Kaisa yeh isq hai ( Avneil fan fiction ) Episode 26- Protecting the love ๐Ÿ’—

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Episode – 26


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โ„“ฮฑั•ั‚ ั‚ฮนะผั” ัƒฯƒฯ…’ฮฝั” ัั”ฮฑโˆ‚ :- Neela tells Avni about how her mother who is captured in CHADHA’S house and her history . There , Shweta recalls Neil’s childhood , How he got mentally sick after leaving Avni . She decides to bring Neil to real world and make him move on in life …
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( Previously ) The stars are twinkling outside , The moon shining gracefully . But for them there seems no light . Neil takes out a pendant , And splits open it , On one side it was Avniโ€™s picture and other empty , It was heart shaped ๏ฟผ๏ฟผ

[They are sitting far away from each but are shown talking to each other ]

Neil โ€ Just like this , My heart is empty , Avni , Just for once come to me , Wherever youโ€™re just return back , Please โ€ ๏ฟผ๏ฟผ

Avni โ€ Neil you hated tears in my eyes , Whenever I used to cry you used to say โ€˜ Avni please donโ€™t cry Iโ€™ll solve every problem of yours โ€˜ โ€œ

โ€ Had you forgotten all those promises , I hadnโ€™t ! โ€œ

โ€ If you would be here then Iโ€™m sure youโ€™d have helped me , Weโ€™d have saved Naina Ma ( Aisha ) โ€œ

Neil โ€ I donโ€™t know why today , Why Iโ€™m being so nostalgic , I just want you soo much , I want to touch you once โ€œ

โ€ Please come for once then you may go , Okay ! You can come into my dreams , Iโ€™d be happy , But at least come โ€œ

Avni โ€ I just want you , I need someone to hold me , And I want a warm hug , Someone to wrap me in his arms โ€œ

โ€ A chest over which I can keep my head and can say everything โ€œ

โ€ I need you Neil , I want to tell you all my pains and my dreams โ€œ

โ€ I wan to tell how much Iโ€™ve , What Iโ€™ve gone through ! โ€œ

โ€ Youโ€™ll come Na ! โ€œ

Neil โ€ Tell Avni youโ€™ll come Na โ€œ

[ Background song :- kaisa suluk zindagi tu kar rahi hai..

mujhe paraya tu mujhse kar rahi
jaise ki akhiri saas chal rahi hai

yaadon se teri lipatke
fariyaad itni kare
yaha wahan hai tu
mujhme rawa hai tu]

{And then itโ€™s shown that the wire is not plugged in through which sound could be heard . Only the wire of video is plugged in }๏ฟผ

Heads lowered over the table . Eyes flooded with water . Those sweet thoughts inside heads . Mouths sealed . Truth hidden .
Hearts so close but , Can’t hear the beats of each other .

The moon sinks somewhere into earth , Reddish , spherical , Sun , Lit the whole sky .
The yellow radiations had covered the whole area around CHAMKO cafe …
Ali holding a tray bounces into a pretty lady

” Ohhh I’m sorry Tina ” ” Are you okay ! ” he said in grief

” I am fine but look at my dress it’s all a mess now ” ” Oh god ! ” She said out of emotion

” I’m sorry again , If you want I’ll take you for shopping , Is that fine ” – Ali

” Oh now , It’s just not fair Ali ” –

” No , You’re such a beautiful girl you’ll look hot in any dress , Even in this get up ”

” hhhh! My cutie pie ” She says while squeezing his cheeks

” Ali ! I’ve something to say to you ”

” Yeah what’s it ? ”

” Why don’t we get married ” She’s excited ” After that you can buy for me so many dresses ”

Ali ” Shaadiii” ” Tumse ” ” Tina are you in your senses “๏ฟผ

Tina ” What does that means ! Am I not beautiful woman ”

Ali ” I had someone else , Who’d reserved my heart already ”

Tina ” Please Ali don’t say like that ! We’re friends since years ”

Ali ” That is why I’m telling you . We’re in friendship not relationship ”

” This is just not fair , No no ”

Ali ” Whatsoever , I’m not gonna marriage for now , I just want to enjoy this time , Adulthood , And you had heard Na ki ‘O jane wale ye jawani char din ki
Jane wale ye jawani char din ki’ ”

Just suddenly someone hold his right ear and mashed it , A elderly lady’s high pitched voice comes out ” I’ll tell you now , Jawani char din ki , ” ” Let me explain you in details ”

Ali ” Sorry Nanno , I’m sorry ” He said being in trouble

Nanno ( Fatima ) : What were you babbling , You’ll not marry , Char din jawani ke

Ali ” Nanooo ” He exclaims with joy , And hugs her๏ฟผ

Nanoo” First of Tell me , What were you saying ? ”

Ali ” It was just a prank , I wasn’t serious ”

Tina ” Means you don’t have any girl in your life , You’ll marry me ”

Ali turns to her ” No it doesn’t meant that ”

Nanoo shouts ” Then what does it means ”

Tina ” Ali tell , Why’s your mouth sealed now ”

Ali holds his head , He could see two ladies so eager to know the answers to their questions on his left and right side ” Oh lord where you’ve left me , Between these two ladies , Save me ”

” Tia ” He said with pause ” You go now I’ll talk to you later ”

” Nanoo come with you’ve come after a long trip , You must be fatigued ”

He made her sat down ” Tell me what you’ll eat , My special Poha , Or special masala tea ”

On the other side , Dd comes in search of Neil muttering to himself ” Where has Neil Sir gone , He’s missing since last night ” ” If I couldn’t find him angry mataji will kill me ”

He stood there for a minute to blow out some air as he’d ran so much , Looking here and there constantly his eyes comes upon a little girl , Holding a Barbie , Wearing curly and wavy hair on her head

To every questions her answer was the same ” Papa – noodle ”
Dd ” Why are you crying little girl , What happened to you ”

Girl spoke in squeaky voice ” Papa – noodles ”

Dd ” Papa noodles , No baby there’s no brand named Papa – noodles ”

She sobbed again ” Papa – noodles ”

Dd ” Now what she wants papa or noodles ” ” Who’s your dad , Where’s your mom ! ”

The same thing again

Girl ” Papa noodles papa ”

Dd ” No she surely want her Dada , She must have come here with him , But who’s her Father ? ” He asks her ” Who’s your father , Who’s your papa little princes ”

Dd ” Please say something ”

Girl ” noodles ”

Dd ” Noodles , Her father name is noodles ” He looks at her curdled hair , Which were brown and shinny .

Dd ” Noodles , Her hair looks like noodle bhaiya , Ali bhai , Maybe ……she’s his daughter ” He gapes at her for another glimpse

He remember Ali saying once to him ‘ Dd I’m having a crush on that girl ( Juhi ) she’s so beautiful ‘, ‘ Whenever I see her it feels like I know her since ages

Dd ” Oh come what am I thinking ! ” ” But what if it’s ….”

There , Nanoo asks him ” Ali why don’t you get marry , You’re running out of time ”

Ali ” I’ll , And I had chosen a girl for me too , Thanks you came ”

Nanoo ” what ” She hits him ” You’d already ” ” I want to meet her “๏ฟผ

Ali ” Just you meet her once , She’s so beautiful , Calm and intelligent ”

Nanoo ” For how long you’ve been knowing her ”

Ali ” I just meet her a few days ago and she’s to amazing human ”

Just then , Dd comes holding that little girl to Ali ” Here’s your papa , Noodles , Noodle bhaiya , She’s your daughter right ? “๏ฟผ

Nanoo gets shocked ” what? ” she says loudly in vexation

Nanoo ” oyee today I’ll beat you with my sandals ” ” That is why you were saying – char din jawani ke hun ! ”

Ali ” no nanoo there’s some big misunderstanding ” ” Believe me ”

Dd ” Actually she was murmuring time and again papa – noodles ” ”

Ali ” So you thought that …oh god Dd ” ” He’s lying ”

Then a lady wearing a uniform of a hospital comes ” I’m sorry Sir , She’s our patient , We don’t know how does she came here ”
Ali ” It’s so irresponsible , How could you let it be ”

Nanoo ” Where are her parents ? ”

Nurse ” Actually she’s a patient , Her mom has gone out to get medicines and she stealthily came here ”

Nanoo ” But what made her cry like this ”

Nurse ” Mam , She’s missing her dad , He hadn’t come to see her since years and she’s going to have a operation , She’s afraid of that ”

Ali ” Oh she’s missing her dad , That is why she’s saying again and again , Papa ”

Nurse ” Please sir pray for her , Thanks ” She goes out with kid

Nanoo ” How stone hearted the father his , Look at the little girl ”

Ali ” Yes Nanoo ”

Nanoo ” Okay , Ali , Anyhow , I shall leave now , I’m tired , I’m going home ”

Ali ” Alright , I’ll be there soon ”
” Dd can you please drop her ”

Dd ” For sure , come Aunt ”

They both leaves .

Ali ” Omg today this dd had almost break my bones , Thankfully this matter is solved ”

Ali ” Yes ” He’s happy ” Nanoo is here I’ll make her meet juhi once and then ask her for marriage ” He’s delighted ” And now I know what to do ! ”

Sparkle of light came through the window and bounces over Avni’s face .

Her eyes which were drained seemed to squeezed in and wrinkled , Eyelids opens .

She turns her neck back , It’s 8:am , Now , There’s someone on the door , The bell rings …

She slowly walks and opens it ” Yes ” She says to a man well dressed in a uniform

” Here’s a parcel for you mam ” – He said

” Thank you ” – Avni

” A package ” She said while shutting the door in doubt .” From SANAM RE ” she read written there .

Quickly she unwrapped it and find a beautiful , Glamorous red gown with a tiara inside a big box . Her phone rings

” Baby did you got it ”
” K.k sir what’s this ” She identified the speaker in no minutes
” Forgot it’s 12 of August today , The grand party , Your launch party ”

” But sir…” – Avni

” No more questions , Ifs and whats , I need you to be here on time , Alright ” k.k

” I’ve so many surprises for you girl ” Especially , The Chief guest – Daksh chadha he’s gonna be here ”

Avni got infuriated , The hand which had hold the phone began trembling ” She says in loud and bold tone ” If that’s the story then I’ll come for sure sir , Keep waiting for me , I’ll come and rock the whole party ”

K.k ” That’s so good of you ” ” Then you’ll see how’ll your life change and what never happened would happen to you , You’ll rejoice over what you’ve achieved ”

Avni ” You’re right sir ” She spoke confidently ” Yeh zindagi badi ajeeb hai … joh kabhi nahi hua hota hai woh kabhi na kabhi zaroor ho jaata hai(Life is very strange … what has never happened that also happens sometime or the other) “๏ฟผ

She keeps the phone down , AND bitter frown covered up on her face ” I’ll come there for sure , For SURE ”

” Where’s Neela ma ! ” ” Neela ma ! ” She shouts while looking for her .

Servant comes in ” Yes madam ” ” I think you’re looking for Neela mam ”

Avni ” Yes I am ! ”

Servant ” She told me that she’s going to temple , Early this morning ”

Avni ” OK thanks ”

Servant ” Should I serve the breakfast now ”

Avni ” Thanks but not now , Let mom come first ”

Servant ” Fine Madam , I’ll see you later ”

She then goes out and looks at the merry birds flying from one end to other in azure sky , The garden fresh warm air tapping her cheeks .

She said to herself in grief ” I don’t know what happened to me last night , I was like totally broken ” ” I was talking to him in my dreams ” Yelling at someone who’s not Even in front of me to come and save me , To give his shoulder to me ” ” Had I become so feeble now ? ”
” No Avni you can’t be like that ! ” ” You have a big mission ” ” You’d promised that you’ll fight and win it ”
” Remember those words Avni , Recall them ”

[ Flashback – At London , Years ago , Avni captured in a room along with other girls . Loud crying noises from every corner . Scars , Blisters , Sounds of whip , Men scourging women .๏ฟผ

Avni , As young girl , She sobs ” See everyone don’t cry , I’ll save you all one day from these inhumane people ”

A mourning lady spoke out of terror ” What are you saying , Now no one can save us neither you nor police ”

Avni ” I promise you all that one day I’ll come here , And will save you all , Believe me ”

” You promise is remain like a candle , That will keep on burning until someone will come and blow it off ” ” Out fate is that we’re women , We’ll die here and will be graved here ” ]

Avni ” No Avni don’t cry now , You’re having a lot to do , First I’ve to rescue Naina ( Ayesha ) Ma ! Then I’ll save all those girls ”

” And my mission begins right from today ” Her eyes were stormy , She was infuriated , Filled with anger and remorse , Vengeance . She walks hardly , Hastily to the room , Takes out her shoes , Bag , And all those necessary things out of closet and slams the door with thunder .

” Let Neela ma come , I’ll discuss the plan with her , After 15 years today I am going to meet my biggest enemy ever , He’d be right front of me ” ” Today I’ll ask from him why the hell he destroyed our whole family , He made our life worse than being in a hell ! ” ” He made me live life as a …. I can’t tell ” ” Today I ought to seek each and every answer to my question ”

But as she shuts the door , Something falls down on the floor …

AT TEMPLE – ( Neela’s POV ..)

Neela is standing I front of Goddess Kali , Her eyes closed , She looks tensed๏ฟผ

” Hail Kali ” ” Maaa( goddess ) you know very well that in what condition we’re now . A few men who thinks that they can do whatever they want with women , They are doing wrong . My daughter is a fighter , She Will fight and quest for truth ” ” She’s brave like you ” ” Please give her your blessings ”

But Ma ” You know that those men are very dangerous they can harm her , She needs power Maa !!! I know you’ll for sure help her out ” ” Since childhood she’d suffered so much , There was no one with her ” ” She’s so brave that she’d been fighting all by her own ”
” She saved me from bomb blast without thinking that she herself would be killed ” ” You only say Na those who help themselves , God helps those ” ” You’ve to protect her this time ”
” She’s loosing her temper , She can do anything wrong ” ” I pray please always make her go on right track ”

” I know I’d also done something wrong , By hiding a big truth from her . But if I tell her she’ll for sure go against the law and I can’t see that ”

” Just like lord Krishna saved Draupadi , Lord Ramma rescued Sita from evil Ravana please Kali Maa send someone in her life who’d protect her from danger , Who’d always stand by her side , As a armour , A shield ”

” I know lord that a mother’s prayers never goes in vein ” She closes her eyes

AT SUKOON GHAR

She could see a little , Brown colored box , With an ancient drawings dropped on the floor .

” What’s this now ? ” She exclaims with suspicion

And opens it , Lies inside a pen drive .

” A pen drive , why’s it kept like this here ? ” She brings her laptop . She inserts in and a video with dark screen appears .

[ Video :-

A dark room , Broken wooden chairs here and there , Neela sitting on One of those , Tied with rope

A man wearing a monkey cap , Covered his face

” Hey you stupid lady , Don’t you know that no one’s allowed to come into this house ” ” What were you doing there ? ”

He grasps her hair and pulls ” Tell me, What were you looking at , In that room ? ”

Neela roars with pain ” I’ve got to know a truth about you all ” You’ve captured someone in your home , I heard a lady crying behind the door ”

” How you even dared to move around freely into this mansion , You’ve to pay for it ! ”

Neela ” Tell me who’s it ? Now whose life are you destroying ” “” You’ve already done mine , Now who’s Else to suffer ! ”

” You are questioning me ! So you want to know name Ha ! ” He yelled loudly and raised his hand to spank her , But another voice , A command stopped him .

” Hey Wait ! ” PAUSE , There’s a man , Who’s only long , Muscular legs are visible in white kurta . He’s wearing a gold bracelet . His face hidden .

He comes and slaps that man ” Don’t you know she’s our guest ” ” Have you forgotten the old saying ‘ Atithi devo bhava ‘ ” Show her some respect , Show her that we’re traditional too . Come on ! ( He takes a glass of water hardly )

” GHAR aye meheman ko pani ni pucho ge ” ( Won’t you ask for a water to the guest )

” What did she want to know , Tell her ? ”

” Boss ! She was asking who’s behind that door ! ”

” Ohooo !!! I’ve must say you’re very clever ” ” Come I’ll show you ”

” But boss ! Really ”

” Can’t you hear open her up, Free her ! ”

Next scene , The person opens the white colored door ,๏ฟผAnd inside a shadow , Is shown , The room has no light , A shadow of a woman .
She moves herself , Heavy Shackles which were tied to her makes noise ” Avni , Avni is it you ? Avni ”

The whole room was dark , That tethered lady who could barely walk because of heaviness of metal on her body walks towards the entrance as she had some beliefs .

Neela too walks slowly , Suddenly , That lady falls and but Neela holds her . When she touched her shoulders she could feel roughness on her skin , Blisters .

Neela ” Who’re you ? ” Asks politely

But that large man , Comes in ” Is that it ! ” He moves his finger in gesture and two more men came and holds Neela

” So now our guests wish is fulfilled am I right? ”

He harshly pushes back that lady and she falls down with jerk , He quickly shuts the door .

But she stood up hastily , Bangs the door and shouts ” Avni !!!!, Avni !!!!! I’m here , Avni !!!”

The video ends …..]

Avni is in thunderbolt , Her heart pounding , ๏ฟผShe can’t believe what here eyes has seen just now . She’d been longing to at least have a glance of her mother since fifteen years …But now when she saw her …..in shackles , Beaten , Her voice faint . She couldn’t resist to go and murder that person .

AT Neil’s second home or his personal room ….( Neil is shown laying onto the wooden table ….)

His eyes slowly opens but as soon he opens it , He could see Avni’s photo frame just at the edge of slab of small cupboard . It was just going to fall down , He rose up as fast as he could ” Avniii” …he possibly saved it from breaking .

There stood Dd clapping ” Woa ! Sir what a catch , I’m impressed ! ”

He didn’t spoke a word .

” Sir you saved it right on time ”

Neil think looking at the picture ” BAS HAMESHA YEHI CHAHA HAI , TUMHE SAMBHAL KAR RAKHNA ” ( I’ve wished it always to keep it ( Avni’s frame – Avni saved )

Dd ” Ohh Sir do you know what happened today at CHAMKO cafe , Oh my god if you’ll hear you’ll totally laugh ” ” You know what ….”

Neil ” No , I’m not interested ”

Dd ” Okay sir , But sir , Aunti Ji and uncle Ji were so panic , Thankfully I found you here ”

Neil ” Alright , Let’s get back to work , Any improvements in the case ! ”

Dd ” Not yet , That camera isn’t working Sir , We couldn’t gear anything ”

” Yes sir one thing more , Ragu gave us Vidyut’s number and when we traced it we gotta know that his business is not only in London but also in India , We found that he used to call on a specific , Unidentified phone number many times . Even he called that person yesterday ”

Neil ” Vidyut is not a simplified man , He’s as clever as a fox , He has his business of buying and selling women all over the globe , I guess ”

Dd ” Even sir , We found that transactions worth millions used to happen previous years from his account to some other ”

Neil ” Hey , Dd possibilities that Ahiana or Alia is trying to spy on this person from India , That is why she came here ”

Dd ” Yea It could be ! ” Moreover , Remember , Ragu said that Alia used to be very close to Vidyut , She’s the one who knows him well ”

Neil ” We’ve to keep a eye on her every time . Whatever she’ll do will help us in this case ”

At SUKOON GHAR ….

Avni picked the computer and threw it away in hatred .

She’s infuriated , Red hot , She broke all the glassware kept over the table , Throws all the vases out in anger .

She bangs her hand on the hard layer of wall and drags her spine over it and pulls herself down the floor๏ฟผ

” I’m sorry Naina Ma !!!!! ” ” I’m sorry she squeals ” I’m such a bad child , A bad daughter ” ” I couldn’t protect you “, ” Today this Daksh will not breath anymore ” , ” I’ll take vengeance “,” Revenge of every single tear that came out of my Mom’s eyes “๏ฟผ

She stood up ” I can’t wait for even a single fraction now ” ” I’m coming Daksh chadha ” ” AJ SE TERI ULTI GINTI CHALLU ”
Takes a sharp knife out of the basket and runs out .

The servant sees furious lady , The old man could see the whole room messed up , Pieces of glass everywhere , At some point he spotted drops of blood over those glass chunks . He was shocked and nervous .

AT TEMPLE ….( Neela is shown sitting amid ladies who are busy in clapping and reciting enchanting Lord’s prayers )

Neela while doing the prayers thinks ” Oh lord please , I believe in you , I don’t know why since morning I’m having a constant thought that
something wrong is going to happen …Something really breaking hearts …..God save us all ”
( Her phone rings , It’s on silent mode , Someone from home is calling )

On the other hand it’s shown that Avni is walking down the road in anguish , Pain , She’s holding knife in her hand

Finally , Neela saw that her phone is ringing , She picks it up ” Hello ” She said loudly
โ€œ Hello , Neela madam , There’s a problem at house , Please come as soon as possible โ€

” What ! ” ” What are you saying ? ” ” I can’t hear anything ”

” Madam ! Please come home ! ”

” what ! ” ” Wait let me go out , There’s a lot of noise out here ! ”
” Yes !! Now tell me”

[come as soon as possible โ€

” What ! ” ” What are you saying ? ” ” I can’t hear anything ”

” Madam ! Please come home ! ”

” what ! ” ” Wait let me go out , There’s a lot of noise out here ! ”
” Yes !! Now tell me”

โ€œ Mam , Ahiana is in danger ……..( He narrates the whole incident ) ”

Her eyes grew wide in fear , They were red , Moist .

โ€œ What ! โ€ She said out of terror โ€œ Please try making her calm and ,,, And I’m coming just within few minutes โ€

She ran fast , While talking on phone ” I’m coming ”

While she was in a haste , She spoke out in panic ” I must call and aware Avni , I should stop her from doing anything wrong ” ” Please Avni don’t do anything wrong ” ” Please ”

She halts and calls Avni ” HEEELLLOOO HELLLOOO AVNIIII” she was speaking loudly with constant pauses , ” Why’s Avni not answering calls ” She said to herself

Then finally after some grungy sounds , The call was picked up ” Avni , Bacha please ” But …As
She passes through a crowd of people and bangs on with someone [ Person’s face is s not shown , As it’s a big crowd of men and women , Clapping and singing hymes ]
She was in a hurry , Her balance stumbles and fells down , But she musters her lost strength and stood up , Picks up the cell phone , Fallen over floor and walks again .

On the other side , Avni is shown driving a car rashly , Her one hand over the steering wheel , And second one I’ve the gear stick . She’s gone crazy .
โ€œ I’ve to go to Daksh’s house and free my mom , She’s captured there since years โ€,โ€œ I won’t depend upon anyone else โ€ , โ€œ How can even sleep there peacefully while there my mom’s not getting even a single bite of wheat โ€ , โ€œ I’m a bad girl โ€ , โ€œ I was enjoying my life till now , Smiling , Orrr ( she can’t speak as her eyes were filled with tears and throat was jammed out of mucous ) how I didn’t felt , Why I can’t find you Ma!!! You were so near to me โ€

BUT JUST unexpectedly … A white sedan comes in from front . It was as speedy as hers was . She couldn’t control the situation . The white car came in from right . She applied brakes as Early as she could .
The tyres scratched with roads and grinding sound created noise .

“Aaj mujhe koi abhi rok sagta ” ( Today no forces can stop me ) She said in loud furious tone and smashes door after getting out

She walks to that car and shouts out ” Who are you ? How dare you do this ? Come out ” From inside no replies came
She yells again ” I said come out show me your face ! Coward ”

At last , The door slits open , Someone wearing muddy colored pants with brown boots puts his leg down to road

The shining glasses shows up but not his face , He comes out ( Face still hidden , Body’s shown )

AVNI says ” Y O U ”

It’s revealed , Its Neil

Avni ” What are you doing here ? ”

Neil ” I remember once , You told me that , Mumbai police has no work to do , They are always free , They don’t know how to work ” , ” So I thought why don’t I prove it to you that , Noo , we’re capable , I know how to do my duties , And ( He keeps his fore finger over her chest ) You , You Are wrong ! ”

Avni ” What does that means ! ”
Avni ” See , I don’t have any time to waste on you , Answering and solving your meaningless conversation , Riddles ”

Neil ” if it’s about time , Then I’m also not at all free , I’ve a lot to do ”

Avni ” Alright then , Just remove your car from over here and let me go , I’ve got something really important to do now ”

She takes a step forward , Instantly her hand is hold by him ” Wait a minute ! ” ” Let me do what I came here for ! ”

He pulled her back and raises his arm , He was holding handcuffs

Avni gapped at him shockingly

Neil “I’m here to stop a criminal before a crime is done ”

Avni roars ” What are you speaking ”

Neil ” Don’t be shocked ! ” ” What do you thought that you’ll keep on throwing dirt into my eyes , And I’d not do anything ” ” it was your biggest mistake ever ”

Avni with feeble voice ” No Neil you can’t do it ,What’s is the matter ? , Think with your heart , I’m not a criminal , Do I look like that ! ”

Neil holds her from shoulders and pulls her towards him ” That is what am trynna make you understand “, ” You’re not a criminal ” , ” You’re a good human being ” , ” Whenever I try to make my heart realize that you’re good , You always do something ….something which I can’t ever think about ” , ” Why !!!!!! ”

There’s an angry caring look in his eyes which was red from outside with anguish but filled with love and sensitivity inside from heart couldn’t let him to let her go .

While she was looking at him out with venom , She had a sensation, He’s her rival who’d just stop her from saving her mother . She can’t tell her story to him as if she did , Her promise would not only break with her mother but also her life would be in threat .

Avni grasps Neil’s arm and pulled it away , The handcuffs hung in air and then falls over ground .

Avni ” I’m not a criminal , I haven’t done any crime , You can’t stop me from going ”

Neil raised her other hand which was still down , Tied to the wrist with a string was silver dagger ” If it wasn’t on your mind , Then what’s it ? ”
” It’s better to catch a criminal before it does its business ”

Avni pulls back her hand from his grip with thrust ” Today I’m on a mission and no one can dare to stop me ”

Neil ” Not really ” He takes out the pistol and targets it at her forehead

And this action came as a devastating blow to her , But as brave as she was she holds the gun ” Shoot me then , If you think I’m a criminal ”
” If I can’t complete my mission there’s no way I can live ”

Neil was silent , No moment is observed

[ Flashback :- At temple , While Neela was talking to Avni on phone ; Passing through crowd

Neela ” Hello , Avni , Are you there ! ”

She bumped into none other than Ali who was talking to Neil .

Their phones fell down and got exchanged . Neela picked up Ali’s phone

Neela spoke loudly ” Please Bacha don’t
Do anything wrong , Please listen to me once , Be calm , I know how important the mission is for you , But we’ve to work with patience ”


” Bacha please listen to me throw away that knife in your hands now ”

What she thought she was talking to Avni over but her phone got exchanged with Ali’s and she spoke everything to Neil . And initially when she was talking to Avni , It wasn’t her , She had dropped her phone somewhere and it was someone stranger .

Ali spoke loudly ” Neela aunt ! Wait ” But she hastily without paying any heed to the call ran into taxi and left .

NEIL’S POV …

Neil took the call , He is shocked

Neil shouts out to men who are working ” Dd get the car , We gotta go ”

Flashback over ]

A minute of silence , Neil’s point the gun over Avni’s forehead

Instantly Neil hugs Avni , It came totally unknowingly for her . But what ! She wasn’t shocked . She could feel the hugs warmth .

Neil has enwrapped his arms around her , His eyes closed .

Not really everything is solved , Neil is day dreaming . It was like a vision . His mind is preoccupied with some pleasurable thoughts .

” What are you thinking , Don’t remain silent , Come on shoot me ! ”

He puts down the weapon , Holds her arm and drags her

” Neil what are you doing ! Stop it ! ” – She said

He takes her to the car and locks her in . From the opposite end he comes in and sat . The engine was ignited and the car took to road .

Neil was looking straight , Some sort of displeasure inside his body . Avni was trying to open the already locked door time and again .

He talks to his own selves ” what is this feeling ! I can’t understand myself ! ” I hated this girl ,Ain’t I ? ” ” Then what force stopped me from arresting her ” ” She’s not wrong but she was holding a knife ” ” She’s a criminal ! ”
” Why I’m having so much attachment to her ” ” Every time she comes in front of my eyes , I forget everything , Why do I feel like I have some internal connection with her ”

Avni ” Where are we going ! Why are you doing all this ! ” ” Please stop it ! ” ” I’m not a criminal ” She’s crying badly , Those Terrible thoughts of her mother is haunting her
She joins her hands together ” Please Neil I beg ! Leave me alone , I’ve to go ”

Neil’s still arrogant looks on his face indicated that he’d not change his mind now .

Avni understood , But everything in her own manner , Her eyes were stormy ” I had a thought that you’re a good person , You’re a person who would always stand for truth ” …” but I was wrong …you’re so rude and mean ”

Neil looked up through the mirror he could see Avni’s terribly shaking body

” I’m really sorry Ahiana , I didn’t meant hurting you ” ” But it’s the only way to safeguard you ” ” I’ve solved half of the case , But the leftover part can only be solved by you , Please Avni tell me what your problems are , I’m ready to help you ”
” I want you to trust me and share with me everything you have inside you ”

The car stops at the police station , Neil gets out of the car and takes Avni out .

Inside police station …

Neil enters in holding Avni , Upon getting in , Avni sees Neela standing there nerveless and panicked

Avni ” Neela ma ! Thanks you’re here ! ” ” See how I am being treated ”

Neela hugs Avni tightly ” Are you alright bacha ! “. ” I was tensed about you ”

Avni ” I’m fine but you need to tell him that I have to leave urgently , And I’ve to talk to you about something , Let’s go home ”

Neela ” Ahiana….” she’s stopped by Neil

Neil ” Wait a minute , Miss.Ahiana, ” , ” Now since I’ve got this golden opportunity , I’ve find evidences against you , So I must end this case here , You can’t go anywhere ”

Avni comes just in front of him , They both are gazing at each other wide eyed , Avni points her finger and says ” Listen, Mr.Ips office , I know that you’re a police officer but let me tell you without any complaint registered against me of doing any crime you can’t arrest me ”
” I know that you saw me holding a knife , But does that means I’ve done crime , Murder ? ”
Avni ” Tell me , You just know the half part , Rest is not known to you ” , ” Where’s FIR , Where’s any charge sheet ” ” How did you bought me here ? ”

Neil ” Here’s the FIR , Miss .Alia , Signed by Ms. Neela parekh ! ”

Avni looks at Neela before she could open her mouth , Neil waves his hands and two female cops took her away .

////////// Nextly /////////

AT Sanam re ‘ TV channel

K.k asks ” Everything’s set girls ? ”

A girl says ” Yes sir , Tonight we’re gonna have a blast ! ” ” Launch party for Alia ”

Another one says ” After this our channel will gain maximum Trps . Alia is awesome singer ”

K.k ” You’re right ! ” But had you sent all the props viz … Dress and jewelry to her ”

” Yes sir ! It’s already done ” Says her ” But sir , One thing which I didn’t approved is why she didn’t want to show her face “

” I mean , Why will she show up in a mask , She even said she’d not like to show her real name ” ” Isn’t that fishy ”

K.k ” Honestly , Even I don’t understand that . But think of it , It’d be something hot news , Everyone would be crazy to know who’s this miraculous girl who can sing so good behind mask ” , ” Our channel would become a point of discussion ” , ” Media , Newspapers everywhere ” , ” People would die to see her once ”

” I don’t know sir ! It seems like a dream to me ” ” Think about it from another side , Remember , Police came in searching for her ” ” I think there’s something dark in her past ”

K.k ” Okay now , Stop gossiping and do your work , Alright and I don’t want to hear that thing again ! It has bad impact on our business ”
” I’ve called for police at the party tonight and there’d be so many guests so none of you will talk about this ”
” Pretend we know her closely and It’s her style and Alia is her stage name ”

Sunheri ” K.k sir is right and I don’t think there’s anything fishy with her ,She’s a good human ”

K.k ” Sunheri you’ve to get her to the party on alright ! ”

She nods head

Back to police station …

Neela and Neil are standing , Neils face turned away from Neela

Neela ” Thanks Neil for helping me out this time , Your plan did worked . ”
” I don’t know what’d have happened of you’d not have been there for her on time , Maybe she’d have ….”

Neil ” Thanks to you Neela aunty , you trusted me and let me do this ! If you wouldn’t have done so then we might not have been successful ”

Neela ” Thanks again now you shall relieve her I’ll take her home and will make her understand ”

Neil ” I’m sorry I can’t release her now , ” He spoke with a strange look as if he has some other plans set already into his mind

Neela ” But….” she says adding ” This was all a fake drama ” to her statement

Neil ” Yes it was , For you and me , I didn’t let my officers know that it was preplanned , Since its against rules ” ” Anyhow I’ve some paper work left I’ll like to do it first ” , ” Being the head I can’t take rules in my hands ”

Neela ” No worries I know you’ve to be under norms , Now I shall go meet her once ”

Neil ” I’m sorry but you can’t do it , No outsiders are allowed to meet people in prison like that ”

Neela ” But it’s fake”

Neil ” it’s not fake for others what’ll they think of me ”

Neela ” Neil why are you being so rude with us ! ”

Neil goes to her And holds her hand ” I’m not being rude , If I hurt you I’m sorry , I’m done with it now , First you say that Ahiana is in some danger , She’s holding a knife and is out to do something wrong ” ” And then you say that you need my help ” I’ve helped you ” ” Now at least tell me what’s going on ! ” ” Please ! ”

Neela got stuck , She was speechless she thought โ€œ Should I tell Neil what we’re going through . What problems we’re facing . We don’t know at what moment we would be attacked . we’ve to hide ourselves from public .
โ€œ Should I tell him that a girl who has been tortured since she was little is now going to put her own lives at risk and wants to fight a demon on her own โ€

โ€œ What should I tell you neil that I am warned by daksh that if I opened my mouth then he’ll kill Avni , Her mother โ€ โ€œ He’s mad after Avni, I’ve to keep her hidden ! โ€

Neil spoke with aching voice again ” Would you trust me ! Will you tell me ? ”

Interrupting In between DD comes ” Sir we’ve got something important to tell you please come here ! ”

Neil ( heading towards DD in room ) ” Yes ”

Dd holding a file ” We got the knife checked by forensic expert , There’s Ahiana’s fingerprints over it , We’ve also found a blood drops inside the down floor and it’s of …”

Neil ” It’s of whom ? ”

Dd ” Hmmmm well …..”

Neil ” I’m waiting ”

Dd ” For ahiana herself ! ”

Neil ” What it can’t be true ”

Dd ” It’s check this reports ” ( He shows to him the file )

Neil ” Hmmm that’s right ! ”

Dd ” What do you think sir , Now what’ll do ? ”

Neil ” This ahiana can surely help us in the case all we do is open her mouth and have to make her tell us about viduyt ” ” She’s hiding something , And so is aunt ”

Dd ” We can’t arrest her more than few hours like this without any evidences and FIR ”

Neil ” That’s true , Find out about it ”

Dd ” What do you think sir ! What has happened just now ? Neela aunt was saying to Ahiana to the knife and be calm , What were she talking about ? ” ” Where would she be going in such anger ? ”

Neil ” I don’t know what are the two ladies hiding , But seeing all this I can very well make out that Ahiana must have got to know something about someone which was enraged her , From somewhere she got to know something that she couldn’t withstand with and went out to stop that ! ”
” And it fairly means that she knows who’s behind all this ”

Dd ” Now what’s the plan sir ? ”

Neil ” I have to go to duty at 9 Pm on party , You’ll have to be here and keep a hawk eye on Ahiana ”

inside the PRISON – The trap of love

Avni is sitting over a wooden bench , cell is quite dark , She’s laid her both flat touching the rough wooden surface , And is lost somewhere .

She looks up and sees Neela outside , and they both have eye lock . Neela tries to come closer but the lady constable stopped her .

When Avni tried to call her out raising her hand ” Neela ma ! ” She ran out in rush , Her eyes were wet .

Avni ” Neela ma ! Please don’t go leaving me here in this trap , It’s black here , My eyes can’t see ” She holds the iron bar and seemed loosing battle .

There Neil is talking to Dd ,

Neil ” You’ll have to See if she trynna escape , Got it ”

Dd ” Yes sir ! ”

He moves out ” Neelaaunty ! ” He says looking here and there but she’s gone

Avni sees him ” Neil ! ” She shouts ” I said get me out of here ” ” Why had you put ! ” ” What I’ve done ” ” Neillllll can you hear me ”

He didn’t paid any heed to the roaring , He’s holding some file , His eyes lowered down

Avni bangs with her hands ” Open it , Are you listening , Neil , You’re such a bad policeman ”

She was huffing , She coughed , She couldn’t breathe , Her whole face red . Neil looks there ” Ahiana are you okay ” He ran there , The meatlic gate was opened , got a glass of water .

She was seated down , Neil offers her water with,But she turned her face away .

Neil ” What’re you doing ! some water ! ”

She wasn’t , ” Ahiana listen to me ” He forced to water and He rubbs her back

On seeing that her situation is quite same , He hugs her ” Don’t worry I am with you , Nothing will to you ”

It wasn’t a dream , She calmed and she never thought of something like this , A heavenly warm hug .

Miraculously , She’s fine now . But instantly she pushed him away from herself .

Neil without saying anything stood up and walked away .

His eyes were red ” Sorry Ahiana just because of me you’ve to deal with so much , But I don’t know why I just can’t take it , I want you to be near to me and I want to keep you safe ”

AT CHADHA’S MANSION …

Daksh is Sitting on sofa , A man comes in holding some dresses ” Here comes the suits sir ! ”

Daksh ” Show me the most expensive one ”

” Sure sir ! ” ” check this out it’s the best ever ”

Daksh ” Ah ! Looks great ”

He takes it sees himself in the mirror ” I’m looking like hero in this dress , Today would be the best day in my life , At last I’ll be doing something that’ll make me superior to all , Oh god I just can’t wait to see her , It’d be the day of victory ”





Its evening by till now…

Avni’s POV …


She’s sitting quietly over the bench again , Words are going in her mind , All those hallucinations of herself being tortured , Her mother being beaten . She could hear voice of her mom shouting and calling out her name for help .

” No ” She says coldly ” This can never happen ” ” Evil can’t win ” ” It’ll be my triumph today ” , ” I can’t miss the chance of meeting Daksh today , I can’t ” ” I’m so close to my Goals ”

“Whatever may happens today I’ll get out of here ! ” ” I’ll i have to , No one can dare me stop ”

” I’ve to do something , Oh god nothing is coming into my mind ”

She pops up but suddenly fumbles ” Ouchh” She cries out in pain as she could see her bare feet colored with red , Glass piece priked the skin

Soon she hears the opening of gate , Iron latch being pulled out upon rotation , Hearing she hastily puts her feet down

Through the dark comes in Neil holding a tray like thing in his hands

Avni โ€œ Why have you come now ! I don’t want to talk to you anymore ! โ€

Neil didn’t spoke anything he came towards her and keeps the tray over which some food articles were kept aside .

โ€œ It’s your favourite Poha from chamko cafe โ€ , โ€œ I know you haven’t eaten anything since morning โ€ โ€œ Remember what doctor said that day that you should eat something every hour โ€

โ€œ Okay if you’re angry with me ! But don’t let this anger have any side effects on your health โ€ โ€œ Now its on you , Eat or not โ€
He says and turns away

Avni calls out from behind โ€œ Wait ! ” ” Stop Neil ” , ” You said that I am a criminal , And now you’ve bought this special Poha for me ” “Aren’t prisoners served With just uncooked tortilla with onions and nothing , Then why are you giving me this special treatment ”

Neil is still turned away , ” I want to know ,firstly you dragged me into this hell without any reasons , You tried being rude on me , And acted like , as if I were really a criminal ” She says with a sigh

” Tell me why ? What’s on your mind ? ”

She stood up questioning him but because of the injured feet she stumbles and just she falls down , He comes and catches her into his .

They both look into each other eyes

โ€œ You are very keen to seek answers isn’t it ? You want to know that why am I doing all this ? ” , ” Then , Listen I know that you’re not a criminal there’s something or I should better say someone which forcing you to be like that โ€ , โ€œ And I want to know your story , Your history โ€

She handles herself and stood straight โ€œ So you want to know what happened in my past , My story , Why I’m being a criminal like โ€ โ€œ Ha ! โ€ She gave weired filled with grief โ€œ I don’t think you can even digest it , You don’t have that power to listen to that โ€

Neil โ€œ Just for once try me , I can listen to it and even help you out โ€

She says again โ€œ Ouch โ€ out in pain . Neil then makes her sit down โ€œ Sit here โ€ He says to her

And kneels down , He holds her feet . He could see the feet flooded with blood , The gaping wounds , And pricked pieces .

He tries to hold one of those slice of glass and pull out , But as he tries to she wails .

โ€œ Leave me alone I don’t need you โ€

โ€œ It has to be taken out or else it’ll more โ€

โ€œ Thanks a lot but I don’t need any help from you , I’m fine in whatever situation I am โ€

โ€œ JITNA DARD KO ANDAR CHUPA KAR RAKHOGE DARD UTNA HI CHUBHEGA โ€โ€œ BEHTAR YAHI HAI KE , EK BAR DARD SEHE LO ISKO BAHAR NIKAL DO โ€ ( more you’ll try to keep your inside you more you’ll hurt yourself , It’s better to take it out once for all no matter how much pain it gives )

He holds the of glass section slowly brings it . Ache was being felt by her , She closed her eyes and presses in , She tried not to cry more and not to show of how much in misery she was . But , Irony is Tears came out of Neil’s eyes as he couldn’t keep the pain inside . He can feel the grief ,The pain she was going into .

[ Background song – Tujhkoโ€ฆ main rakh loon wahaan
Jahaan pe kahin
Hai mera yaqeen

Main joโ€ฆ tera naa huaa
Kisi ka nahinโ€ฆ
Kisi ka nahin..

] ( Music pauses )

He then ties his own handkerchief around the injury .

Just then Dd comes in holding a tiffin box , Without asking anything he spoke instantly coming in โ€œ Here’s the food sir , Mataji called me she said that you hadn’t ate anything since morning so she had sent this โ€

Dd โ€œ Oops I think I came at wrong moment I’m sorry sir โ€

Neil โ€œWhat are you saying Dd , Wait I’m coming out โ€

Dd โ€œ No โ€ He says with a smile โ€œ Sir just after 5 Minutes Mataji will call me and will ask that had you eaten the food , And you know I’ll never dare speak false her , I can’t take risk โ€
โ€œ And if you didn’t ate she’ll freak me out โ€

Neil โ€œ Dd !!โ€

Dd โ€œ No no sir I can’t take risk โ€ He came in with no time and opens up the box and aranges the in order โ€
โ€œ Sirji you’ll have to eat it now , Hmm ! It smells really good โ€

โ€œ Ahiana Ji would you please do a favour to me ! Here it’s only you who can make sir eat now โ€ โ€œ He’s always busy in his work โ€ โ€œ How can one live without food , Isn’t it ? โ€
โ€œ Its only you who are equal to him and cando the necessary , Please , Please โ€

And he goes away …

Neil โ€œ He’s mad , Sorry , I’ll go now โ€

Avni โ€œ Wait ! โ€

Avni โ€œ My mom used to say that if the food is just in front of us then we should not leave it without eating , it’d be disrespect to the food โ€โ€œ Sit down and eat it first โ€

Neil sits down again took a spoonful of rice and offers her first , She turned her face away โ€œ Thank you โ€

Neil โ€œ After seeing food we should not turn our face away , I’ll not begin untill you’ll eatโ€

Finally Avni turns her forward looks at Neil , He gesturize and tells her haveit , she finally Accepts it .

โ€œ Oh my god this taste is so familiar to me , Why ? ” She thinks

Neil looks at his hands which were messed with dirt as he can’t eat chapatti with those hands . Avni tears up a bite and dips in dal and offers him , He eats it .

[ Background song :-Le jaayein jaane kahaan
Hawayein, hawayeinโ€ฆ
Le jaayein tujhe kahahawayeinโ€ฆ ]

( Song tunning continued)

Neil thinks โ€œ How should I tell you that the food became more tastier when you gave it to me โ€โ€œIm feeling so good โ€

>>>>>>>> Screens off <<<<<<<<<<

Precap :-

Neil ” I know Ahiana where you’ve to go , But I won’t let you ”

Avni ” Whatever you may do I’ll get out of here ”

At the party venue

Dd ” Don’t worry Sir Ahiana Ji is just in front of me ”

Neil ” Dd are you really sure ! ”

Neil looks at the stage ” If Ahiana is there then who’s here , Whose this in disguise of Alia ?”

A girl wearing mask over stage suddenly vanished away

Neil ” Where she’d gone ? ”

Lights turned of , Nothing visible , A sound of bullet being fired is heard then people began shouting out of terror ….



SORRY SORRY SORRY I AM SO SO LATE BUT I KNOW YOU KNOW WHY ? SORRY AGAIN ! BUT I HAVE NOT ENDED I MAY BE LATE BUT I WILL BE HERE FOR SURE .
PLEASE GUYS KEEP supporting LIKE THIS . I AM REALLY SORRY I CANT WRITE MUCH GREAT EPI THIS TIME BUT I REALLY WANTED TO post FOR YOU GUYS SO I SAID NO ” I’LL DO ! ” .
SORRY IF I BORED YOU , I’LL TRY BEST EVER !

PLEASE SUPPORT , IF YOU LIKED HIT ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ DO COMMENT … IF YOU’VE FORGOTTEN STORY NO PROBLEMS TELL ME !

BYE GUYS !!! LOVE U ALL ! IVE DONE SO MANY MISTAKES PLZ FORGIVE !!!๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—

Bye bye ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•


There is much more more Romance , Thrill , mystery pending , I just want your support , Story’s gonna take several twists and turns . And Neil and Avni gonna be one soon …..๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

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  1. DBRSR1822

    Hi Kira…..I missed you soooo much dear…and of course this ff tooo….but yaa I can understand your condition too
    Anyways …I am soo relieved after reading this ff again…feels like a part of me has revived again…thanks a loads dear for getting AvNeil back into me…
    And coming to the story…as usual it was fantabulous..I could feel the pain each character was going through ..such was the intensity of your words..
    And I hope Avni and Neelama gets their justice soon…and also waiting for more AvNeil scenes…
    Today’s part was a perfect mixture of drama, suspense and humour- A WONDERFUL TREAT….
    Good Going Girl …Keep up the amazing work…All the best for your studies too…especially when your Boards are also nearing…
    Take Care..Love you….!!!!

    1. Kira

      Thanks thanks thanks a lot my dear ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Truly your words touched my heart . Thanks for giving me inspiration , Strength , Support from your friendship . I’m so glad to have your in my life .
      You’re a Angel
      Good night and sweet dreams
      My good wishes are always with you ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
      Bye sweetheart ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

  2. Jasminerahul

    Oh Tina wants Ali.But he wants Juhi.Will Juhi accept him?Will Tina create probs 4 Ali Juhi?DD bringing the little girl 2 ali thinking that he is her dad as she said noodles papa was funny.Will that child have significance in the future story?
    Loved this dialogue-
    You promise is remain like a candle , That will keep on burning until someone will come and blow it off
    Neelaโ€™s prayersโ€ฆvery touching.finally avni comes to know d truth n wants to harm daksh n save naina.the ph getting exchanged n neil coming to know of avniโ€™s mission was superb.avneil confrontation was superb.liked neil not able to arrest avni n wanting avni to share her probs with him to help her.Oh neela filed FIR to stop Avni from doing any blunder.wow Neela Neil together in this drama.Neela shud tell everything to Neil.Neil making avni drink water..hugging n consoling her was lovely.bringing her fav food 4 her was cute.like neil asked her to she shud tell her past to him.Neil taking out the glass piece from her feet n bandaging it was lovely.loved avni asking neil to eat n neil convincing her to eat n avni feeding him food.neil finding d food tastier being fed by her was cute.perfect pics.
    I missed this ff very much.i was sad that u left.happy that u r back

    1. Kira

      Thanku thanku for being so calm and supporting me even I’m late . I’m so glad . Thanks that you’re still here .Thanks a lot dear . After reading your comments there’s always a big smile on my face . I don’t know how to thank but just can say THANK YOU FRIEND !!!

      good night , Sweet dreams , Keep smilimg and be safe & healthy .๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’– Bbye

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