Kaisa yeh isq hai ( AVNEIL fan fiction ) 20 Episode

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           Episode 20

Recap :- Ragu tells Neil about Vidyut’s illegal businesses and seeks his help . Neela gets trapped in Chanda’s house 

The Episode begins with Avni getting out of the Taxi and talking on phone ” Hello I’m here ! Please tell me where I have to meet you ”

:- Shut up don’t call us we’ll ourselves tell you ( The call ends )

Soon , She gets a notification . Avni to herself ” Okay , I’m coming ” 

She ran into the woods .Wandering here and there . On reaching the location , She gets a call .

Avni ” Hello I’ve reached here now please tell me what I’ve to do ”

” Good now just keep standing there ”

Avni ” What ! Are you playing pranks on me , Where’s my Neela ma ! ”

Suddenly a man  tries to hit Avni on her head with a rod but as soon as he tries to do so , Someone holds his arm with a force that he can’t even move his hand . He looks back and finds out it’s Neil .

Neil gives him punch and he falls down .

Avni : Neil , Why had you come here , Please go from here , I don’t need your help

Neil pulls her and holds her shoulders and looking into her eyes says ” I don’t care you need me or not but I’m here to do my duty , And I can’t back down after committing ”

Soon he finds another goon coming to attack Avni , He drags her aside and comes in front of her showing as if he’s her shield .

Avni watches Neil with her glittery eyes fighting for her 

[ Background music female – Aashiyana Mera Saath Tere Hai Na
Dhundte Teri Gali Mujhko Ghar Mila
Aabodaana Mera Haath Tere Hai Na
Dhundte Tera Khuda Mujhko Rab Mila ]

Once Neil gets injured over his shoulders , Avni gets shivered as not him but she has been injured .

[ Background music female – Tu Jo Mila Lo Ho Gaya Main Kaabil
Tu Jo Mila Toh Ho Gaya Sab Haasil ]

Suddenly , She finds out Neil being caught  by men , They pressed him against a tree and a man comes in with a thick rod to hit him .

But when he just do that Avni holds his hand with furry 

AVNI ” Don’t even dare to hit him ” She roars and kicks him hardly and he’s dropped on ground . She fights with other man and thrashes him .

Avni puts forward her hand ” If it’s your duty to save me , Then it’s my responsibility to help you ”

Pause , They both looks at each other , [ Background music – Tu Jo Mila Lo Ho Gaya Main Kaabil Tu Jo Mila Toh Ho Gaya Sab Haasil Mushkil Sahi Aasan Hui Manzil Kyunki Tu.. Dhadkan Main Dil.. ]

She pulled him up , They both stood like warriors .

A gang of goons encircled them from all sides .

Avni : Neil , They said they won’t tell where’s Neelaa unless you’re here , Please take away police and go

Neil : Have you turned barmy! ha ! How can you even think like that

Avni : But !

Neil : Shhh !!!

AVNEIL fights with them together .

Avni gets infuriated ” What the heck , Come , Come hit me , You stupid ? , Tell me where’s my Neela Ma ”

More of the goons came and Neil fights with them .

Seeing that Neil is dealing with those men , She shouts ” Neil handle here I’m going to find Neela Ma ! ” And she ran away .

Neil still in action , Shouts ” No ! don’t do that ”

But she ran away .

Wandering in between woods , She exclaims ” Neela Ma ! Where’s you ”

Her phone rings ” You didn’t right Calling police , Now I’m telling you’ll suffer , How dare you do that ! Forget that you’ll get her ”

Neil comes and snatches phone from her

” Till now you’ve seen us only kidnapping her but now she’ll die  , Hear the sound ( A bullet fired from gun is heard )

Avni yells at phone kept over speaker : Hey ! Don’t do that please , I’m sorry !

” Sorry ! I just hate it , You’ll pay for your mistake ”

The phone cuts , And Avni gets panicked , She pulls away Neil .

Avni : I told you I don’t need your help , Why did you came , Now what’ll I do , How’ll I find her

Neil sooths  her , Keeping his hands around her cheeks ” Believe me I won’t never let anything happen to you nor to Neela ma ! don’t worry we’ll find her ”

ALL of sudden , Unexpectedly , Firing begins . Neil covers her and rolled over the ground they hid behind Trees . Neil too out his gun and started firing .

Neil : Avni , Just keep hiding here , These people seems to be dangerous

Avni : That is why I’m saying let me handle , They’ll see that police isn’t here they’ll take ransom and would release Neela Ma !

Neil : How you can be so sure that after paying them with they’ll release her

Neil : Don’t go anywhere , I’m coming

Neil fights with goons , But when he holds one of them a bold voice says ” Oh police officer , Now just end it here , Because the game is in our hands now ”

Neil finds Avni being held at gun point .

Meanwhile , Dd and other officers arrived there .

Neil : Leave her i said

” Shut up , Don’t try to do anything , I’ll shoot her ”

Neil : See , You could see police force is here there’s Noway you can get out of here

” Oh ! Superman , We’re never taught to loose , We always win , And even if I die I’d not be alone I’ll kill her along with ”

Dd : I’ll shoot you , Leave her

” Keep quiet and drop your weapons of you want her to be released ”

Neil stepping closer to him ” It’s better for you to obey what I say or else I’d be fatal for you ”

” Come on find someone else for these hollow sayings they can’t make me threaten ”

He’s slowly coming closer .

” Hey don’t come close to me , I’ll shoot ”

Neil : Okay , Okay we’re surrendering ( He’s making an eyes contact with her )

Neil : Everyone , Guns down

He Shook down , Everyone does the same . Swiftly Neil picks up handful of sand and smashes into his eyes , Rapidly , Avni holds his arm holding gun and kicks him and seized his gun from him .

Now Avni , is shown pointing gun to them .

Neil : Game your kids , Come on now let’s go to jail

Avni : No the game isn’t over yet , They hadn’t told where’s Neela Ma !

Neil : Once behind bars they’ll open uo their mouth and would speak like parrot

Man : Ohh !! I’m afraid , Wow you know you’re Very good at dialogues , Why aren’t you an actor .Listen , It’s real life and here one with more power wins , What you thought you with this girl and two other men would beat us [ He smiles ]

And concurrently , More goons holding guns and sticks come in .

Man ” See carefully around you , You’re caught in our trap now.  And from here you can’t escape , Only your dead bodies would go

Dd whispers ” Neil we’re surrounded from all sides , What to do ?

Neil : Keep calm , Don’t worry

Avni shouts ” Please , Tell me where’s  Neela Ma ! please tell me , I beg I’d take case back , I won’t file any complaints , I’ll give you whatever you want

” Oops  seems like you’re really missing her , Okay let’s , Let’s do it right ”

Avni comes in front of Neil , Unfolding her arms ” Don’t do anything , Get aside ”

Neil silently : Ahiana , There’s something fishy , They’re playing with you

Avni ” Please , Don’t say anything , Stay silent ”

The man gets aside and two people holding something heavy wrapped in white sheets enters and they keep it on the ground.

Avni shakily : Neela Ma !

She ran towards that thing which looks like a dead body

Neil gets angry on seeing this but when he tried to move , Goons from behind comes and hold him and others and puts over their faces a black cloth .


Avni sitting there cries and screams but just then the wind blew and the cloth flies in air and she realised it’s not Neela but a doll .


Avni gets infuriated and roars standing up ” where’s my Neela Ma ! Tell me what you had done with her ”

Goons caught her ” Come we’ll tale you to her ”

They abducted her and take her into their car .

Till by then Neil and Dd is able to fight and release themselves , On removing that black cover from over his face he sees Avni being taken away .

Neil squeals ” Ahiana !! ” He runs behind but is failed to catch them

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Ali brings in a tray of Poha and keeps it over the table

Ali ” there’s your order , Special Poha ”

Juhi is sitting adjacent

Juhi ” Thanks ”

Ali ” Ah ! don’t break the rule , In friendship no thanks no sorry ”

Juhi Smiles ” Yeah ! ”

Ali : You know you just missed last day the rocking performances .

Juhi looks at him

Ali : Yes ! RJ Alia right from radio station came here and gave amazing performance , By the way where did you went ?

Juhi : Oh I just got an important work so I had leave urgently

Ali : Okay , Wait ( He took out his phone )

Ali : Here I’ve the recording , See it

Giving her phone to her ” You enjoy it I’ll be there soon , I had to attended customs ”

Juhi : It’s okay

Juhi sees the video ” Alia , I was right yesterday Alia was there at the party , She’s in Mumbai , I had to meet her once ”

Avneil POV …


The Jeep stops , Goons dragged Avni out and took her into a room isolated in jungle and tethered her .

At London …

Chadha ” What the heck , What the hell are you speaking , I just gave you one job to finish the story of that Neela and now you’re saying that police had got to know ”

” Don’t know Sir , From where a girl came , Don’t know who’s she ? She came to rescue her ”

Chadha : I’ve just won elections and after that of something wrong happened what would happen to my reputation ?

” Sorry Sir ! but now what should we do ! ”

Chadha : Do whatever , I don’t want any mess , Do whatever you want , May you can burn them in fire , Shoot them or Blast a boomb ! But i don’t want any kind of problem , Because of them !

Avni’s POV ….

Avni is shown being tethered by ropes on chair , Her mouth sealed . After doing they all go out . Avni twists her neck to her left and sees Neela Ma ! in unconscious condition there .

Avni gets hope , She began to move in order to free herself .

She removes the seal from her mouth ” Neela Ma ! ” She spoke silently

Avni ables to unlock her hands . She got up and goes to Neela and release her. She taps her face

Avni : Ma ! Please open your eyes , Ma ! Nothing can happen to you , I’m here see .

She looks here there for some water finally catching a sight of an earthen pot , She brings some water and Sprinkle over her face .

Neela slowly opens her eyes , And finally she saw Avni .

Neela ” Avni you here , How did you came here ”

Avni gets delighted ” Ma ! I’m so glad to see you fine and healthy here ”

Neela ” Why did you came here risking your life ”

Avni ” Ma ! What’re you saying you’re my mother and caring for mom is responsibility of a child ”

Neela ” Please Avni go from here , Please I beg ”

Avni holds her hand and makes it touch her sweating and dusty face ” Neela Ma ! Please don’t say like this , I won’t go without you Please , I can’t live without you ”

Neela : Avni , See I hat something very important to tell you , It’s really important , For this task you had to be alive

Avni hears someone’s footsteps scratching the floor ” Shhh ! Someone’s coming ”

After a minute .That sound goes away .

Avni : We’ll talk later first we’ve to get out of here , Come Ma ! ( She tries to open up a band of thick cloth which was tied around Neela’s stomach )

Suddenly , Neela pinpoints ” Wait ! Avni , Don’t , Don’t come near me , Don’t touch me ”

Avni gets suspicious , She removes that band and seeing what under it she gets traumatized , Jolted .

Avni steps back and is shaking violently , Huffing .

Sorry guys if I bored you .But if you liked please please put ?? and you’ve to share your views .I think I’m not writing well now , That is why I’m not getting votes . Is that so ? Should I end it soon ? Please tell depends upon your support .Do support ??

Precap :- Neil reached near a cottage , He’s wandering here and there , Suddenly a loud explosion is heard .The whole area is set a blaze on fire .

Neil calls Ahiana ” Avni ” !

Sorry if it was a short one I had some tests so i didn’t got time . Bye love Ya ! Like share comment . Good day ahead ???
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  1. Wowww ???such an awesome update

    1. Kira

      Thanks alot dear ??

  2. 8B4756

    The episode was fabulous,I just loved it

    1. Kira

      Thanks a lot dear , Good night??

  3. wow…naamkaran my ever best serial and avneil my favourite

    1. Kira

      Thnx , Hope u liked it . Good night ???

  4. Hasinasoghra

    It’s was really a very nice episode and please don’t end it soon and please upload the next episode soon

    1. Kira

      Thanks dear , Happy to hear from you . Good night . ???

  5. Awesome episode didi
    Eagerly waiting for the next update
    Well! Could you please tell me what is the full form of POV?
    Good night didi

    1. Kira

      Thanks dearie ?? POV means Point of view . Like when I write Avni’s POV. It means I’m showing the scene which is related to Avni and on her side .

      1. Thank you didi

  6. And didi when the in this episode (in the beginning) when the firing began you wrote that Neil was addressing Avni as her real name AVNI ! Does he know her truth?

    1. Kira

      Thanks you told me , No Neil doesn’t know reality till now . Sorry it was my mistake .?

  7. Jasminerahul

    avneil fight with goons was thrilling.shocking that avni is kidnapped.finally she found neela.is that bomb?alihi scene was nice.juhi wants to meet alia.but why?nice pics.wish you had added aliHi pics too

    1. Kira

      You know we don’t have much Juhi and Ali’s pics but I’ll try finding them . Thanks for suggestions and m happy you liked my post . Good day ahead ???

      1. Jasminerahul

        yes i know.just put their individual pics

  8. No please don’t end it soon. For ur 1st ff u use to get many comments and not now because namkarrn real show has came to an end. So only particular comments can be seen. Many don’t come to this page. According to my view this can be the reason. After all u still writes too good. And still that excitement of new episode exists in us. So please dont end this ff soon. And I guess many schools exams are also nearer so they must not be able to comment. Please don’t get disappointed

    1. Kira

      Thanks a lot my sis for writing I’m feeling good now . You’re great , Thnx for motivation . Love Ya ? Good day ahead ?

  9. AryanBhattacharya

    Awesome update di. And please please please don’t end this so soon. It’s amazing. And sorry for my late comment, actually in my state net was closed since Monday, so I could not comment.

  10. AryanBhattacharya

    Sorry sorry by mistake I have written Monday, it would be Thursday

    1. Kira

      No sorries in friendship . It’s okay bro . Thanks a lot ???

  11. Great episode Kira. Sorry couldn’t keep in touch since I had been out of station all these days. And yeah what I feel is getting support is important but not at the cost of your interest. You must do what interests you not what people feel at your interest. Am sure there would be some silent readers who after reading your ff would go ecstatic and nostalgic..

    Happy writing!
    P.S. my vote goes that at this point do not end your ff. Since your stories do reKindle the NAAMKARAN fire ablaze….

    1. Kira

      Oh it’s so nice of you dear , Love you loads . Thanks a lot . have a great day ahead ??

  12. Plz don’t end it
    It’s a brilliant fanfiction
    Plz make Neil find out that Ahiana is Avni plz plz plz

  13. Plz don’t end it
    It’s a brilliant fanfiction
    Plz make Neil find out that Ahiana is Avni plz plz plz
    I want to know wat Ahiana went through plz unveil these plots soon

    1. Kira

      I’d try to do it soon , Don’t worry , Thanks a lot for supporting my friend . Love Ya ???

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