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Kaira : Perfectly Imperfect by Vrushy ( Chapter 14)

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Hello Everyone.
Chapter 14
She does care for him…..

Karthik after a very hectic schedule and near miss of a big accident, felt his mind and body knackered for the day. His face looked tired, as he slid his hands over his face. The other car, lost its control and almost drove in and collided with his.

Except a big cut over his arm and hand, which he had been seen by the doctor immediately putting bandages of white all over, he was fine. But the other driver of the car had got hurt really bad. He had called the ambulance and it was pretty bad with all the blood, and in the hurry of that he had lost his phone.

Swayam had then asked him to shift to his father’s house in Udaipur and leave the hotel. The media had gathered all around the hotel creating a bizzaire. They wanted to know about his accident as well as his marraige details.He had just shifted with his luggage to his fathers house when the house phone buzzed in the hall and Karthik cursing heavily,got into the room and took the call.

“What is it ?!!” He barked.

“She is not at her house. We don’t know how did she disappear !!” Swayam,informed firmly through the line.

Karthik’s back straightened up immediately.

“What do you mean she isn’t at her house. Only hours ago you informed me that.”He started barking more.

“She is here.” Swayam, informed him again.

Karthik’s mind went crazy at that.

“What ?!!” Karthik asked.

“Look into the security cameras, Sir.” The phone clipped off after that.

He dropped the phone, fumbled on his way over a bean bag and reached a corner room. He burst open the door, and stood frozen.

There she was, in all thirty two angles of the cameras, a vision in white and rosy pink saree,the shiny, silky long tresses flying in the air, with the face of the angel, she kept running towards his Mansion.

“What the hell !!” Karthik muttered under his breath, standing there thoroughly surprised.

Karthik jerked out of the shock from seeing and reached the buzzer.

“Open the damn gates.”He bit out, glanced at the screens once again, and turned around to the door.

He ran fast down the stairs, three, two and one, finally reaching the ground floor, he thudded all the way and to the front door. He ripped it open and ran towards the gate, his gaze wild all over.

The bronzed large gate clang opened with a cring, moving slowly out of his way and he waited cursing under his breath more stronger than ever.

His eyes finally locked,glided, caressed all over her running form. He panted, with the force of his earlier movements. Her eyes finally caught his, and the hair of his back raised up seeing her teary face. His stance got harder, as she did not stop running but increased her speed.

He braced for it, and it came as a warm softest blow on his body, yet a powerful one when he staggered back a little with the force of the hit, but he stayed glued to the ground.

His arms automatically surrounded her body and caught her up. His face buried itself into her soft and sweet smelling hair and into her neck.

“What happened ?!!”He murmured into her neck, breathing in heavily her scent and feeling completely winded.

” You.” Naira said breathlessly with all the running.

Precap : Some teasing !!
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Ohkay, I know that it was a short one but then I have two other FF’s to look forward to. Will post the next Chapter tomorrow morning.

Also I wanted to ask all of you if the pace of the story is ohkay or do you want me to increase it and Should kaira fall in love before marraige or after marraige ?!!

Do comment. Keep smiling. Keep watching Yrkkh !!

46 Comments
  1. too short bt sweet as well

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it !!

  2. Well I think if they luv after marriage then there would be lots of dramas so it will be cute if they fall in luv before marriage

    1. Vrushy

      Ohkay, I will take your suggestion into consideration.

  3. Ekta23

    Amazing as always …I think they should develop soft corners for each other but fall in love after marriage …And so far the story is concerned no need to change the pace it’s perfect rest it’s up to you ☺

    1. Ekta23

      U know like developing soft corners before marriage that’s what I mean

    2. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think of your suggestion !!

  4. Akanksha

    I think before marriage….nd the rest is up to u…

    1. Vrushy

      Ohkay, will surely think about your suggestion !!

  5. Vinni05

    Nyc one
    After marriage
    All r showing their love before marriage

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will take you suggestion into consideration.

  6. Fenil

    Nice chp
    Increase little bit
    After marriage! !
    Waiting for next.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think about your suggestion.
      Next Chapter coming up soon !!

  7. Nice one Vrushy!! Waiting for the next part in the morning..
    Pace is ok and it will be more good if you increase it little bit.. I want them to fall in love before marriage.. And turn their marriage deal into a love deal before marriage itself.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think about your suggestion.
      Next Chapter coming up soon !!

  8. Aweosome like always 👌👌

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it !!

  9. OMG this was awesome perfectly perfect everything ….initially I was not fond of the plot but slowly loving it..Thank u so much ..keep giving such scenes …and previous changing room wala…looking forward to next somehow I am loving it…thank u…
    Make karthik fall more now and naira after marriage ..pace is good
    Thank u

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think about your suggestion !!

  10. they should love before marriage and more sweet moments between them
    nice going
    awesomeeeeee
    nxt chapter waiting…

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think about your suggestion.
      Will post next Chapter soon !!

  11. Hales

    So lovely! Awsum as always …i think before marriage will be nyc …but proper confession n realisation aftr marriage maybe will make the story more intense😉

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you hales 🙂
      Glad that you liked your.
      Your suggestion is taken into account !!

  12. Get them to fall in love before marriage ppplllllzzzzzzz 🙏🙏🙏🙏
    It was a good ff 😊
    Post soon

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think about yout suggestion !!

  13. AHT

    Before marriage this was amazing

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Your suggestion is taken into account.

  14. Awesome!!!
    But too short!!!
    Waiting for the next!!!

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Will try to write longer !!

  15. Fenil

    Hey Vrushy
    I’m thinking for after marriage but I would like if Naira has trust in karthik about her dreams fulfilment. I mean naira ke mind mein karthik ke liye itna trust aur say ki naira ko lagne lage ki mere dreams ko mein achieve kar paugi karthik ke saath.

    Yeh trust before marriage uske mind mein aana chahiye .

    Baki aapne jo socha hain woh

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think about your suggestion

  16. Amazing episode.Loved it.
    As for your question, I think KaiRa should have feelings for each other before marriage but should fall in love after marriage.
    Also, the pace of the story is perfect. You don’t need to change it.
    Waiting for the next chapter for the ‘teasing’.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think about your suggestion.

  17. Well I think they should fall in love before marriage but should express it after marriage. Ff was awesome.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Your suggestion is taken into account.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂

  18. Rosa18

    Great work sister and the story is at a perfect pace:)

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it !!

  19. Nice episode vrushy

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂

  20. pace of the story is awesome….I think they already have feelings for eo…but make them fall in love after marriage…otherwise rest up to u….

    btw both chappy was awesome…update soon…eagerly waiting for next

    sry for not commenting on previous one coz of busy day

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will surely think about your suggestion !!

  21. Sethidisha002

    nyc and fab

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂

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