Kanchi Forever (Episode 13)

Hlo guys …
It’s trisha here with next part of ff….

So let’s start…

It was morning ….
Saachi in kabeers cabin…

Kabeer-good morning miss saachi aggarwal…

Saachi- very good morning sir …

Kabeer- come sit ! Be comfortable…

Saachi- (hesitatingly)- yes sir …why I think there is something fishy…

Kabeer- no nothing …it’s just that I thought You will be tired…

Saachi- what do you want ?

Kabeer- what Do you mean saachi ?

Saachi- mr khduus can’t be so patient so easily there must be some reason now what’s that…

Kabeer- no there is nothing …

Saachi- ok then I think I must leave for work..(she turned to go)
Kabeer- saachi !(stops her)
I was thinking would you mind a dinner with me tonight …

Saachi-( she smiled with her face on other side and turned to his side behaving normal)
She stepped towards him…

Kabeer- ahm r u in your senses !

Saachi- yes definitely!!

She pinned him to wall and put her arm on his neck…
Saachi- so tht was the real touc …

Kabeer- ahm I mean only if you agree …

Saachi – (acted serious )
You know how imp is discipline for. A doctor and how can you think so …!!

Kabeer- oh I am sorry I just thought ….it’s fine if you don’t want …

She just bursted into laugher …-u know what kabeer…you looked sooo cute …actually being normal sometimes isn’t much bad !!

He was just admiring her …she was laughing whole heartedly …and specially that “kabeer” sounded so good from her mouth ….

Saachi- anyways ttyl I must leave…
Kabeer- wht about…

Saachi- I will be ready (she interrupted)

Both stole one glance of each other while leaving ….

Saachi in her ward….

Veer- miss. Golgappa I have. A surprise for you…

Saachi- I don’t care go do your duty veer !!

Veer- saachi!!! How can you be so khduus…please we don’t want second hitler in this hospital…

Saachi- ohk wht are you upto tell me fast …

Veer-(he turned his closed hand in front of her…and opened it suddenly and threw on her…)

She just shouted –aaaaaaaaaa and ran backwards …

She didn’t noticed and fell in his (dr kabeer)arms a little distant from veer..::

Both of them shared an eye lock….veer -hahaha
They both came in their senses…
She tried to get up …

Kabeer(slowly)-to be mrs khduus of this hospital is afraid of cockroaches…
She just smiled broadly on this “mrs khdus”

They both parted…
Saachi- veer ! What was that …are you serious their are patients …they could have panicked or I must have fell…

Veer- oho!! Calm down ms golgappa…you can’t fell till this mr khd… I mean he is with you::..
(He quickly ran outside to save himself from punishment of dr kabeer)

Kabeer- ahm…by the way that was plastic cockroach..(he gave a evil look)

Saachi-(fumes) ?

Both left for their respective duties…

Around 6pm kabeer msg to saachi-be ready at 8 ok I will pick u up from your place…

Saachi- ohk

After few hours …he was waiting outside her hostel …he saw a girl in plainblue gown with stitches embroidery and crystals….she looked not less than an angel…

She stepped towards him…
Kabeer- wow …

Saachi- what !

Kabeer- I mean you are looking so beautiful ….

Saachi(blushes)- thankyou…

Kabeer- you turned red again omg !

Saachi-no never ….

They reached their place…. it was on the top of the building…decided with balloons heart shaped… and flowers ? and a table spotted in the middle … with a light pink ceiling of a cloth…perfect arrangement of candles and dinner …

Saachi- this is so beautiful I didn’t knew you can be this romantic dr kabeer…

Kabeer- its kabeer for you!

Saachi-yeah …

Kabeer- ahm now I would like to start with a little gift…

Saachi-gift ?

Kabeer- yeah close your eyes

Saachi- ohk (she did as he said)
He softly put a thin golden chain with black little beads around her neck…

She opened her eyes and saw that…
Saachi- this is so adorable…still…there was no need for this kabeer…

You are mine so I have the right to do this…

And maa gave this to me for you..

Saachi- is that mangalsutra?

Kabeer- directly;no …and moreover depends on you how you take this…

Both shared a hug…

They had a dance with hands in hand and had a soulful dinner…

Then they went in the ground hall where there were different tables for different couples….for various couple based games…and a treat from hotel group….
there was an older couple sitting near them…

All of a sudden They heard the older man say “Remember when we were like that?” They looked at each other and laughed and giggled.

When She turned back around, he said “I can’t wait until we’re like that!”
She blushed on that again…

After that they had a walk along side the pool…the last part of their dinner date…

Saachi asked him if she was pretty, he said “No”. She asked him if he wanted to be with her forever, he said “No”. Then she asked him if he would cry if she walked away, he said “No”. She had heard enough; she needed to leave…tears rolled down her eyes…

As she walked away he grabbed her arm and told her to stay. He said “You’re not pretty, you’re beautiful. I don`t want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever. And I wouldn’t cry if you walked away, I would die.”
She just turned back and hugged him tightly …

Kabeer-“I love you ms saanchi”
Saachi(whispered)-I love you too….
He kissed on her forehead…and both left for their places…he dropped her and went back home…..

Precap: a gun directed towards him and a gunshot…….she fell down with tears in her eyes…
Kabeer-(shouted)-saaachiiii !
He woke up gasping…

Hope you guys liked this part …keep commenting …apologies for any mistakes…

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  1. Awesome dude…plzzz post next asap…really loved the scene when he said i’ll die…wwoooewwww what a creativity…hey plzz tell me how to post/sunmit the artixle after logging in…i forgot yaar????

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou preetha…after logging in select “menu” ??Button on upper left side and then …select “submit article ” …?? And then you have to type the essentials and submit them…

    1. Trisha139

      Thankq afia

  2. Just superb it’s amazing.
    No words.
    Plzz post nxt asap.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot dear

  3. yaar seriously awesome more romance jealousy and fun in next update soon eagerly waiting because just love it

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much shreya

  4. Super. I have a question what do guys eat it’s very beautiful every time I have no words to say

    1. Trisha139

      Haha…btw thankyou so muh ashnita glad you like it

  5. Hey what was with that precap, it was just awesomeeeeee

    1. Trisha139

      Glad you liked it

  6. Trisha dear I have written my take on SDCH on SDCH 25july written update, forget to mention your name among those I wanted it to be written as an FF
    I also wrote it detaily on kaanchi just an act by Annie episode 10 comments.can u please come forward with an FF having similar sequence

    1. Trisha139

      Sagarika as you asked me also to do this but I guess it won’t be a good idea if more than one writers will do this ff …

  7. awesome really enjoyed reading this .
    waiting for another one.
    really loved the cockroache scens .
    update fast another episode of kanchi forever

    1. Trisha139

      Thankq alia and sure

  8. Amazing episode. Sanchi acting serious and the three questions and answers. Wow it’s just amazing ????

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot sandhya Mam ?

  9. Swetatitli

    Arey wah Kya story hai yaar.u nailed it. ?????

    1. Trisha139

      Glad you liked it

  10. Ausomeeee episode ?but please update fast please ?

    1. Trisha139

      Sure sweetie and thankyou

  11. Lavithra

    Thank you trisha for ur help…??????

    1. Trisha139

      You welcome

  12. It’s awesome…… You nailed it again… Pls update next ff soon can’t wait after reading precap….

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much richa and sure

  13. awesome waiting for next episode
    can’t wait for another episode yrrr.
    cockroache scene was awesome .

    1. Trisha139

      Sure and thanks a lot alia

  14. Nice plz post the next part soon

  15. i just stopped watching the show sdch as there’s only sanveer scenes going on now a days which is really unbearable to watch on my part being a kanchi fan………… thnx to ff where we can get our kanchi together, thnx a lot to the writers for this………..
    thisha dear, u r osm……….loved the episode a lot, for me the best part was the 3 ques & ans part……………….too good…………eagerly waiting for the next update asap……..

    1. Trisha139

      Same here riya after today’s episode I was so disappointed…I guess it’s better to live in our kamchi world of ffs than being disappointed by real epi …
      Thankyou so much for ur praise …this means so much to me yr

  16. It’s fantastic meri Jan(I can call u Jan I think so)

    1. Trisha139

      YEah sure and thankyou

  17. Trisha139

    Guys I want to know something from you guys …
    I am planning to end this ff and start a different with a different and fresh concept…I just want to know ur opinions …I haven’t reached on any conclusion yet it’s just that tell me what do you think abt this

    1. I am with u.
      But this ff is also good.
      A new and fresh start would be good.

    2. Lavithra

      Ok do as ur wish dear…but plzzz if u want to end this ff means end it with marriage track yaar plzzz….

      1. Trisha139

        Ok then I guess we have a lots of ch to go through …excited ??

    3. It’s ok if you want to start another one… We all are with you.. But it’s a request.. It should be kanchi pls….

  18. yeah,u can end this on a good note, and if u hv another concept in ur mind, then we r sure it must be osm as well like the current one………u may proceed ahead with ur new track, i’m with u…….

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much for the support Ria …
      This means a lot to me dear

  19. AnahitaAnnie

    Woow. Those three questions and answers were amazing and ur wording portrays them in such a cute way.. Hats off to veer for the cockroach.. And ur scenes are incredible.. Can’t wait for the next.. Keep going..?

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much annie…I am so glad you liked that

  20. yes trisha u can end this but after marriage track .showing some of loveable moments between them.

    Trisha u didn’t write ff on my idea
    im angry with u ..

    1. Trisha139

      Alia you asked me to write an OS…and I went for Ann eye checkup as I was facing problem since many days so can’t write yours dear…I will write that tomorrow dear thts a promise …sorry once again yr

  21. Amnaa

    Its a nice episode

  22. its oky yrrr i understand totally .i was acting to be angry with you. soo that u post as soon as possible .
    yippee u will update tomorrow .
    waiting .
    sry sry sry if i disturb u .
    really sry
    soooooo sorry

    1. Trisha139

      Yeah alia and don’t worry you don’t need to be sorry

  23. Awesome episode as usual keep it up dear .plzz update daily

    1. Trisha139

      Sure neera glad that you liked this

  24. Richa1496

    Awesome…. I just read all your posted ff… And they were amazing…. You are truly a great writer… I loved all your ff a lot…??

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much richa
      I am so happy you liked them

  25. its awesome and sorry for late comment

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