Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega jaise mein karti hoon (OS on SwaSan)


Hi people I’m Rithu
I read so many ff, OS and fs by many people on swaragini I’ve got inspired to write my own OS hope it is good and upto mark if it’s boring sorry for wasting time

The story started with a happy married couple getting into a fight
Sanskar- Enough is enough Swara u can’t talk nonsense
Swara- Ok Sanskar…..leave this I’ll tell u a good news
Sanskar- Get out of my house now
He unknowingly threw her out of the house without knowing she was pregnant. There was no one to take care of her she shifted to a new house with her only daughter Khushi. Swara told khushi all about Sanskar and showed his picture to her but always lied to her about him. One day while Swara was reading the magazine
Swara- Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari married to Kavita
Next line shocked her even more
Swara- Love marriage !!!
This made Swara’s eyes water and she started crying
Khushi- Mummy what happened why r u crying
Swara wiped her tears
Swara- Nahi kuch nahi howa tum jao khana khao
Khushi- Ok mummy
Khushi leaves
Swara- Inhone dusri shaddi kar liya. Humari beti uska kya hoga unhe toh pata bhi nahi hai ki hamari beti hui hai or woh bhi ”Love” Nahi Sanskar aisa nahi kar sakte lekin…….

Swara forgot about this till one day(after 3 years)She saw Sanskar roaming around with Kavita she had Khushi along with her and did not want Sanskar to see her and turned to leave
Swara- Chalo Khushi
But Khushi stayed back and started crying because she was lost
Khushi- Muma kahan ho aap
Sanskar goes to her but doesn’t know that she is his daughter
Sanskar- Kya hua beta mummy kahan hai ro kyun rahe ho aap
Khushi- Nahi pata mein kho gayi
But she recognized him that he was her father
Khushi- Daddy aap yahan lekin mummy…..
Sanskar didn’t understand
Sanskar- Beta mein aap ka daddy nahi hoon. Chalo aap ko ghar choddh tha hoon
Sanskar leaves her home he rings the bell and is shocked to see Swara over there
Khushi- Mummy aap kahan thi
First she didn’t see Dev
Swara : Thank u Mr. aapne meri beti ko ghar…..

She gets shocked to see Sanskar
Swara : U here
Sanskar gets tears in his eyes
Sanskar- Swara please meri baat …..
Before he could complete she shut the door on his face
Sanskar- If I listened to what she said we would be happily married now. Mujhe pata bhi nahi tha ki humari beti hai or mein ne dusri shaddi ki. Mein kitna bada befkoof hoon agar uski baat suni toh yeh saab nahi hota
After some weeks another news Swara saw on the magazine
Swara- ”Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari divorced Mrs. Kavita Maheshwari. Reason : Mr. Sanskar found out that Kavita only married him for money and divorced her. ” But y am I feeling bad he did so much to me
After few hours she saw Sanskar outside her house

Swara- Now y r u here for reminding me what happened 2 years ago. No need

Sanskar- Swara please listen to me I love u a lot I couldn’t control myself u know how am I please listen

Swara- Y did u listen to me ?
Sanskar : No it was my mistake u know how am I will u please forgive me
Swara : Ok only for Khushi because she needs u
He hugs her tight
Sanskar- Thank u thank u thank u so much
Swara- Ok Mr. Maheshwari don’t scream Khushi is sleeping

Sanskar : Good come with me
He takes her to a hall beautifully decorated
Swara- What is this Sanskar
Sanskar brings a guitar
Sanskar- Remember this
It was the same guitar that he had gifted her when they were in college
Sanskar- I still remember it u’ll play our favourite song
Swara- Yeh bhi kuch puch ne ki baat hai of course
She holds his hand tight and she starts singing

Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bharti hoon
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hoon

Hawa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yoon pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

Meri nazar ka safar
Tujhpe hi aake ruke
Kehne ko baaki hai kya
Kehna tha jo keh chhuke

Meri nigahein hain teri nigahon ki
Tujhe khabar kya bekabar

Main tujhse hi chup chup kar
Teri aankhein padhti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

Tu jo mujhe aa mila
Sapne hue sarphire
Haathon mein aate nahi
Udte hain lamhein mere

Meri hasi tujhse
Meri khushi tujhse
Tujhe khabar kya beqadar

Jis din tujhko na dekhun
Pagal pagal phirti hoon
Kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

They both enjoyed the whole night
Swara- Ab pata chala koi nahi hoga jo tumhe pyar karega jaise mein karti hoon
Sanskar : Han
Swara- Koun
She frowned
Sanskar- Tum or koun
They both smiled at each other

How was it hope it wasn’t boring and if it was so sorry to waste ur time and please post ur valuable comments to share how it was. I’ve written the same for krpkab so do check that out to


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  1. mou(swasan lover)


    1. Rithu2089

      thank u mou

  2. Simin


    1. Rithu2089

      thank u simin

  3. Arshaanya

    Sorry to say bt sanskar dun dsrve swara n khushi…
    He married kavita -LOVE MARRIAGE n aftr finding dat khushi is his daughter divorced kavita reason- bhnd his money n al… again came bck to swara dat he loves her WTH man how cud u… if u truely loved her u wud ve not married kavita wo bhi LOVE MARRIAGE ???
    Sorry if i hurt u but dats wat i feel

    1. I totally agree with you, swara shouldn’t have forgiven him so easily and sanskar don’t deserve them.

      1. Rithu2089

        thank u for commenting princess I will surely correct my mistakes

    2. Rithu2089

      thank u for commenting arshaanya I won’t feel bad cz we learn from our mistakes

  4. nice…!!

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u chandu

  5. nice… swara frgve him so soon

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u anu

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u krsytles

  6. Soujanya


    1. Rithu2089

      thank u soujanya

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u febi

  7. Simi

    Cute 🙂

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u simi

  8. Mica

    nice story dear…

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u mica

  9. nice but i don’t think sanskar deserves a second chance so easily

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u praju u can surely expect changes in the next os

  10. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Well, welcome to tu as a writer dear.. About os, it’s nice but I think sanky don’t deserve them or you can say swara shouldn’t forgive sanky easily.. Love is not a joke.. Sorry, if you felt hurt.. Better luck next time??..
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u abdul hafiz u can expect changes in my next os

  11. nice try
    elaborate the emotions next time sorry if i hurt u

    1. Rithu2089

      thanks u mynalove u can find the changes in the next os

      1. all the best for ur next os

  12. Tulina

    Sanskar doesn’t deserve swara…….. sorry to say but it looks like sanskar just wanted khushi that’s why only he patched up with swara…..that’s why only he gave divorce to kavita the next day itself he came to know about khushi……

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u for commenting tulina u can find changes in the next os

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