Kanchi os…

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Saachi-an intern,very sincere,kind and loveble…
Dr.kabir-khadoos,hitler,best doctor in sdch…
Veer-prankster,childish,has no love feeling for saachi but best friends…
It was 9:30am but still saachi didnt come to class…
Dr.kabir assigned duty for everyone by himself and said to disperse and do the duty…
While isha and pragya were about to move out…
Dr.kabir-stop
Ishpra(scared)-sir seriously we dont know where is saachi,since morning we didnt see her…
Dr.kabir-what do you mean by you dont know?and…
Veer came running to them and informed them that saachi met with an accident,with no time kabir and ishpraveer ran to icu…
Kabir was treating her inside…while outside everyone including doctors,interns,patients and children were praying for her …while treating saachi,tears were continously making their way out from kabir’s eyes…
After completing the surgery successfully he came out…he was stunned and shocked to see the 3/4 rth of the hospital are praying for saachi
in front of ganesha idol in the hospital…on seeing dr.kabir everyone rushed towards him….
Veerishpra(teary eyed)-sir how is saachi?is she ok?will she be alright?can we see her?please sir…
Dr.kabir-operation is success.she will be alright but u cant meet her now since she is given sedation to sleep…
Saying this dr.kabir went to change…after changing he came back and sat beside saachi…only sabir were in her ward…amid all this riya was fuming…saachi got concious…she saw dr.kabir starring at her…
She tried to sit but due to weakness she was not able to sit…kabir helped her and gave her orange juice for freshness…
Saachi-thank you sir(smiled)
Dr.kabir-i have meeting now so u better take rest,if u need anything call me…take care saachi…i’ll back soon…
Saachi is able to see the pain in his eyes for her…he was about to move something stopped him,he turned and saw that saachi was holding his hand…
He looked at her…
Saachi-be back soon…
He smiled in response and went…soon saachi got normal but was still weak…

After 2 weeks of recovery…
Saachi-excuse me sir
Dr.kabir-come in
Saachi-sir,here are the files…
Dr.kabir-u seemed to be tired,better take off today dr.saachi…
Saaxhi-no sir am fine…i can manage…
Dr.kabir-i know how much u can manage so u better go to hostel and take rest…
Saachi informed this to ishpraveer…
Saachi-guys am going to hostel since am feeling weak so bye…
Riya-with whose permission you are going dr.saachi?
Pragya-with dr.kabir’s permission…
Riya-i dont know what black magic you did to him that he is always at back of you…
Pra-mind ur words riya
Isha-and why its bothering you riya?
Riya-bcoz i’ve never seen such a disgusting girl who is trying to trap her senior just for marks…
Ishpra(angrily)-u r crossing your limit riya…
Riya-i think so she is seducing kabir…
Pragya raised her hand to slap her but b4 that there was tight slap for riya which was given by kabir(who is now at peak of anger,his eyes are red and his jaw is clenched)…
Kabir-dont you dare to speak another word dr.riya…you want to know why i care for her roght,then let me tell you,SHE IS MY WIFE,MRS.SAANCHI KABIR MEHRA…did you get that…so better stay away from her or u’ll face my wrath…saying this dr.kabir saw saachi who was just standing still with tears flowing from her eyes continously…
Kabir went near saachi,he held her hand entwined his fingers with hers and walked…
Suddenly riya shouted coming out of shock…
Riya-whats the proof that you both are married?
Kabir turned to her side and slowing parted saachi’s hair where sindoor is shown and he took mangalsutra out which was hidden inside her dress till now…He saw lovingly at saachi ana kissed her forehead softly…
Dr.kabir-I hope these prooves are enough dr.riya…saying this both saachi and kabir moved out…
All the interns were still in shock…
Pragya-abaey yaar…what ru all starring at they went now cmon get back to duty…saying this pragya isha and veer went to their wards…
Garv(slowly coming out of shock)-is really saachi and dr.kabir married?
Veer-yes before 6 months they both got married and that is the reason why i stopped to flirt her…
Garv-but…
Pragya-abay stop it yaar…if that khadoos comes to know that we are speaking abt them then surely he’ll give us record room work…so lets end this matter here…saying this they continued their work…

44 comments

  1. Lavithra

    Guys if u all need me to continue it as an ff then plzzz tell…this is first time am writing fiction so plzzz adjust with the spellings and grammer mistakes…

  2. AnahitaAnnie

    AnahitaAnnie

    |Registered Member

    Amazing one.. My vote is continue as an ff.. Don’t worry about anything.. U keep writing and we will keep loving.. The ending twist was great..

  3. Swetatitli

    Swetatitli

    |Registered Member

    Ooo super good. 😘😘😘😘loved it a lot.and the marriage twist was awesome 😍😍😍😍

  4. riya

    u r osm, and the twist in the end………….oh god…..too gud…….plz dear, don’t stop writing……eagerly waiting for ur next update……..

  5. Trisha139

    Trisha139

    |Registered Member

    Awww that was too cute …loved that tight slap by kabeer…if you have time then please continue this as ff…love this one …

    • Preetha

      Trisha plz tell me how to submit/post the article…i forgot yaarπŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯…

  6. sundari

    wow its super cool…and awesome..
    and the twist is super i didn’t expect this…
    i love this
    next time i want long os please

  7. Richa

    Pls write ff.. Os was amazing.. I loved the scene where kabir took stand for sanch and slaped riya ans said that sanchi is his wife.. Continue to write ff pls.. You are great writer…

  8. parul

    nice story I hope CVS bhi SDCH mein kabeer and sanchi ki Love story ko start karde or jaldi se married bhi karade. bcz I hated veer. plz next episode updated soon plz.

    • Preetha

      Thank you parul for ur boost up comment but plz comment in english bcoz i dnt know hindi…

  9. sanyukta

    Awesome.Loved it yaar😍😍😍😍😍
    Keep writing dear.Hope to read more of ur work.😊😊😊

  10. Trisha139

    Trisha139

    |Registered Member

    Awww that was too cute …loved that tight slap by kabeer…if you have time then please continue this as ff…love this one …
    Is the author preetha or lavithra?

    • Preetha

      Well both lavithra and preetha are same yaar…i’ll make it as few shot…thankyou very much for ur comment dude…

  11. Annaya

    It was amazing…. but when u will continue dear????? Plz continue as soon as possible plzz today only

    • Preetha

      Thank you…Am ready to post now but dont know how to post annaya…😒😒😒

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