhi bas ronay jaisy feelings…. Kal wale episode m mein ro nhi rahi thy lekin har lina padhne kay baad ankhon m aansoon aa rhay thay…. That’s why i say k tujhe novel likhna chayh, aagay jaa kar tu buhttttttttttttttttttttttttt badeee writer ban e gy…. And i m serious…. Chal buht batein ho gayee ,mujhe ab jana hoga ,per gazal kahe bagair m kesay jaa skty hun…. Toh arz kiya h….
    Bolo wah wah wah wah….
    Dil e nadaan tujhe hua kia h ?
    \aakhir is dard ki dwaa kia h?

    ( through this i want to say k tera ff padh padh kar mera dil pagal sa hogaya h ab isay theek kaisay karoon)

    Hum hain mushtaq or wo bezaar..
    Ya illahii yeh maajra kia hai?

    (through this i want to say k mein iss ff.ki shokeen hun , mushtaq matlb shok rakhnay wala, lekin tu ab yeh continue nhi karegy, ab khuda akhir aisa kyun hai?)

    Mein bhi mun m zubaan rakhta hun..
    Kaash poocho k muda kya hai?

    Through this i want to say k khoaaish toh meri buht saaree hain lekin yeh poocho k yeh khwaaish kya hai?

    Hum toh unsay wafa ki umeed rakh bethay…
    Jo nhi jaantay wafa kia h?

    Lol, through this i want to say I loveeee youuu and tum be wafa nhi ho, wo toh shair aisa aa gaya ???

    Han bhalaa kar tera bhalaa hoga..
    Aur darwesh ki sadaa kya hai?

    Han theek hai ff end kar, ff end karegi toh story m charm rahega na and haan acha hua u didn’t made pulkit’s scene a dream, i love you for this …

    Jaan tum per nisaar karti hun…
    Mein nhi jaanti dua kya hai?

    Though i love this ff very much from bottom of my heart, but my heart has no bottom for you….

    So it took me 20 mins to write this comment, so i hope telly updates would post itt….. So surbhi tu badee cute lag rhy thy when you passed smile for my comment dekh abhi bhi tu cute lag rhy hai buht coz u smiled so keep smiling….. ???

    • surbhi

      somiya somiya somiya mai tujhe thank to aj kahongi tu mujhe thappad maar chaku maar kuchh bhi maar itna bada comment kiya hai tune tu wakai pagal hai ladki tune to dil khol ke rakh diya apna mere samne ar haan mai bhi teri jaisi hi hoon tabhi tere sath hoon samjhi warna is mafia se koi khas baat cheet nahi karta hai yea mafia gangster sab inhi namo se bulate hai dilli wale hai na to attitude wali na kehkar yehi bolte hain kehte hai tera nam DD hone chahiye matlab door se hi darshan bhale paas ayegi to maar dalegi to hui na tere jaisi bilkul haah

  13. sharaya

    Amazing amazing amazing amazing x10000000 times I really loved this episode awesome you are great writer I’m gonna miss this fanfiction very badly because this is one if my favourite fan fiction and all the best for your another fan fiction

  14. Offo di again u made me sad by finishing this ff i’ve already said u na i love it a looooo…………….t but as u said everything has an end so i’ll accept it but di as i said u na our love 4u has no end so u shld con ur new ff& di now i am not requesting u just demanding u like ur sis but i don’t know will u accept me as ur sis&haan di i am gonna demand u another thing pls di pls reply 4each&every one 4our com as this is ur last epi in this ff na&di pls don’t take me wrong actually di i know yeserday’s epi was a tribute by u to tht soldier but di whn i read it i was not able to control my emotions as i was totally broken by heart in reading yesterdays epi as i can’t even bear the death of a person in story itself so di i didn’t meaned it to hurt u i am holding my ears & asking u sorry pls 4give me if hd hurted u by my words

  15. Yup di i’ve 4get to thank u 4ur swt com as i said u na di u r the one who inspired me so di the ff”PYAAR KI STORY” is of u&for u di&di as laddu is the strenght of chotta bheam ur com r like laddoos 4me as they give me more strength na di so di pls 4give me if i’ve hurt u by my wrds so di finally “LOVE U A LOT DI”& by the way”MISS U & UR FF A LOOO…………T DI” k di meet u soon in ur new ff di until thn tata,bye bye&dhanyavad di

    • surbhi

      hahahah Pavi you love chhota bheem i love shinchan and little krishna so i must say that you are my sweet shinchan haah i have already accepted yo as my sis dear

  16. Nivethitha

    Di u gave us a big shock…. But I can understand y u ended ur ff definitely di I gonna miss this ff alot…. And today’s episode what to say no words to describe di I should find a new word to appreciate u because all the words are not enough to appreciate u…..mind blowing di I totally lived with this ff the explanation which u gave for each and every situation it was phenomenal……I experience each and every emotion of life with this ff I will never ever forget this ff it will be in my memories always… Very much thank u for this fantabulous ff yes I should not say thank u but now I have to say it thank u sooo much di Love u alot….? but one more thing u promised me that u will continue ur another ff u have to do it… I wish all the success to come in ur life di.. Stay blessed?

  17. vaishali

    dii i dont have any words dii but i am so angry on you why u finished this much early dii i know everything has an end as u always say, but i am gonna miss it badly i have told u all my feelings in ur previous episode but now i will say t=it again i am so happy and proud that i got a elder dii like u i really really love u alot i am gonna miss mr and mrs. mehra my fav subuhi chotu my daredevils abhigya prabhas my elder bhai pulkit rahul omg how can i forgot i am gonna miss U dii todays episode was outstanding wait i will tell u some words which come in my mind fr ur ff
    Great! Phenomenal! Superb!
    Cool! Out Of Sight! Excellent!
    Unbelievable Work! Two Thumbs Up! You’ve Got It!
    Way To Go! Terrific! Outstanding Performance!
    You’ve Outdone Yourself! Marvelous! Your Help Counts!
    Amazing Effort! Bravo! Exceptional!
    Breathtaking! Wonderful! You’re Special!
    Keep Up The Good Work! First Rate Work! Fantastic Work!
    You Should Be Proud! I Knew You Had It In You! Very Good!
    Stupendous! Sensational! A+ Work!
    What An Imagination! Awesome! You’re A Great Example For Others! i know dii u will rock coz i had immense faith on you i loved u alot dont forget me dii coz i am always ur younger sis who will be torturing you 😀 😀 i hv no words to say( oops i blurted all the words than how can i say i hv no words hey na dii…)one thing i want to tell u is i am not gonna miss this ff coz i will read it daily frm beginning everyday as if u r updating i already told u na that this ff is attached to me more love u dii dont forget me waiting eagerly fr ur next episode sorry wrong timing next ff with the same charm same attitude same love same romance same writing and last but not least and same my favorite dii………….

    • surbhi

      Vaishali or i will name you chhoti because i already have chhotu in my home yea my younger sis we call her chhotu so i cant give that name to you so better chhoti for you as you are also same like her na all your antics are same like her hahah thank you my chhoti without your love it was not possible yr to reach here

  18. Kaif

    happy ending lol 100**************************************************************************************************** and now count your stars dear

  19. surbhi

    well thank you Kaif but i will not count stars at all because they are count less and i am not drunk like Pragya that i will start counting them lolz any ways thanks once again for your support

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