Kamhoshiyan………..Pyar Zindagi Ka…… (Shot-2)

Hello every one …thanks for the support to kamhoshiyaan………………………pyar zindagi ki……….
So today shot….2

Episodes starts with shivay getting stunned by anikas words…………
Anika leave the oberoi mansion…and shivay standing still in his place…..om come next to shivay
Om: u wont understand now shivay….what u gained till now is nothing when compared to what u have lost…..and the sad part is u cant get it back for ever…..
Shivay seeing her going….and daksh one night stand issue comes and shivay utter…muje patha hai……
Om turns to see shivay: kya u know that……
Shivay comes to senses : what what….its over…and needs to start my tomo…..and new deal …work is more…i am leaving…..
Om holds shivay s hands and stops hm
Om: yadd rakna….thu kise se nahi ….appne app ko dhoke mei rak rahi ho……theri zindagi hai…..aur theri marzri…………………….

Om leaves….shivay sees him…………………..
Next day……………………………………………………………
Its shitia….from today…tia comes and shouts at a servant for not obeying…..
Dadi ask tia to be courteous …as they are humans….tia tries to oblidge but it doesn’t convince dadi…she leaves……
Shivay comes out of the wash room and opens the wardrobe…..he sees the mangal sutra………
His wedding., press release, anika throwing the pieces comes in front of his face…..he sees the sari….and reminces of their moment….he closes his…eyes……..holding the mangal sutra with a quite tight……daksh shouting 15 lakhs…wakes him up out of the dream…………………………..he see his fingers with the impregnation of the marks of the mangal sutra…………he keeps it s in locker………
He comes out to the break fast….every one are happy…..shivay sits ask for dadi….servant says she finished already……………………..
Omru get up with out having break fast due to some reasons………………….
Shivay sees tia eating her diet salad…….

He to gets up with out the break fast…………
Its noon
Dadi knocks the door of study…
Shakthi comes and ask y this formality…as its her house….
Dadi sees shivay standing….says: now a days no one hears me…so it means my mere presense doesn’t influence anyone……so ……leave i need to talk to u shakthi…kya u have time…..
Shivay sees dadi….with the guilt…shivay: dadi…app
Dadi: no shivay…..i dont want to aruge to shivay singh oberoi…u carry on…i cam to talk to my son…no to u…………………………………..
Shivay goes to stand near the table…………….
Dadi gives the envelope and ask her to cancel the loan………
Shakthi: y ma…didnt she take it?….its 15 lakhs…..it will help her………y did she return…..
Dadi: nahi…she doesn’t want even memories to stay ……she thanked u for arranging this…but also said sorry for returning the same……………
Shivay sees the cover…and reminces of daksh having the same cover…..
Shivay: 15 lakhs …whose loan………………………
Dadi: y u bother shivay….leave its not u cup of tea….
Shakthi: wo anika apni bhaiyi ki boarding school keliye….load apply kiya tha…so i just helped her by passing this….so she returned it unused………….\
Shivay: it was given by daksh no………as shivay says this…he could sense his words were so feeble that its needed a amplifier to enhace…it…………….
Dadi: haan…went it came …daksh want to give this personally to her…as she was is fiancé…so i gave him to give it to

her………………………………………….so what ur problem shivay……………………..
Shivay : to him self….they y daksh said that he is giing this to her….and she asked him the money……………
Shivay takes the papers and sees them…..he says i will clear this…..he leaves with the papers……….
As he goes he collides with sowmya….and papers fall…sowmya sees the name…and looks him
Sowmya: bade bahiyya..can i say u some thing……
Shivay looks at her….
Sowmya: i knew its ur family matter…but when u married anika didi…i felt happy….as she can manage everything with love….she was my companion to…she helped me all the while….and that uss din….i called her late night…..but she came to help me out….its my opinon. That u could have conciderd before the press release….
Sowmya leaves…..shivay stops her……

Shivay: what late night…..
Sowmya says that night i felt some intruder so i called anika…and daksh byiayy was awake..so he shifted to my room and me and anika slept in daksh biyya s room……………………………….
Shivay: so anika was with u in daksh room…..sowmya nods and leaves……………..
Every thing from daksh bet to till date gets rewinded in fornt of his eyes……….he sits there with a shock….
Shivay in mind: so i was wrong in ….how i missied these thing….every tthing was infront.. and i was thinking bad about her………i didnt even thought y she slapped me….wo thappad muje sab kuch batharaha tha…………….par…par…mein…………….
He opens daksh door…………and find dsksh missing….he turns to leave..where he sees his laptop blinking……and stops seeing some shadow……he opens the laptop…..he sees its unlocked………….and finds anika s pic on screen saver……….he gets startled…
Daksh comes and ask u here………………
Shivay turns ….he gives a plain look….he shows the loan papaers and ask what all this daksh…y u played this trick what u got from this…..say what….
Daksh: with pain look …anika……………
Shivay looks up to see him….
Shivay: anika………………………………
Daskh: ya shivay…anika…..mein thume …sirf anika se door rakna chatha tha…….
Shivay sees him….daksh continues
Daksh: kya hua….u know.. jab bi thum uske pass ho tha hai na… she doesn’t look at me……so …..u so i want u to be away..so i just……..u know…i did only half …..rest u did…..and yesterday..u crossed every single limit and u made my way clear….never mind shivay…thu tho tia ko apni wife ka darja dethiya….
Shivay holds daksh and ask how can u do this to anika….wo bechari ko…..and how cheap u are………………
Daksh: shivay …are u serious….i said thats all…but u belived and its ur fault…..u both share the same bond…..no…then how come u belived …..me….the fact is ur ego over poweed ur insecurity……so u belived in me….aur theri shaddi….ek dikawa nahi…theri andar ki esshass ka tha…par wo bi thu mane ki thyiar nahi thi…..
U know i was thinking what to plan……..but u did by urself…….
Shivay shouts…..get out…………i dont wnt to see u here

again……………………………
Daksh: sure…..i am leaving………..
He packs his things and leave…….every one see him…..as they are unaware off the happening……
Daksh comes and hugs shivay…he says: shivay mein jarahi ho…. shivay rigids his face……..and says jayo……daksh: yes mein jarahi hoon anika ke pass………………………..
He leaves……………..shviay sees him………………
Shivay goes to check in anika………………….
He finds the house locked….he comes back and ask dadi…………..she says she left already…………………………..
Shivay gets startled and goes to his room………………..
Dadi follows him……
Dadi : billu kya hua…..thu teek hai na…….
Shivay : wo dadi……..
By then tia comes with the mangal surtra……..and complains him that she could nt wear by herself and calls him for help….
Shivay see the mangal sutra…….he remembers of wearing the same to anika………………
Suddenly he says dont wear that…………
Tia looks him….what……………..
Shivay: no….its not good u order some other…u ask mom she will help u…..
Tia: baby u are sweet …even i to think the same…………..she is about to take the mangal sutra with her…shivay gets it from her ..and sees it…………
Dadi: billu u are late….abb kuch nahi ho saktha……………………..
Shivay see her……….he says…..dadi..i …i just wanna see her once………………..
Its 2 weeks after
Tia comes with the new one….and ask him to help her….shivay gives the vague response and leaves………..
After a while robin comes and he makes her wear……..they both see ech other…………………..
Its 8 months……………..
Shivay got himself into a routine……………his most of time spent with meeting…and rest with brothers……he hardly went to his room…………….tia who felt this strange ….didnt bother as she to needs that………………………
Shivay tried to search anika……..but dadi ask him not to disturb her…………….
Its weekend….oberois family people arrive to a grand gala function…………….
It was a wedding….a gujrati and Bengali jugalbandi….venue is Nagpur…………………..
They say in the hotel….and its wedding party ……………….
Dadi, shiv,omru…. join with them………tia rest in the hotel………its the buffet……….
Om : the hospitality is quite rich…………….
Dadi: ya……………..
They enjoy the party………..
The host people come and greets oberoi….they discuss formally….shviay praises about the arrangements and hospitality…….the host says it was done byt a event management company……….
Shivay says he is interested in speaking to them………the host calls and speaks…then he says they are coming………….
Every one have a simple chat………….by then……..
“good evening sir…………”
Every turns to see the person…………..
Shivay : anika………………..
Anika standing in a uniform…and with in a minute he senses the sindoor which is very mild …..on her forehead……………
Host speak to anika……and anika to joins the conversation………….the host introduces shivay………….
Shivay puts forwards his hands towards her….and says: hi i am shivay sing oberoi……….
Every one look for her response……
Anika with a smile….says namasthe…….. i am anika……
Shivay sees her…and takes his hand back………….
The host s lady ask..anika…….pura nam………
Anika says its just anika…………
Lady sees the sindoor……and gives wierd look……she also turns to dadi and says how these girls are very bad now a days………..
Anika hearing this… doesn’t react….shviay sees her…………………
She leaves after some discussion……………
She moves to server at the last minutes of the party………………shivay see this and tries to go near…when ever he nears her….she keeps on skipping the table………..or he gets distrurbed by a guest…………
The party ended………and every one return to the hotel……..where shivay holds anika s hand………………and ask her to stop………..
She turns to see him…………………
Some one holds shivay hands…….anika and shivay see the person………………………

Precap……………..
Anika says yeh sindoor apiki nam ka nahi….apki doka ka……………………………………anika comes out of the office………………..shviay pulls anika towards..her……..and shouts ….abb thak thu meri bevi ho…. and no one can change this…………………

Hello every one …thanks for the comments…………………….
Plx keep commenting
Regards
Samukta……………..

16 comments

  1. Setu

    Please make anika pregnant when shivay meet her after 8 months in nagpur…and he along with his family shocked to see this..due to their first wedding night romance…..I wil be waiting for yr ff…it’s just awesome…u have a great writing skill..☺☺☺

  2. Mukta

    |Registered Member

    AWESOME!!!!!! I’ve become ur fan Samukta!!!!! I loved the way u r showing Anika’s character strong and bold!!!!! It’s just amazing, flawless!!!!!!! Plz post the next part soon…… waiting eagerly…….

  3. Aisha

    When shivay is following anika when she is checking the food just then anika’s assistant will arrive holding a crying baby in her hand and telling anika that mam see yr son ansh is crying continuously from half and hour ..mam I think that u should first make him quite as he is a premature baby as he is born in 7th month I will look around the arrangements u take ansh …shivay will be stunned …anika will took ansh and try to make him quite but he will be crying continuously …the shivay eyes wil be filled with tears looking at his own baby …he will take ansh from anika …and as soon as baby goes in shivay’s hand he will become quite ….and shivay will be looking at the baby and then his kanji eyes …his eyes will be filled with tears …and all oberoi family will come their and see ansh …anika will hurriedly took ansh from shivay’s hand and went away to make ansh sleep in the room…shivaay will narrate the whole incident to oberoi family …and about the baby kanji eyes …all Oberon’s will get emotional…shivay will ask forgiveness to anika but anika will not forgive ….all oberoi’s will also try to convince anika but she will not be convinced …then shivay will become romantic singh oberoi and try try to convince anika ….daksh will enter the scene and kidnap the baby and Tia will also be with him s she want property and daksh want anika ..shivay will save his son …he will be badly injured as daksh shot him ….and anika will forgive him as the bullet was meant for anika but shivay will took upon him …and the will again marry with all rituals … rumaya marriage secret out …ishara romance ..rumaya ,shivika ,ishara will be married in same mandap … happily ever after ..please if u like my story please add to yr story …and give me suggestion about it….☺☺ If u really liked my story please continue yr ff based on this ☺☺☺

  4. Hetal

    Hey,

    Your FF is good and has really nice story. One piece of advice I want to give you is that do not make story mature in terms of content ( it means-Don’t make Anika mother this early. Happy ending ke liye kuch to hoona chahiye na.). Continue love story of Shivay and Anika, like make Shivay repent for his mistake by finding out Tia’s truth and many more moments like making Oberoi family united and so on.

    Your FF is nice and bold, I wish the serial also take track like your FF.

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