Kanchi OS: Hai Teri Meherbaani

**Kabir’s pov**
Its almost been a year that the incident took place. Sanchi, carefully clutched in my arms, leaving her body behind, the soul leaving for its heavenly home. The incident came to me in a shock. The girl whom I loved, my 1st love dying in my arms struggling to say all the words she could managed to say to her parents, my parents and well to me too. “sir, car ah gayi hai”. I heard veer calling me. I sighed. After that tragic incident I became a doctor but 1st I had to go for a survey which lasted for 9 months and after that I came back to Mumbai. I came to the car and sat in the front. I still remember that day how we met. I swear to god she was the most beautiful thing I have ever saw and well the most smartest girl also i ever know.

Hai Saaz Tu, Tera Tarj Main
Tu Hai Dawa, Aur Marz Main
Dildar Tu, Khud Garz Main
Hai Geet Tu, Tere Lafz Main
Tu Hai Dua, Aur Farz Main
Azaad Tu, Aur Karz Main

A boy wearing a white shirt and a black demins came to view after he parked his bike in the parking lot. He was the most handsome guy in the college. He was in 3rd year yet he was single. Ever wonder y? he had honey chocolate orbs and well shaped face cut with light. His best friends were arjun and mitali. He came near them and said.

Kabir: yo, guyz. Wht’s up.
Arjun: hey kabir, u know today my bestie is joining our college.
kabir: really!!! Wht’s her name?
Mitali: her name is sanchi. waiting eagerly to meet her.
arjun: guyz, we will met her bt 1st let us go to our class or else we will be late.
kabir: u all go I will come back in a jiffy.
arjun/Mitali: kk, bye kabir.

kabir and the others parted away. kabir was walking towards the canteen when he collided with a girl. His reflex made him hold her by the waist to prevent her from falling and also to remove the hair strands tht was covering her face. He was extremely shock. Well either bcoz of his reflex tht made him to remove the hair strands, desperate to look at her face or to have the view of the world’s most beautiful girl. Well not exactly world’s beautiful girl but for him. the girl had closed her eyes thinking she did fall and was waiting to touch the ground. But when she didn’t feel the cool marble floor against her face, she opened her eyes only to look at the most beautiful orbs she had ever came across. She was healthy and had milky white skin. She had deep black orbs, wavy hairs and a smile which was killing kabir from inside. They stood like tht for who knows for how much time before breaking the eye contact. kabir straightened her and mumbled an apology. The girl just smiled at him and said tht it’s kk. She asked him the principal’s office and went from there after saying thnx. kabir stood there, transfixed, grazing about the beautiful incident before coming back to earth.

Hai Shaam Tu, Tareef Main
Tu Chain Hai, Takleeef Main
Tujh Se Mila Toh Paa Liya, Har Cheej Main
Hai Khwaab Tu, Taabeer Main,
Maana Tujhe Taqdeer Main
Tera Hua Iss Bheed Mein, Iss Bheed Mein

kabir came to the class and took his seat waiting for the other one to come and have a seat. When no one came to seat beside him, he wondered who must be the partner to seat with him. he glanced around but couldn’t find anyone without seat. The teacher came inside and then only he came to know y? the teacher was followed by the girl tht he collided before. She introduced herself as sanchi mishra and the teacher told tht she would b starting her journey with them. sanchi was asked to sit beside kabir. kabir and sanchi introduced themselves and thts how all it began. FRIENDSHIP. They started spending time with each other visiting each others house not aware of the thing tht their families were rivals of each other. Doing projects and all. Their families members also not aware of tht they were their rivals child, happeeiily accepted their friendship and thought they were perfect for each other.

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye
Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye
Hai Saaz Tu, Tera Tarj Main
Tu Hai Dawa, Aur Marz Main
Dildar Tu, Khud Garz Main
Hai Geet Tu, Tere Lafz Main
Tu Hai Dua, Aur Farz Main
Azaad Tu, Aur Karz Main

Time went by and their friendship grew more strong and also they developed love for each other also bonded much stronger. It was the time for the final xms. The xms ended much faster then they expected. kabir who was hell worried to propose sanchi or not was encouraged by their friends, comforting him by their words. After the xms kabir proposed sanchi and she happeeilly accepted bcoz she also had feelings for him. soon they told their respective families and they agreed to get them married.

Hai Shaam Tu, Tareef Main
Tu Chain Hai, Takleeef Main
Tujh Se Mila Toh Paa Liya, Har Cheej Main
Hai Khwaab Tu, Taabeer Main,
Maana Tujhe Taqdeer Main
Tera Hua Iss Bheed Mein, Iss Bheed Mein

It was a fine summer day. Both the families decided to come to a café to talk about their child’s future. But when they came face to face each other they only badmouthed each other.

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye
Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye

They dragged both of their child with them and left. Both the families decided to get them married with someone else. But they didn’t know tht their friends would come to their rescue. Both kanchi ran away with their friends to get married. But they got caught by their families. a huge fight was broken between their families and between them someone took out a revolver to kill kabir. but before the bullet hit kabir, sanchi came in front and got shot. she fell on kabir’s arms and was breathing her last breaths. she managed to fumble few words b4 she closed her eyes.

Hai Tu Hi Toh Hai Bewafa,
Tu Baarish Meri, Savera Mera
Main Tera Hoon Raasta,
Hai Kashti Teri, Kinara Mera
Hai Tu Hi Toh Hai Bewafa,
Tu Baarish Meri, Savera Mera
Main Tera Hoon Raasta,
Hai Kashti Teri, Kinara Mera

i came out of my world as i reached my destination. THE MISHRA MANSION. I ran to reach the door and and rang the door bell. she came to open the door. My sanchi came. She was beautiful as she was. Didn’t changed a bit. Well she did bt only to grow more beautiful.

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye
Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye

sab log kehte hai yeh pyaar hai jo sanchi wapas mot ke muh se wapas ah gayi lekin main kehta hu ki yeh uski meherbaani hai jo woh wapas ah gayi mot se larkar. Hai teri meherbaani.

Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Andheron Se Hum Mukhar Gaye
Hai Teri Meherbaani,
Ki Bin Jaane Hi Hum Sanwar Gaye
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Hlw my lovely readers. Ananya here. I am a avneil fan and this OS was originally written for avneil but then I thought to post it here. I used to was this show at the beginning bt then I quit bcoz I got to know tht sanchi is opposite veer. I liked kanchi more so tht’s y I thought it would be perfect to post something here. Kk guyz if u want me to do any work on kanchi and u have ideas for it, u can comment down and tell me ur name so tht I can post tht work on ur name. kk guyz it’s my time to go bt I hope u do enjoyed it. All criticizes n negative comments r welcome bt if u think it was okay then don’t forget to like and comment.
THNX FOR READING
LOVE
– LILLIANA LIEBEN

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  1. Anu88

    ??Welcome dost…… it’s amazing and outstanding and superb and mind blowing and fantastic yaar…….when I read the story tears came from my eyes reading the story but ending is so happy happy……thanks a lot yaar for giving us this loveable and most beautiful and purely love story……… Please dost write some another os or ff based on kanchi…… Please please please…………takecare yourself dost…….????……..

    1. Lillianalieben

      thnx dear and u too take care

  2. Aaaamazing os,dear.. Plz want sme mor shots nd i hv an idea dn’t know u will lyk it or nt.. Idea,[sanchi is a candidte of brd xm,,fr this she went a coaching nd hv a crush on tchr nd the tchr is none othr thn kabir.. Kabir is nt aware tht he also lykd hr jst to stay away frm hr he alwys insltd hr badly.. Aftr tht,5 years leap nd if u want u can write it as u want nd yeah aftr leap kabir is a well knwn busineesmn nd sanchi is a dctr,,kabir met with accident nd in medical kanchi met] plz dear write it if u lyk.. Lv u..

    1. Lillianalieben

      thank u. no prblm dear. i will think the complete story n then i will post since i don’t want writer’s block and thank u for both ur idea n comment.

  3. Swethaa

    its awesome…in the middle of os i thought sanchi was died but thank god she didn’t…
    and waiting for more stories from you….love you dear..tc

    1. Lillianalieben

      thank u n love u too dear..

  4. Amazing and I hv an idea(start from the current track)”As kabir helped sanchi in getting proof against Dr.Malhotra sanchi start to develop feelings for kabir Sanchi proposed kabir” hope u will like it and if u like it than add some spice in this its a request

    1. Lillianalieben

      thank u for ur comment n also for the idea. n u don’t need to request bcoz it’s my duty to fulfill ur wishes n i am thankful to u for encouraging me.

  5. RuCh23

    ??? It was amazing!!! I was upset today and this was a wonderful treat for me ☺☺☺ loved it dear!!! For now no suggestions to give but you should definitely keep on writing for Kanchi. What if it’s sanveer in the serial? We all LOVE Kanchi ???

    1. Lillianalieben

      thnx dear. yea it’s true we mostly love kanchi more.

  6. Wel-come dear…
    Amazing ,Awesome os… Do write more….

    1. Lillianalieben

      thnx dear. sure, will write more….

  7. Its really amazing…. Hope you write more

  8. Aafiya

    Beautiful.. Awesome.. Amazing…
    The way of describing Kanchi was excellent..
    I just loved it to the core…
    Hope you post more updates on Kanchi..
    Take care..

    1. Lillianalieben

      thnx dear. sure i will love to give an update…

  9. Welcome to the group of Kanchi writers……..it was awsmm and u know when i was reading it, tears were coming out from my eyes…it is too emotional…and yess plzz write os/fs/ff on Kanchi…and u r too gd writer tgts y not giving suggestion..tc

    1. Lillianalieben

      thank u so much dear. it means a lot tht after reading my work n actually shedding tears proves tht i am improving, so thank u so much n yeah sure i will write…

  10. welcome to this page yr…it was amazing…write more on kanchi…loved ur writing…post nxt soon…

    1. Lillianalieben

      thank u n yeah will post soon…. thank u ery much

  11. Niyaaa

    Amaz nd beautifull os..welcome in kanchi family.. Hope so u post more n moreeeeeee on kanchi loved ur writting.. Bye tc??

    1. Lillianalieben

      thank u n u too tc

  12. beautiful
    write more of kanchi

  13. It’s just amazing. Please write something more on kanchi. Take care

    1. Lillianalieben

      thank u. u too tc

  14. Priyanshipp

    Beautiful story and pls do write more on kaanchi. ..☺☺?❤

    1. Lillianalieben

      thank u n yeah sure. i will

  15. Anee

    hi dear it was great os on our fav kaanchi….thanx for post it.

    1. Lillianalieben

      hlw dear, thank u.

  16. Riyarocks

    Anu(hope I can call u this)……….first of all, welcome back to our kanchi family(of course welcome back………coz tum pehle bhi kanchi fan reh chuki ho)……….amazing story sweety………avniel fan………wow……….hope to see more of kanchi writings from u dear……….luv u sweety……….bye………tc

    1. Lillianalieben

      no prblm n u can surely call me anu…. hihi… my nick name… n thank u for both for wlcing me n off course for for appreciating my work….. yes i am a AvNeil fan but i still love KaNchi but less then AvNeil….. love u too n u too tc

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