Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega jaise mein karti hoon (OS on Twinj)

Hello .. Friends … I am here with an os … See na I am so sorry .. I am not able o write my ff …. So here I m writing an os .. Abhi yrr isi se kaam chala lo … Actually guests aaye huay hain .. Toh I m not free … I will post my ff soon …. Maybe tomorrow .. But not
pakka haan … I know boring hai ye os but me aadat se majboor hain …. Today … When I went to sleep .. An idea pop up inin
my mind .. So I m presenting that … Boring
hai I know .. Plss bear with it …

So ready for the journey …

Let’s start ..

A garden is shown … Where there are many trees … The camera rotates and a handsome .. Good looking .. Hot .. boy is shown … He was having a beer bottle in his hand .. The camera comes infront … He is none other than our hot hero Kunj …He was standing under a Orchid tree .. But wait .. What is this .? He is looking so sad .. His face was very gloomy … He was having tears in his eyes .. He was murmuring something … Let’s listen ..

K – “See na … U always wanted to be buried under an orchid tree … I fulfill ur wish … Not only I fulfilled all ur wishes my love … Yeh joh beer bottle dekh rahi hai na … Chod di peena .. Tu yehi chahti thi na …. Ab peeta nhii hun … Bs jb teri bht yaad aati hai to thodi thodi ….. Tu chahti thi ke me 1 acha insaan ban jaaun … Wo wish bhi poori ker di teri … Teri wish list dekhi me ne … Jo wishes rehti thi .. Saari poori ker di …

He was not able to speak coz of continuous crying …He stoppes for sometime …

He continues – teri 1 wish thi na ke me tujhse pyaar karun …
His started crying badly at this statement …

” Twinkle … Me to tujhse hamesha se pyaar kerta tha …. Bs circumstances hi aesy thy ke kabhi tujhe apny dil ki baat nhii bata paaya … Jaanta hun bht bura kiya me ne tere sath …. Mgr tu itni achi kyun hai Twinkle …Mujhy maaf bhi ker diya …. Mujhe chod ke kyun gayi tu …. Babaji mujhe punishment de dete … Twinkle ko kyun di ..Twinkle …. Plsss wapis aaja mere pass … I promise ab tujhe har khushi dunga … Saying this he fell down on the floor crying miserably …
After some time … He stands up …. On the stem of the tree it was written “TWINKLE KUNJ SARNA” He caresses that part with his hand … And kisses it … He goes into flashback …

Flashback –

A boy was yelling on a girl … She was having tears in her eyes …
B – Just stop your nonsense …. U very well know that I don’t love u … And just married u for my mum’s sake … Why u didn’t get that Twinkle ..?
So the girl is revealed to be Twinkle …. And the boy is Kunj only ..

T – Kunj … Believe me …. Uv was lying … He just want to create differences betweeb us … Me us se milne nhii gayi thi .
K – Ohhh nice ….. How can I believe u … Haan .. ? U r the most disgusting girl I have ever seen in my life …

T – Kunj … Plss believe me ….. U know I love u more than my life … U r my life … My everything . ..

K – (laughs sarcastically) Ohh … I see … Mrs.Sarna .. Is in love with her husband … Woww great …. (He wrenched her wrist) but u know what … This Kunj .. Ur husband …n he can’t even think for a millisecond about falling in love with u ….

He leaves the room … Having tears in his eyes … He controlled his tears and emotions infront of her …
He went into a room …
There Twinkle fall down on her knees crying vigorously … She was used to it … He everyday do that … She was used to listen his harsh words …

Whenever Kunj hurts her … He always hurt himself after hurting her …. He breaks the mirror with his hand … His hand started bleeding badly ….

K – Twinkle … I am helpless …. Nhii bata sakta tujhe kitna pyar kerta hun tujhse .. Meri jaan hai tu .. Zindagi hai tu meri … Tere baghair rehne ka soch bhi nhi sakta … Bs tujhe sach nhi bata sakta ….

He goes into a flashback

(Flashback mein flashback)
Flashback –

Uv and Kunj was standing face to face …
Uv – Teri shaadi to hogayi Twinkle se … Mgr wo teri kabhi nhii hosakti .. She is only mine … Sirf meri hai Twinkle …. Hahhahaha
K – Ohhh .. So Yuvraj Luthra khush fehmi mein bhi hai … So let me clear that … Twinkle mujh se pyar kerti hai …. Or me bhi usy apni zindagi se zyada chahta hun …

Uv – Ohh .. Romei Juliet .. U knw what Kunj … Tu bht bada budhhu hai …
He showed him some pics …
Pics were of Twinkle in which she was sleeping with a man .. In compromising position .. Kunj was shocked …
Uv – What happened …? Shock laga ..?
K – No she is not Twinkle …. I blindly trusts her …. These pics are morphed …

Uv – Haan tu sahi keh raha hai … These r morphed pics … But ye tu jaanta hai .. Me jaanta hun ..duniya to nhi jaanti ye … I will leak these pics and then … Hahahaha ..
K – (pleading) Uv plsss .. Tu aisa kuch nhi kary ga … I will di whatever u say …. But plss ye pics mt leak karyo …
Uv – Great …! So me chahta hun ke tu Twinkle ko kabhi na bataye ke tu us se pyar kerta hai and u’ll never touch her … Or tu kisi ko ye bhi nhi bataye ga .. Ke I have said this to u ..

Kunj was shocked … He doesn’t know what to do …
He said in shaking voice – Oook ..ookk .. I .. I .. Will …ddo . do .. thaaa .. that ..
Uv laughs in his own style ..

Flashback ends

Kunj cries … He cuts his hand with the broken pieces of mirror … His hand was bleeding badly .. Kitna pain horaha hoga na … But this physical pain was much more lesser than his heart pain … Everyday .. His heart break into pieces seeing her love in nuch pain ….

He slept there only ..
Days passes like this only … Everyday Kunj hurts her and she cried whole night … Kunj always hurt himself after hurting her …
One day Twinkle received a call …

T – Hello .. Whose there …
C – Baby come to XYZ place … Ur husband’s life is in danger …
T – Uv . …. Tu .. I swear I will kill u agr mere Kunj ko kuch bhi hua ..
Uv – Baby … Don’t be angry .. I am here for u na ..
T – Uvvvv …
Uv -If u want to save him then come to the place …
He cuts the call
T – Hello .. Uv .. Uv ..

She grabbes the car keys and left from there …
She reached the place …

Uv was standing pointing gun at Kunj …
T – (shouts) Uvvvvvvvvvvvv ….
K -Twinkle … Please leave from here .. I will handle the situation …
T – Nhii kunj … Me tumhe akela nhii chod sakti …
K – Twinkle plssss …
Uv – I see love Birds …
T – Uv .. Plss tujhe kya chahiye .. I will give u that .. Plss kunj ko chod de …
Uv – I want u baby …
She made a disgusted face …
Uv – Kunj .. U r free now … If u want to say anything to Twinkle .. Just say it … Tumhari aakhri saansein bachi hain …
K – Twinkle … I always hurt u .. Everytime … I know u love me so much … But I was helpless .. This Uv . he ..
Uv – Let me tell her .. He narrates the whole story … How he blackmailed him …

Twinj’s eyes welled up …
T – Kunj …
K – Twinkle … I .. I .. Am sorry … I always loved u … And I love u … U r my life .. My jaan …
T – Kunj don’t be sorry … I love u too …

She rab towards him to hug him … Uv oints gun at his head .. He shoots …

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K – (shouts) TWINKLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

The bullet hit her on her chest … Kunj ran towards Uv … He ran from there …

T -(shouts) Kunjjjjjj ….
He came running towards her … She fell down …
He places her head on his lap and holds her hand …
K – (crying) Twinkle … I will take u to hospital … Apni aankhein khol ke rakhna
T – (in heavy voice) Ku … Ku .. Kunj .. Nhii.. Me … hos.. hospital ..nhii ..nhi jaaungi … bs .. meri ..baat ..sun…sunoo ..
K – Aesy kesy … U have to go to hospital ..

(Guys …. …they were very far awat from the city)
T – (trembling voice) Ku ..kunj .. u know …i . i always …wan..wanted ..to ..to spend …my….my whole….life….with u …….i ..i wan ..wanted u …to …to ..lo…love …me …and …atlast…i knw ….that ….that…u ..also ..love me …this..is …the best ….best ..feeli…feeling …ever …to…to be …loved…by you ….u..u ..r my ….li ..fe …

He was nodding his head all the time .. Having tears in his eyes …
K – Haan .. Twinkle .. I know …u r my strong girl na …. U will fight for life …
T – Nnn…oo…. I …i ..am …ti..red …of ..figh…ting …i …will ….not fight…. U knw … me ne kasam ….khaayi thi …that …agr …mujhe ….ap…ni …life ..bhi …tumhare liye ….qurbaan kerni padi…to … I will … Or aaj …wo kasam …poor..poori ..karne …karne ka…waqt …aagay hai …
K – Twinkle kesi baatein ker rahi hai … Me kesy rahun ga tere baghair … He kisses her hand …
T – Kunj ….tumhe …ab…ab …apni …poori life ….mere baghair….spend kerni hai ……me ne tumhe maaf ..kiya kunj …..for …for …hurting me …
K – Twinkle aesi baatein mt ker …. u r my life .. Me nhi reh sakta tere bina …

T – I Love You …

Her hand slipped from his hand … He shouts

TWINKLEEEEEEEEE …

Flashback ends …

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Atlast completed …. Comments zaroor kerna …

Love u loads

16 comments

  1. Priya23

    Hey jhalliii.. kiya yaar tune toh bhtttt rula diya mujhe….. Reading this os I cannot control my emotions tears were flows from my eye’s…. The title of this os toh urrfff.. Kya bolu…tune sach may Mardalaaaa yaar… Itne brilliant idea’s atee kahase hay tere dimag main….aree main hi bhtt pagal hu kese naii ayegi idea’s akher tu hamari sister Jo thehri chudail…u know sangharsh…..He he…… But sad ending ke jagah happy kardiya hota…..no pblm I love it..but agar hosake toh part 2 main happy ending karde…..hope tune mind naii kiya…..but main force naii kar rahi it’s ur choice…..at least think of it…….
    Well post ur ff soon..m waiting for it desperately jaanu..ok
    Stay happy and keep smiling…
    Love you jhalliii so much..

  2. Presha

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    Hey purvi its such a emotional one just loved it… Nd u nailed it by expressing the emotions very well.. Post ur ff soon

  3. Paavu

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    Awww paglee phir rula dia ummm pls itna sad yrr I missed u dear ur ff also and ur commemt tujhe happy new year wish krna tha so HAPPY NEW YEAR byelove uuuuuuu

  4. Adya

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    It was too emotional yrr Purvi but awesome one. the way you explained the emotions were amazing. I really loved it to the core. thw way you write is just worth praising.
    Do write more and post your ff soon. Happy new year.

  5. Zuha Fatima

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    Hey Purvi,
    Amazing dear. You’ve left me all teary eyes after this emotional OS. At start I thought it to be like the movie ‘Sanam teri kasam’ but yaar this OS is worth calling a master piece. Thanks for such a lovely OS! Also the next episode of my Fan Fiction has been uploaded, do check it out when free ☺

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚

  6. SidMinTwiNj

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    Awwwww my cutie pie rola diya yaar tune… Fab OS… Loved it to the core… It was so emotional and you very well portrayed the emotions… Waiting for ur ff… I know u r busy but still try posting soon…

    Love you my cutie pie😘😘

  7. SidMin

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    Loved it πŸ™‚ too emotional it was just amazing πŸ™‚ Love you πŸ™‚
    Keep writing πŸ™‚
    Happy new year πŸ™‚

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