Kaisa yeh isq hai ( AVNEIL fan fiction) 22 Episode

????? ??? ??? ??? – 22 Episode

Recap :- Avni manages to save Neela but gets injured because of bomb blast . Naina’s warning to Daksh
The Episode opens with Neil at canteen , Filling a little plastic cup with hot tea from which smoke was rising . But as lost as he was , He didn’t notice it . The tea was till now full up to the brim and it’s spilled over his hand

” Ouch ” He cried with Pain . Soon he recognise Prakash standing behind him .

Prakash : What’re you doing Neil ( Nursing his hand )

Neil : I’m sorry I just didn’t noticed it

Prakash : Are you still thinking the same ! Do you still believe everything that happened is just because of you

Neil : What should I do dad , I can’t unsee the fact , I can’t explain myself

Prakash : See Neil Please don’t think like that , Don’t blame yourself for this

Neil : For a minute even if I think that I wasn’t at fault but what about my department , Public , They’ll question me that ‘ Your whole team was there but still it happened ‘

Prakash : Since childhood it’s your habit to take all the blame over your head you can’t see people suffering . But believe me it wasn’t because of you . Your department know you since so many years . And if you’re worried about people , Don’t worry , Dd told me that media is barred from publishing it .

Neil nods his head

Prakash : Come on let’s go home now , You need some rest

Neil : No dad I won’t go unless I find the real culprit . I want that person behind bars .


Naina who’s being locked with iron chains , Tries her best to pick up that throwned away with hatred God’s sculpture .
She pulls herself against that force which is pulling her back and manages to pick that up , But those swollen areas and red marks on her arms and legs pains .

Naina ( Holding God’s sculpture in her hand ) : I have faith in my God that he won’t ever let anything go wrong . But god why this time you’re late , It’s been 15 Years now , Please send me back my daughter .
” I don’t know how she would be , Where she’d be, With whom . Would she be fine ?h But what if she got injured or scared ”
” No I know my Avni very well, She’s my strong daughter ” ” Sorry that I’m not there with you . Please don’t cry I can’t see tears in your eyes ”

” My Avni, Is so far away from me , I know she must be missing me as I do ”

[ Flashback – Dayawanti , Ahil’s ( Avni’s father mother ) standing in fornt of Naina , She roars seeing her son covered by white sheets as he’s dead .

Dayawanti : My one and only son , He is no more today and I all happened because of you .

Naina : It was not my fault please try to understand , It was an accident . I …

Dayawanti : Shut up , I don’t want to hear even a single word from your mouth.

Naina : Please don’t put blame on me for this , I’m innocent

Dayawanti : See , See my son , He’s dead , How’s he lying there , I curse you today that you’ll also feel the same pain one day , One day I’ll snatch your child from you and then you’ll get to know the mother’s pain of loosing her child

Naina cries ” No please don’t do anything to her , Please ”

Flashback over ]

Naina wheeps ” She must have grown by now , I don’t know how does she looks like . ”
” Please lord , I beg whatever happened , Happened because of me , My daughter wasn’t at fault , Why’s she getting punishment then . ”
” Ahil , Our daughter needs support . Please god send someone in her life who could protect her and never let even a drop come into her eyes ”

She pressed the God’s sculpture against her chest , Her head touching the wall and Eyes closed , Tears dripping down . ” Please god please ”
She went back to old days .
[ 16 Years back , At AHIANA’S House , Mumbai ( The original home which was burnt )

Naina coming out of bathroom , Her hairs wet . Ahil sitting over sofa , Reading newspaper .

Naina ” Ahil did any call came ”
Ahil ” No , Not yet ”

Naina ” What , Not yet , Then I should make a call , Wait ”

Ahil woke up and rolls her and envelopes into his arms ” Oh Ms.Sinha why are you taking tension , She’ll be fine , Now Avni has gone for picnic , She’d tried so must have forgotten to call ”

Naina : No, No it has never happen , She always call me , Now it’s 8 Am , Wait , I just hope she’s fine , After all she’s a child

Ahil : Oh mother India , My Puchu ( Avni ) really has given you a nice name , Miss .Tension , Don’t take tension she’d be fine , She is our strong and brave daughter

Naina : Ahil, Can I ask you one thing

Ahil : Hmm !!!

Naina : Every time we both can we with her , What if she gets into any trouble , Who’ll help her

Ahil : Don’t worry about that , Someone will surely be there , specially made for her . Just like me , Who’ll care for her and never let anything wrong to happen . Who’ll always protect her .

Naina : Just the way you’re made for me

Ahil : Yes absolutely .]


SOMEONE knocks the door , The door slits open , It’s Ragu , He gets shocked on seeing who’s at door and quickly tries to shut but , That persons hand dosen’t let that happen .

It’s Ballu out there , He grasped his throat and squeezed it . Ballu pushed him inwards .

Ballu ” What you though you’d run away from there , And would never be caught . It’s was biggest mistake ever ”

Ragu ” You’re late because I had already told police about you and Vidyut ”

Ballu claps ” Woa ! So you think you babbled a cooked fairty tale to police and they’d believe in you ”

Ragu ” They had , And very soon your game would be over ”

Ballu ” oh really , Let me tell you that , Nowadays , The law works on the basis of evidences , You don’t have against us . So stop dreaming dear ”

Ragu ” I have evidence , Alia , Once we found her , You all would be behind bars ”

Ballu gave evilly laughter ” You’re a singer Na that is why your mathematics is little weak , Come ( Forcing him to sit ) , Come today I’ll explain you simple mathematics ”

Ballu ” Now see Vidyut sir is crazy for Money , And for it he can do anything , Anything , Maybe he can go and kill our Prime minister . He can throw a bomb in his own country . He can be so mad .
So now if I shot you with this gun , Then police would straightway think he’s behind it .

” But no we’re smart . We won’t do anything to you , But to that Alia . We’ve found her . As she’s a evidence , So we’ll off course have to do something to her ”

Ragu : Nay , You’re wrong . She’s very brave , If she can escape your traps , She can do anything then .

Ballu ” You need not to worry , We’ve done all arrangements , Just think I’d be last night for her in this world ”

Ballu ” We’ll kill her , Just as your sister died , While she was with us ”

Ragu gets enraged , He shouts ” Ballu ! ”

Someone hits on his head , He felts unconscious and drops .

Ballu orders ” Hurry up , Set everything , No one should get to know that anyone came here ”


Neela uplifts herself and sat over bed , She finds out that there’s no water adjacent to her .

Outside someone is shown coming through the darkness , Walking with a trolley over which some doctors instruments were kept .

Neela walks out ” Excuse me , The Jug no water in there , So can I get a glass of water ”

He’s a boy wearing a hospital costume and a cap . Instead of replying he nods his head and continued his motion .

Neela ” He looks quite strange to me ” Don’t know why ? ”

She looks through the dark , Seeing that person moving ” Maybe I’m wrong , Whatever ” – Telling herself

Neela walks in and sat over bed ” I think once I should go and meet Avni ” ” But she’d be sleeping now , Shouldn’t disturb her ”

Neela ” He hasn’t came till now ”

Stepping out ” Nurse ” She calls a Lady passing by

Nurse : Yes madam

Neela ” I asked a ward boy to get a glass of water he hasn’t came back ”

Nurse : But mam , Only nurses and doctor work here at night , Rest staff works at emergency section not here

Neela : Oh Kay !

Nurse : I’ll bring some water for you


That person looking like strange enters the room , And underneath the trolley was hiding another man .

They both had disguised themselves .

One of them rapidly removes all oxygen mask from her face , Then all those pipes from her arms to that glucose bottles . Disconnects all the machines .


Dd and Neil are seated over a bench .

Dd : How’s Neela Ji and Ahiana now

Neil : They both are fine doctors said .

Dd : Sir I’ve got to know from Neela ji’s servant that she left the house long before evening without telling anyone .

Neil : Anything else

Dd : Yes sir , When we did a investigation at her home , We got a knife laden with blood .

Neil : A knife

Dd : It was there in a try along with vegetables , So maybe she’d have been cutting vegetables and got injured

Neil : And she got out to see a doctor and then all this happened

Dd : No Sir , The direction in which her phone was traced is completely opposite . In that direction we don’t have any hospital or clinic

Neil : One thing is clear then , She was in so hurry that something happened , Which made her nervous , She got her finger slit while cutting vegetables and as per servant she left the home hurriedly

Dd : What could be reason behind it , Sir ?

Neil : She must have been threatened , By saying something that she’s afraid of loosing


BOTH of them are doing their job noiselessly .

One of them takes out a big brown sac and opens it .

Other one , Peeps out for once to see if there wasn’t any intruder .

STANDING OUTSIDE , NEELA AT SOME DISTANCE , is given a glass of water by nurse . Soon she have look at AVNI’S room .

Neela : Lights , Lights are glowing . Why ?

Suddenly she hears a crackling sound , As if a glass had been throwned mistakenly on floor .

Neela ” Avni ” She roars growing mysterious and runs into her room .

And gets in rushingly and finds out the situation completely different . She could see Avni huffing over the bed , Her mask lying over the floor. All the machines turned off .

Neela goes and holds her hand sobbing ” Avni , Bacha , What happened to you ”

She roars ” Doctor ” Loudly again ” Doctor ” ” Hurry up ”

A man dressed in white coat rushes in ” Oh my god ” He exclaims ” Sister hurry up put the mask ” He checks her beat and vains .

” Serious condition , Turn it on hurry up ” He says to nurse

Nurse ” Mam please go out we’ve to examine patient ”

Neela : No I won’t

Doctor : Please try to understand or else something dangerous could happen

Neela Looks through the window pane , Avni being injected .

Neela : Oh god what’s happening with my Bacha , She’s such a nice girl , She saved me and what’s happening with her .

Neela cries and turns back and finds Neil coming in , She ran to him and holds him ” Neil, Ahiana , She , She is in critical situation ”

Neil ” What ! ” He says shockingly .

THEY ALL rushed there .Neil watches Avni from window .

Neil : But how does it happened all of sudden

Neela : I heard something like breaking from her room , When I ran there , She was in that condition

Neil : Something’s fishy , Dad right now and order that noone should go out and lock every gates

Dd : Yes sir ( He goes )

Neil : Be here I gotta go , Ha !


Vidyut gets angry and furiously throws the phone onto the floor .

” This was a golden chance , But again , Again we couldn’t , How , It’s getting on my nerves now ”

” Hey , Listen , Put up the set up right now ” ” I gotta talk tobhim right now ” He orders his men


NEELA , is sitting over the seat outside , She looks into the glass .

Neela wheeps ” No Avni nothing will happen to you . You came here to find your Naina Ma ! . How happy you’d be when I’ll tell you that she’s alive . Yes , I know where’s she ! . Yes Avni , You’ve to get up , Open your eyes , The fight isn’t over yet . You’ve to fight the battle and get back your Mother , Get up Avni ”


Neil ” How irresponsible one can be , You’re security guard , And this is hospital , You don’t know who came here ”

Guard : Sorry Sahib , But my duty just ended so I went to washroom , Hoping next guard would be on his way

Neil : Beacuse Your single mistake one could have died

Guard : Sorry boss

Dd comes ” Sir the CCTV footage of an hour before is erased ”

Neil : How’s that possible , What kind of security is here Sir , The guard is so irresponsible and someone came and erased the footage

Manager : Sorry sir , I’ll do necessary changes both in security and staff

Neil ( Loudly ) : Now what’s Need , Now it has happened . What’ll we do now .

Dd : Sir ( Trying to make him calm )

Neil : What the heck is this ! Why are we loosing again and again

Dd : Whosoever it was , Was very clever , He knew what evidences have to remove .


Neela And Neil sitting in a meeting with doctor .

Doctor : She’s fine now , She’s out of danger .

Neela : But what happened to her

Doctor : Actually , As oxygen mask was removed and so other machines ,She wasn’t getting proper air or oxygen

Neil : Thanks a lot doctor

Neela & Neil walks out

Neela : Neil you should go and take nap , You’re awaken since last night , Running from here and there

Neil : No neela Ma ! I’m fine

Neela : No Neil please , Already you did a lot for us , Please go and fresh up


Dd visits Ragu’s house and when he opens the door , He finds Ragu fallen down . With a stream of blood gaping out of his back of his head .

Dd ” Ragu , Ragu what is this , Are you okay ” He picks him up and helping him to sit over a chair

Ragu was nursed and given some liquids .

Ragu ” Dd why have you came here ”

Dd : What happened here , Why you were fallen like this , And blood

Ragu : Blood , I don’t remember what all occurred here

Dd : Don’t worry for that I’ve an idea , Just now we’ll get to know what happened ! Wait .

Dd plays a video clip from CCTV camera and it shows , Ragu coming into the house and everything , But the sound wasn’t there .

Ragu wails ” Ballu , Yes he came , He came here and He said that he’ll kill Alia ”

Dd : But who’s he ?

Ragu : He’s Vidyut’s man , He’s his right hand , He …

Dd : Ballu ! he came here , Why ?

Ragu : He gave me an ultimatum that he’ll kill Alia just as he did my sister

Dd gets shocked


Neela : Avni how’s you Bacha ?

Avni : Ma ! First tell me how’s you

Neela : I’m absolutely fine now seeing you I’m more fine

Avni ( Holding her hand ) : Na tell me how did it all happened ? How and who kidnapped you .

Neela : Avni , Just now you’ve open your eyes and you’re worrying about me . Please don’t take any stress .

Avni : But Ma !

Neela : Shh , For now only rest , Rest we’ll talk later

Doctor comes in ” How’re you now ”

Avni ” I’m good ”

Doctor ” You should thank your mother and that Man . He was really a nice man , Thankfully he bought you here on time ”

Avni ” Who ”

Neela ” Neil ”

Doctor : Okay could you please go out we’ve to do a little check up

Neela : Sure !


Neil walks in talking on phone ” Thank god she’s fine now ”
” Neela ma ! you be there only , Ha ! ”

Shweta notices him ” He’s still talking about that girl ”

Shweta ” Tillu , So finally you got some time to come ”

Neil ” Mom come on I really wanna have coffee made by you , Please ”

Shweta ” Okay , I’ll get it for you ”


Doctors were discussing their reports , While Avni lying on bed thinks ” Akroo police wala , He didn’t even came here to see me once . He’d have came once I’d have said him thanks ”
There Neil at his couch sipping coffee thinks ” Ahiana you must be thinking that why I’m not there , That’s a secret , I won’t tell it to anyone ”

Shweta sees a smile over his face , Flipping fingers ” Oye why are you laughing Ha ! ”

Neil : Nothing , No , H

Neil ” Mom know what , Dad was saying that you’ve now started looking like old . ”

Shweta : What ? Me ! No no Ji me is too youngs

Shweta : Thanks a lot Neil , You told me Now I won’t spare him

Ali comes in …

Ali : Hello, Aunty Ji

Shweta : Oye , Spiral hair man , Why are you so happy today ?

Neil ( In his mind ) : Phaal gya raita , Told him not to overreact

Ali : Happy , One should always keep smiling , Who knows what’d happen to you just next moment

Shweta : Wow ! today you’re saying very emotional things

Neil : Leave him Mom you should do something , Maybe you can go to a beauty parlour

Shweta : Oh Ji I don’t need any parlour I’m already very beautiful , Isn’t it Ali ?

Ali : Yaaaee !! ( Neil gestricutates No ) Yyee , No .

Shweta : What No !

Ali : Aunty Ji I’m saying why settle for less , You should look more beautiful everyday . And for this I’ve bought for you these vouchers

Neil : Oh wow Ali , Mom you shouldn’t miss the chance

The Next scene is shown , Neil and Ali over sofas

Ali : Tell why did you called me and told me to do all this

Neil : See, You’re a Cook , A cafe owner , You’re so famous , So I wanna Cook Poha

Ali : Poha , Why didn’t you told me before I’d bought some along with me

Neil : Not your Poha , I wanna cook it myself

Ali : What ? yourself , Ohhh now I got to know why ?

AT HOSPITAL …afternoon …

Neela enters in holding a tray in her hands .

Avni mutters to herself ” I’m so Hungry ” Then on seeing her she exclaims ” Thank god you came I was hungry ”

Neela : So I bought some oats and soap , I’ve prepared it myself

Avni : Sorry , But I don’t like soup and oats , Please

Avni : Ma ! Already with all those strange and tasteless medicines my taste buds are almost destroyed

Neela : If you didn’t ate how’ll you get energy , Just one spoon , Try it , It’s tasty

Avni : Okay one spoon , Ha ! ( Neela gives her one sip )

Avni : Yewww !! It’s good but sorry I can’t have it , Can’t I eat something spicy

Neela : Are you crazy , Ha ! It’s vegetable soup , With so much nutrition

Avni : Please , No it’s better if I eat my pills

Neela : Okay till you won’t eat I’d not talk to you ( She kept the tray over the table and went out )

Avni : Ma ! I’m sorry , Ma !

Neela : Neil !

Neela : Did you took rest

Neil : Yes , I did , But why do like so annoyed

Neela : See , She’s not eating anything . I cooked for her soup and oats but she’s not eating anything .

Neil : Maybe she would like this ( Handing over to her a small circular tiffin )

Neela : What’s this ?

Neil : Poha !

Neela: It dosen’t looks like from Ali’s cafe , You got it from somewhere else

Neil : Actually , I cooked it

Neela : What , Really

Neil : Please can you give it to her

Neela : If you’ve cooled it , Then why don’t you give it yourself.

Neela gets in room .

Avni : I’m sorry Ma !

Neela : No Avni unless you eat this I won’t talk to you

Neil enters ” Neela Ma is right , You’ve to eat food ”

Avni : Why do you think that I’ll listen to you

Neil : Neela ma ! don’t you earlier it was so much peace , Now again this lionesse had began to roar

Avni : See he’s pranking on me

Neil : Well, I know you wanna eat something good , So I got this for you

Avni : Wow ! Poha I was dreaming of something like this

She quickly want to grab a first bit but when she tried pulling her arm they ached .

Neil : Wait ! ( He fills the spoon with heap of Poha and Put it into her mouth )

Avni : Wow it’s so tasty , Ali cooks everything with heart , So much love is filled in it

Neela : No this time , Neil cooked it

Avni ( Stopped chewing ) : Oh really , That is why I think why it’s not100% perfect

Neil : Okay so with it I’ve another surprise for you

Avni : A surprise , What ?

Neil came closer and points his direction to right

There were Mowgli dressed in police officer uniform and Mishti looking like Avni .

Misti : I am Miss.Ahiana , And she’s my Neela Ma !

Mowgli : I’m Neil , IPS officer

Mishti : Hmm I know Akroo police wala

Mowgli : And you fat girl

They both were mimicking them . A faint glow and smile came to her face .

Neil looks at her happy face .

[ Background music –
Haal E Dil Ko Sukoon Chahiye
Doori Ik Arzoo Chahiye
Jaise Pehle Kabhi
Kuch Bhi Chaaha Nahi
Waise Hi Kyun Chahiye
Dil Ko Teri Maujudgi Ki
Ka Ehsaas Yun Chahiye ]

Kids dragged NEELA to dance floor and they all started dancing .

Mishti : Ahiana didi you also come Na !

Neela : No she’s sick , How’ll she dance

Mowgli : She’s Angel and angels never get sick

Neela : Bacha but …

Avni : Ma ! they did alot to make me happy can’t I do this much for them ! Wait .

Avni slowly tries to get down . She lowered her legs , But when she tries to pull her body up , She fall back .

Neela : Bacha be careful

Neil puts his hand forward and she stood up .

Mishti : Music on …..

Neil and Avni had couple dance .

But Avni again stumbles and were going to fell but Neil holds her in his arms .

[ BG music :- Tu Chahiye Tu Chahiye
Shaam O Subah Tu Chahiye
Tu Chahiye.. Tu Chahiye..
Har Martaba Tu Chahiye
Jitni Dafaa.. Zidd Ho Meri
Utni Dafaa.. Haan Tu Chahiye ]

* Announcement *
Sorry guys for this boring sa episode . Actually my period test have begun . So I got no time to write . But I wanna post one , As I’m late .
But guys I’m sorry ! . Now I’d be able to post very late . Tests are scheduled till 25 . Hope you’d understand . Bye , Love Ya !

Though , I know , It doesn’t good enough to get many likes .But still , If liked , Do support .?

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  1. Hi KIRA I am back such a nice update and keep on going ahead and even I am also a die hard fan of avneil and adiza and I have also posted my story plz do read and comment and bye dear…


    1. Kira

      Thnx , Send me the link . good morning ??

  2. Nice episode didi
    Loved it
    Janki is still alive or not? I mean dayawanti
    All the best for the tests! ?
    Good night

    1. Kira

      You’ll get to know soon. Thanks dear ?

  3. Nice update… ?? all the best for the exam

    1. Kira

      Thanks dear , Gud mrng??

  4. Hasinasoghra

    It was a very nice episode and not at all boring

    1. Kira

      Glad to heat from you . Thanks a lot dear ??

  5. AryanBhattacharya

    First part was painful and last part was wonderful ??
    And di agar aapka tellyupdates account ka problem abhi tak thhik nahi hua ho toh aap aapka wahi naam Aur password se UC browser se account kholsakti ho. Maine bhi Aisa kiya hai abhi. Yaha par koyi problem abhi tak nahi hai. Aur aapka account change nahi hoga, wahi rehega agar aap aapka yeh naam Aur password se UC browser ke Google se kare toh.

    1. Kira

      Oh thanks for sharing idea I’ll try and thanks alot ??

  6. 8B4756

    The episode was not at all boring it was interesting and all the best for ur tests btw in which class do u study (if u r not comfortable with answering this then it’s ok )

    1. Kira

      Thanks friend . I’m in class xII . love ya ??

  7. I know Kira that it has been a long time since I have commented and mainly it was because of TU problem….but now that everything is fine I decided to comment on your ff…
    As usual it was a wonderful update and thanks a lot for cherishing AvNeil memories in me through your ff
    All the best for all your tests and take care…
    Good Night

    1. Kira

      it’s so nice of you dear , Happy to hear from you . Gun??

  8. Great episode Kira.. sorry couldn’t comment earlier as I was quite busy.. well Wishing you all the best for your exam s. Don’t mind me asking but in which grade are you in?
    Good night

    1. Kira

      Thanks dear a lot , I’m in grade 12 . Well , Can I ask you , Where are you from ? . Love ya , Good day ahead ??

      1. Am from Delhi… Nice hearing from you after a long time..hope your exams are going well

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