Kaisa yeh isq hai ( Avneil fan fiction) Episode 23

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Episode – 23

Recap :- Neela tells Neil that someone tried to attack Avni , Then , Neil prepares Poha for Avni .
The Episode unfolds with Neela and Avni reaching back to their home , SUKOON GHAR
Neela makes Avni sat over the Sofa

Neela : I’m glad everything is fine now , We all are healthy

Avni : No everything isn’t fine Yet , The moment I’ve asked to who did all this , You’re silent .

Neela : Hmm ..( She keeps her hands over her shoulders ) You’re right ! But it isn’t the right opportunity to tell you the truth

Avni could see some irresistible , anxiety in her eyes ” Is everything alright Ma ! ” She asked doubtfully

Neela : I want to tell you something , Avni , But …

Avni : Yes Ma ! please I want to know

Neela : Avni, Tumhari Maa zin…

Just then , Avni’s phone rings .

Avni gets up and went away .

Neela looks at God , Pressing her hands with each other ” Should I tell her ! I have to ! It’s her right to know it , But I’m worried that how’d he react after knowing that ”

Neela thinks of that moment when she saw Naina at CHADHA’S house . She was pale and fragile . Tethered with ropes and captured in a room .

Neela : Avni , You’ve been crying every time , You were living just because you’ve to find your mother , But when you’ll get to know it , Then you’ll risk , You can do anything , This is what I’m afraid of !

Avni comes ” Ma ! k.k sir called me up . They dosen’t know about what happened . So I’ve to leave for now .

Neela : Avni are you crazy ! you’ve just came back from hospital

Avni : So what Ma ! Now I’m fine and I can take care of myself

Neela : Bacha don’t be mad Okay , You’re not going anywhere

” l’m alright , I’m strong . Moreover , My job is not that tough , I’ve to sit there only”

Neela : No You’ll not go , Please don’t hurt yourselves

Avni : It’s not like that ! Nothing is important for me than my work . And if I’ll not go then how’ll I become a singer , How’ll I fulfill my mom’s dream and after that I’ve to find her out also .

She lefts , Neela ” Avni , Avni , Wait ! ”


Daksh : Speak Vidyut , Why did you called me up like this ?

Vidyut : I’ve something to tell you bhai sahib

Daksh : I know we talk like this only when we’ve to talk something secret .

Vidyut : That Alia , I mean Avni ..

Daksh : Yeah ! Naina’s daughter , Don’t worry Naina is still with me , Don’t worry about her

Vidyut : She has escaped ! ( He exclaimed with sorrowful terror )

Daksh : Wait ! Wait ! I can’t believe what my ears heard just now

Vidyut ( Loudly) : That stupid Avni has escaped our trap , I don’t know how

Daksh : How could you let this happen , Are you serious ! I mean , How ! And I was with you , But you didn’t told me

Vidyut : I’m sorry I was afraid of it , But now what can we do

Daksh : What can we do ! Wow , How frankly you’re asking it , But how did all this happened

Vidyut : When this happened you were not in Mumbai ( He naarates the scene )

Daksh : what the heck is this , She is in Mumbai and you know why is that so

Vidyut : I know ,

Daksh : But i won’t never let it happen , She can never find Naina , Only because of her I got failed in my plan , Just because of her

( Flashback – After AVNI’S home was set ablaze on fire . Avni was mere 6 years , Naina was holding her in his arms and running into jungle as goons set by Janki were chasing them .

Naina hid Avni among bushes and herself gets caught .

Goons took Her to Daksh who nexty took her to home , To janki

Daksh : See sister your revenge is done , I’ve set their house on fire , And this Naina is all yours now

Janki : She’s my son’s killer , I’ll kill her

Naina sobs loudly : Ma ! you think I killed your son , My Ahil , He died because of me , But why would I do it

Janki : So as to become effluent and rich what else

Naina : You can’t understand Ma ; You’re being trapped , Being betrayed . This your own brother did all this , So as to take over all your business and money , He did all this

Janki ( Slaps her ) : Shut up , blo*dy b*t*h , Don’t blame my brother for all this

Naina : I’ve a evidence against him , You have so much hollow faith in this man Na ! Go , Go and Ahil’s friend Adarsh he’ll tell you everything

Janki : Before my anger turn out to be wrath take her away

Then Next day , Janki overhears Daksh’s conversation on phone

Daksh ” Oh yeah , Bro I killed Ahil , So what , I can do anything for money . And that stupid , Janki , Oh my sister , She keeps on blaming her daughter in law ”

” What , I didn’t require to do anything , Despite , Now I’ll have to take signatures of hers on property papers and hence whole life would be spent with luxury ”

Janki enraged ” Daksh ” She roars . Holding his collars ” You did all this , Oh my god I can’t even believe it , You can be so selfish for money ”

Daksh laughs ” Oh my innocent Sister , Haha ”

Janki slaps him hardly , Her eyes filled with anger

Janki : I did a mistake , Just now only I’ll take away everything from you , I won’t give you even a single ruppe of my

Next scene , She goes to Naina and says her sorry , She has turned her head towards Naina and says she’ll call police and make Daksh arrest . But just then Daksh shot her with his gun and she dies )

Daksh : This Naina is a living evidence of my triumph , My power , My laws , That I can do anything for money

Vidyut : For money , For money only when I kidnapped Avni and you saw her in my bar , You said take her away , And make money from her , And if she dosen’t listens , Tell her , Her mother is abucted

Daksh : And now just because of water has spilled over our plan

Vidyut : But I know that I can count in you , I can come there to search her but you’ll find her very soon

Daksh : Don’t worry about that , But how does she looks like , I mean since all these years she was with you only , Under the Name Alia

Vidyut ( Showing him picture ) : This is our shikar

Daksh ( Thinks that he has seen the picture somewhere before ) : And this shikari will find it very soon

Vidyut : Because

DAKSH : Jo dhnade ke liy sahi vo sahi..Jo dhande ke liy galat vo galat..Isse jayda kabhi socha nahi”

Vidyut : I know you’ll find her out
flashes off . Daksh still gets curious about that face ” Hey , Get that picture of Ahiana to me ”

His servant picks up the picture from the table and walks towards to DAKSH .

” Sir here’s the picture ”

Daksh holds and sees ” What the hell is with it ” ” She’s that girl ” – Says Daksh


Ragu is with Dd at interrogation room .

Ragu : Yes Sir , Years ago my sister got missing , She was 2 months pregnant . We seeked help from Police but they couldn’t find her and Now they told that they had kidnapped her , I even don’t know if she’s alive or …

Dd : That is why you’re helping so that you could find about her out

Ragu : Yes sir

Dd : Don’t worry we’ll find her soon

A constable comes in ” Sir someone has come to meet you ”

Dd : Okay Ragu take care now , You can go now

He gets out ” Ali bhai You ! ”

Ali ” Oh yes ! hi dd how’s you ”

Dd : I’m doing fine , You in police station , Is everything fine

Ali : Yes ! Yes ! I just came here to take back my pen drive from Neil

Dd : Pen drive ?

Ali : That day at party I gave him , Of that performance

Dd : Oh yeah ! that Rj’s performance it was really awesome

Ali : He missed it that is why I gave him to see it

Dd : But he’s not here now , But , The pen drive is in his drower

Ali : I actually had to give it to someone so , You give it to me I’ll give him back again

Dd : Good idea , But I want to see it once

Ali : Yeah why not let’s do it again

The next scene is shown Dd bringing laptop and putting in the pen drive .

The video clip begins flashing on the screen .

Dd : Wah ! what a voice she has got

Ali : Really

Dd : Sir missed it

Ali : Really bad

Then , Ragu sees the them watching the video , He got shocked .

Ragu ” How this can happen ” He exclaims and shouts ” This is Alia’s voice ”

Ali : Wow you got it right ! she’s Alia

Ragu : Sir , Dd sir , We got Alia

Dd : Ragu she’s not that Alia , She’s RJ Alia , Who works at a radio station

Ali : What is talking about , Who’s he ?

Dd : I’ll explain you later Ali bhai ! Ragu what’re you saying !

Ragu: I’ve sung with her for so much of time , I know , Her voice is exactly Like Alia , Believe

Dd : Ragu are you sure


AVNI is sitting in Taxi , It stops at signal , And she is sitting with her back touching the seat . Her eyes rolls towards right and just adjacent to her is Neil’s car . Neil is talking on his phone .

Avni suddenly gets worried ” Oh god , Kay bhagwan har jagha yeh Akroo police wala Ku dikh jata ha ” ” I’ve to his myself ”

Neil’s eyes rolls towards Avni’s taxi and his eyes grew wider , He could see a girl who had covers her face with a mirror and is fixing her makeup .

Neil thinks ” Girls today ! Woa ! ”

Then Neil turns away and Avni took a sigh of relief .

Avni could hear him talking ‘ Yes dd I’m stucked at jam ‘ ‘ Not jam dd traffic jam ‘ ‘ When I’ll recah sanam re radio station , I’ll call you , You ‘ ‘ Don’t worry Dd if she’s the real Alia then we’ll surely can break the case ‘ .

Avni : Why is he going there , Wonder if he has got to know something about me ! no god , Why was he talking about Alia ! I’ve to reach there as soon as possible

Avni ( to driver ) : Bhaiya , Take back from here and drive as fast as you can , Hurry up !

At SANAM RE – Music channel

Avni reaches , ” My sweetheart, Alia where you were , So much work is pending ” says k.k

Avni : Sorry sir

K.k : you’re not here for so long , Now what about the show , What about the TRP’s

Avni : I’m so sorry Sir , I’m ready to do overtime

K.k : Meet me in my cabin immediately

He goes , ” Hi , Tia , I’ve a request for you ” She says to receptionist lady

Tia : Yes Mam !

Avni : If anyone came here to ask about me , Saying that he or she want to meet Alia , Just immediately say that I’m not here , I never came here , Do whatever but don’t send that person to me , Okay

Tia : Okay Mam but why !! …And Avni leaves .


NEELA hears doorbell and opens the door.

Neela gets dumbstruck to see him at her house’s threshold she could see a bunch of goons along with him ,Soon those men started distorting her house and breaking all the glasswares , Raiding every corner of house.

Neela ” Tum ! yaha ! ” ( You ! here )

Neela : How dare you came here , Entry for your kind of people in my house is barred

Daksh laughs , He claps ” Oh wow ! You can come into my house , You can search in my house , But I can’t even stand at yours house threshold ”

NEELA : Now why had you come here !

Daksh comes in ” I thought you’d have died but no , You were saved ” ” Your employ saved you right ! oh sorry or should I say your so called daughter saved you ”

Neela: Now why had you came here , What do you want from me ?

Daksh : By the way ( He sat down on sofa ) Your daughter , What was her name Ahiana , Right , She’s very brave I’ve to say , She fought for you , You who don’t have any blood relationship with her .

Neela : She’s not like you , Inhuman , Cruel . She’s a pure heated girl .

Daksh : Oho , Seems like mother feelings have developed in you . Why not ! You had lost your daughter and She had lost her mother . It’s just like a perfect ‘ Ram mailai jorhi ‘ ( God get them together )

Neela looks at him strangely and suspiciously

Daksh : What happened ? why do you look so shocked . Did I said something wrong ? Tell me ?

Neela : How did you know about Ahiana ?

Daksh : Ahiana , Ahiana , Comes one day from London , To your home , And tells that she had came here to find her mother , Naina Sinha

Neela ( Loudly ) : How did you know all this ?

Daksh : One girl and so many Names Ahiana , Alia and Avni

Daksh : Stop all this drama now , I know when you came into my house you saw Naina Sinha there

Neela : Yes ! Yes ! ( She spoke with aggression ) And you’ll see very soon she’ll be soon out of that trap

Daksh gets infuriated and with no time he took out a sharp dagger from his pocket , Holds Her hairs and pressed her against wall .

Showing her picture of a little girl he roars ” You know it very well that how I murdered your husband , Right with this knife , And I Snatched your daughter from you ” ” You very well know what I do with those who try to interrupt me in my goals ”

Daksh ” Where’s Avni , Tell me or else I’ll kill you right now ! I know she’s with you , Tell where had you hid her ”

Neela ” I will not let even the shadow of yours to fall upon my daughter . I’m her mother and I’ll do whatever I can to save her ”

Daksh ” Oh is that so ”

Daksh : Just listen with your ears open , If that Alia tried to go to police or even tried to go against me , I’ll Kill your daughter

Neela ” You’re more worst than a demon and demons can’t rule for long . Think of Ravana !

Daksh pressed the knife little deeper into the flesh ” Just rejoice that I wasn’t here when you came to my house , If I’d be there , I’d have just killed you , But now I’m regretting . Thank god you’re still Alive ”

Neela ” Just wait and watch one day you’ll be crumbled and would be beaten ”

Daksh ” Shhh””just keep your mouth shut “” Just fix these words in your head that if I didn’t got Avni I’ll kill your daughter ”
” Only three days , Just 3 days are with you decide , Wether you want your own daughter , Your own blood or that shit girl who has nothing to do with you ”

He relieves her and move away , Neela drops down and bows her head down on floor , Joining her both palms together ” Please I beg don’t do anything to her , Please ”

Without paying heed he walks out in anguish .

Neela : Now what should I do , If I told her about Naina Ji he’ll kill my Riya and if I didn’t then I’d be betraying Avni

AT Sanam re ‘

K.k : Avni , We’re thinking to launch a new Music channel on Television , Named * Isq with Music * And we’re going to launch you there as a singer

Avni : But sir I’m okay with being an RJ

K.k : Nope you’re a fabulous singer , You can be a star , It’s better for you to be on Television

Avni : No Sir , I know i want to become a singer but I want to keep myself A secret

K.k : No problem so we can launch you as a secret super star

Avni : Sorry sir I couldn’t understand

K.k : We’ll open a special show for you , An 30 minute program Where you’ll sing wearing a mask so as no one can see you .

Avni : But ..

K.k : See Avni , This is business , Being a owner I’ve to think of expanding my business as much as possible . But , But I’ll take care that you’ve no problem with you

Avni : Okay Sir , I’m ready

K.k : That’s like a champ . And I’m sure you’ll rock this channel , Ha !

There , Outside , Juhi steps down from a Auto rickshaw and sees Avni walking up and down just in front of Sanam re’-Music channel building .

Avni is talking ” Yes , Ma! I’m absolutely fine ”
” Yes, I’ll have rest and food on time ”

Juhi stuck between traffic on the other end of road shouts ” Alia ”

But Avni couldn’t hear it .

Juhi walks to cross the road speaking out loudly her name .But till then Avni enters in .

Juhi after gets in , Reaching at the query section she exclaims ” Hello , I want to meet Alia ”

Tia( Receptionist) : Sorry mam who’re you ?

Juhi : My name is Juhi , She knows me very well , Please I want to meet Alia

Tia: No mam you can’t meet her , No person named Alia works here

Juhi : You’re not getting my point , For me it’s really urgent to meet her , Please for once

Tia : But madam I said Na that no Alia works here , Please go

Juhi ( Loudly ) : Why are you lying ! I just saw her right now here , I want to meet her once

Tia : Before we call out guards it’s better for you to leave

Till then , Neil reaches.

Tia: Yes sir how can I help you ?

Juhi(Shouts) (bangs her hands and table ) : First listen to me , I said I want to meet Juhi once

Neil : One minute why do you want to meet her?

Juhi : She’s my friend . I want to just see her once .

Neil ( Shows a picture of Alia) : You want to contact her once

Neil : If I help you then would you help me

Juhi : Okay , I’ll

Neil : I’m Neil khanna , IPS Mumbai , And I want to meet Alia right now

Tia : Okay sir please wait , ( She calls ) ” Hello , K.k sir someone’s here to meet Alia with police ”

Tia : Please Sir wait they’re coming up

Avni murmurs to herself ” Oh god , It must be Neil , But why’s he here , Why he wants to meet Alia , Now what should I do and who’s with him ! ”

Avni worried and depressed wandering inside room .

Tia : Sir You can go inside now !

Neil and Juhi stood up and walks towards the room

One side she’s thinking how can she his and on other hand , Neil is coming closer and closer

Neil thinks ” Today this chapter would finally end ”

Avni thinks ” No , The game has just begun now , It can’t end before I win , I’d never let this happen ”

Avni ” No Avni you can’t loose hopes , You can’t loose , You can’t back down ”

Juhi knocks at the door ” Hello , Alia , Are you there ”

No replies came

Neil dabs twice and finally the door opens .

Juhi gets surprised to see who’s standing in front of her

A woman in black , Her body wrapped in a Burqa

Avni ( Woman in Burqa) : Yes , How can I help you ? . She says as if she’s not aware of the cause

Neil : So you’re The RJ Alia !

Avni : Yes ! I am , So what ?

Juhi : Alia , It’s me Juhi , Why’s you in this Burqa , I want to to talk to you

Avni : I’m sorry but I don’t know what’re you guys talking about , And who’s Alia

Neil ( To juhi ) : Are you sure that she dose knows you , Is she your friend ?

Juhi : Alia please don’t this ! We know each other , Right !

Avni : No Madam I don’t know you !

Juhi : Alia , You helped me escaping from that dead trap , You saved me from Vid…

Avni holds Juhis shoulders and pressed them as in order to stop her , Looking straight away into her eyes , She says ” Miss .Juhi What’re you saying , Yes I’m an artist and every fan of mine is my friend . But please stop exclaiming that we know each other ”

They both have a eye contact and Avni’s eyes blinks and tells her to keep quiet .

While looking into her eyes she secretly hands over her a little piece of paper .

Then , Juhi says ” I’m sorry I think you’re right , You’re not my friend Alia ”

Avni : It’s okay , Afterall ,Its humans only who do mistake !

Neil : Miss .Alia we’ve got some clues against you , You need to come with us for interrogation .

Neil shows his card ” Sorry for not introducing myself , I am , IPS officer Neil .

Avni puts forward his hand ” Hi , I’m Alia or RJ Alia , So Mr.Neil right ? You think I …( She walks around a table ) I am a thief ( Rolls a paper weight over surface ) Right !

Avni ” I had heard that Mumbai’s police is very irresponsible , I don’t know , Criminals can easily escape the police , Anyone can easily buy the law here . ” ” Today I’ve seen it with my own eyes ” ” Without any evidence , FIR you just came here ” ” I’m sure someone must have given you bait , Go and arrest Alia , The singer , So as their channels reputation falls down ”

The rolling glass paper weight falls down , Almost close to Neil’s feet

Avni ” Oops I’m sorry , By the way , I’m shocked how could A IPS officer be so silly ”

Avni and Neil simultaneously bows to pick up the glass stone , Their hands are over each other , Their heads bumped into each other . Avni’s mask / Veil falls down but immediately Avni puts over it again .

They both got up .

Neil : Miss. Alia , First of all , I don’t know , Even I don’t care what all you’ve heard about Mumbai police , I am not like that , I’m not of that kind , I am a honest and Man ruled by brain not with heart

Alia : Oh ho oh woa ! Felt honored to know about you sir , But do you have any strong evidence against me , I’ll go with only one too , If you have then please show up , I’d like to know

Neil : I can smell the odor from thieves , Which I’ve already smelt from you . I had to say – Ek Toh Chori Upar Se Seenazori’ , You can hide from public but not from me

Avni : Hahaa nice dialogue sir , I must say you can be a good actor !

Neil : No thanks , You know to be an actor you have to disguise yourself many times in different looks and attires and I can’t do that , I’d like to be me .

Avni : Great , So I think nowadays Mumbai police don’t have much work so they can pass time easily with anyone anywhere

Neil : Ohh thanks for reminding me , I just got to know that I had a great task for myself , To find a strong lead ( Evidence ) Against You

Avni : Alright ! Mr.IPS officer the day you’ll get one I’ll myself put handcuffs around my hands

Neil : I’d wait for that day

Avni looks straightforward to his eyes – ” All the best Mr.Neil , I hope you’d get successful in your task ”

They both had a eyelock , The eye contact with each other , With Neil becoming suspicious and Avni moving forward in her plan . Both thinking they had beaten each other but the story took another route this way …..

Neil and Juhi walks out of the room , While juhi was looking constantly back to Avni .

Neil : If you get any information about your Alia then please tell us

Juhi : But why ?

Neil : It’s confidential , Despite , I can tell you that , Alia is a criminal , She had done a robbery at police station and also .

Juhi : Okay I’ll see to it



Neela is packing a big brown suitcase , And is frantically stuffing her clothes straightway from wardrobe to bag .

Neela mutters ” I’ll go away from here , I can’t hide the truth from Avni that her mother is alive , But if I told her then not only her buy also my daughter’s life would in life ”

Neela ” I’d not be able to talk to her eye to eye ”

Neela ” What should I do now ” ” ” I should take Avni along with me ” ” We’ll stealthily go away and hide in some other city , There I’d tell her the truth ”

Neela exclaims with sigh ” Yes I think this would be right to do this time , Nothing else could be done ”

AT SANAM RE ‘ ( music channel )

Avni sobs as they both left the room by now ” Stop crying Avni it was one of the toughest thing but from now there’d be more so I’ve to be strong ”

Then the door opens and Juhi comes in …

Juhi sees Avni and Then Avni removes her veil , The Burqa from over her face .

Avni and Juhi looks at each other as if two close friends got up a chance to meet each other after a long go .

Juhi exclaims with tears ” Avni ” and they both Hughs each other .

Juhi ” See Avni I wasn’t wrong , You’re my best friend Avni ”

Avni ” Sorry I had to do all that drama earlier ”

Juhi ” it’s okay i will not ask you anything , Because I know whatever you do had a reason behind it ”

Avni ” Juhi how come uo come here ? ”

Juhi ” Avni tell you everything but first of all tell me how come you here ”

Avni ” Hmm I also want to talk to you but not here ”

Juhi ” OK then let’s meet at CHAMKO cafe ”


Ragu rushes to Neil’s cabinet ” Sir you got Alia , Please tell me where she is? ”

Dd” Please keep silence ”

Neil ” No dd , He’s right we’ve Alia ”

Ragu ” Sir please tell , Don’t keep it still under cover ”

Dd” But sir who’s Alia! ”

Neil ” Ahiana ” Everyone gets surprised seeing him speaking out with Confidence .

Dd” What’re you saying sir ! ” ” That girl living in SUKOON GHAR ”

Neil ” Yes Did”” Till now All the dots were dispersed , Scattered “” But now everything seems coming together , Dots are being connected ”

Dd ” I couldn’t understand what are you trying to say Sir ! ”

Neil : Think back to day one when we’re called at Airport , Just that day I bounced with a girl wearing Burqa she was in hurry and I asked her that if she knew about Alia who had fled from Airport , That day she replied that she is running to save her life

Neil ” Those eyes of the girl and the eyes which I saw today were the same , And this girls eyes are exactly like that

Dd ” But sir just from eyes how can you deduce that she’s alia only

Neil ” Remember we met Ahiana at sanam re ‘ where she said that she got there for a job ” ” That day she didn’t gave answers to my questions ” ” Whenever I ask her about past she used to always ignore ”

Neil ” Moreover , Recall she came at SUKOON GHAR just the day after Alia got missing , And , Note that she’s also from London ”

Dd ” I think there’s some point whatever you’re saying ”

Neil ” I was suspicious since the day I saw her ”

( Avni & Juhi sipping juice)

Juhi ” Avni I’m so glad that you had escaped that hell

Avni ” But still many girls are there ”

Juhi ” You’re right , I can’t even think that , That day if were not there, If you would haven’t helped me get out from there then they’d have killed my baby , It’s all because of you I’m alive today ”

Avni ” See juhi we both managed to escape , But the danger isn’t over , They’re here , They’re still haunting me , Vidyut is trying his best .

Juhi : Avni now what should we do ? I’m scared Avni your life is at risk

Avni : Juhi , I told you while escaping that you should not come out like this , You have to be hidden , Why did you came out !

Juhi : Or what should I have done Avni , I can’t live , I can’t close myself in a house , I was chocked , I’m living all alone since so many years , I had handled each and every problem of mine all alone , I had lost all my hopes . One day I met him , Right at this cafe ( Seeing at Ali who was serving people )

Letting her eyes wet and voice heavy with sigh ” He said that he’s my friend and he’d help me everytime I need him ”

Avni recalls her childhood ( Avni , A little girl of just 6 , In pathetic condition , Clothes tattered away , Hairs tangled , Wandering here and there .

Avni shouts roaming around under darkness in a jungle ” Maa ! Maaa ! where are you Maa ! ”

Suddenly she come across a horrific sight , She sees her house burning .

Avni runs towards the sight , A large gathered there , Hold her , Barred her from entering inside the yellow – red fire .

She screams ” Ma ! Please let me go ” ” My mother is inside ”

Someone says ” Eh ! girl Are you cranky , You want to step into the fire ”

Avni says ” My mother is inside please let me go and save her , Please ”

Another person replies ” Noone is Inside , The house is empty ”

Avni ( To herself ) : So then , Where’s Ma ! where’s she

She then goes to neighborhood – Neil’s house . She bangs at his gate many times .

Noone came out , A person tells her that the occupants have left the house just few hours ago .

Avni weeps ” Neil , You broke the promise , You said as a best friend you’ll be there whenever I need you , But you aren’t here , I break this friendship , This promise of remaining friends always ”

Her nostalgia ends )

Juhi keeps her hands over Avni’s who was lost in her memories ” Avni what happened ? ”

Avni ” Listen , Juhi , I don’t believe in friendship , I believe in fighting for myself ” ” No one comes to help you when you’re in danger , Who’ll put his/her life at risk for you ” ” So you yourself have to fight ”


Dd ” If you knew it time before then why didn’t you arrested her ”

Neil ” No dd , Why would we arrest her , We should help her . She’s is fighting with those people alone ”

Dd” If it’s like this that why didn’t she came to seek help from police , If she had some evidences against Vidyut then she’d help in his arrest ”

At CHAMKO cafe …

Avni : Just leave all this , Tell me how’s your child , Is it’s a girl or boy

Juhi : I’ve a little daughter , Her name is Muskaan ,

Avni : Where are you both living ?

Juhi : We’re living in a women help shelter , Nearby

Avni : Why don’t you both come and live with us , Me and Neela Ma ! she’s a great lady , She runs a orphanage

Juhi : Thanks for invitation , But I’m happy there

Avni : Okay whenever you’ll need any help come there okay

Juhi : Avni , Can I ask you something !

Avni ( Sips from.cup ) : Hmmmm!!!

Juhi : You helped me escaping , But since now you’re also here then why don’t we go and take help from police , Why don’t we go and tell them everything

Avni : Nahi , No juhi , If I did so then someone very close to me would be separated from me , I can’t do it …

Juhi : I know , Your mother , But what’ll you do , We can’t fight them all alone

Avni : We can , I have all the evidences against Vidyut and his illegal business , That is why he hasn’t anything disastrous till now , But , My mom , she’s still missing , She’s Still with them . And they fear if I find her their business would be …

Juhi : I haven’t seen any girl so strong like you , You had withstand such difficult situations .

Avni : From outside i may look like strong but from inside I’m like broken and torn pieces of paper

At police station …

Ragu : She’s brave , Bold and valiant . I remember her once saying that she’d soon bring disaster to Alia’s band .

Dd : Yes don’t you remember how she fought those goons and Saved Neela Ji

Neil: And Neela aunty once said that Ahian likes to share her problems with anyone , She like to fight her battles all alone

Ragu : Howsoever Strong she may be but she can’t win over those people , You’ve no idea how powerful they’re ! ( He heaved with sigh )

Ragu : Yes sir , I’ve seen with my eyes , Being inhuman , I’ve heard with these ears those girls screaming

Neil : Don’t worry , We’d solve this case soon

Ragu : We’ve to be fast , So that something bad wouldn’t happen

Neil picks up the picture of Avni and thinks ” Now I’ll handle this case my way ”


Juhi : I’m very scared , Avni , Let’s go and disclose everything to police , Come let’s go

Avni : Nope juhi , I can’t tell anyone I’m Alia , My mom is still with them , They can do anything to her , Don’t you know how dangerous they’re

Avni mourns ” Alia will never come out , She’ll remain in Avni , I hate Alia , And she’ll die only when my vengeance is over

Juhi : But for whom you’re doing all this , For whom you’re taking risk , Is that person alive , Are you sure your mother is alive

Avni : Yes , She’s , What’re you saying , Do you know ! . She is alive , Alive in my heart and I’ll find her soon .

She says with high vexation , With her eyes filled with rage , With wrath she spoke ” The day I found my mother , I’ll Kill those people all by myself , I’ll kill those criminals who made our life worst than a hell ”

As She was holding a glass tumbler in her hands , The anger filled in her caused to grip it so hardly that it broke into her hands , Her hand filled with blood.

Juhi suddenly blurt out ” watchful , Avni , Be careful ”

Avni looks at her injured hand ” Now , This revenge would be completed from blood ”

” Mere badle ki aag ,
Had roz bad rahi hai
Aur yeh sirf tabhi hi ,
Bhujegi jab main ek ek assun
Ka badla lugi ”
( The fire inside me is getting wilder day by day and it’d only be extinguished when I’ll avenge for my every single tear )

Neil looking at Avni’s picture ” Nahi Ahiana main tumhari
Is aag se kuch galat nahi
Hone dunga ”
( No Ahiana I won’t let you to do anything wrong )

Did asks ” Now what’s the next plans sir ! ”

Neil ” We’ve to follow a strategy , Ahiana dosen’t knows we know she’s Alia , She’s not taking any help from police and this reason is unknown to her . Now we’ll keep on treating her as a criminal as if she had done something wrong . We’ll try to cover each and every move of hers . Then we’ll prove that she’s Alia ”


Tordkar dosti ke wade , Tyaar hai apni ma ke liye kuch bhi Karne ko …

Dusri aur Ek Ma,

Jo bachana chahti hai apne beti ko ….

Kya Pura kar pai GI Avni apna wada ,
Kya Neil ROK payega Avni ko
Kanoon ki khilaf Jane se ,,,

Many questions , , What’d be their destiny

  • Will avni take law law in her hands
  • What’ll neela choose Her daughter or Avni
  • What would Neil do

Thanks to all my besties for waiting for a longtime . I know today’s episode wasn’t that great one . As I returned to writing after a long and after giving exams so my brain and heart is not 100% into it . But I’m sure , That with your love and support I’ll return back with more fabulous work .
Enjoy your day friends. LoveYa !

* Important Announcement *

I don’t know why but when I saw the promo of the serial ‘ Yeh tere galliyan ‘ I thought that it’s plot is quiet similar to me . I may be wrong . But I began with my story well before it began coming on television . Maybe they had taken a idea from my story . I’m not praising myself . It was just a thought . Well , What do you think about !

Bye , Have a nice day !!!
sorry for no pictures , My net package is on verge of finish .
waiting eagerly to meet you all ? I mean talk to you . Don’t forget to ??and comment ??.

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  1. awesome update….
    Thanks Long wait bt wondrous :-*

    1. Kira

      Thanks a lot dear , Gn??

  2. Great episode Kira. Thunderous comeback indeed. How were your exams

    1. Kira

      They were good , Thanks for asking . Good day ahead?

  3. Jasminerahul

    surprising that naina is alive.but neela couldn’t tell avni.waiting for avni naina meeting.sad that janki misunderstood naina and tortured her.but when shecame to know the truth she got killed.oh this daksh is threatening n blackmailing neela.hope she chooses the right path.avneil scene was nice.loved juhi avni friendship. surprising that juhi knows avni’s identity.shocking that here too juhi was under vidyuth’s control and avni saved her n she has a daughter too.curious to know what exactly is juhi’s story. missed pics.but the pic you put was lovely

    1. Kira

      I’ll try putting pics next . Thanks for writing . God day ahead ??

  4. Awesome how were ur exams? Yeh tere galliyas promo is telecasted on which channel? I dont know.

    1. Kira

      Thanks dear , Its on Zee TV. Good day ahead?

  5. 8B4756

    The episode was awesome Di….

    1. Kira

      Thanks a lot dear , Enjoy your day ✴??

  6. Hey Kira…feeling so good reading your updates from a long time…and as usual you have just rocked it..
    And in case you feel that your plot is similar to YEH TERE GALLIYA…then dont be surprised coz your stories have the potential to become a super hit in case it is aired…
    I hope your exams went good
    Good Morning ..Have a nice day!!

    1. Kira

      Oh thanks a lot friend , It’s so nice of you . Glad to have Bff like you . Keep smiling ???

  7. Kira dear…. how was ur exam??? Happy to see u back..
    Thank you so much for ur long update… ???

    1. Kira

      Hieee Cathy dear , Exams went pretty well . Thanks a lot . Keep enjoying ???

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