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Kanchi Destiny OS by trisha

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Hey guys …. I came up with one more OS….
Your comments come as my inspiration…and so I am here today…

Saachi had completed internship in the SDCH and as our fav kanchi were married….before approximately 1 year….

All the interns were then doctors …

Early morning….
His sleep was disturbed by sunrays directly falling on his face … he twisted a bit …still asleep….his one hand was trying to find the other person sleeping beside him…but he felt none…so woke up wondering where she can be ….

He moved downwards and probably end up getting her glimpse in the kitchen…
As usual his day starts with her and so was that day…

Kabeer- saachi ! You here…I had been searching for you the whole house …I don’t think this is the time for brkfst….

Saachi- no wonder mr. Kabeer forgot again …today is krvachauth…

Kabeer- so are you telling me you are keeping fast…?

Saachi- of course ….

Kabeer- saachi you need not to do that I am fine ok

Saachi- it’s a ritual so I need to do that and yeah I came here for an early morning ritual so …m doing that…

Kabeer- ahm that’s fine but aren’t you forgetting something …I mean …something imp

Saachi- no definitely not !

Kabeer- I tried to found that everywhere but can’t did you stole that…that morning kiss of mine ….

Saachi- not today mr . Khdus now go get ready…we have to leave

Kabeer holds her close to him …
In a calm tone- I never get this …you still turn red saachi….

Saachi- bcz you are still that arrogant

Kabeer -smiles …no doubts..

Both leave for the hospital ….she was somewhat more dressed than normal that day…

Both continued their duties…
In the afternoon …
Isha- saachi this sandwich is just so so good …I just love it πŸ˜‹

Pragya- and this shake omg ossmm 😘

Saachi- sudhroge nhi Na tum dono or Mujhe chidana bnd kro vese hi pet me chuhe dorre h(you both won’t tame right, already rats are running in my stomach)

Pragya-Abeo then who said you to do fast….
Isha- its compulsory dood

Saachi- yes I will see you both don’t you worry guys you both have to marriage soon …πŸ˜›πŸ˜›then you will know all this …

Both left for their work…
Veer-ms golgappa look I got 🍫chocolates for you …

Saachi-(angrily) veeer!!
You trio won’t stop teasing me right ….

Veer- no no ms saachi there’s nothing like that ha it’s just that we care for you toooooo much after all you are mrs khduus of this hospital…πŸ€—πŸ€—

Saachi- are you going or need a record room punishment…

Veer- aree no no I am leaving mrs khduuus …. you are not less than that hitler…

She almost never fasted so it was not easy for her….

It was her break …she decided to confront her mr. Khdus …
She rushed to his cabin without knowing ….
Kabeer- don’t you think dr saachi you could have knocked before entering ….

Saachi- this is breaktime mr. Khdus…

Kabeer- ohk then any work ….you look disturbed…

Saachi-its all bcz of you neither you have Married me nor I have to keep that fast…

Kabeer- omg cool down babyy…
You shouldn’t have stolen my heart…and as for now leave this have lunch…I don’t believe in this

Saachi- πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’but I do

Kabeer- really…
He started moving towards her…
They were married but she was still that nervous saachi…she stepped backwards…in no time she was stuck on the wall..he leaned onto her….holds her from waist pulls her closer to him….they shared an eye lock…
He was about to kiss her..and just then…
Saachi- maa ap
He didn’t moved a bit…
Kabeer-mrs saachi kabeer…in this 1 year I have understood you much…you can’t trick me…

Saachi-(slowly)
This is your office..

Kabeer- but this is our breaktime…and best to compensate my morning kiss….

Saachi- I mean …that …this…
Kabeer-keeping his finger on her lips…”sssh”

Few moments passed by…
Saachi-I have a good news for you…for us…

Kabeer-(excitedly)
Really tell me
(May be he was thinking something)

Saachi- breaktime is over..

Kabeer- what ! This was the news…

Saachi- smiling broadly …

Kabeer- whtever now let’s continue the duties…

Both left

Some hours passed…
It was night almost all the rituals were done ..they had dinner…
In their room-

Kabeer- saachi…we had two meetings tomorrow so be prepared for that …

Saachi didn’t replied

Kabeer-are you listening to me
(He looked straight to see her)

She was all lost in the beauty of the moon…

He went towards her …softly hugged her …she came back to her senses…

Saachi- did you remember I told you about a surprise today…

Kabeer- yeah but that was too bad as a joke….

She picked his hand and kept on her stomach…
He understood what she was trying to say…
He was full of joy…immediately hugged her tightly …..

That was the best day of their life…
Destiny bring them together…as they were destined to be…

This was mostly simple as compared to other OS guys…
I apologise for any mistakes…this was just an idea struck my mind so I wrote this…

56 Comments
  1. awesome dear……….. waiting to hear from u more

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot janu

  2. just love it
    pls don’t forget to continue ur ff and keep writing is and ff

    1. Trisha139

      Sure Shreya
      Glad you liked it

  3. This is so cute….I loved it:-)

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks vasundhara

  4. Awesome

  5. I really love this romantic side of dr.kabir…wwooowww superbbb dude…waiting for ff and nxt os and how dare you to allow pregnant saachi to do fast…😜😜😜….plzzz post nxt asap yaar…

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou so much preetha …and yeah I agree with you …sure dear

  6. Really awesome, I mean just now words. You r really good at writing

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot …so glad you liked it

  7. Swetatitli

    It was simple but it was awesome. Loved ur os a lot😍😍😍😍😍

    1. Trisha139

      Thankq dear

  8. awesome i really loved it but you should have shown kabeer taking care of sanchi (while she was pregnant ) .
    otherwise it was awesome it was simple bjt cut love story

    1. Trisha139

      THanks a lot alia will try to make it better from next time

  9. Abhilasha

    Who said that this is simple intact its so awesome….. Knw what today only I was wanting some romance after meg for kanchi….. And looks my thoughts reached to u…….. It was mind blowing!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    One more rqust to am kanchi lovers don’t quit kanchi if sanveer happened bcoz after that only these ffs will be our kanchi lifeline…. So keep loving kanchi!!!!

    1. Trisha139

      You can’t imagine abhilasha….I smiled broadly after reading to your comments …this is the only thing which boosts your confidence and you can write again…
      And wah I agree with you but as per today’s epi i felt just a lil but that Kanchi can happen in the show also

      1. Abhilasha

        Just wish yr…. And I think we r connected that’s why u can read my mind dear!!

      2. Trisha139

        May be 😝

  10. Trisha… It was awsm and sooooo cute…. I loved it a lot… πŸ˜†

    1. Trisha139

      Thankq so much richa

  11. Good job Trisha

  12. Hey I am new here..I loved it!!!!😍

    1. Trisha139

      Thankyou isha

  13. Nice one.
    I Lve it but no one is updating the another episode plz update fast.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot ruhi

  14. awww……….kabir is sooo romantic………can’t stop smiling while reading this………..trisha,u gonna make us mad with ur writing skills……….u nailed it yaar…….too good,just too good…………eagerly waiting for ur next os………..plz post it asap………..

    1. Trisha139

      I am so so happy you liked it ria…definitely I will try my best to do that… love you guys 😘

  15. I love ur os trisha i read each and every one of them i u don’t mind i have a suggestion for u and that is now saanchi is pregnant after that kabir throws a party and then the have a baby and etc i hope u will post an os on this plzzz but post it longer like a big story plzzzzz

    1. Trisha139

      Never ananya…sure I would look upon this surely…
      Thankq

      1. Plz tell me when u will post ur nxt ff or os plzz

  16. It’s lovely

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot pallavi

  17. Though it is simple,It’s simply awesome.

    1. Trisha139

      I am so happy you liked it sandhya Mam 😝

  18. ArpitaKrish

    Trisha I have a request to you when you will free, please wrote a ff on this os having more than 50 chap like how they meet, their love story…..
    Because I liked the concept of this story…..
    Please in future whenever you will get time …….
    Please….please

    1. Trisha139

      Ahm sure after finishing my current OS I will try a new with a different storyline …

      1. ArpitaKrish

        Okay….thanw

  19. Dis was one of the best dat i have read so far. I read it almost like 5 timesπŸ‘πŸ»

    1. Trisha139

      Thanks a lot dear

  20. Yaar it was so so soooo good I really enjoyed it BT its too short make the happiness spread and baby born…

    1. Trisha139

      Yeah I will try for that …and I am so happy you liked it

  21. N after today’s episode i see some hope of kanchi… kabir did nt refuse his mom😜 N dat riya i vl murder her

    1. Trisha139

      Yeah same here…and hi so reaction was so sudden…anyways hope for the best …

  22. simple but fabulous mind blowing OS .very cute story loved itπŸ˜‡

    1. Trisha139

      Thankq neera…glad you liked it

  23. AnahitaAnnie

    Thats soo cute.. And the idea was really very awesome.. Loved it sooo much.. Greatly done. As i told before u are our queen at OS’s.. Now I am greedy for more. And the last part was dreamland.. It was soo adorable.

    1. Trisha139

      THanks a lot annie… being appreciated by a writer like you is a big thing …
      ur os and ff are also just awesome 😘😘

  24. i really enjoyed it..its simply awesome..
    you nailed it

  25. hey trisha, i read this almost 5 times, still can’t stop smiling, u r osm dear……..

    1. Trisha139

      Glad you liked it ria

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