#Kanchi #OS #I_miss_u #by_TRISHA

Hey guys that’s trisha with another Kanchi OS…and I am discontinuing unspoken feelings now there will just be cravings and Kanchi forever ….this os is a little emotional and may be ending can make up throw rotten tomatoes on me ….I am in for that too ??…

Aunthors request ; I already apologise for whatever will happen in this OS…!

Let’s start ….


“How much time left ?” I asked …
They replied “just 15 minutes sir “…
“Ohk no problem “…. I agreed ….
I was looking around me …at a distance I saw a couple sitting hands in hands with love in their eyes ….that was new ? Really new ? No …but yes may be after so long …this just remind me of her ….my love…my life …my wife ….mrs saachi kapoor…she taught me how to act kindly how to behave a little sweetly with my students …she taught me to get out of my rudeness and look at my normal side …!!

Actually that was not too straight …she was confusing too much confusing at start ….yet she managed to make a special …a very special place in my heart…
I still remember the very first day she bumped into me and already started accusing me instead of accepting her fault …we started with hatred …yes hatred for each other after all she was the first one to speak in front of me … to speak in favour of interns…
We fought every day every time …I never had a word “love” in my heart…but yes with her entry in my life I learned that “hatred” well …yet that was not some sort of evil…we just fought that’s it …that too with love in it…

I knew that later but she always loved me …from the very first day it was just that she preferred her career more…that’s why she never admitted this …
The first time when I felt I had something more than frnds wd her was …when veer tried to flirt with her…I always got irritated …even couldn’t let her go wd that prankster …unknowingly I was always afraid of losing her…
And that time I still remembered how the squad made us confess our love for each other …!


Unknown by saachi veer send his friend to dr kabeer cabin …his name was karan…

Karan- Gm dr kabeer

Kabeer- Gm

Karan- I wanted to meet dr saachi I guess she is ur assistant !

Kabeer- yes but why I hope u know these r working hrs

Karan- oh sorry I forgot to tell u I am her fiance…her mother sent me here to meet her …!

Anger boiled inside dr kabeer ….

Kabeer- oh she’s busy in some conference u can come later !!

Karan – but I thought she told me tht she is free in these hours …

Kabeer( almost yelled)- I told u Na she is busy now leave !!

Saachi entering …..
(She got to know the whole plan from veer )

Karan- oh here u r saachi….u know na I was missing u jaan !!

Sayjng this he tuned to hug her …and kabeer turned more furious..!

Saachi stepped backwards preventing hug !

Kabeer- jaan ?

Karan – yes jaan sweetheart darling !!

His anger reached the peaks he just wanted to have punches on him !

Saachi (whispered to Karan)- don’t overreact or be ready to die !

Kabeer couldn’t control his anger anymore….he just slapped him hard for his words …..

Kabeer-“oh sorry that was some mosquito on ur cheeks ”
And yes don’t u dare call her again …she is my girlfriend …now leave !

Karan – what !

Saachi- (her mouth turned o)

Kabeer- jaan pls close ur mouth !!

Saachi- aann ?

Karan left as he had guessed the heat of the moment otherwise he would have been dead !

Saachi- what was that dr khduus ?

Kabeer-I don’t know

Saachi – what ! Then who knows …I am not ur gf then what was all that !

Kabeer- my wish ! I don’t think I need to tell u!

Saachi- fine I am calling him back u will apologise…

She turned to go …he holds her hand and forced her close to him with a jerk…

Kabeer(slowly) ….he pinned her to the wall…-” I don’t seem the need to apologise”…
“I don’t think I should apologise for confessing whom I love ”
Saying this she placed her lips on his giving a peck….he was shocked my her sudden gesture….she turned all red…this time they leaned into each other and both had a lip lock…
After few hrs….

Veer- congrats dr Kabeer

Kabeer- for what ?

Veer- for getting a gf btw I didn’t knew u r this jealous !

Kabeer- record room is calling u for next one week !

Veer- omg no pls noooo sir !!

Kabeer- leave !!

Saachi entering and veer leaving…
Veer- I am sure u both r going to have a super khduus baby….
Both coughed hard on this !


Kabeers POV…
A phone call took my focus…
“Yes I am coming wd in 20 minutes”…

This was just the start of our love story…she completed her internship….it was the time near to our mrrg…I didn’t knew what happened to her she started behaving rudely ignoring me…unknowingly she wanted me to hate her…but as there’s a saying

“once u start loving someone it’s impossible to stop”…

And at last she gave in….she always said “if something ever happened to her I shouldn’t cry instead I would remember her and smile…”….Nd I always pouted on her this dialogue….!

That was almost 1 and a half years after our marriage…I got to know she had oral cancer…thts why she was behaving this rude for sometime back…and that too in her last stage…i always regret if I had known this earlier I could have saved her….it was not that she told me…instead she was taking care of kanchi and suddenly felt unconscious…we operated did everything but couldn’t save her…at frst time I was feeling bad even after being a dr but for her wish ….I continued as a doctor…even now whenever I think of moments spent wd her a wide smile takes place on my lips and tears in my eyes…

Tears started to appear in my eyes…
Nd a voice shook me…”sir it’s over”….
“Ohk can I go in “…I asked.
“Yes “…the peon replied…

I turned just to find a little angel running towards me…my sweetheart…our daughter “kanchi”…I picked her in my arms and turned towards the car…

Kanchi- papa why so serious hv some fun mr akdu…chlo give me my chocolate fast…!

“Ohk my majesty there is ur chocolate…”…I said …..she was exactly her shadow…with my attitude….always reminded me of saachi….and now I had a wide smile thinking abt her as she always wanted me to remember her without tears…
We reached home…she ran and hugged her garndma….
I just admired their bond…
A voice took my attention “kya hua mr hitler kha tha na she will never make u feel my absence “…

I turned to find saachi in beautiful white saree…looking wd lovely eyes towards me…!

I replied…”yes but I still miss you”…

Mom interuppted…”kabeer ;beta who r u talking to ?”…

I replied “mom vo s…. nothing maa “….
I turned again to find no one there and smiled like an idiot…who always fell in love thinking abt her…!

so I had completed this one…pls pls drop a cmmnt if u guys like this…and if u don’t like them flying chappals…rotten tomatoes….are welcomed…??

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  1. It’s amazing Trisha but saanchi’s oral cancer news was little sad. It was really emotional nd kabeer’s jealousy part was awesome. When r u posting ur ff missing it a lot.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku dear
      I am glad u liked it

  2. Oh no I am feeling like crying.
    Plz be like ekta and give our Sanchi back
    This was too sentimental.
    I am touched!!!

    1. Trisha139

      I am really sorry for making u cry dear

  3. So emotional.rula diwa hum logo ko.????but bhot acha story hae

  4. Oh Trisha it was too emotional yaar?.Tears were rolling down from my eyes ??but kaanchi was just like her mother saanchi but anyway ur OS was awesome not words to and update ur ff soon ???

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku divya nd I had updated the ff dear

  5. So emotional.pura tula diwa hum logo ????but story bhot acha thake . Pura amazing

  6. And it was lovely mind blowing no flyingchappies, rotten tomatoes because u r always soo it was awesome ??☺?

    1. Trisha139

      ?thanku sweetie

  7. Nutts

    It was so ? emotional……………
    It was very nice n amazing but it almost made me cry

    1. Trisha139

      Sorry for making u cry nd thnks u liked it

  8. Divyapatel2198

    Really nice and emotional too
    I saw post on instagram in which writer of sdch has written that week saachi will tell truth to veer and veer will tell her truth about dr malhotra.
    So their will be no kaanchi scenes???

    1. Trisha139

      Thnku divya Patel nd yes I know that ??

  9. What a emotional os Trisha but sanchi should not be dead ?? feeling bad for kabir . U always make me smile but today u made me cry. Love u dear for yr superb writing skill u r truly a best writer.

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou neera tht means so much to me

  10. you are such a good writer hatsoff??????

    I know you personaly like kanchi but pls do one os for sanveer fans plsssssss its request pls

    Take care and write more awsm os

    love ya

    1. Trisha139

      I was thinking for this seni….so I will try dear
      Nd thnku

  11. Ooo really heart touching,especially the last portion.Trisha dr,dnt make me cry??

    1. Trisha139

      Sorry for making u cry mayoori nd thanku

  12. My eyes cried yaar y u gave this much of shock pls take care from next time my thought was if somebody fells in love n they have their huk to live together and enjoy the life so pls take care…

    1. Trisha139

      Sure prema I will try mah best

  13. U made me cry trisha…I must say u can able to write heart breaking stories also…Luv u a lot dear

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku anandi…love u too sweetie

  14. U always manage to rope in new ideas… but i hv to admit dis one is very emotional.. n a big thumbs up to ur writing… always everyday something new is in store for us… plz continue wit ur os.. its a treat to see kanchi together in sdch and den read ur updates

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku nkh this means a lot to me

  15. It’s really nice one like such cute love stories

  16. It’s so heart touching. I will not throw shoes at u but I will throw some kisses to u a lovely person

    1. Trisha139

      Return kisses from me ???

  17. it was so emotional trishna dear..you made me cry a lot
    the way you told about un separable even after death hat off to your concept.
    i realy become your crazy fan for os dear
    i like it and love it
    thank you so much for such nice os

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku sundari I am so happy I liked this one …I always wait for ur cmmnt ?

  18. sorry i forget to call you with your title “QUEEN OF OS”

    1. Trisha139

      Thts so sweet of you ?

  19. Hema69

    its so emotional but the jealousy part was awsummm

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku hema

  20. Really Trisha it was so emotional that my heart was crying reading it. I really very love emotional love storys . I can’t say any word for its ending it was that much emotional. U told real meaning of love. Hats off to u. I too have a story and I m going to post it in 11 Aug episode of sdch in comment box because I m unable to reg. my name in ff. When you get time please read it.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku vrushti but I would suggest u should post in ff after registering …

  21. I An Silent Reader.But Fistly Commenting Here.Trisha You Are Best Writer.An OS Make Me Cry,so Imotional.Please Keep Writing.Please Write OS On Nowgoing Kanchi Scenes.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku guddooo and sure

  22. I An Silent Reader.But Fistly Commenting Here.Trisha You Are Best Writer.An OS Make Me Cry,so Imotional.Please Keep Writing.Please Write OS On Nowgoing Kanchi Scenes.

    1. Trisha139

      This is really a treat for me to see any of silent readers commenting

  23. I An Silent Reader.But Fistly Commenting Here.Trisha You Are Best Writer.An OS Make Me Cry,so Imotional.Please Keep Writing.Please Write OS On Nowgoing Kanchi Scenes.

    1. Trisha139

      I will try ?

  24. Abhilasha

    It was so emotional that I began to cry but ya trishu dear u never ever disappoint us sso don’t say rotten tomatoes line….. And it was superb.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku abhilasha ….this means a looot

  25. Sakash.

    Superb,Emotional and Tremendous shot dear.Who will throw chappals and rotten tomatoes on u dear for such a good update?Keep writing dear.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot bro…thts such a pleasure for me that a writer like u liked it …

  26. trisha ur r too gud tumne to rula hi diya n dear divyapatel jo nws instagram ki bta rhe ho sch h to i really hate sdch n rashmi sharma unhe suru se hi kbir ko na to wiki pe ml dkhana tha n na hi koi single scn dkane the koi umeed dkha kar kyun todi i hate sdch but love u all kanchi ff writter

    1. Trisha139

      I agree wd u niyaa…Nd thanku dear

  27. Ohh no Trisha I can’t write kanchi story in sdch episode because it would heart sanveer fan but I really want to write something I tried too hard to register but its error . can you help please?

    1. Trisha139

      Yes sure if you can then I will help u in this comment box …you have to register first and is there is an error try finding out that and removing …once u register it will be so easy for u to post…

  28. Sorry its hurt.

    1. Trisha139

      No never dear

  29. God Trisha u made me cry this time ???i mean like every time I kept consoling myself it’s just a story, but still yaar..couldn’t control my tears……. ?
    it can only be you who can be an amazing writer all the time..luv u a lot sweetie ??

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku riya for such a beautiful cmmnt sweetie …luv u too ??

  30. Trisha your ff was amazing please tell me about IG post divya his bare mein kab rahi hai

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku u hv to register than u can post

  31. Arrre Yarr Trisha I was correcting my mistake. It got typed heart in place of hurt. U will never hurt me.

  32. RuCh23

    Really Trisha it was lovely?? a little sad yes but ur talent to change any situation is just amazing ?

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku ruwani thts so sweet of u

  33. AnahitaAnnie

    Trish.. I surely need to crown ur the Empress of OS now. Each time u have such a different concept and u never fail to impress us readers. Woow, amazing fabulous and all good praises there could be. It was really emotional and fantastic. Loved it.? and I miss the new ff but I know its hard to manage so many so i will not get angry..❤❤

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku annie for such a beautiful cmmnt….your words meant a lot dear u r an osm writer so it’s my pleasure being appreciated by a writer like u

  34. Swetatitli

    It was a very emotional story dear.After reading the story my eyes filled up with tears.????.lovely story yaar ???

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku sweta

  35. RANdomfANCreationz

    The last part was ????

  36. This was just soooooo touching, it will definately not make me throw tomatoes at you but hug you if i ever meet you for writng such an awwsum story

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku so much dear …and yeah sure

  37. Anee

    why u accept flying chappls and rotten tomatoes. Trishu you were also shared with us lots of amazing Os and ff. I includes this one inthose. your writing is always amazing yaar.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku anee

  38. Anee

    Sorry Its expect nor accept

    1. Trisha139

      Oh no worries anee that was just a pov btw u too are a fab writer

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