Kanchi Forever (Episode 16)

Hlo guys …I am back with next ch of kanchi forever … thankyou for all your valuable reviews …keep commenting …so let’s start …

On getting the chance ria did some disturbance with saachis dress…

Veer saw her passing through her room …

Veer -(in mind ) why I think ? she is planning something ,..

After few hours everyone was constantly busy in their work as it was final day of their village campaign …in the middle of that someone was constantly starring at saachi …who was none other than her kabeer …

Her top from right shoulder started to torn a bit ..she didn’t noticed this and neither did anyone else just bcz there was lot of hustle bustle but fortunately as kabeer was starring her he noticed this …..
Without a dating time he quickly ran to her and hugged her tightly in front of everyone …intentionally covering that bit torn part…whispered in her ears “wear my coat and move towards our room”

Saachi- but what happened ..

(he still hugged her )

Kabeer- just Do as I say …

They moved towards their room …inside the room

Saachi: what happened dr kabeer …why you took me like this …

Kabeer – remove this coat you will know yourself …

She removes coat and was shocked to see that torn area …

Saachi- thanks

Kabeer – for what ..

Saachi- for …for saving my…

Kabeer(keeping his finger on her lips)-“sssh” you dignity is my pride so don’t say anything !

Saachi- I hope you didn’t saw this right !!

Kabeer – no I swear I didn’t saw ..

Saachi- really ! Then how do you know abt this ?

Kabeer – look yes I saw but not in that way …

Saachi- reallly drr kabeer (mischiefly ) how would I kkkw then …

Kabeer – dr saachi are you going to waste our whole time here or would you mind to change fast …

Saachi- huh ! Same as before akdu…

Kabeer – my ears are working for your kind information !!

Saachi- ??
Anyways I don’t have any dresses here ; if you are forgetting we have our bags in our cars …

Kabeer -… and that would be bad idea to go there at this time …

They managed her dress ? by that landlady …

Kabeer was busy with his work ..still a young girl was able to get his attention …with plain pink kurti with light green salwar suit …her earnings were adding to her beauty …she looked not less than the punjabi beauty …he was just mesmerised to see her …she was none other than saachi….!!

Time skipped ..

It was late evening …almost all work was completed …whole group sat together in the room ….

Kabeer – so guys we have completed our first destination tomorrow we will move for second …I hope you guys enjoyed the trip

Veer – siir jale pe namak kyu dalre Ho …(why are you putting salt on the burned)…neither we played any game nor we went for outing we just worked like bulls …and you are saying enjoy huh !!

Kabeer – I hope dr veer you remember I am your senior …

Veer – sorry sir (☹️)

Kabeer – ok fine i can saw all of your puppy faces …you can enjoy now till tonight …!!

Veer – yeeeesss ! Ummuuajh sir ji ..?

Kabeer – I think it’s too much just go …

Veer – Sir pls come with us

Pragya – yes sir pls

His eyes turned towards saaachi …she signed him to come ….

Kabeer – ok I am also coming …

Ria fumes listening to this !!!

In the lawn;

Veer – so guys what should we play …

Pragya- like always truth and dare

Saachi- yes I agree

Veer – ok miss golgappa kehri to krna pdega…

Kabeer was being jealous of him a little bit …

Veer: so let’s spin the bottle …
Oops first is our Pragya and Isha …

Pragya- truth or dAre

Isha- dare

Pragya- ok ! Then kiss ria !

Ria – what ! Not fair Pragya

Pragya – abeo everything is fair in love and war ?

Isha kissed Ria on cheeks …

Now again spin the bottle …

Wow congrats this time Ria and dr saachi…

Ria (now she will know who is Ria Malhotra )-


Ria-kiss veer

Kabeer isha Pragya veer coughed on this ..

Ria – wht happened guys this is just a dare…

(Ria don’t know about saachi kabeer being in relation)

Veer- oh madam ; why do you want me to die …give something else …!

Ria – ok then propose veer!!

Pragya- abeo ashlilta kyu filarhi ho !!! Give something else …

Ria- no these r just two options thts it…

Kabeer messaged saachi- you are not going to do any of this got it…!

She smiled at this …

Saachi- ok I am ready for the second one…?

Kabeer fumes…in anger…?

Veer- areeee o sister why do you want me to die by your fiance

Ria – fiance ! Who’s he !!

Veer -(shit) fiance ! Who said fiance I said friends-ishpragya right !!

Ria-whtever complete do your punishment …

Saachi stand up giving an evil smile to dr kabeer …

She was about to say…

Kabeer interrupted: its late doctors go to sleep …and saachi I have something imp to discuss with you come fast…

She could easily see his jealous face …

In the room ….he stepped towards her ..

Kabeer- what do you think of yourself …you know what you were going to do !!

Saachi- what did I did !

He pinned her to the wall…

Kabeer- don’t be over smart …you deserve punishments for everything …

He holds her by her waist and drew close to him ….(whispered)..”thts for not agreeing to my msg”
Backgrnd played-“mohe rang lga de re”
Her heart beats fastened …he could easily see her red face that was Turning crimpson eac second…

He softly kissed below her right earlobe…”and thts for yesterday”

He holded her face and kissed on her cheeks”and thts for going to propose someone else”…….”and thts for loving me”saying this both shared a passionate kiss …soon the atmosphere turned into hot headed romance ….

Precap; fun time

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  1. wow trishna you rock it..especially the last part.
    it was hot romance..i want more hot romance scene from u.
    you rcked it

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot sundari

  2. Aji

    So we it superb Dr. I love your writing which is ff or os. I am waiting 4 next update.

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou @aji

  3. Awesome Trisha
    I loved the the truth and dare part and kabir’s jealousy ….

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou aafia

  4. Abhilasha

    Oh god…… Romance and jealousy are in the air!!!
    Loved it!!!

    1. Trisha139

      Glad you liked it abhilasha

  5. Super amazing episode.
    Just awesome. Loved it.

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much dear

  6. I think some people have an inbuilt talent of writing which no one can match….or even try to match

    Your silent reader

    1. Trisha139

      I am so happy you liked it siya

  7. Ur ffs are really so damn good…..don’t hv words to describe them

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou siya…your words meant a lot

  8. nice episode I hope CVS ko bhi sanchi and kabeer ke scene dikhane chaye not veer bcz I love kabeer and sanchi pair plz next episode updated soon

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot parul and sure

  9. AnahitaAnnie

    Aww cute sweet jealousy.. Amd romance ??..A perfect love story Trisha.. Totally loved it and more fun it the precap.. Now I am totally excited..

    1. Trisha139

      So glad you liked it annie …your words meant a lot

  10. Richa1496

    Nice ff.. Waiting for next… Can’t wait after reading precap…

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou richa

  11. Wowwwww……
    Keep writting dear daepi was amazing…

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much Sanju and yes sure

  12. N yah it was jealousy but make more jealousy it’s amazing to imagine Mr.khadus so jealous…

    1. Trisha139

      Sure I will look into that …

  13. Swetatitli

    The jealousy track was so cute.The romance part was totally out of control ???

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot swetatitli

  14. Moonlight25

    OMG you rocked it. Your ff is my favorite. Today’s part was the best. I loved it. ????

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much moonlight…this really means a lot

  15. Awesome

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou ashnita

  16. oh sweet Trisha u were rocking eagerly waiting for next update could u pls update it soon
    just luv it

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much shreya for the praise …and yes sure I will try to do that as soon as I can

  17. The ending was fantabulous…Anyway because of ria we got to see (read) kanchi’s romance..update Asap Dr…?

    1. Trisha139

      THANKyou idha and ye s I agree with you

  18. Cute one:-)

  19. today’s episode was osm……..the truth & dare game, & the romance in the end……awww……….u know,it somewhat reminded me of the movie yeh raaste hain pyar ke, btw trisha, do u write romantic novels(just came into my mind),bcz u r such an amazing writer, ur ff ur os, my god, they r just mindblowing………….luv u a lot……….

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much riya ur words mean so much to me

      1. Trisha139

        And riya I don’t write any novels it’s just that I was a silent reader of TU few months back for sometime ..now I came back due to Kanchi and thought of writing

  20. Hey Trisha I want a Os on kabeer nd saanchi’s childhood friendship, with some sweet monuments nd jealousy could u write it plzzz.

    1. Trisha139

      Ahm ohk sure I will try to do that

  21. Moments*

  22. but still trisha, i feel u must give it a try, after all u r such an amazing writer, & all our best wishes will be with u………….u know what trisha, among indian authors, ravinder singh is one of my fav, and ur writings, i feel like u somehow match to his level…….the way in which u present a situation, its just osm

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much riya for believing in My skills …truly I never thought so…I am so happy to see I am Able to make a little place of mine in your hearts …thanks again ?…and I will try …love you as a frnd …I hope we r frnds …

      1. Trisha139

        It’s adorable

    2. I agree.

  23. of course trisha……….. its in fact my privilege to hv u as my friend………….luv u dear…………

    1. Trisha139

      Love you too …and I have submitted a SS it will be published soon so read that

  24. Awesome
    Jealousy was sweet

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou pallavi

  25. awesome .
    kabir jealousy was awesome .
    wanna see more scens like this .
    trisha plz update today only .

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot alia…yes sure dear

  26. Really awesome…. As always…???

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much Bhagyashree

  27. Amazing episode

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot amna

  28. Superb episode ?

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou neera

  29. love is in the air…superb

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