KARATE LOVE – A crazy devakshi os

Hey guys this is yb here and I guess you all know me , I wasn’t able to complete those one shots really sorry for that ..
I have thought of an other crazy idea and this os is dedicated to all my tu friends and guys I have written an os on shraman for a contest …
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sharman-os-contest-story-2-key-heart/
please vote for me after reading this , pleaseπŸ™‚

So let’s start😊
Scene 1
It’s a sunny morning and a young lad is seen yawning, his room is filled with a lot of pictures related to martial arts and pictures with the name Dev Dixit . 🎭.. he seems to be a very lazy boy who spends most of his time eating and sleeping , if he’s got some ambition than the only thing he wants to do is he has a great interest to learn karate, but he wants a very good teacher who can teach him,

one fine day he roams around the forest in search of some supreme teacher and there he meets an old man with a long beard who is sitting in a rock and is lost in meditation , he moves towards that old man πŸ‘΄ and stands before him . The old man slowly opens his eyes and asks him what he wants , Dev replies that he needs a good teacher who can teach him karate..
The old man shows some directions to Dev which leads him to a place where a girl is shown busy practicing karate, she does some basic karate moves, at first Dev laughs of saying she is a girl and she is gonna teach me karate πŸ˜‚. He slowly moves towards her and says “hello”, the girl slowly turns towards him and Dev stood there mesmerised by her beauty for few seconds and the girl waved her hand before him and asked him what he wants … and he replied “you” , it was love at first sight for him.. his thoughts were disturbed when she gave him a hard punch and his face turned red 😭and he found himself silly for underestimating her 😬. Yes she was Sonakshi the heroine of the story .
He quickly apologised to her and told her about his interests… and she thought him a-z of karate in 3 whole months but he wasn’t very good at it , he could hardly grasp half of her moves bcoz he was busy lost in her .. she advised him to change his teacher,but how can he ever to that bcoz he’s madly in love with her 😍❀️️…
he bends down in his knees and tells her that he’s in love with her….
She could see that clearly in the way he was expressing his love ❀️
The fact is she loved him too but that wasn’t enough because she was a tough girl
She told him to do all the moves perfectly and then she will answer this question of his …
His face turned into a sad one , but later he bowed before her and said
” anything for you dear “😘
With lots of dedication and endeavour he completed the whole course and the day when he completed that , she sealed her lips with his and they become one .
This is the unique story of devakshi named the ” karate love ” ❀️

Guys thank you for the support , this is a crazy os I know but please drop a word or an emoji to express your views
Thank you
Love
Yb

14 comments

  1. Manya

    |Registered Member

    It was a very different concept❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
    Love love πŸ’˜πŸ’˜

  2. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    It was a short OS but was really really awesome and amazing……πŸ’ŸπŸ’“πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ˜πŸ’ž…..with interesting and something different……
    ❀❀❀

  3. Erina

    |Registered Member

    πŸ˜Šβ˜ΊπŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜šβ€β€β€πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’•πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ˜Šβ˜ΊπŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜šβ€β€β€πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’•πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ˜­πŸ˜³πŸ˜₯well I hve dropped my veiw in form of emoji…..now its ur turn to tell me why I hve dropped sad emoji too?? Let me know what u think I will rply after ur rply 😊😊all d best nd do come back soon with another OS or FF……

    • Balamirra

      |Author

      Hey sweetie
      Thank you so much girl 😍😍😍😊😊😭😘😘😁😁
      The sad emoji is probably because it was short and crazy … Donno pls reveal 😌😌😘😘
      Lots of love ❀️ ❀️😍
      Yb

      • Erina

        |Registered Member

        Well u r ryt but dont be happy bcse u r not completely ryt πŸ˜‚πŸ˜„πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ my sad emojis r for too short only but I wounder why u thought I will drop sad emojis for crazy one ?? 😳so u r 50 %ryt
        Haha my comment was funny but interesting na ?? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜„πŸ˜Šβ˜ΊπŸ˜…

  4. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Hey Meera di!
    This was terrific! Short and crazy, but literally very sweet😍😍😍😍😍
    Do come up with more amazing and wonderful ideas!!
    Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  5. Niki645

    |Registered Member

    Hey yb!!!!!! This was such a different concept, and i loved it!
    Short and sweet would be the best words for ur os πŸ˜€
    It was amazing, and I am hoping that u will come up with more crazy ideas like this sweet one😍😍😍😍
    Loads of love😘😘😘

  6. Rockzzzzzz

    |Registered Member

    The is was crazy I agree..but I loved it😍😍
    short and cute…..keep posting!!
    πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ’•πŸ’—

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